Thanks for the Memories │Spoken Word Poetry

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  • As life goes on, people come and people go. Some that we don't realize leave and others whose absence hurts us when it happens.
    Written & Performed by: Melissa Paiz
    Background music from freesound.org by the user soundflakes
    Follow me on Twitter: @xMoonlight.Melx

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  • @soffxx5363
    @soffxx5363 4 ปีที่แล้ว +426

    "I was nothing but a replaceable piece in your game.." damn that hurt me..

    • @qfeverproduction
      @qfeverproduction 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      me to me to

    • @thakurichyt1378
      @thakurichyt1378 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      You r nt one

    • @poojajadhav4243
      @poojajadhav4243 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Same here😔

    • @jokesonu2228
      @jokesonu2228 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      But yet again I'm not ok...I'm lost I don't know what to do anymore...I love you but I'm sorry cuz I kinda love her more...But that doesn't mean you can't be my friend no more...

    • @poojajadhav4243
      @poojajadhav4243 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@jokesonu2228 after tearing her heart apart...there is no chances to become friends again......n if u love other person then be wid her wholeheartedly..why to look for another person....its just kind of hurting both of them

  • @ProfessionalHaterTeamSnowcat
    @ProfessionalHaterTeamSnowcat 5 ปีที่แล้ว +678

    the moment you care about something they walk all over you ...

    • @johnwirth4757
      @johnwirth4757 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      After time most people take each other for granted be thankful for what you have

    • @christhomas5341
      @christhomas5341 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      That's why I can't bring myself to open up to someone.

    • @mrcheebz4143
      @mrcheebz4143 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Woah, it's never your fault. Ever! Get rid of that mind set. The only actions you have control of are yours. Dont ever lower yourself to someone else's level. Let them rise up to you. Nothing is good or bad, just indifferent. Sometimes people dont know better, maybe they were not taught proper manners or how to be kind.
      I was just seeing a woman 2 months back.
      I was always kind and respectful in the best way I knew how, even though she would be rude to me, act flakey, act like I wasnt worth much. That's on her. I wasnt mad at her, nor did I blame her. I felt bad for her. I could tell the way she has been treated was rubbing off on her. She was treating me the same way. That's all she knew how. If you get treated terribly your whole life, that's just what you know. What you are familiar with.

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      @dinukaravi968 3 ปีที่แล้ว

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    • @lovepoems5232
      @lovepoems5232 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      th-cam.com/video/OqozOUoiTvQ/w-d-xo.html
      Broken heart sad touching poem

  • @redriot8556
    @redriot8556 6 ปีที่แล้ว +510

    This makes me cry sometimes...

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 ปีที่แล้ว +57

      Yeah, sometimes I write when I'm crying >.< some things in life can be tough

    • @elizabethmccarty2121
      @elizabethmccarty2121 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Not me ):(

    • @agentcharm4806
      @agentcharm4806 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      Because of how true it is... the people who said they love you then next thing you know they’ve moved on...

    • @jullyscainl7623
      @jullyscainl7623 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Last moment good coming this plying ang other people pushing door and closed everything under staned ol friend Goodworth all gived iam all some things((--------‐--)other is good sported ::::::::::other people for you nouder stuied

    • @dmgg3725
      @dmgg3725 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Your lucky yours is sometimes-
      I always cry..
      😭😭😭😭😭

  • @shivaneelucas7318
    @shivaneelucas7318 5 ปีที่แล้ว +152

    Am just going through this i can't explain how alone i am....am just broken

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  5 ปีที่แล้ว +14

      I'm sorry to hear that :( Hang in there

    • @happiloser189
      @happiloser189 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      I am too 😞😔😕☹😪😭

    • @matesoul970
      @matesoul970 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I listen to this whenever I feel like calling him😪

    • @uniquequeen1121
      @uniquequeen1121 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      😔😔😔

    • @emmamia1547
      @emmamia1547 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      U got a frnd in me if u want

  • @buys_magic715
    @buys_magic715 6 ปีที่แล้ว +119

    every single spoken poetry you make reminds me of someone and this is probably the one that hits me the most with someone that left me. You are so wonderful.

