Thank you for making this video! The content is interesting, your style is approachable, and it's so easy to follow. This is why I always support your channel. Looking forward to more great work!
The story was a little out of sync. It seemed to jump from one point to another with no connection. At least your story had the husband taking action to get himself out of that marriage, although it was ongoing for a couple years.
I appreciate the honest request for feedback. Unfortunately, this story is weak. The narrative flow is choppy, and the character words and actions do not progress properly. They go from shocked to enacting my revenge with both zero time to have formulated a plan and then zero time to have enacted it. I will subscribe temporarily to see if you improve. Good luck.
Thank you for making this video! The content is interesting, your style is approachable, and it's so easy to follow. This is why I always support your channel. Looking forward to more great work!
Thanks for the love, I appreciate it!
Good story but the AI messes up some parts, that made them confusing.
Thanks for your feedback, I will try to fix it and not let this happen again!
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The story was a little out of sync. It seemed to jump from one point to another with no connection. At least your story had the husband taking action to get himself out of that marriage, although it was ongoing for a couple years.
thanks for your comment, I will try to make the next story better!
I appreciate the honest request for feedback. Unfortunately, this story is weak. The narrative flow is choppy, and the character words and actions do not progress properly. They go from shocked to enacting my revenge with both zero time to have formulated a plan and then zero time to have enacted it. I will subscribe temporarily to see if you improve. Good luck.
Thank you, I will try to improve!
Use a manly voice. The gay voice loses credibility.
Use a manly voice. The gay voice loses credibility.
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