Nicely done. Chantereves so delicate and evocative. Some tips: this is too slow - it can be that slow, but then make it a single take. If you are going to edit, this video has to be 2x shorter. People want to see the bottle more. It’s better to find one sitting position and just zoom in and out, or slightly adjust the angle from take to take. The changes of angle here aren’t not quite logical. If you change angle, ask, how is the audience doing to benefit from this change of angle. And then in terms of notes: the audience needs context. Wine-burgundy-Chantreves. And perhaps context in terms of quality. And make the title appeal to people who don’t know you. E.g. “The couple who make magical Burgundy (Chanteeves). You could put a pic of you and Tomoko and Guillaume on the thumbnail. Or just you and the bottle. Keep going!
Thanks for taking the time to provide these much appreciated suggestions. I'm no editor or presenter professionally, so kinda learning as I go and hoping to address many of your excellent points along the way. Chanterêves is a recent discovery for me, but I'm onboard now! Thanks for watching and commenting, and yeah--I'm a fan of your channel and work.
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Nicely done. Chantereves so delicate and evocative. Some tips: this is too slow - it can be that slow, but then make it a single take. If you are going to edit, this video has to be 2x shorter. People want to see the bottle more. It’s better to find one sitting position and just zoom in and out, or slightly adjust the angle from take to take. The changes of angle here aren’t not quite logical. If you change angle, ask, how is the audience doing to benefit from this change of angle. And then in terms of notes: the audience needs context. Wine-burgundy-Chantreves. And perhaps context in terms of quality. And make the title appeal to people who don’t know you. E.g. “The couple who make magical Burgundy (Chanteeves). You could put a pic of you and Tomoko and Guillaume on the thumbnail. Or just you and the bottle. Keep going!
Thanks for taking the time to provide these much appreciated suggestions. I'm no editor or presenter professionally, so kinda learning as I go and hoping to address many of your excellent points along the way. Chanterêves is a recent discovery for me, but I'm onboard now! Thanks for watching and commenting, and yeah--I'm a fan of your channel and work.