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Wow, that's amazing! I really felt this one since it is painful when someone leaves you and I just needed to put the thoughts and feelings into words. Thank you for checking out my spoken word poetry :)

  • @sarahpearce7783
    @sarahpearce7783 5 ปีที่แล้ว +332

    lyrics x
    probably been posted before but just feel like writing them out
    im feeling some type of way and it’s not good
    i gave and i gave
    and i tried, oh i tried
    but in the end, you said goodbye while i shattered and cried.
    maybe i just had no place in your life
    i mean, i get it.
    im the embodiment of a curse.
    and the day you cut me off and pushed me away, i was reminded that im just temporary
    and not a person to stay.
    in moments such as these i recall why i desire to be alone because if im alone,
    no one can hurt me.
    no one can use me and no one can gain my trust and then leave.
    i hear things are well, that you’re doing great.
    im happy to hear that, even if what we had now feels fake.
    it seems like you’re better off without me, and you’d rather be with your closer friends then me.
    i understand.
    im the stupid one here, for believing i could mean something to you and believing that i could be set free from my mind that tells me eventually they all pack up and go.
    and again you’ll be left all alone.
    this is where the trust issues come in to play, so i guess I’ll say thanks for the memories and for the time you wasted on me.
    im not mad, more like sad with myself for becoming an eyesore in your picture, you’ve erased me completely from your scripture
    and I’ll do the same.
    i won’t say your name
    yes, ill still feel the pain.
    that i was nothing, NOTHING
    but a replaceable piece in your game.

    • @addisonprior1380
      @addisonprior1380 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Thanks

    • @selmabomanhedin1102
      @selmabomanhedin1102 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      sarah Pearce Thank you soo much! People like you make the world a better place💞

    • @mindfreak5360
      @mindfreak5360 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank You!❤

    • @jyotsnaroy2994
      @jyotsnaroy2994 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      It's actually in the video itself

    • @LVSnailSandwichContent
      @LVSnailSandwichContent 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      "eventually they all pack up and go" except one girl didn't. Do you want her to stay? She doesn't feel like you do

  • @lolafashola4318
    @lolafashola4318 6 ปีที่แล้ว +98

    This broke me 😭 Words I have been searching for, for years. I knew how I felt but never knew the words to express how I felt but this did. Thank you 🙌❤

  • @trizahkabui1552
    @trizahkabui1552 4 ปีที่แล้ว +21

    So accurate, I meant nothing to him. I had to bounce back and let him go before he could broke my heart . I knew that he was faking it. It didn't hurt much. I miss him though. Thnx for the memories

  • @maple_dat_furrywerido3200
    @maple_dat_furrywerido3200 5 ปีที่แล้ว +93

    I just went through a split up with my Best friend or at least thought was my friend and This made me feel better somehow.

  • @afiaraita
    @afiaraita 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    This thing feels so right. Every word just makes me remember everything we had and then when you left without even saying realizing I am just a replaceable piece in your life. Never felt so relatable before

  • @kyraalenaaguilar4363
    @kyraalenaaguilar4363 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    When I listen or read this, I think about how he said "You're the only one I love", and realise how he liked her more than me, how much he tried getting her attention more than mine. This is a message for him: If you're just playing with me, let go of me, set me free, stop trying to talk to me, stop hoping that I will still love you and stop hoping my best friend will love you back, she likes someone else, if you're just gonna play with her, don't, don't talk to me, MY best friend and my crush. Yes, he may not love me back, but when he makes me jealous, I know he doesn't mean it, because he doesn't know I like him. I love you, not as a lover, not as a friend, but an old friend, a friend who I will forget about. Thank you, this spoken poetry made me feel better.

  • @asmiranor2854
    @asmiranor2854 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    My heart broke into pieces. I dont know if I could fall in love again after this. I was there when he was rejected by his ex gf. I tried my best to heal his heart. After he recovered, he told me he fell for me. And I couldn't lie that i fell for him too. We planned to get married. He was so excited. And i dont know where and when it went wrong. He suddenly changed. He had the guts to tell me, he couldn't forget his ex gf. He loved her still. Everytime he spent with me, reminded him of her. He said firmly that he couldn't accept me anymore. He couldn't force himself to love me. That moment, I felt like I was killed over and over again by the person i loved wholeheartedly. It almost ruined my career as I was really devastated. I didnt eat for days. I was like a living dead. Dear you, I hope God will grant you all the happiness in this world from all of my happiness that He took away from me. Thank you for breaking my sincere heart who loves u so much for someone who broke your heart over and over again.

