To the Men of Mar Det

This is a poem that a friend of mine, had shown me. Which was part of an anthology. Titled: World of Poetry Anthology. It has who knows how many poems and writings in it. It was quite thick and weighed several pounds. I saw this one among several others that I plan to recite. I welcome all constructive criticism, so please let me know what you think about my recitation. And enjoy!!!! Like, comment, share and subscribe!!!!!!
-A Naval Poet