I cannot emphasize enough the power of these lyrics. I enjoy good melodic tunes, but I crave for songs that suck me into a feeling and a story. Amazing songwriters can bring me into a feeling even if I haven’t experienced the precise situation they sing about. In this, you have succeeded. I hope you persevere, keep at it, leveraging this talent. It is an increasingly rare talent in music, which makes you and this song all the more special and unique.
Lyrics: I left the house the way you liked it dim the lights Pour out a drink and write a letter every night I did it all I did everything you said Buried alone until I join you in your bed Stay, the same, you’ll never age a day your memory won’t change Leave, your love, at the tone but it will never be enough You said love was just a game And I would play again But I won’t, I only grow older You said I should find a way but time and time again I don’t, I only, grow Colder I taste the earth above you struggling for air Just feet apart but I know it’s not you down there And I’m afraid that I could ever stop the tears Cause if it they go were you ever even here Stay, the same, you’ll never age a day your memory won’t change Leave, your love, at the tone but it will never be enough You said love was just a game but I don’t want to play so I don’t, I only grow Older You said I should find a way but time and time again I don’t, I only, grow Colder
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I cannot emphasize enough the power of these lyrics. I enjoy good melodic tunes, but I crave for songs that suck me into a feeling and a story. Amazing songwriters can bring me into a feeling even if I haven’t experienced the precise situation they sing about. In this, you have succeeded. I hope you persevere, keep at it, leveraging this talent. It is an increasingly rare talent in music, which makes you and this song all the more special and unique.
Thank you for the kind words, that is very meaningful. I'm glad you connected
What a song… beautifull and meaningfull
Thank you 😊
Great song and excellent performance!
Thank you for the kind words
Beautiful singing and lyrics! It's awesome how you can really feel the music you play and that passes on to those who are watching
Thank you for the kind words.
Well done! You've got a great future, young man! :>)
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I've come back for another listen. You are a dead-ringer for a young Phil Ochs! Amazing! :>)
Thanks for listening
Lyrics:
I left the house the way you liked it dim the lights
Pour out a drink and write a letter every night
I did it all I did everything you said
Buried alone until I join you in your bed
Stay, the same, you’ll never age a day your memory won’t change
Leave, your love, at the tone but it will never be enough
You said love was just a game
And I would play again
But I won’t, I only grow older
You said I should find a way
but time and time again
I don’t, I only, grow Colder
I taste the earth above you struggling for air
Just feet apart but I know it’s not you down there
And I’m afraid that I could ever stop the tears
Cause if it they go were you ever even here
Stay, the same, you’ll never age a day your memory won’t change
Leave, your love, at the tone but it will never be enough
You said love was just a game
but I don’t want to play
so I don’t, I only grow Older
You said I should find a way
but time and time again
I don’t, I only, grow Colder
You have a wonderful voice. Spread these songs, send them to some labels, make your music heard, you are really good. Listen to me!
Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it. I love songwriting!
Popped up in my feed. Well done. I enjoyed the tone of your voice, the lyrics, and the guitar melody. Question, why does it abruptly end?
Thank you for the kind words. I intended for the video to fade out, can't confirm why it was so abrupt!
BEAAAAAAUUUUUTIFUL :D
Thank you, that is very kind