    • @martinemaryhernandez729
      @martinemaryhernandez729 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Wow , this story is much like mine a few differences I did leave My Man once and I know it hurt him but it definitely wasn’t over and over and one of the women that he was sharing music with felt she was much more than what it really was but she Never dated My Man **to date is definitely in the flesh **and she claims at least she had his mind bullshit for like 2.2 seconds My Man Chose Me He was very much in love with Me and she knew it then I became his wife💍🔐WEVE been together 7 yrs 🐞🐸she can pull tricks out her ass and it would be the same result IGNORED💯 We have built a wonderful life together💜💚💫 there’s nobody that can steal our happiness and joy EVER💞

  • @greisifaye8713
    @greisifaye8713 4 ปีที่แล้ว +16

    my story:
    Growing up one outgoing girl saw a quiet left behind girl, they had a project one day and while hanging out realized how exactly the same they were...instantly becoming bestfriend. Years later the outgoing girl has her first serious depressive episode.. she had a lot of friends but no REAL friends.. just friends that used each other as a stepping stool. Her family didn’t listen to her, didn’t care, her sister was gone.. there was no point of staying right? Well she had her quite friend to thank for that.. her only close friend which she shared real laughs with. She saved her that night. She became the reason the outgoing girl kept going. She thought “i cant make her suffer that pain again just because im selfish” so she lived on.. living like hell, she lived on.
    They went into high school together as new people they said.. the outgoing girl met another two outgoing girls who were similar to her and quiet girl.. these 2 separate pairs of best friends became 4. For the next 3 years they would make hundreds of memories and unforgettable moments... trips, laughs,constant sleep overs.. outgoing girl loved going to school just because these 3 human beings were there. she didn’t need a lot of fake friends anymore she thought.. those were her family.. she constantly sacrificed herself for them and their lives and she didn’t care because she thought it was mutual.. hell! She would of died if it meant saving quiet girl...end of junior year came.. and suddenly the 4 became 3.. they stopped talking to outgoing girl. She was so confused and kept trying to talk to them but would receive no answer.. her pride couldn’t take it and she decided to stop reaching out to see if for once they would reach out towards HER... hours turned into days and days turned into weeks.. she no longer had anyone.. home was hell, and school became hell.. her demons that were under to some degree of control were free. The mask she put on was broken.. she would cry in class, she stopped talking, she stopped living... she was just surviving. school was filled with them, they sat at her lunch table so she would constantly say she had to make up work and eat at a teachers room or at the bathroom. All of her classes had either one or all three of them in it.. she no longer sat with them.. sitting at the lunch table, with your headphones in and acting like you are not hurting.. your pride and your demons fighting. She skipped school with 1 old and 1 new friend who were also broken.. The 3 broken friends skipped daily, drank constantly, smoked, lied and cried... using each other for their own benefit but they each knew.. eventually they each parted and found their place. outgoing girl tried and tried to forget them, and hated going home because it meant she HAD to think about it... she tried ending her own life more than 20 different times but never went fully through with it.. except for once.. she waited there for her life to slip away slowly but next morning she only woke up with a migraine and puffy face.. it didn’t work.... days later she realized how scared she was of herself and reached out.
    A year later outgoing broken girl got help, she was improving herself, decided to take revenge by becoming the best.. she studied harder and worked harder.. her grades were amazing and she had managed to feel proud of herself.. it was hard to keep seeing them and looking at their faces everyday but she managed.
    A year later she finally got her license, she graduated, her parents and herself had become the only people she trusted and had close to her. She only worked and studied for the past year, relationships were doomed from the beginning because her trust issues were broken.. she believed she was meant to be temporary for everyone.. the one that changes everyones life or heals them and then they leave when her purpose has been achieved. she was an item. She didn’t need the commitment of friendships or relationships because that meant opening up to getting hurt like that again and that possibility scared her to the core.. well one random day like today, when she taught her brain was starting to block the memories out.. outgoing healed girl was driving from work like any other day.. and in-front of her was a familiar car she used to ride with quiet girl growing up.. out of curiosity she moved her head a bit to see who was driving... those eyes, that mole she recognized it instantly... and every single memory, every cut she had on her wrist, every tear she cried, all never ending nights, all the headaches from sleeping too much, every wound created in her mind and heart re opened.. her eyes watered and her anger came back. No matter how much time had passed,the moment she saw her again, the memory of herself on the floor, bloody wrist, knife on one hand and never ending tears flooded back.. she was afraid once again... of those demons coming back again... of those memories not going away.. of that trauma she tried so hard to overcome.. but one thing was different... she knew she had already hit the lowest she had ever... and she survived... if she had managed to do that she knew she could also manage to overcome anything else she was yet to experience.. and that gave her hope.. enough hope to wipe her tears and switch lanes...
    She now sits on her bed writing this and with her demons shut out and safely tucked away.. outgoing girl has learned that she has healed, she no longer completely breaks each time she sees or hears them, no longer needing weeks to overcome a small event, she has learned to set her mind straight, she can move on by herself... she in trusts her life on herself and that is enough for her...

