gacha writing is executed horribly; what's wrong & how to fix it 🍵 EP1: Main Issues • Gacha Analysis
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 21 ต.ค. 2024
- part one, the introduction to a 5 part mini-series: the reasons that I think cause the bad writing we all see in gacha mini movies and series.
There won't be a set schedule yet for the next parts, I'll probably come up with one when the 2nd part comes up though. There will also be subtitles done to the best of my abilities~
Like the disclaimer said, I'm not a professional, I've only really used common knowledge and writing understanding to form this. I also don't mean any offense, like the title of this video lol
Also like I said in the outro, this was cut from a script that originally assumed this would be one whole video, so please excuse any awkward cuts in structure or references
So-I usually write all I have to say in my comments and I don't know what to put in descriptions so uhm-here are credits instead lol
Written, Edited, and Produced by: Ginger
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you know what went wrong in most stories in my *opinnion* is that they start the climax wayyy to early- and that might cause the beginning of the story not really written well and people wont easily understand the beginning- which in my opininon is actually very important to the storyline because there will be the basic knowledge of the whole mini movie in that section (ex. character names, important details, what cause the climax to happen, etc)
yeah, a story needs to have a HOOK but not too intense. the pacing should be like a rollercoaster, going up going down the up is increasing and the down don't let you down so that you can wait and not raise your expectation then THE climax is the greatest up and its super thrilling then theres the resolution/conclusion where everything is finished/solved and the intensity drops, or it just cuts off to be a cliffhanger but it has to be done well idk but i think maybe foreshadowing will help?
i would have ur climax finish.
i’m having that problem right now!! i am starting the climax to soon:(
@@cowabummerlol oh
@@cowabummerlolskill issue
A small rant on Characterization:
A gentle reminder to ADD CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT. THIS CAN MAKE OR BREAK A SERIES. 9/10 times, your characters need to change in some way throughout the story. Static characters are boring, like, REALLY boring. In fact, a LOT of series and MMs would be 5x better if a character had moments to reflect on themselves and change. It doesn't even have to be a good change. A character becoming less of a good person over a story is also a viable option, but P L E A S E give character development. Also, give characters a backstory. This can be an explanation on why certain characters have certain flaws and strengths. As well as that and I cannot stress this enough, GIVE CHARACTERS FLAWS. If a character is perfect (and this is an issue plaguing many stories) its a boring character. Flaws are what balance characters out, and make characters seem more human and relatable. Completely good or completely evil characters are boring. Flaws and traits can (and should) be slightly imbalanced, but you should try to give every character both positive or negative traits.
Rant over.
also, when making a backstory..please..don't make it
boring or the typical kind.
I use a flat character arc that is inspiring someone close to them, doesnt mean they are boring
@@dbsb-xj4ys my parents died when I was -2. My mom gave me magic necklace that made me powerful. Everyone bullies me, I got abused, I'm depursed.
Well normally to start a story you should make the character have a misbelief which means something that they believe about the world that isn’t true it’s a lie for example thinking they can’t trust anyone because their parents/parent abandoned them when they were younger or something
You should first come up with that misbelief while making a story then as they go through the story end up learning the “truth”
The misbelief is actually the opposite of the theme
Which is something you want to change in the world
So to put this in order
If you want to teach people to not judge others based on looks
You would make a story where the theme is to not judge people based on looks
So your mc’s misbelief would be that they always judge people based on looks without getting to know them
And as they get through the story they learn to stop doing that so they learn the “truth” of your story
I’m working on a story right now about change and how people can change to become better people and about perseverance and I’m using those techniques and I love it
@@BloomingRose438 wow that's so amazing!!! ☺️💞
sO TRUEEE!! the whole point about the execution and having a vague concept is really really true. although a lot of the concepts arent the most original,, (looking at you alphas) any good concept needs a good execution to get the point across well.
the age is also a really big factor too. i don't expect a 9 year old to write an amazing film, and it's easy to engage in the "mob mentality" of making those "boss is my ex husband" videos, but if we don't start to critique them (respectfully and in a way to help them improve) nothing will ever be done.
