Galactic Empire Demanded Earth to Kneel, Humans Burned Their Worlds Instead
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Did Nate rise from the dead? He died with Altair on the Hazari home world and now he's back (12:04)? This is where I quit wasting time on this.
Why would the guy blow up his own planet when they were about to whup earth into submission?
Plot armor.
Was good but how’s it end?
While I like your stories the captioning is detracting from the storyline. Most of the time it is misspelled words and sayings that bring your attention no to the story but to the word or words. My last comment is that you need to finish the story. You have begun the story arch with the threat of Earth and Earths response. The sacrifice is commendable, but the realism is difficult to keep as the reasons behind the Emperor using a failsafe device seem a little shoddy. This might have been cured with a different point of view or knowing more of what George learned during his studies. Overall a 6 out of 10. Good story start but needs work to get it to where it can flourish and expand.
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Again, nobody is editing the AI captioning, you can't simply hit enter and post it. This is crap and as soon as I see that I'm out. Get it together!
Such poor captioning takes away from the story. Its just another 'human sneak onto the alien homewold' theme, no originality.