help i'm still at the restaurant 🤦🏻‍♀️ revisiting chapter 4, requesting feedback

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  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 29 ม.ค. 2025

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  • @LarasWrites
    @LarasWrites หลายเดือนก่อน

    Lol, I definitely had that scene where my characters just lounged and talked to each other. I didn't change the setting, though, I just added the character who likes to create chaos because she's super arrogant 🙃 But anyway, good luck with Chapter 4, Jasmine!
    p.s.: The big bow on your tree is so cute!

    • @jaswriting
      @jaswriting  หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@LarasWrites omg yes spicing things up a bit! My characters are always sitting around I hate it 🙃 thanks for being here! And glad you liked the bow!

  • @jennlimwrites
    @jennlimwrites หลายเดือนก่อน

    Jas, you are the sweetest ❤ and ouuu looking forward to your feedback reaction video. I’m planning to take a look at your revised Chapter 1 when I can this week! So curious about what’s in chapter 4 too haha 👀

    • @jaswriting
      @jaswriting  หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@jennlimwrites omg that makes me nervous for some reason 👀😭 thank you always being here!!

  • @emilyhthompson
    @emilyhthompson หลายเดือนก่อน

    this title is sending me omg too real 😭😅

  • @emilyhthompson
    @emilyhthompson หลายเดือนก่อน

    the moving things around as a means of procrastination called me OUT! sometimes you just need a fresh space 😌 "recalibrate the vibe" is exactly right

    • @jaswriting
      @jaswriting  หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      right!? anything that can make me get out of this rut at this point 😭

  • @bbrookewrites
    @bbrookewrites หลายเดือนก่อน

    Your chapter 4 was my chapter 6...it kicked my ass so much. I literally thought my brain was imploding. Regardless--! You've got this Jasmine! Love that you were being so real here!

    • @jaswriting
      @jaswriting  หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@bbrookewrites i’m so glad I’m not alone in this because i’m afraid it’s still kicking my ass as we speak 🤣 thank you so much! I try to be as positive as I can but stuff like this happen so much nowadays haha 🥹 your kind words mean so much to me!!

  • @CaeliFaye
    @CaeliFaye หลายเดือนก่อน

    I'm glad you're feeling better! I'm not sure bc idk your story, but what would happen if you removed chapter 4 and integrated Ryan's backstory somewhere else? anyways glad to see an update from you as always

    • @jaswriting
      @jaswriting  หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thanks, Caitlin!! Ahhh I appreciate the suggestion and I’m actually I’m pondering on this idea now! ❤