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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 16 ก.ย. 2024
- I've cut and rearranged shots from the scene of Imperial attack on The Path's hideout from Episode 5. My aim was to improve the pacing, make it feel more tense and dynamic.
Stormtroopers are pushing in faster and harder, there is less unnecesary shots and Tala's sacrifice is rearanged so it feels more... genuine (? idk :D). I'd wish I could do something about this horrendous camera shake, but stabilizing it digitaly only makes it wonky and worse.
Let me know what you think!
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This is better. The amount of edits I'm seeing of Obi-wan that are better than the show is depressing
At least that means there's something salvageable from it.
It's hard to make it any worse.
I think there is good ideas exist in that show but they are more logical mistakes than good ideas and this kills entire serie.
This video already looks bad, don't want to imagine how bad it looks in the real scene, they really fuck up every star wars movie and series
Yeahhhhh sure it is
I don't even remember how the original cut looked, but this played really well.
Those guys at Disney did a TERRIBLE job creating Kenobi. You, Sir, saved this scene. God bless you and may the force be with you.
I think "terrible" is a bit heavy handed.
@@BaronSupremacy I think it's spot on. I lost interest after every episode, to the point I spent days or weeks between getting around to watching the next. It was just that uncompelling.
@@Espartanica I will say I think that’s because we know the fate of all of these characters. Obi wan, Vader, Leia, Luke - there’s nothing really on the line for the characters we deeply care about. The other characters didn’t give us much to care about and a reason to want to see what happens for them because we know we don’t see them later on. That makes it incredibly difficult to create something compelling.
@@BaronSupremacy Star Wars is literally built on a foundation of prequels. Episodes 1-3 came before 4-6, and Clone Wars is a fan favorite despite taking place between 2 and 3. Pretty much all Star Wars shows take place between events of the movies.
I also just didn’t care about the characters at all that lady who died in this scene I don’t even know who the hell she is and we’re supposed to cry from her death after we saw her for 2 episodes.
If only people who were professionals knew the POWER of editing.
This is amazing seeing all these edits is only fueling my desire to finish up my rewrite.
If they were pros, they knew. They're just underpaid amateurs. And it's primarily the directors' fault.
The main breaching of the door is way better now, you no longer see the pre-longed unshielded characters not getting it in cqc gun fight even tho it still bothers me a tad, this feels pretty good speed up compared to the show.
I've tried my best to make it as believable as possible. I'm amazed that one rebel dying in this first sequence is a dude getting shot point blank. Looks so silly, I've threw out all this rumble that happened there next to the computers.
Agree
I always found this fight scene as silly as the Leia chase scene. I really hate how they're making the stormtroopers can't aim joke canon, you're telling me in that open area where there's barely any cover and you have overwhelming firepower. You only managed to kill one person but had to be point blank in order to do it, and absolutely everyone is missing their shots. That's like imagining the Tantive IV scene where the Stormtroopers don't kill anyone and just keep on awkwardly moving up with no rebels dying.
Watch the opening scene to New Hope
Fuck let’s just watch A New Hope. It’s explained that the stormtrooper’s miss Luke and the gang on purpose because they would show the Empire where the rebel base is if they escape. Honestly very impressive how many times they miss considering their trying too. So much so they’ve convinced people for years they can’t shoot at all.
And even if you still believe stormtroopers are bad shots, why would Disney make the empire so cartoonishly evil and Incompetent but in the same breath their trying to make us care about how bad news the Empire is? It seems self defeating and very contradicting.
For real. They have made them a huge punching bag and joke across a number of their productions for years and years now.
I know there is an explanation for the poor aim on the deathstar, but I don't mind a few relatively subtle jabs written into things concerning that. Just keep it subtle and not frequent. I didn't mind the scout troopers during the season 1 finale of Mandalorian. That was done relatively well...though I do wish 1 had sucky aim and the other actually hit their target. But it isn't outright saying stormtroopers have bad aim. It was just two guys that normally patrol on speeder bikes that can't hit something at range with their holdout blaster pistol.
But I wish they would stop making it an actual thing. Especially when we get the scenes like the TV shows where you have swarms of bad guys that can't even shoot the good guys who are clumped up like fish in a barrel.
Atleast with the Mandalorian and Boba Fett they will show the stormtroopers actually hitting something with some regularity. But then all they can ever hit are the areas specifically covered by armor to the point of ridiculousness.
@@kennygraham4067 Hey I whole hardly agree as with you said about the scout troopers. I think the reason the scene works so well was because it it was obvious that it was being played off as a joke and that those troopers were shown to be incompetent compared to the storm troopers in the same episode that we’re an actual threat.
excellent job! i forgot how the real one goes so i thought this was just how it was done professionally.