ALSO THANK YOU FOR THE MENTION THAT WAS SO NICE
Hi I’m a fan lol
Tbh abt the age thing
If they are familiar to gacha and take tips they might be able to make a good one
But I really hope not like the alpha- hated child
Or we can make the overused movies but with a plot twist
My problem with gacha stories is they always glarify and justify anything, like kidnapping, murdering and stuff, the story always doesn't make sense and never realistic, never found one that is actually 3 dimensional. The story always too good to be true, phony, falsely explaining sensitive topic or avoided it to probably avoid being cancelled. In my opinion, sometimes sensitive topics can be explained and make fun of because jokes can sometimes make the victim feel better, as long as it's not justifying it. And sometimes too obsessive with lgbtq character, that lgbtq ruined it's character. For example, Zander, started as a actual character, now turned into a gay stereotype. Creating an Lgbtq character isn't so hard, but Lgbtq character mostly existed for the ships. Every character mistakes can make a difference on the story, changes their life, that's what's makes the viewers continue watching. Makes sure to only not leave an emotion scar on the character because of their backstory, but also make sure they suffer in the present, give them challenge, give them difficult choices, not a crush or a hot boy, give them an impossible maze and make them finish it. Give your character a persona, a coward, a cool guy, a workaholic, socially awkward, and make sure they are actually like that, not just you describing it, action speaks louder than words, that's how people wouldn't see them as just a nice character, give them something they will be known for, for example, socially awkward character would have more stutter and stops and "ummm" in dialogue, and people don't get what they're saying and felt awkward socializing with them, they seem more odd when talking, often struggle with people, but don't always just include " Ugh! I'm so socially awkward", because if it's actually socially awkward, people would know it just by looking at the character's action, including too much is annoying. Give your character flaw and strength, every character somehow has flaw and strength, no such thing as perfect character, the Mary sue problem is coming from how the character was forcefully portrayed in a good and perfect light. And there's no wrong putting your main character in a bad light, doing horrible messed up stuff, don't try so hard to make your character look good, their bad light can sometime make character look real, because they can seem flawed, but still don't justify their actions, give them consequences. Growth or character development is important too, you don't need to fix the flaw, you just need the character trying to improve the flaw, make the character realize the wrong of their actions and make them try to improve their flaw, the flaw still there but it's improving, because it's not easy to fix the flaw you had. Spread the lesson you wanna spread to make it seem deep and meaningful, but don't spread them too open nor hidden, give some clue and let the viewers figure out. And it doesn't always has to be teenagers, it can be about a depressed single mom in her 40s having no custody, or a 7 yr old electing as president and he doesn't know anything. My tips on romance is don't make the protagonist love interest don't always has to be the flirty boy she met one time. It can be someone special to her. Optional, but try to set up some ex, she can learn from her past mistake and make better choices in her love life. It's important to know that the character trauma affect their decision, and their view of life. Make your character had different opinions on something, what they see life as. Humor are very important too, because humor can entertain viewers, let them enjoy the show, don't use overused humor, it's better to made one yourself, because it always came off as cringeworthy. With the voice acting, most voice actor voices came off as too fake and unrealistic, sound too anime, somehow always sound too cheerful and force, talk too slow probably because you tried too hard to include the detail of your voice, didn't have the vibe at all. And their voices never fit their character, I would recommend using different accents to fit the character other than British and American, they would maybe try southern american, African, New York accent and etcs. And also recommend they add more personality into a character, put more uniqueness into a character's voice instead of just the same voice but different pitch, not afraid to try. More importantly don't be overly biased on characters and neglected the character you don't like, do not always make fan service stuff instead of getting to the plot. For gacha voice acted series, please fix your audio of the dialogue of your character, don't ever make a pause after a character just finished their lines, make another character quickly replied, not wait for a sec then replied, and don't ever make it too quiet, because it can be awkward, if you want the characters to walk away as the ending scene at least make a conversation to break the awkwardness, I suggest edited the audio of a scene first then make the video. But if it supposed to be quiet, make the scene have a purpose for that, or else it's just awkward. And lastly, the twist, plot twist can impressed the viewers, and make your series unpredictable.