    • @natalielyn3744
      @natalielyn3744 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      woww, i'm sorry you had to go through that but that's really inspiring

  • @SKiara-mc6dw
    @SKiara-mc6dw 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I just don't know how you read my mind ....so, thank you so much❤❤❤❤

  • @smritiraj366
    @smritiraj366 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    Your every saying is relatable to my heart. I listen them, I feel them and I cry. Nothing more I can do here except for feeling the things through your voice.❤

  • @eriantyyanti5794
    @eriantyyanti5794 4 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    I’m still miss all our memories, i miss him so much and it’s hurt me much 💔

  • @revathinair3460
    @revathinair3460 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    "But a replaceable piece in your game" hit me hard

  • @isabelaelenachitan3948
    @isabelaelenachitan3948 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    So much pain! Will be a scar, but you'll be fine. Time will give you forgiveness and forgetfulness! This is the gift of our life! 💜

  • @yyyinng
    @yyyinng 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I can't believe that you could write these words that express exactly how I feel...

  • @sophiemay2513
    @sophiemay2513 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    I'm just broken inside I howl every night I can't sleep and sometimes I ask myself why I'm actually crying but if I'm honest I don't know it myself so exactly I cry sometimes 10 hours and just can't stop crying

  • @RoRo-ns7sx
    @RoRo-ns7sx 4 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    I really get this since I sit alone at recess every day cause I feel like my friend gets bored talking to me and since her other friend doesn’t like me

  • @florencezoi2396
    @florencezoi2396 4 ปีที่แล้ว +76

    "Those who find me find life, and the Lord will be pleased with them. " Proverbs 8:35

  • @rat9874
    @rat9874 4 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    I went through this...I'm mostly over it, but this brought back a lot of feelings and memories..it's so accurate too

  • @mysterymarierosetarot7894
    @mysterymarierosetarot7894 5 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    No game.. it was love... I was just hurt about something you had nothing to do with... but it was love... that at that time you didn’t have access too...doesn’t mean it wasn’t there!!! It was real

  • @ire5995
    @ire5995 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I'm grateful cause what i feel is not only mine.. this kind of feeling is real, the loneliness and the sense of eternal longing without meaning is not a kind of trick of my mind. This makes me feel less alone. Thank you

  • @teresawoods3703
    @teresawoods3703 5 ปีที่แล้ว +26

    Yes, I'll still feel the pain
    That I was nothing
    NOTHING
    But a replaceable piece
    In your game

  • @elizahale9124
    @elizahale9124 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    There’s a issue of falling in love with your best friend is that the friendship will never be the same and those memories are just a part of your story but the people just fade away

  • @juananaser9286
    @juananaser9286 5 ปีที่แล้ว +71

    It is as if you are talking about my whole situation, SO ACCURATE.

  • @siddharthaggarwal3437
    @siddharthaggarwal3437 5 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    6 months after the cut off i saw her picture.
    I knew it was hurting but somewhere it was hurting a little less then.
    Then i knew i was healing.

  • @notritwik3214
    @notritwik3214 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    You are bringing tears to my eyes cause this is what happened to me a couple of weeks ago love your poetry they are heart touching

  • @augustocalderon9230
    @augustocalderon9230 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    The people that guard everything for anyone are the most special humanos in this existence. Learn that

  • @shbary
    @shbary 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Thanks for the memories
    i'm feeling some type of way and it's not good i give and i give and i tried, oh i tried but in the end, you said goodbye while i shattered and cried maybe i just had no place in your life i mean i get it I'm the embodiment of a course and the day you cut me off and pushed me away i was reminded that i'm just temporary and i'm not a person meant to stay in moments such as these i recall why i desire to be alone bcs if i'm alone no one can hurt me no one can use me and no one can gain my trust and then leave i hear things are well that you're doing great i'm happy to hear that even if what we had Now feels fake it seems like you're better off without me and you'd rather be with your closer friends than me i understand i'm the stupid one here for believing i could mean something to you and i believing that i could be set free from my mind that tells me avantually they all pack up and go and again you'll be left all alone this is where trust issues come into play so i guess I'll say thanks for the memories and for the time you wasted on me i'm not made more like sad with myself for becoming an eyesore in your picture you've arased me completely from your scripture and i'll do the same i won't say your name but yes, i still feel the pain but i was nothing but a replaceable piece in your game .