Damn this was one of my least favorite scenes and you made it one of the best. Can't believe what a difference it makes, the force of the empire actually feels threatening and her sacrifice at the end is emotional and actually makes sense. Great work man!
Feels like editors just took it with grain of salt and then finished off the scraps, call if a wrap. instead of actually inspecting scenes. I mean not everything is or will be a good success, George Lucas is also getting on in his years (no secret), that may have something to do with it. Still doing great overall considering. Darth Vader Scene least for me was probably the Highlight of 2022, everything about that scene was so clever and so well done. that was absolutely BRILLIANT, gives me shivers even now.
Well she could've thrown the grenade before so doesn't really make sense
Wow, that's a _huge_ improvement. Gave it some actual emotional weight, too.
The only edit that would fix Obi-Wan would be to have him chilling on Tatoonine watching over Luke _like he should be._
I love the faster and consistent tempo. Builds tension and chaos, like a battle should be. Well done.
Holy shit! editing is everything! this feels more impactful and more intense now.
My god what is this...this feeling...is this...is this what being excited used to feel?
The original scene felt like it took 2 steps forward and 1 step back all the way through. This keeps the pace up like troops in a close quarters firefight would.
That 2 second scene at 0:38 is so silly, you can see like 10 blaster shot barely missing ice cube's son stading 10 feet right in front of like 50 Stormtrooper
You nailed it! Storm Troopers felt more menacing and a unstoppable force...
How is that SO much better?!? I thought it was just bad writing that was the murderer of Obi-Wan, but apparently bad editing was the real killer all along.
Dude your edits make the show way better. I actually cared about her dying here. The fights look more chaotic. Thank you for your work.
Listen guy guys, despite having ranged weapons I want you to slowly walk into melee range for the guy with a sword. Trust me nothing cango wrong.
If Kenobi was holding her back with one hand and fighting with the other, that would be almost epic
Oh man. I don't remember much but I remember the scene was slow. Now it's intense and pulsating. Fantastic!
Obi-Wan was essentially the only thing stopping everyone from being shot. Nobody had any cover. Okay, he's good. That's fine.
They turn a corner and Obi-Wan decides the best spot for him to be is picking people up; not, you know, deflecting laser blasts as he is the only one capable of doing so.
Yes there was so much shaky clips in the real version, this flowed better
I love the edit, honestly this just makes it a lot better in every sense but I still can't get over the cinematography during every god damn action sequence being so shaky constantly. This isn't on you and of course it's not like you could've done anything about it, it's just the one thing to pull me out of this show the most.
This flows sooooo much better! Wish you were the editor for the show and the creators listened to you
This edit made my eyes teary... but the original hasn't, after watching the show twice. 😅 Alright I surrender... This is the 2nd edit you made that popped up on my feed. And I loved both. I'll subscribe. 🙂
So much better…..
This makes the scene feel more stressful like the stakes are high. Big fan.
2:06 that was the best stormtrooper ever he was brave as hell!!!
Motherf"cr thought spinning would be a good trick
The only guy actually making sense in the scene. Aggressively pushing forward knowing it would be harder to dodge his blasts at such close range
That was really good, great work
this is way better than the original one, even sadder and more emotion, nice one mate !!!!
I didn't at all have a problem with the editing of this specific episode, in fact I loved it, though I did think The Empire's push into the base was too long. This feels better in terms of flow.
This is MUCH better. It's almost as if this should have been a movie. Someone else got rid of the shakey cam. Hopefully one day fans can make an ultimate edit.
It is so easy to construct such a fluent scene as the example conspicuously shows. I don't really understand why they fail with the M$ budget.
Yeah...about your description. I think the camera shaking is horrendous too lol. They even did that during the finale too, right? I don't get it man. For a, reportedly, $25MIL+ an episode Star Wars show (the BIGGEST budget of any SW show to date thus far, and I think even the biggest TV show budget of ALL time even?? -- knowing that GOT had a budget of only $6MIL-$15MIL+ an episode!).....they do shaky cam for all the fights?! It just makes it look a bit too cheap, unprofessional and fan filmy-esque and blurs and muddies way, waaaay too much of the sweet, sweet fighting, choreography and even a lot of the acting for my liking, I dunno. Why do they do this?? ;/
That's what I thought to myself as well. We get that shaky cam in the very first scene, during a Jedi training, clones enter the room and the camera goes nuts. I saw this and was like "oh, not good". There is so much money and planning involved with SW projects and stuff like this makes it look just unprofessional and cheap. I just don't get it, it's disappointing.