I've read allat and many points you made are really good! I personally take the voice acting since I've been learning to do that, thanks alot!
Ive noticed that the voice acted stories usually have a bit more variety and flavour besides the generic gacha stories. Sure those stories tend to be fantasy/supernatural yet they tend to have their own identidy in some way.
(Im considering watching those as a way to get back in the community besides the occasional Afton videos I watch and creating/gachafiying my ocs)
small rant, or you should say big rant:
CHARACTERS
The creators make one dimensional characters, which I mean their bland, and have no depth at all which can be boring with their predictable personality and actions. Nobody's creative at times. Its weird how anyone doesn't catch onto this, there's nothing fresh and new making the characters so bland and predictable, backstories are good too, development is great, but their impact shouldn't always be good, it could be bad, the character needs weaknesses and strengths to balance them, most glmm have characters the creators make which most likely has nothing to them since they don't explore new possibilities.
SETTINGS
The setting is important and vital, it should impact the character and actions, event, and more, the character should be able to use stuff in the setting to make the scene enganging and come to life. Really alot of school settings-😭
DESIGN
I actually thought that when gacha club released people would make their designs interesting , but no, the same clothing, they should add detail to the designs, maybe to somewhat explain their personality. example: a cheerful and loud person wears loud clothing, a smart guy wears sophisticated clothing.
PLOT
Plot is important, it helps make the events make sense, but people aren't creative, which leaves no creativity to flow, its mostly alphas, the plot should make sense and get them engaged.
example of a plot is a detective finding out who's behind a death. plot twists and turns can help it flow, but most glmms have random twists and turns making scenes that the viewer can't understand, either its quick or it comes in from nowhere.
The conclusion is that they need to execute the story correctly and get the point across. glmms need to step up their game.
ik im late but this is a problem to be talked about, You really covered it well.
Ty for the tips
I hate that all I can ever find is romances, so I am writing a story that is not at all based around romance. It’s about a 14 year old trans guy and his bestfriend. As he transitions and learns I want to teach the viewers as well. The main goal throughout the whole series is to come out to his Mum, which he will eventually do at the end. I want it to be a wholesome and educational series. As someone who wants to be a novelist I make sure to put as much research in as possible. So I hope it works out.
I hope that you go through with making this glmm! I would love to watch a glmm with such a orginal and deep idea like this ^^
Reminds me of dead end paranormal park!
Thats so cute! Also, yeah, I agree. My story is cyberpunk-action, nowhere near romance. It's about this girl who teams up with 6 other kids to stop ai robots from destroying their city. They have to fight the robots, get supplies to survive, work with their differences, and try not to get caught with their anti-robot plan. At the end the main character has to shut down the robots. I'm not gonna go too much into detail, so thats all i'm gonna say
i'm writing a script for a gcmm, it's a fantasy theme,
with the main characters as:
- angry boy
- sassy girl
- shy witch
- demon
and the usual antagonist:
- a beautiful maiden who is a snitch
- a 'best friend' of the antagonist
And a whole war against humans and magical folks of all kind!
I'm planning on finishing a good & logical series that has good humor & execution. You just helped me a lot & I hope many more too!