  • @surendar7717
    @surendar7717 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    U don't know how amazing you are thanks for it... thank you

  • @helena3990
    @helena3990 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    I just break up February 3th, 2020... Move On,, Be Positive and Be Strong, Thanks God 🙏😇

  • @bruhi-5613
    @bruhi-5613 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    i love this so much i had to forward to a friend because she thought she wasnt wanted into this world.. its hard to think about but now she regrets every decision

  • @elizabethfairchild4899
    @elizabethfairchild4899 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    This had a different meaning to me, my parents got divorced and I can’t see my dad anymore and I have tried for months now to get over him leaving and I was finally getting better and learning how to go on without him but yesterday I seen him and he was laughing and smiling while I was frowning and almost in tears. When I saw him it all hit me in the heart again and I was right back where I started, hoping that I could talk to him crying myself to sleep😢😥

    • @supravietuitoriblog547
      @supravietuitoriblog547 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi, I don't want to bother you or something, but I want you to know that you're not alone in this, okay? If you want to talk to someoane who understands, I'm here for you.

  • @poojajaiswal8912
    @poojajaiswal8912 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    This poem is relatable to me.. I feel every word, n yeah thanks for the memories... the feelings....

    • @sanjaydurga7677
      @sanjaydurga7677 2 ปีที่แล้ว

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  • @zaharakalushi6443
    @zaharakalushi6443 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    I felt this so hard😭😭😭😭. I miss a certain special person I once had, someone I once prayed for. An answered prayer.... H.B

    • @johnwirth4757
      @johnwirth4757 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      God gave me a Angie how she wants me to let her go hope the best

  • @Themovielovescenes
    @Themovielovescenes 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    😢😢 this hit in so many sad and broken ways. A life experience, written for all to see. It's very comparison 👏

  • @JJ-kc9dn
    @JJ-kc9dn 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    This made me cry, for once i don't feel like the only one like this.

  • @saraii09
    @saraii09 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I just wanna share that I saw my ex, my first love with a girl last night in the train station and that shitttt felt unrealistic. I’m fine thou, I needed this, this honestly just helped me realize I am over it. Thank you god. You’re so good.

  • @arisem430
    @arisem430 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    This is.. how I feel everyday seeing my old best friend happy without me but right now I'm trying to take the advice from my teacher that no one is permanent in my life I'm still learning how to let go but it still hurts me inside

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I understand. It is hard to let go of people :( I'm sorry to hear that

    • @arisem430
      @arisem430 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Mel's Thoughts thank you

  • @ajoybhattacharya8880
    @ajoybhattacharya8880 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    You taught me the other and the at the sametime the real story of staying alone. It makes one invincible.

  • @shaynelicayan8441
    @shaynelicayan8441 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I love it, I can really feel the emotion in this piece

  • @stormyangeldessirayeoliver9651
    @stormyangeldessirayeoliver9651 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I really like these.... they are deep and meaningful.

  • @timothydelbeke8000
    @timothydelbeke8000 5 ปีที่แล้ว +23

    True deep words

  • @rboyd3435
    @rboyd3435 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Broken hearted sad and utterly beautiful and so wonderfully read.

  • @sudaymirriampitsi911
    @sudaymirriampitsi911 5 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    This cuts deep💔 I felt it nd I can relate

    • @sanjaydurga7677
      @sanjaydurga7677 2 ปีที่แล้ว

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  • @NoTalentGuy
    @NoTalentGuy 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    *People will remember not what you said but how you made them feel*

  • @daweirdpersonsanchez9963
    @daweirdpersonsanchez9963 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Sometimes it’s better to let all your emotions out....

  • @客家人-r35
    @客家人-r35 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I know everything, your feelings and thoughts, so you don’t have to worry so much. You won’t look unhappy. I believe you have absolute control, so you are free! I don’t have to worry anymore, silence is better than sound at this moment! Let's not talk too much. I wish you all the best.

