Very visually pleasing but the dialogue really doesn’t do it for me, feels like a lot of lines were lifted straight from the sopranos and not in a good way. Also the the monologue as he spares the twin brother doesn’t work, he’s talking about burying his brother and how it would feel yet he only found out his brother was dead a minute prior, as someone who’s had a brother die believe me it takes time to process thoughts like that. A lot of potential for a fleshed out full length project though!
Why are two Staten Island 23-year olds calling each other Columbo and referencing ulcers? Outside of the rough dialogue, it's nicely shot and the voiceover is solid.
Good work to bring your vision to the world. Considering the work you have put in, I wish there was already more of a reception, but this is the state of the animal in our time. 122k followers on the platform where I found Ben = less than 100 views here on premier night. There's too much talent or something. Maybe I'm just criminally early. Wish there was a mechanism here to donate
This was solid especially the voice over and the camera work. The shot from inside the trunk was great. The small things I would change are: -Brother that didn’t go in the store should’ve approached “Donnie” in the parking lot asking for a jump off. Short conversation ensues and he agrees to help him. Whenever he walks back to his car, he opens his trunk to get the cables and that’s when he gets popped -More grievance and anger when the real Donnie kills one of the twins Very good short film! 8/10
What a blessing to be apart of this !!
Amazing work!! Couldn't get done without you.
Yall nailed this!
Great work all around! Really enjoyed this in every aspect! Salute!
Incredible.
Excellent and beautifully done.
Bravo.
This was actually really good, really hope you guys flesh this out into a feature at some point
this was really good. I feel like this idea would make a phenomenal feature film
Found the obligatory feature film comment
@ it’s mandatory
@ Hahaa, fair enough
Great work! Astounded by the noir cinematography, the framing and lighting is so authentic. Very impressed and hope you guys make a feature one day. 🎥
Thank you!
Wow amazing..salute 🔥
Very visually pleasing but the dialogue really doesn’t do it for me, feels like a lot of lines were lifted straight from the sopranos and not in a good way. Also the the monologue as he spares the twin brother doesn’t work, he’s talking about burying his brother and how it would feel yet he only found out his brother was dead a minute prior, as someone who’s had a brother die believe me it takes time to process thoughts like that. A lot of potential for a fleshed out full length project though!
Been waiting for this!!!! Let’s go baby!!!
Why are two Staten Island 23-year olds calling each other Columbo and referencing ulcers? Outside of the rough dialogue, it's nicely shot and the voiceover is solid.
EXCELLENT ABSOLUTELY MAGNIFICENT
Good stuff man
This was really dope, i can see you 3 becoming great actors, nicky especially. It seems effortless to him!
This flick is insane I’m bigly stoked
this is fantastic and deserves more likes
Awesome. Style reminds me much of the original Max Payne game.
This is fire🔥🔥🔥🔥
I ain’t mad at it! Props to y’all 💪🏻
Really good
Good work to bring your vision to the world. Considering the work you have put in, I wish there was already more of a reception, but this is the state of the animal in our time. 122k followers on the platform where I found Ben = less than 100 views here on premier night. There's too much talent or something. Maybe I'm just criminally early. Wish there was a mechanism here to donate
Thank you!
Killed it! 🔥🔥🔥🔥
To the kings of Staten Island bravo🎉
Wonderful Man!
FANTASTIC, like watching a Frank Darabont 🔥💯👆💪🏻🫡😎👆🤙
Truly special
This was great! Love that last shot❤
PW Fammm
This was solid especially the voice over and the camera work. The shot from inside the trunk was great. The small things I would change are:
-Brother that didn’t go in the store should’ve approached “Donnie” in the parking lot asking for a jump off. Short conversation ensues and he agrees to help him. Whenever he walks back to his car, he opens his trunk to get the cables and that’s when he gets popped
-More grievance and anger when the real Donnie kills one of the twins
Very good short film! 8/10
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This was a combination of The Sopranos and La Haine.
19 dollaz, let’s go Cam king goat
My Guy!
What a film!
Loved it
Stupidity and incompetence rules this realm, however this story was a good one
Great job
Bravo Gentlemen
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Scarlotta Men 👏👏❤❤
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Who did the narrating? Future looks bright for all. Take a bow 👏
Ben Zimmer
anotha day anothaDOLLA
na this is dope
Christ, that dialogue was pretentious. Why Was every line from the twin boys needed to be comical ?
Haha cha!
Haha Cha!
Weird
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