The school setting is not the problem, it’s that so many cliche Gacha trends and story’s take place at a school to the point where the setting has gotten dry to the core
eheh it's been a while-I'm back with an actually quality video-mini-series actually lol
I feel a bit relieved and refreshed to be putting something out that people probably originally subscribed for-which is gacha writing stuff lol (also the title only sounds pretentious to get attention I'm not actually-yknow what I mean lol)
This video has been in the works, written and recorded since February-not because I was working hard on it but because I'm lazy. At least I'm transparent about it :)))
But I'm thinking the rest of the parts will be out very soon, since I actually got people who would help me edit them (thank you to those who volunteered I love you all fhefugcwsd), which I'll be crediting as each video comes out. But for this one, I edited completely on my own :DDD (please excuse any glitches too fhewufwasd)
*5.12.22 The Philippines flag is the wrong side up, red being on the top side is actually done during war-we are not in war (yet) so please excuse the mistake 😭 (nationalism go brr, ty to the commenter who pointed it out)
I really hope you enjoyed the video and I'll see you luvs very soon~
Hello Ginger 🤠 if you do remember that's great but if you don't it's fine- lol but my main point is that, you're doing awesome!! This was such a high quality video! I loved it! Even if I'm not the community anymore 🤣 but honestly, beautiful characters awesome voice and wonderful video overall, also get ready for BUTTER SWEETY ITS GONNA WIPE OFF THE INDUSTRY-
@@khushibagga4688 your comment gives me a lot of motivation, thank you~💜✨
@@gingerbreadd_ You're welcome 🥺 and I guess you don't remember me lol 🥲 I'm that weird person on discord who talked to you and annoyed you all the time :')
9:08 so as somebody who is not 100% knowing who they are but for me personally a good gender neutral word for “girl” is sib short for sibling
For example “my sib” or “my sib form another crib” it’s kinda like sis or bro
That's really smart!
I have been so focused on school works and getting stressed that I completely forgot about my own channel, I forgot how fun and hard making videos are and when I finally remembered about it, I immediately wanted to make a mini-movie, But when I started making the script, It got a little- no... ALOT confusing to even read. So I tried searching up tuts and other stuff but nothing was helping until I saw this. I am very very thankful that you made this video because now I can actually work on my script without any hesitations or confusion. I also agree that some gacha mini-movies have been using a lot of common stories and I think we should all make our own original ideas but can just use the same idea of some other video and give credits to make our community not so copy-ish and a lot more fun.
now this is u n d e r r a t e d
also, if youre writing a character, all main ones have to overcome something. it can be good or bad like a character becoming more relieable and mature or another character actually realizing that their truly alone.
3:10 I'm glad someone can actually not put Chinese and actually call one of the languages.
As part of a Cantonese speaking family myself (yet my immediate family speak English and we communicate to each other that way - my parents both talk to each other in Cantonese when speaking to each other and not my sibling or I), I find it a bit strange why people just put Chinese / Chinese (simplified) / Chinese (Traditional) ~ These are writing used of course, seen a lot in Google Translate - which doesn't give exact correct translations as everyone knows but hey, why am I saying this. There is a difference but some may not see it? My siblings sees Cantonese when spoken, kind of sharp at the end of each word (I do not know how to describe it).
China and Taiwan I am pretty sure speak Manderin, but Hong Kong and all those other Chinese spoken languages (apart from Japanese of course, that only uses some / most of the characters) I think speak Cantonese; you are free to correct me if I am wrong.
I find it unreasonable as to why people just put Chinese. Anyone is free to rant on about why people just put Chinese instead of one of the languages in the replies of this comment, I am simply stating my opinion on the matter. This is a pretty long rant / comment, so I will leave it there.
Thanks for reading if you made it this far
i used 2 make gacha life videos (in like 2019), and im now starting to get interested in it once again. i have watched a looot of really good mini movies, but for every 1 witch academy theres like 80 "met you in the elevator," 150 "my boss is the alpha" and like 90 "the alpha and the nerds"
“that one guy” is a hybrid child hybrid princess... man the server was wrong
Lol
Yep
Dang thanks from all of us for this tutorial!
I feel that originality would stand out from the rest if trends didn't start popping out from out of the blue-
In fact, there are a ton of topics gacha stories can tell other than the usual Alpha!
Omg poffin- h i
I’m scripting and writing and making a gacha story ( the first story I have not,,,,improvised ) called witches calamity!! the plot : a nonhuman witch girl has to go to the human realm to retrieve an artifact ( an amulet ) that was stolen from her family years ago :3
I have a difficult choice to make, watching our girlie Luya or finish watching an episode from a TV show-
HMMMM
H M M M M M
I know I’m late for this but I agree with you
I wanna analyze and critique each mini-movie
And also rewrite them as well
I’ve seen people rewrite other things but not gacha mini movies
And, sadly, gacha movies with this type of writing are getting more popular than the ones that put effort
Amazing to see you back with an amazing video! Writing advice and story development is needed in the community, glad you spoke out about it
Every series will never be ‘perfect’ but there’s definitely ways to improve
Ok hear me out, I have no idea if this is a good idea so any feedback is very much appreciated but I might make a series which is voiced maybe, it would be a story of two neighbors who every night they read a little story together, so we have each episode with a different story they read, they would sit in a cozy den, reading a story and the last shot would be them closing the book
Pretty good but you need it to be interesting and have an outcome of their actions. (I'm guessing it's a romance?)