  • @ohnana161
    @ohnana161 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I love your poems its like your in my mind and know how im feeling

  • @ronsrg5
    @ronsrg5 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Beautiful and hurtful at the same time

  • @tinap7164
    @tinap7164 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    I remember the memories of my ex who killed himself 2 years together and I still can't stop loving him even though he isn't here

  • @riverjusticephoenix4047
    @riverjusticephoenix4047 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I feel like this relates to me about my brother. He left my life when I was 7, then suddenly came back when I was 16, gained my trust and left again in the worst way possible. He completely cut me off and doesn’t want to speak to me anymore. It broke me and I’m sorry that I’ve done things wrong but did he and I wanna say thank you for making me realise who I need and don’t in my life

  • @aditiakarmawan5921
    @aditiakarmawan5921 5 ปีที่แล้ว +26

    This is exactly how i feel

  • @miyo8001
    @miyo8001 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you for this poem, you made me cry while saying, "that hurts.. ", over and over again until i cried myself to sleep. Society told me, males aren't suppose to feel or cry...but how can I resist when she had 4 bestfriends and took one of my bestfriends shoulder to cry on when I, on the other side, was alone in the dark with my fake smile..

  • @crackheadhour3450
    @crackheadhour3450 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I feel this on a whole other level I have been hurt so many times I only trust one person in my life, not even my parents or anyone in my family. only my best friend who has always been there for me and listened to me and try to convince me that there's still hope in people but I just don't believe him.

    • @c.s.panchal
      @c.s.panchal 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Ohhh mg

    • @natherahkarim7146
      @natherahkarim7146 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Sy tahu.yg penting awak persaya dgn sy.klau awak percaya dgn sy.perkara ni blh selesai.awak jgn terlalu ikutkan perasaan.ikutkan perasaan binasa badan.benda takde apa pun .kosong.sy sendiri kdg takut dgn sikap sensitif awak.blh tak awak mcm biasa yg mula mula sy jumpa dulu.awak jgn ketepikan dia org .kamu bekerja setempat.awak dah lama berkawan dgn diorg.klau diorg tak saport awak sy rasa sy pun tak rapat dgn awak.sebabkan sy awak jgn bermusuhan dgn diorang.sy sendiri pun takkan setuju dgn pendapat.awak.awak kenal sy berapa lama baru setahun lebih.. Tapi sanggup buang kwn kerana sy padahal diorg dah lama awak kenal.susah senang bersama.cinta hari berputik besok bleh berpaling tadah tapi sahabat yg setia bersama awak masa awak menanggis dan ketawa.sy merayu kat tolong berbaik dgn mereka.sy sendiri berasa bersalah disebabkan sy awak ketepikan kawan.awak kena kuat terima kenyataan.kita merancang .jodoh allah yg tentukan.

  • @fokrouddinahmed4491
    @fokrouddinahmed4491 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks mujhe bolna sahie, itna jo pyar dia tumne, aur memories.. Unbelievable, unforgettable.... Thank you sooooo much

  • @manasgumtya6405
    @manasgumtya6405 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    It's so relatable 👍🏻 each and every word I can feel in my heart 💔

  • @flqka
    @flqka 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    The world is full of surprises...but there are so much bad people that betray you,bully you and...do worse things to you but there’s a little bit of people that standby you and will support you.Its hard to get over people,but worse....your best friend would mean everything to you,but let her go if she just used you to make you fell stupid and embarrassed of your self....

  • @minnus9986
    @minnus9986 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Who are here after having a painfull breakup?
    The breakup which u never wanted,but the other person wished so much?
    Yes I'm one of that
    That pain when you understand that you are no longer in their life😭😔
    The pain when you still love someone who doesn't even bloody care💔

  • @beetrayed469
    @beetrayed469 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    To forgetting that a witch played u for so long I can't remember life without her . Keep the memories . Get out my phone !

  • @michellecrowder6374
    @michellecrowder6374 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    this hit me hard, ive been hurt so many times by people used, people playing with my feelings, and so much other stuff happend, but this one person i could count on, i trusted them, i love them i still do, we dated they made a promise to me that they wouldnt hurt me because ive been hurt so much in my past, than
    .....
    he hurt me
    ..
    i love u, i wanna marry you one day,
    kissed me. made me feel wanted
    on our oone week ani broke up with me
    ..
    you hurt me u promised me u wouldnt
    u broke ur promsie u said ud be fine if we broke up
    thoughts thanks for hurting me
    i still love u
    sees them at work, looks up looks back, looks like regrets hurting u but says nothing
    ..
    things slowly go back to normal but they still wont talk to u about what happend
    ..
    ur thoughts say its ur fault that u did something to mess it all up, u feel its ur issues they dont even give u the benfit of the doubt
    ..
    was us all a lie
    n0......
    nothing else
    nothing more
    (this is just a summary of what happend)

    • @supravietuitoriblog547
      @supravietuitoriblog547 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi, I just saw your comment and I wanted you to know that you're not alone in this, okay? If you want to talk to someoane who understands, I'm here for you.

