Awesome work! It was fun listening to the various ideas you incorporated, flowing from calm and soothing to melancholic, optimistic, and joyful without any of the parts feeling out of place. I might give learning to play it a try if I find the time!
It‘s pretty cool! Unfortunately, it’s really easy to notice, that the sound is made by a program. The pianos are not warm and soft enough… I wish a real pianist play it, it would be awesome!
All these f-ed up ellitist comments show how much you are actually good at composing😂 keep on composing I root for you Sry for bad english if anything's wrong
lmao like a tenth i believe. if you're wondering about the big rolls they're not really intended to be in your handspan, you'd need to change hand positions and hold the pedal to do it. it would be totally impossible otherwise hahaha
@@choppin1810That 12th roll, impossible for my octave small hand to make it sounds smoothly(highest point use 2nd finger) I think in this case we need to edit the chord to smaller ones which sounds same beautiful
Like honestly, what is the point in constantly commenting on this channels videos and just claiming their compositions as rubbish? Like the whole point in expressive arts is to just make something and enjoy that process. Everyone has got to start somewhere and after considering you compose yourself (and very well might I add) you must remember a time where you started composing and wasn’t immediately able to write as well as the likes of mozart and Rachmoninoff
@@guppie2538 I never wrote garbage like this. I held myself up to a high standard from the very beginning. You don't have to be trash, you just have to be competent.
That is impressive but for some it’s not as easy to write amazing music that quickly (not to say this isn’t amazing) but what I am trying to say is there are better way to point out mistakes constructively then critique the overall piece, after all, it’s important to encourage new composers, not discourage them
Imagine a life, where you spend your life to studying composition, not much result in the field, but luckily you still have enough knowledge to trash talk to a decent amateur composer (who unlike you is getting fairly good amount of attention and compliment), yet sadly not enough to give an actual advice
I’ve now listened to this piece along with your piano concerto (the first movement), and I’m very impressed with your compositional abilities. You seem to have an intricate understanding of texture, as well as harmonic tradition, something that takes a long time to develop. Although your current writing has immense musical value, I can’t wait to hear your music mature. I hope that you’ll continue to upload your compositions in the future!
Very nice! May I ask if you are a pianist or not? Just because I hear Scriabin vibes here and there, and you could pump up the difficulty. After a while it gets boring, because the chord mashing and the broken chords carry through the whole piece. It has so much fantasy and its awesome really, and if you change and vary how the broken chords are played, it would be much better
gorgeous...It's like Schubert's impromptu in Rachmaninov version with Lisztian finale
Im glad i found tour channel! This piece is amazing! You are a great composer! Thank you for inspiring everyone!
Awesome work! It was fun listening to the various ideas you incorporated, flowing from calm and soothing to melancholic, optimistic, and joyful without any of the parts feeling out of place. I might give learning to play it a try if I find the time!
amazing, so romantic
Very nice!!!!! Beautiful!
How much is your piece?
Hi-key a vibe, love it
It‘s pretty cool! Unfortunately, it’s really easy to notice, that the sound is made by a program. The pianos are not warm and soft enough…
I wish a real pianist play it, it would be awesome!
So coloful and dreamy
This is good
Awesome
This So Cool
You are a genius
This is awesome, your pieces are lovely 🌹 I was wondering if you were playing them?
Apperantly in this video this is the default grand piano from musescore 4! If thats what you mean..
serponge?? here?? u got taste goddamn
All these f-ed up ellitist comments show how much you are actually good at composing😂 keep on composing I root for you
Sry for bad english if anything's wrong
3:03
Hi , I am a pianist culd I give the sheet for playing this music ?
just look up the title of the video on musescore site
Wow❤❤❤❤🎉🎉🎉
How big is ur handspan??
lmao like a tenth i believe. if you're wondering about the big rolls they're not really intended to be in your handspan, you'd need to change hand positions and hold the pedal to do it. it would be totally impossible otherwise hahaha
@@choppin1810That 12th roll, impossible for my octave small hand to make it sounds smoothly(highest point use 2nd finger)
I think in this case we need to edit the chord to smaller ones which sounds same beautiful
when you don't have a large orchestra hiding your mistakes, it starts sounding a lot less impressive
Like honestly, what is the point in constantly commenting on this channels videos and just claiming their compositions as rubbish? Like the whole point in expressive arts is to just make something and enjoy that process. Everyone has got to start somewhere and after considering you compose yourself (and very well might I add) you must remember a time where you started composing and wasn’t immediately able to write as well as the likes of mozart and Rachmoninoff
@@guppie2538 I never wrote garbage like this. I held myself up to a high standard from the very beginning. You don't have to be trash, you just have to be competent.
That is impressive but for some it’s not as easy to write amazing music that quickly (not to say this isn’t amazing) but what I am trying to say is there are better way to point out mistakes constructively then critique the overall piece, after all, it’s important to encourage new composers, not discourage them
Ways*
Imagine a life, where you spend your life to studying composition, not much result in the field, but luckily you still have enough knowledge to trash talk to a decent amateur composer (who unlike you is getting fairly good amount of attention and compliment), yet sadly not enough to give an actual advice
I’ve now listened to this piece along with your piano concerto (the first movement), and I’m very impressed with your compositional abilities. You seem to have an intricate understanding of texture, as well as harmonic tradition, something that takes a long time to develop. Although your current writing has immense musical value, I can’t wait to hear your music mature. I hope that you’ll continue to upload your compositions in the future!
Bro is that musescore??
Very nice! May I ask if you are a pianist or not? Just because I hear Scriabin vibes here and there, and you could pump up the difficulty. After a while it gets boring, because the chord mashing and the broken chords carry through the whole piece. It has so much fantasy and its awesome really, and if you change and vary how the broken chords are played, it would be much better
Amazing!! The beginning of it is very reminiscent the Schubert's G flat major impromptu, Bravo!!! I'll be very happy to play it!!
It’s nothing like the Schubert.