@@velzeq_8549 I'm not sure, I was thinking of more of a friendship, like in the rainbow magic books how the two main characters friendship is, like a next door neighbours who's rooms are next to each other and at night they talk to each other while sitting on their windows
@@crimsonteacakes3369 oh ok! Just make sure that there is a surprise to the story at the end
either this yes, more unique aspects to the set up, or characters we can come back for
best of luck ✨
wow i love this video! you just cited a lot of the points and talked about the problems that eventually made me lost interest in the community. i'm hoping that this will actually be able to reach an audience and encourage a new generation of gacha writers :)
also, welcome back, i missed gacha writing ginger for quite a while LOL
Thank you so much for making this! I've been wanting to make a series and have been having trouble with writing it. And this helped a lot! Thank you!
i'm in the dsmp fandom but i'd love to make an original gacha series cause i had a lot of ideas before i even started my channel- (unrelated but I binged watch some of your videos and you are underrated as heck :,)))
here's a backstory of my oc Crystal Serekina any tips are appreciated!
on 3/7 a young new fox was born with eyes Crystal clear the small fox was a ninetales but only had 1 tail currently due to the foxes Crystal clear eyes the fox was named Crystal Crystal was a happy fox her family was nice and she had a older sister named Quinn life was going great for the little fox but one day tragedy struck a attack on her village occurred which resulted in her ears being cut off by a attacker throughout her teenage years she was constantly bullied for not having fox ears and also for being a bookworm these remarks were a scar on Crystal's life however one day all changed a new girl enrolled in her high-school a ninetails aswell the girl was absolutely horrible to Crystal she constantly pushed,spread rumors about her,ruined Crystal's love life and overall terrible acts one day Crystal was done with this bullying and her inner fox took over and she went fox mode(this is a bad name) AKA Elentra hurting every person in her way after that was over she went to the principals office the principal told her that she has to get act back to her in 1 week or she'll be expelled but Crystal can't afford being expelled LITERALLY her family were starting to lose money and the only way they could bet back, was for Crystal to graduate and get a job so she must now get her act back together in just 1 week while controlling her inner fox demon
4:43
"WE DON'T CALL IT ORIGINAL"
yes I agree they're saying that that's they're original Story but nope it isn't the alpha thingy is too overrated too tho
As a creative writer, this genuinely helped, thanks!
This is going to be interesting to watch
I was planning on starting a new gacha series and plan it out today so this is very good to find a good information video
(Thank you for the Heart)
I’m great at coming up with ideas but terrible at pushing a real story. So I’ve been watching tips and tricks so I can try to push a story. I start by writing a small story on my laptop and shooting the details into the gacha life app.
This video was super helpful. Thank you so much!!
You're such a savior to my overall writing journey! Thank you so much!
I am so sorry that this doesn’t have as many views as it should This is soooo good like dang .Good work keep it up oh and I’ll definitely watch the entire series. :)
The one I’m working on is called “dead woman” the plot is basicly this
-a bratty influencer gets canceled
-she gets death threats but still has some fans so she moves to NYC
-she has to get a part time job and has to work to pay off dept to her collage
-✨death threats✨
-she gets assaulted in her own work poace and leaves very hurt
-idk the restttt
I agreed, when I upload my Gacha Club movies, I never add the word original in my video titles because I knew that the word itself is mostly overused.
Welp, gonna keep this in mind then. Amazing video as always, hope to see more ^^
Your voice is so calming and reassuring
💓💓💓
We gacha folks need some good writing.
