Interesting. I thought you'd be better than this. But I can see some influence from Matti, especially in the second. It would be better if you find the way to combine both. Oddly, now that Matti's gone, his work is becoming clearer to me. I guess it's true that sometimes genius can override our own study, our own pace, our own learnings. I sometimes think the Japanese dojo which practice in silence offer us the best opportunities to develop for intermediates and advanced. We, in the West, appear to be perpetually stuck teaching beginners and so we get wordy. Maybe, it's just our culture to talk rather than dance. Or maybe we think dancing, flowing, is showing off. Tall poppy syndrome?
Marcin in the house!
Interesting. I thought you'd be better than this. But I can see some influence from Matti, especially in the second. It would be better if you find the way to combine both. Oddly, now that Matti's gone, his work is becoming clearer to me. I guess it's true that sometimes genius can override our own study, our own pace, our own learnings. I sometimes think the Japanese dojo which practice in silence offer us the best opportunities to develop for intermediates and advanced. We, in the West, appear to be perpetually stuck teaching beginners and so we get wordy. Maybe, it's just our culture to talk rather than dance. Or maybe we think dancing, flowing, is showing off. Tall poppy syndrome?