  • @ericksteggydc431
    @ericksteggydc431 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    This made me cry I miss her so much it’s been months now , yet love is still something I believe in and even tho I might never see her again I thank her for the memories for being a chapter in the story of my book I call life

  • @platinumgames9898
    @platinumgames9898 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    "I was reminded that I'm just temporary, not a person meant to stay."
    💔💔

  • @MaySabbahyppiytoget
    @MaySabbahyppiytoget 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Be strong dont let any one break you down love yourself if he regret you he dont deserve you especially if he saw you in pain while he is looking to you7

  • @majedjr1369
    @majedjr1369 4 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    She broke up with me yesterday.. today she asked "how are you" and I said kinda feeling bad 😣 how about you? She said "I'm actually feeling good" how much damage can my heart take? 💔💔

  • @shrutimishra7549
    @shrutimishra7549 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Pain of love always... innocent people get hurt ..😞😭 but remember that god loves only innocent people♥️

  • @saralin2962
    @saralin2962 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    i met a guy online who i thought was a friend and we talked for about 3 months. i thought we were gonna be good friends since we talked every day. i really liked him and believed that he liked me back too. i guess not. he started to text in small sentences or just a word. or he would just stop talking to me for a few days or make an excuse to not talk to me. a week before my birthday, he blocked me on everything. i still have no idea why because i haven’t said anything to him. i forgave him for leaving me multiple times when he was “busy.” but that day he just suddenly packed up and left, just like nothing happened at all. like i never happened. i’m not mad at him. i’m just sad because i just keep wondering....what did i do wrong? was i too annoying? too ugly? i blamed myself for him leaving. i just wished he said a goodbye or had an explanation. my friends knew that i was pretty close to this guy. but they don’t understand how i got so connected to him. i’m still pretty upset over this and i’m trying to forget about him, like how i’m sure he already forgot me.

    • @robincen667
      @robincen667 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I feel u.. u can dm me @foreveralone.idd i have my story that is so related to you..

    • @martinemaryhernandez729
      @martinemaryhernandez729 ปีที่แล้ว

      When you know these things it should be easier for for you but I agree SAD Af…..

  • @daisyziggy4094
    @daisyziggy4094 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Me rn . Thanks for expressing me feeling in words

  • @hieverything123
    @hieverything123 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Why there is no pell to forget someone 😌

  • @jungshooky2627
    @jungshooky2627 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    this made me burst out crying letting go the emotions I kept inside...

    • @sanjaydurga7677
      @sanjaydurga7677 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      th-cam.com/video/x9a1VX_y29M/w-d-xo.html

  • @ay-amdeaaa-d778
    @ay-amdeaaa-d778 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I cant say ur name coz im nothing, nothing!just an irreplaceable thing in ur game🖤🖤🖤

  • @dsganesh259
    @dsganesh259 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    All aspiring poets around world...let's form a group..let's be strong enough to search out all happiness and to give them to the people who need it most

  • @nica___.
    @nica___. 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    That’s literally so true-

  • @jennyfernandez3479
    @jennyfernandez3479 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I felt every word... because...I can relate. Thank you for sharing. Excellent job 👍

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you for checking it out!

  • @heshithsachintha6032
    @heshithsachintha6032 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    It's time to destroy our toxic relationship. Good luck.

    • @natherahkarim7146
      @natherahkarim7146 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Awak jgn buang kwn .klau awk buang diorg seperti awak buang sy sekali.sy pun ada kwn.sy cal diorg sy ceritakan masalah sy dgn diorang dia org sama jawapan mcm kwn awak tapi sy tak buang diorang .sy cuba fahamkan diorg dgn keadaan diri sy walaupun diorg takde disebelah sy .awak sy sorg diri tengah lalui pelbagai masalah tapi awak lain. Awak ada kwn kwn ,ada emak ,ada family .tempat utk curahkan masalah awak. Tak sama dgn sy.klau awak sendirri mcm ni mcm mana kongsi masalah sy dgn awak..jgn buat kepusan ikut perasaan.klau sy buat mcm awak ikut perasaan apa akan jadi.dlm satu familydua bincang buat satu keputusan .baru hidup akan tenang.kalau isteri buat keputusan lain dan suami buat keputusan lain hidupnya takkan tenang .