My first video was a gacha mini series the title was original and the story plot but I deleted it cus I hated the plot and the character designs and the jokes were cringy Ù^Ú 😅
I’ve been working on the trailer of a series I’m about to make with many seasons named ‘ The reality beneath its lies ‘ so this helped a lot :D
Thank you for the tips, I can't wait for the next video
Okay I've got to rant about this one thing that has always annoyed me in GLMM/GCMMs, "Gacha logic". Gacha Logic is a pretty well known thing in the Gacha community where whenever a certain plot point, thing, or action in a GLMM/GCMM doesn't make sense the creator will make the excuse of Gacha Logic. I understand the community has a huge percentage of younger people who have little to no writing experience but please atleast try to have things make sense? And if a certain thing in your GCMM/GLMM has no justification, is it really that worth it to add it?
(OK, rant over)
I like gacha logic as a joke but yeah your very right
Like if it is used for comedy purposes then it's fine, but for anything else, gacha logic shouldn’t be used as an excuse for something that makes no sense
it feels that they have a few scenes that replayed in their head, but they dont know what to put in between those scenes
I keep watching this video over and over, so truth..
I just want someone to review this story and give me tips please
Teddy Bear
This is pretty good it has a lot of potential
owa owa new upload 👀
looking forward to the rest of the series
This Gachatuber saved my life as a plot writer
Okay I’m trying to learn how to use Gacha to its potential to hopefully be noticed by few and I’ve really taken and interest to mini movies. After reading the comments I want to make a summary of an idea. Instead of roasting me please give some tips to making it more interesting as I have never made a mini movie before,
Basically it’s called “just a side character” or something the title doesn’t really matter rn. The premise is basically 2 best friends which eventually drifted apart find eachother one day after one left on a journey to save their family (only to find out they were dead)
However it seems that the one who was left behind cannot remember ( this will be 1) the other no (this will be 2 )matter how hard 2 tries. It also seems 1 has found a new love interest because (further adding more depth) 1 was often outcasted and ignored, making 1 and 2’s relationship more special was then severed when 2 left causing 1 to go in a state of loneliness and vulnerability. That’s why this new love interest is so special to 1. For most of the movie 2 makes very desperate attempts to regain 1’s memory but each time 1 pushes him away as in 1’s view this is just some stalking weirdo. Eventually 1 gets with their new love interest leaving 2 heart broken. 2 then gives up on trying to make 1 remember and settles for a life of crime as now he has lost all will to lead a good life (think about it, 1 has no family or love and now crime is the only thing to give 1 a good thrill) one day while carrying on with 1’s normal business 1 ends up having to kill someone because they witnessed 1’s crime. Turns out that was 2, and feeling so much shame guilt and regret, 1 turns themself in and gets a Hefty sentence as people thought death was too good for 1. And since I like bad endings he lives with the fact that he killed his one and only love with his own hands and eventually passes away in his cell 😁
YOUR VOICE IS ADORABLEE 😭😭😭✨
I'm strugglin with writing I cant write natural dialogue for the life of me
How so?
When you’ve never written a script in your entire life: 👁👄👁
💧 💧
i was about to make a cool gcmm and i never finished it
because someone will make my movie a trend.
Probably not. No offense but you aren't that popular
I used to be in the community but I quit, mainly because of the weird side, I still like this vid, ya did good :)
TYSM! I'm gonna be using these tips/constructive criticism for a series on my Gacha Channel! :]
👏Underrated👏
Btw how do you do the teacup w/ suger cubes in the backround? It looks really cool!
thank youu ✨ and it's a kinemaster premium overlay 🍵
@@gingerbreadd_ Ty ✨
I have seen multiple gacha stories with the same idea of content and quality, at least others can go through their imagination and creativity to make stories.
okay here's my tips:
SHOW DON'T TELL. "Oh shes a tomboy and not like the other girls" SHOW US. "she plays sports and watches anime" THAT PROVES NOTHING. SHOW DONT TELL!
