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Paragraph writing in English is easy. You need to know how to write a good topic sentence. It must be followed by some supporting ideas and a few details. Of course, a good paragraph also has a nice conclusion.
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That's the best video I've seen so far. You went straight to the point and even used examples for our best understanding. Thank you so much for your work, it was (is) extremely helpful 🤟🤟
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Good explanation! I like how the creator add the comparison between the good paragraph and the bad one. Also the color to mark which one is topic, supporting and detail is help me a lot to comprehend about how to write a good paragraph. Thank you for the explanation!
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Tell you,the comparison at the beginning helped a great deal..
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I have been suffering for two years to clear it. Everyone tells me that you have to right supporting ideas to clear statement but no one tells me how. I could not note down it .fortunatially, I watched this video,which made all doubts clear.now I can't forget it for good.it is most precious for me.
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I'm a seventh grader and it's seriously simple if you understand it with examples
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Paragraph is a composition of several sentences, which contain an idea or idea.
The way to write the correct paragraph is Determine the topic sentence, Specifying an explanatory sentence, Define developer sentences, Determine the conclusion sentence.
n May 1951, Jack Kerouac wrote his friend Neal Cassady to tell him about the road-trip novel he'd just finished. In the letter, Kerouac talked of how he had typed the entire manuscript between April 2 and April 22, on a single 120-foot roll of teletype paper, single-spaced, "just rolled it through typewriter and in fact no paragraphs . . . rolled it out on floor and it looks like a road."
Kerouac's famous scroll manuscript for On the Road.
Six years later, an edited, vastly shortened version of the manuscript (with the characters' real names changed to fictional ones) was published by Viking Penguin ("in mutilated form," Allen Ginsburg once said). In 2007, to mark the book's 50th anniversary, Viking Penguin published the original single-paragraph "scroll version" of On the Road, complete with creative spellings (and containing the sex scenes that had earlier been deemed too controversial), with original character names intact and no attempt to "correct" anything other than the most obvious typos. (The original scroll is today owned by sports magnate Jim Irsay, who paid $2.43 million for it in 2001.)
The 2007 scroll version is the edition I just finished reading, and it's the only edition of On the Road anyone should ever read, because the single-long-paragraph nature of the book and the use of real names for real people are crucial elements of the work, in my opinion.
Like Jack himself (both in the story and in the writing of the manuscript), I got off to a bad start with the book, reading the first 40 pages in one sitting, then making the mistake of letting it go cold for several days. In a book with no plot that's told completely experientially, that's printed as a single 300-page paragraph with no breaks, you have no structural reference points to hold onto, whether typographically or in the story line, which means that if you walk away from it, you forget where you were almost instantly. In my case, I found myself starting again at page one after the first false attempt. And I made damn sure to keep moving from that point on, stopping only to eat, bathe, attend to bodily needs, etc. before resuming the trip.
I got through the book with difficulty. Kerouac's language is suitably mellifluous and inventive, his reportage sincere and seemingly accurate. But the nonstop parade of nonsensical events, leavened by the tragicomic personal-life misadventures of the womanizing Neal Cassady, is ultimately tiresome. Happily, after 135 pages or so, the travelers arrive at the Burroughs ranch in Algiers, Louisiana, and the writing style pivots ever so slightly as Kerouac launches into a loving, carefully crafted portrait of the enigmatic Bill Burroughs. From there, it's back to a meandering series of road trips to New York and San Francisco (always by way of Denver), with various side trips thrown in.
The Great Depression had long since ended, of course (this was 1949), but you couldn't tell it from the indigence of the characters. Jack's monthly $18 checks from the Veterans' Administration seldom went far, what with Neal Cassady's constant need for booze, cigarettes, gasoline, weed, and bail money. What they couldn't afford to buy, they often stole. (In Cassady's case, that sometimes included cars.)
At one point in the story, Kerouac inexplicably comes into a sizable (for those days) sum of cash: $1,000. It's never explained that this was, in fact, the advance for Kerouac's first novel, The Town and The City. He uses it to move his mother from Long Island to Denver. The woman finds Denver not to her liking and moves back to New York. Money gone, Jack hits the road again.