@@spikul Yes, EXACTLY!! The moment I saw that scene, I almost immediately was let down by just how shaky it all was. I enjoyed the actual scene itself, but man those shaky cams nearly ruined it for me just like how all the other fights felt almost ruined by them too, including the big final fight. There was just so much sweet action and beautiful choreography, all almost entirely wasted by the intense shakiness of their filming. Ughhh >:(
@@Vandicoup I thought the backlash of late Bourne movies and Taken sequels left it's mark in the movie industry and people will stay away from over cutting and shaky cams that are suppose to add tension but they do the very opposite.
@@spikul Indeed. It really does have the exact opposite effect and ends up making many people feel dizzy and nauseous, even, from what I've heard from other comments! Also, I just saw this one comment underneath another similar Kenobi edit that mentioned how the shaky cam was actually digitally added in post, apparently?? I asked him exactly how he knew this, waiting for a response from him at the moment, but yeah. Do you think so as well? That's insane if that's the case. I'd love them to release the original, unaltered version at some point on Disney+, just like how we never got the original, unaltered version of any of the OT movies on home video, lol.
They could do it like how they have one of the many "versions" that they offer on Disney+, just like how they offer different versions of their movies, like Doctor Strange 2 in like IMAX, Letterbox and such, if you've noticed that lil' feature over there, hehe.
I think it'd be cool if they offered a "non-shaky cam" version for content like the Kenobi series too lol.
@@Vandicoup I can see some of these shots getting shaky cam added in the post to link them to a shot before or after.
I think a lot of shots are just shot with nartural cam shake and you can see that because of the way things blur out really. There is proper paralax happening in the wider shots, lights blur in a proper way. Hard to explain really but since I've done my fair share of shaky cam in post I think I'm able to tell apart the digital way and just a camera man doing their thing. Plus from what I see the're pushing hard on capturing as much stuff as possible in camera, even lightsabers actually glow nowadays on set, so I assume it was a choice to go with shaky cam on set so they'll get an authentic looking shot.
I highly doubt they'll release any other version soon and definetelly not a "shaky cam free" one.
Idk what they filmed it with but movies that are shown in IMAX formats are shot to be shown in IMAX theathers, Kenobi is a 6hr series set to release on D+, plus they did some screenings here and there on conventions and such but those versions does not look any different.
I think we're left with what we got.
This totally inspired me to re-edit this scene in my fan edit. Good job!
oooo fan edit? sounds interesting. Are you turning the show into one film or just editing each episode? Im curious to know because I love fan edits.
@@MrMoleHole I turned the show into a movie. It’s been out on my Discord server for a few months now.
@@DewitNow That sounds really cool 😎 this show def needed to be a movie when you think about it
DUDE!!! CHILLS! FREAKING CHILLS!!!!
This was fantastic. It hearkens back to the fact that star wars was a movie that was made and saved in the edit. Great job on this.
Nice to see how many people can fix this show with minimal effort, very good job on this scene, I wish this version was in the episode instead
Really snappy. A marked improvement. It bugs me how there's all these dumb little decisions that bring down otherwise neat scenes and ideas.
Much better than the original. Great job!
this is genious, the original had me totally in disinterest
Huge improvement, also make it slightly more believable why everyone just stands out in the open when the battle starts, they are all surprised by Revas action. Still silly who nobody is already in cover but it can be explained by false security because of the blast door.
Then everybody just have to wing it.
this was literally the episode that killed it for me. Seeing the stormtroopers continuously miss every target ruined everything. The rebels are just standing there, how are they not dropping in numbers. Also with the rectangular shields they hold the stormtroopers can nail like 5 hits into that no problem.
the force is strong in this youtube channel
Boils my blood how much better this is. Hats off to you!
You made this scene EXCITING!!!
Goosebumps. Literal Goosebumps
I have yet to watch the show, but your edit has me laughing the whole time, so I can't imagine what the actual show is like
The show is good I personally like it
In the actual show, there’s a minute where the stormtroopers gather in the room and stand a few feet away from the defending rebels. There is a wide shot showing that everyone is missing each other at point blank range, with no cover either.
Obi should've just collapsed the tunnel to give them the time they needed.
It’s crazy that you did a better edit of this then a billion dollar company good job
Another thing that upsets me is that Obi-Wan has to consistently hit the clones two times with a lightsaber that was supposed to cut right through them.
