This has all the trademarks of an AI generated story, not one written by a person. The constant repeated phrases, the jumps in the linear narrative, the plot holes, unexplained details, constant use of cliches'.. For example, when we first meet the construction worker, he is holed up with his entire crew. When he appear again in the story, he is alone. why? only a few hours at most, could have passed. what happened to his crew? It is not explained or even mentioned. And what happened to the tour group that Ayesha was leading? When we first see her she is leading a large tour group. When we see her again in the story, she is alone. What happened to all the people with her? Again, it is never explained or even mentioned in passing. The three protagonists are not just unlikely, they are impossible. For all that the story takes place in Dubai, the characters are written like Americans, or at least Westerners, not like Arabic people. In the Arabic world, women are 2nd class citizens. The character of Ayesha would not be determined or strong and she would not taking charge of anything. She would have been taught her entire life to be subservient and compliant, especially to men. The wealthy business man? He would expect to be in charge and to have his orders obeyed. The construction worker would be considered beneath the rich man, even by himself. And neither Arab man would work or plan anything at all with the help of a woman. She would be expected to be silent do as she was told. That's even assumed they intended to take her with them. Most Arab men would not feel obligated to protect a woman not related to them. That's Western thinking. Not Eastern thinking. AI never produces really good stories. At most they are mediocre. AI is fabulous for the production of artwork, pictures, etc, but just not very good at story telling. That needs a person. So listen to the story, it's ok, but don't expect more.
Do you, I mean the enterprise that has taken on this endeavor of AI created works ever actually listen to your content? Is there anyone to actually do any copy editing that’s a human to Fix redundancy or even nonsensical, syntax and content? Come on you guys could do so much more with this and if you do have all those people as part of the team, then you want to pull them in the office and ask them what the hell they’re doing. How many times do we need to hear about Khalid’s because of his wealth and then why the hell is everybody running around panic out of fear when the zombies are described as sluggish? If you have zombies that are sluggish, shuffling etc. why the hell are presumably the majority of characters being neurotypical, hustling in a frenzy? When I think of shuffling, I think of Parkinson’s. Can you imagine being deathly afraid of some guy or a woman with Parkinson’s, seriously being a threat to your safety? If anything I would have compassion on the virus that poorly executed its attempt to take over humanity because it would be so easy to kill all the hosts aka zombies.
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I like this a richly written tale, with characters to draw one into their world. This is well-written and definitely to be recommended.
I love the stories but man, the constant repeating kills me
"his practical mind"
"Her knowledge of the city"
those repeated phrases are the traits of an AI generated story, rather than one written by a person.
1:15:00 expo 2020 😮
Will there be a part 2? I really need to know if they make it. 😮
This has all the trademarks of an AI generated story, not one written by a person. The constant repeated phrases, the jumps in the linear narrative, the plot holes, unexplained details, constant use of cliches'..
For example, when we first meet the construction worker, he is holed up with his entire crew. When he appear again in the story, he is alone. why? only a few hours at most, could have passed. what happened to his crew? It is not explained or even mentioned. And what happened to the tour group that Ayesha was leading? When we first see her she is leading a large tour group. When we see her again in the story, she is alone. What happened to all the people with her? Again, it is never explained or even mentioned in passing.
The three protagonists are not just unlikely, they are impossible. For all that the story takes place in Dubai, the characters are written like Americans, or at least Westerners, not like Arabic people. In the Arabic world, women are 2nd class citizens. The character of Ayesha would not be determined or strong and she would not taking charge of anything. She would have been taught her entire life to be subservient and compliant, especially to men. The wealthy business man? He would expect to be in charge and to have his orders obeyed. The construction worker would be considered beneath the rich man, even by himself. And neither Arab man would work or plan anything at all with the help of a woman. She would be expected to be silent do as she was told. That's even assumed they intended to take her with them. Most Arab men would not feel obligated to protect a woman not related to them. That's Western thinking. Not Eastern thinking.
AI never produces really good stories. At most they are mediocre. AI is fabulous for the production of artwork, pictures, etc, but just not very good at story telling. That needs a person. So listen to the story, it's ok, but don't expect more.
Sounds like an ai written story read by an ai voice
Do you, I mean the enterprise that has taken on this endeavor of AI created works ever actually listen to your content? Is there anyone to actually do any copy editing that’s a human to Fix redundancy or even nonsensical, syntax and content? Come on you guys could do so much more with this and if you do have all those people as part of the team, then you want to pull them in the office and ask them what the hell they’re doing. How many times do we need to hear about Khalid’s because of his wealth and then why the hell is everybody running around panic out of fear when the zombies are described as sluggish? If you have zombies that are sluggish, shuffling etc. why the hell are presumably the majority of characters being neurotypical, hustling in a frenzy? When I think of shuffling, I think of Parkinson’s. Can you imagine being deathly afraid of some guy or a woman with Parkinson’s, seriously being a threat to your safety? If anything I would have compassion on the virus that poorly executed its attempt to take over humanity because it would be so easy to kill all the hosts aka zombies.
@@booksale5 thanks for the feedback, I will try to improve moving forward.
TO MUCH CHATTER IN THE START. READER DOESN'T NEED THAT MUCH.
I hate ai written stories
Sounds like an ai written story read by an ai voice