The story accelerates and acquires an almost Hunter Thompson-like feel in Book Three (the "book" breakpoints are unceremoniously noted inline in the text, without indents or spacing) when Cassady and Kerouac agree to deliver a two-year-old Cadillac limousine from Denver to Chicago. They put over 1,000 miles on the car in 23 hours, breaking the speedometer cable after exceeding 110 mph. Along the way, they suffer various mishaps and end up turning the car over to the owner in ramshackle condition. Miraculously, the owner never sends the police after them.
Arguably the best storytelling comes in Book Four, when Cassady and Kerouac, having exhausted America's highway system, head to Mexico. The writing is vivid, piquant, engaging, endearing-unforgettable.
Of course, there is never any hint of a plot, dramatic structure, etc., and that's exactly the point of the book (and of life); the journey is itself the point. It's also why On the Road couldn't possibly find a major publisher (as it did in 1957) if it were written today. It doesn't check the checkboxes of agents' and publishers' "minimum requirements" for a novel. In fact, it quite deliberately gives the finger to all such requirements. Which is why On the Road stands virtually alone among bestselling novels of the past 70 years as being truly experimental yet also truly a quintessential piece of Americana and American literature. It would be fun to submit the book, in manuscript form (as a single paragraph) under a pseudonym, to agents and publishers, just to collect the rejection slips generated by the legions of interns and editorial assistants and self-appointed arbiters of the literary status quo who would never dare take a chance on anything as proto-gonzo as a plotless, one-paragraph, 125,000-word road diary centered around an itinerant womanizer/con-man and his urbane college-dropout buddy. Noo noo nooo, we shan't have any of this.
Today, Kerouac (if he were starting anew) would have to put out his own print-on-demand and e-book editions of his work and then go about the grim business of gaming the Amazon rating system, maintaining a blog (and Facebook page and Twitter account), and doing all the other must-do activities of writers who want to rise above the background noise of what today passes for literature, all without a hope of ever getting a review in The New York Times (much less the kind of review On the Road got from Gilbert Millstein in 1957).
We should all be glad that Kerouac and On the Road came along when they did, at a time when a quiet, humdrum, thoroughly racist, excruciatingly conformist America needed the kind of wake-up call Kerouac provided, and the kind a New York City publishing establishment was still able to give. Those days are over, of course. We're on a different kind of road now.
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Thank you for this summary🙏
Greetings from Indonesia, studying from home with this video today. Thanks for the lesson. It actually inspires me for a paragraph writing strategy: write the topic and supporting sentences first, then add the details afterwards. Usually, I just slap on the details right away while writing the paragraph.
Good thing this video is here, or else we would all fail our schoolwork for paragraphs...😂
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I love your explanation. Simple, immediately gets to the point and is understandable! Thank you.
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I like how you explain the material, the example included makes it easier to understand. Thank you!
I'm middle aged and just got back into school. Turns out I need a lot of help with my English writing structure, lol. This helped out a lot. Thank God for TH-cam. 😂
Thank you very much, you explain in a good, concise and understandable way. I immediately understood how to build a paragraph properly and correctly 😊
Hi I'm from grade 3 thx for teaching me I'm not doing test or exams but I gotta do my home work about paragraphs and this really does help if u listen to it carefully and watch carefully Thx again.
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I now understand better how to make a good paragraph. So far, I always feel that I am correct in writing a paragraph, even though there are still many shortcomings. Thank you for making me aware and thank you for the explanation, I really like hearing the explanation.
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A good explanation. It's a shame you missed an article out in the first example. She goes to office is incorrect.
thank you for the lesson. now I can write a good paragraphs because of your video. this is very helpful 😊
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Do you have a Playlist for one paragraph Essays like those
This video is great and helps make paragraphs easier. Thank you.
Practising writing good paragraphs makes one a better thinker. Good paragraphs force the writer to back up their points with facts. They force one to think about why the reader should believe their claim. How their point is valid, which improves the clarity of thoughts and make them better thinkers.
Well good thing that video is here so that's I get it to watch and remember how to begin or write a paragraph because I wasn't good at it.
Where to find the video on the conclusion?
Good explanation! Thanks for you, now i know that a good paragraph foccuses on a single topic or idea. It helps me to get better at writing.
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I just had this for homework - I hate my homework its soooo hard but this helped me a lot. JUST FROM SCHOOL YEAR 4!!!