“Like Reva did with the door, which is a lot thicker than a clone’s armor”
Great job! I remember thinking the same as this when watching. Whoever edited the show really dropped the ball
Edit was fantastic. I truly think they missed the opportunity of showing Obi-Wan go full Jedi and hold off the majority of the blasts until reinforcements arrived, and having everyone just watch a Jedi for the first time. It would've made for an epic scene sure, but it would've served to show Obi Wan at his restored power (or almost), and shown how this beginning of a rebellion truly revered the Jedi, and that maybe Obi Wan was the first spark of a rebellion (or a rebel sect that became part of the rebel alliance)
It’s so funny I shed a tear for the loading droid death then the rebel spy lady
Damn dude. You're really good at this.
your videos shwo so hard how the filming isnt even the issue in the series. Its the lack of good editing. This is amazing.
Another Star Wars saved in the edit. I actually loved this show, but agree, some scenes were just not edited well.
better, much better. Unfortunately its still bullshit that the ISD didnt just orbitally bombard the base, but this still is a big improvement and fixes a few gripes I had with this scene.
The one thing to really help this show would have been investing in a few tripods.
Damn just amazing, that’s the difference that a good editing can make to a scene
This is literally so much better it makes me wonder wtf they were thinking putting their cut in the show
The lack of common sense in the writing of many scenes in the show makes me think that Disney hired scholarship holders or something
I do love how stupid it is when they pull out to the wide shot and only stormtroopers are dead. Not a single rebel got caught in that fish bowl. Stormtroopers aim like they are trying to miss, but that many of them, it is insane levels of disbelief necessary to believe they didn't just kill everyone Obi-Wan included.
Tala, you could have thrown that grnade when Reva opened the doors...
you're doing the lords work. Thank you
Daaaaammn. This is good shit dude. Much better imo.
Really excited to watch the revamped version of the show with edits like this
How do you have all those Troopers firing at like 20 people, and NOBODY gets hit? Christ have mercy
Kenobi can stand still and deflect 30-40 ST fire but in the opening scenes jedi are gunned down by 3-4 clone troopers. But, this is a much better edit!
Good edit! Wouldn't have noticed, it just seems like it was intended this way.
Funny how removing length fillers make even a low budget series feel closer to a movie.
With a bit of vignette or maybe better color grading, it'll even look more so.
That droid was underrated
This is so much better than the original mess of an action scene. It is unfortunate that the base footage is so crappy because her holding the grenade cannot be changed to her throwing the grenade. You know, the purpose grenades are made for.
Very well done!
Perfect pacing, it suddenly makes me feel bad for her even more now.
Gunfights in CQC range will never not be ridiculous.
I love how Disney constantly gets videos of fixing scenes.
We need a version of the series full of edits like this to clean up Disney’s half-assery.
Now I;m wondering what the original is as this one looks like it is from a professional
I don't get why she didn't think to, i don't know, THROW the thermal detonator to actually kill the inquisitor.
There's a lot of shit in this show that makes no sense at all.
I've only seen this episode once, so I can't tell what's different 😂😂
Remember when they had a huge cannon shooting at the door, but then as soon as it’s open it stops…
I like how they were able to whisper through a giant solid steel door, great writing 🤦🏽♂️
they both used force hearing
force whisper or force hearing
@@EB-if2px Yeah wasn't done very convincingly, just came across as poor writing and lazy screen play.
This is so much better! And I think there should be more deaths from the rebels
Really hate the constant shaky cam of the entire show, don’t give my eyes a rest.
It looks like is part of the show, a well written show that is
That series certainly made good use of the "nobody can hit a barn-door" trope. Bizarre to see two densely packed sides fire at each other at close range and only have one or two people hit. That engagement should have been done in seconds.
0:55 is probably the most egregious example, where Obi-Wan just gets bored of defending, so turns his back and jogs off while the Stormtroopers have a clear shot at him and whiff the lot.
Idk what had been changed, but it's look normal now
*SHAKY CAM INTENSIFIES*
That's what I call applying make-up to a corpse.
Holy crap! You mean that show COULD HAVE BEEN EXCITING????
From the 180 rule breaks and the disregard of the scene maps / teleporting, it's obvious they had zero clue how to edit.
I wish someone would do this to the entire series and upload it, it would be 100x better without the fluff
exceptionally done. the force is strong with this wan.
Should’ve just made her use the thermal detonator when all the stormtroopers were funneling into the choke point lol. When she pulled that out I was like bitch WHY DID YOU WAIT UNTIL NOW 😂
Good job, but it still looks like a schoolyard and not like a military operation.
WAAAAAAAYYYY Better! Thank you for that.
Disney needs to get rid of the shakey cam. Can’t tell what’s going on too well because of it
They should hire you for the editing
But to be honest, man, I'm having motion sickness with that shaky camera. It should've been better shot or something from them.
I felt like this scene lasted literally forever in the show.