Add more depth to the character's personality and overall character. Their age, pronouns, species, backstory, and who they are as a person are all things to consider. of course, don't make your character all perfect and have no flaws, thats boring asf. let me give you an example of one of my characters:
Name: Erok
Age: 19
Pronouns: She/her
Species: Guardian angel
Personality: Cheerful, kind, loving, playful
Flaws: Clumsy, naive, constantly saying the dumbest shit, childish
(and i'm not adding her backstory because i'm lazy)
be open to criticism, there's a difference between hate and just constructive criticism. don't get mad when someone gives the slightest amount of critique.
And my final tip:
Subscribe to ginger breadd
thank you, your comments are very informative and thoughtful 🫶🫶
I agree with this thanks for the tips!
Eyy it’s nice seeing you back 😎
Why is this so true????
Finally some discusses this
Also we need gacha critiques lol
For story telling (not the quality)
So true! ❤🧡💛💚💙💜🤎🖤🤍
E y o you're finally done with it :')
Can we just take a moment how she made sure she lip-synced her character? You don't see many gachatubers do that these days.
IMA REMEMBER YOU FOREVER ILY SM
Tysm for this video A LOT OF PEOPLE NEED IT. Including me im making a gacha channel and i going to write my Glmm today C:
I’m writing a Gacha Horror story about McDonald’s Lmao I’m so weird 💀
At least it’s original (I think)
@@ccAfton815 I had to scrap the project coz my voice actors bailed
It was cringe anyway so I think I’m gonna redo it
Omg someone who actually calls Tagalog Tagalog instead of "Filipino"
How in orange trees does this video only have 788 likes?
This is amazing! I’m subscribing!
Hey so i have a question im working on the script of a series and well im sorta confused
do i take the script fast so that it ends faster and not too many eps are needed or do i take it at a slower/steady pace and try to get my point across?
well there are many factors to consider, but do note pacing of a story is pretty important to get right so viewers won't either feel bored with too slow or feel confused/not emotionally invested enough with too fast
it's completely fine if you want a shorter series if you can compress things, but it's also very risky to go too fast for the sake of that. It depends on what you prioritize, if you're making the series for fun then yeah you can speed it up, maybe by combining scenes and removing fillers-but if you prioritize your message you really gotta take it slower.
This is all pretty dependent on factors i don't know, but do note series in gacha have a high 'discontinued' rate haha, so consider your goal with your series and just make sure you're having fun. The pacing is def important to do it right, like if it's an action or fantasy adventure faster pace is better or if it's casual romance or slice of life a smoother pace is better, but genre doesn't matter as much as concept when it comes to pacing so think about your concept's needs when pacing
Anyways hope this helps, if you have another question you can ask if you want, and good luck ^^ ✨
@@gingerbreadd_ Tysm for taking the time and answering my question!!💖💫💫
Yo this is a great video, :)
I have a question,I want to start a series,do y'all know if a story that goes 'the death god gives their immortality away to love someone' is original? (I know that the romance part isn't,but the rest of it)
i mean ive like seen one or two tropes slightly similar to that but neevr with a death god, i think thats actually really interesting and quite unusual so go for it!
Anyone know the link to Love Language by Kinokawa? I've been looking but I can't find it...
Definitely not grammarly tho (/j)
:P
helpful video, thanks
Cough cough this smell makes me cough… could it be a underrated gacha tuber!?
I'm trying to write the script for a gcmm though༎ຶ‿༎ຶ
I agree all Gacha mcs are nice and sweet with some sass and they’re Mary Sues
5 dislike are the one who didn’t pay attention
This is completely irrelevant but are you filipino? I can tell by the accent 😭 (I don't mean this in a bad way btw your accent is amazing! I can just tell when someone is one of my own based on accent hehe)
yess im half filipino 🤩💞
I made tea for some reason
Wait….
THEY USE THEY/THEM???!!!!
I didn’t realise that :(
I am sorry :(
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ive never agreed with a video more
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Nice
is my gacha writing good-? *its in my channel*
The Philipino flag is upsidedown:D
how did i not notice omg 😭
@@gingerbreadd_ It's okay 🆗^^ I still love the video it helps me a lot cause I'm planning to become a gachatuber
No story is original
I love your content thank you so much -dream_charm