I love your explanation. Good one there. Thank you!
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A pleasant explanation, as I answered what was asked on the video and increased my knowledge of making good and true paragraphs. Thanks for the explanation🙏🏻
I like the way the material is delivered and the material is very clear and can be understand easily. After watching this video, I understand how to make good and correct paragraphs. maybe this video can be a reference for me. Thanks you for explanation sir.
Very helpful videos to make good paragraphs, easy to understand with examples that add more understanding. Thank you!
This video is thousand times better than online classes
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Thank you for the explanation sir! It was a good and understandable explanation! Sometimes i was confused about paragraph but i hope this one can enlight me
The explanation is very helpful and also increase my knowledge. Easy to understand. Thank you very much.
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The explanation is very easy to understand. It's help me a lot to comprehend about how to a good paragraph. Thank you!
This is so impressive because sometimes i’m confused about the task from the lecture that given to me to make some good pharagraph, after watchinh this video i really understand about how to make a good paragraph. Thank you so much✨✨✨
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Thank you, very helpful! From Mexico.
Great video. Thank you. The best video i have found that clearly explains how to write a paragraph. Thank you again.
I like your channel because it is very usefull for me and your voice is really slowly and clearly. Thank you
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this is too much helpful for the begineers.They can undertand all the topic easily by watching the video.Finally thanks a lot for making such kind of videos
Very enjoyable to watch, great explanations too
the explanation is not too complicated, so it is easy to learn. straightforward and simple. Thank you very much!
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I have really clear my difficult part of writing a good English paragraph.
I got bad marks in checkpoint and now I have to study during summer break so I have an advise for you: study as much as you can or you will pay later. Sad😭
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Now it is very easy for me.
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One of the best tutorials on paragraph writing!!!
Tnx so much, If I didn't came a cross this video, I was probably gonna make an article
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this is the best video ever on how to write a good paragraph perfect to get me ready for my final exam
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The explanation is very interesting and easy to understand because there are examples of simple paragraphs so that it is easy for us to understand, plus the explanation given is very clear. Thank you Sir.
An extremely well presented and clearly spoken presentation. My students gained a lot of useful information, thank you
I would like to say thanks because i grasp enough knowledge about how can i write a hood paragraph
I think you must give time for the reader to read the sentences
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You can pause to read it , otherwise it will take more time and it is annoying to some viewers.
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pause the video common sense dude
Well maybe they should give a bit more time and also say to pause if they need more time
thank you sir for the knowledge you give to us, its easy to understand in a short explanation.
Very grateful for the explanation that is extraordinary. We have to pay close attention to those nice paragraphs that have the topic sentence, supprting sentences, adding detail. If you pay attention to these three ways the paragraph will be more perfect.
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Today....I'm able to write a good paragraph because of you....Thank you so much sir
This is an awesome lesson. You break it down to the ground. Thanks so much. My students àre bound to get the concept now!
A simple and smooth explanation takes the learner to a complete understanding.
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A helpful video. It improves our writing skill and it carries much information about paragraph writing.
This video is very useful. when you watch this video, you learn how to write a good paragraph. In the Paragraph, the first sentence is the topic sentence. After we write another sentence that is related to the first sentence. Thank you, Skool ...........From Nepal...Pokhara 3:45 min
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At least some one offer a good content about paragraph
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Gud afternoon sir, ur amazing person who made me clear my all doubts,which I was not able to understand difference between the supporting ideas so u made me clear it.i haven't seen such teach yet.also, you have greatest skills guide to students as well others.really ur one in a million.thku so much sir for clearing my doubts.
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This is great for my ESL student. Thanks so much.
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Thank you so much for your sharing, it is such a great explanation.
This video is very helpful, thank you for the explanation!
Thank you so much for this video. It is an excellent video on writing a good paragraph and now I want to go to Pokhara!
Very clear explanation, it is an easy way to understand. Thank you.
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Perfect video for my middle schoolers.
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Thank you for the explanation, the video is very good and helps to make good paragraphs
perfect video, thanks for the help , it is easy way to learn , i share it with my school students
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Thanks for the explanation. I couldn´t find the IV part of this video. Could you please tell me where is it or send me the link?