  • @melissahodges3776
    @melissahodges3776 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Amen 🙏 thank you Jesus for saving me

  • @argeliahernandez7443
    @argeliahernandez7443 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    i am a happy person in the outside but the real me in the inside is haunting me, making me cry for no reason, i am a sad deppressing person inside me but nobody knows that,i had these feelings for a long while, sometimes i wonder does anybody care about me, does anybody love me, does anybody care for me, does anybody know i exist, i dont think anybody will notice me even if i die, so whats the point of me being here just for people will yell at me or use me or make me suffer with pain, i dont think so but i do know that im here for a reason but i dont know what that reason is yet, maybe love? i never felt love, maybe support?i never felt supported, maybe cared for?i never saw someone care for me,im still wondering if i should live or not but i deside to live because even though life could be rough sometimes it still doesnt matter because that could change

  • @fatimatuzzahrasayyed71
    @fatimatuzzahrasayyed71 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Oh I felt this before, now I realized that I hurt myself more when everything is self centered around me. It's "me" that causes pain, try losing it once, and everything sets in nice..

  • @MichelleTorez
    @MichelleTorez 6 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Best one yet! Favourite! Will review this

  • @lozfaith6057
    @lozfaith6057 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Tim is it you ?? believe there is something waiting for you after a lot of patience that you live, which will make you stunned until you forget the pain

  • @beverlykovach8098
    @beverlykovach8098 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    SORRY YOU CUT ME THREE TIMES IN ONE DAY, BUT YES IM TA FOOL BECAUSE I STILL LOVE YOU! I STILL NEED YOU!1IM HERE

  • @queenbae5540
    @queenbae5540 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Nice away.......tq for sharing your broker vedio..,i love you... I'll always be there for you

  • @millanieke5340
    @millanieke5340 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Daaamn😭😭😭

  • @littlelovely7569
    @littlelovely7569 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This just reminded me on how broken I was when my best friend left me she really made my life happier until the the day she told me she wanted to end the friends ship I still feel the pain cause I couldn't just throw away our memories

  • @m.kirthikakirthi5468
    @m.kirthikakirthi5468 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Why I am crying????

  • @josephine7021
    @josephine7021 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I found this poem months ago and Im back again lol, definitely my favorite of yours

  • @graceteyi4871
    @graceteyi4871 5 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    I really hurt when there broke your heart because I have experience at

  • @samanthanicole1452
    @samanthanicole1452 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You're so very nice, cool, and sophisticated ..the every word that you delivered was sink in my heart...you makes me inspire and you show the importance of every little things...I loved the way you are

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      samantha nicole Thank you so much for the kind words 😊 they mean a lot. I enjoy writing so I hope to keep sharing more!

  • @jackieaayala01
    @jackieaayala01 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I lost 6 best friends this year😔

  • @MoodyGuitarists69
    @MoodyGuitarists69 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    whyyy your words is the same like what i feel right now😭

  • @Salma-dw9vo
    @Salma-dw9vo 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I understand

  • @barnabasodentse5853
    @barnabasodentse5853 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I really love your diction
    Very awesome
    Keep it up.

  • @sarahvickysarahvicky3284
    @sarahvickysarahvicky3284 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I know you hate me. U can talk to other girls send them birthday wishes but me you left you make me stranger. You r now in higher place. I'm low. I'm not bothered if you r proud with me. Don't talk about my attitude. Your friends smile at me not l go smiling at them.

  • @julioaranton461
    @julioaranton461 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    "You couldn't be farther from The Truth" & hope in time thru Deep Meditation you'll understand for there are truly no winners; be it Destiny or "something else" we "are both guilty" because we spent more time apart than together "over a long time of distant engagement" meaning there are things you never knew about me as I of you & "time stepped in & took its toll & looking back we both tried in our own way to "catch up on our own way" but unexpected circumstances i.e. life stopped & as individuals we reacted as individuals & not as a couple &...I tried my best as an imperfect/basic good person to express myself & things happened/found myself "emotionally depleted" @ the end w/o no "proper response" but silence so I'm walking away for self- evaluation & spiritual growth from there for when a relationship with "initial beautiful promise" fails there is no clear winner & both sides must "own up in truthful honesty after much needed private self-review". Peace be unto you Child of The Most High.

  • @mahdyhady8305
    @mahdyhady8305 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Hi .. i need some one help me for leran engilsh languig plees😓
    Hou can help me ? 🙇‍♂️

  • @PrityKumari-ee7rw
    @PrityKumari-ee7rw 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Wow , it's heart touching heart❤💕

  • @donnameads7184
    @donnameads7184 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Just tiered of being used.