Part 2: th-cam.com/video/BzO0IIGnL8k/w-d-xo.html If you wanna support my channel, you can donate here: www.paypal.me/bangtanff It doesn't need to be a lot, 1$ is already a lot for me! Thank u guys for all the love and support💜 ⚠️SPOILER ALERT⚠️ I have seen many comments being confused about some stuff so here is a quick explanation on them: • JK married YN for business reasons, just for use, there is no specific reason behind it, its pure business matters • In order to completely take control over YN, they made her lose her memories of who she was before (there are many ways to do this, so a mafia organisation surely has its way for this) • Because YN doesnt know anything or anyone else besides Jungkook, she gets deeply attached to him (He has her completely in his power) • Because YN doesnt have any memories of who she is and doesnt have an identity anymore, she loses sight of her own reflection, there is a little piece of her mind that still hold those memories and her real self, which she sees as 'Sarah'. Thats why she sees her own face as Sarah. The moment sarah tell YN her real name, thats when she starts seeing her reflection since she gains a piece of her identity. The whole thing is more of a metaphor rather than being too literal. • The fact that she has no memories and identity and being thrown in a mansion, getting controlled by Jungkook, is what made her lose her sanity slowly. Thats how she created this imaginary Sarah character. Which is a part of herself, the little part that still is sane and normal. Thats why sarah keeps stopping her from loving jungkook. But a big part of her is already ill thats why sarah (her sanity) gets defeated. • At the end JK wants to kill YN bc she became too insane and he doesnt wanna deal with those problems • Questions about YN's past life, the reason why JK became a mafia remains unknown. Hope this cleared up most of the things! If there are more questions, let me know💜 Songs used: • Tommee profitt - You are so beautiful th-cam.com/video/JQ8zWIQFRWI/w-d-xo.html • Tommee profitt - Cant help falling in love [Dark version] th-cam.com/video/PDboeQfAsww/w-d-xo.html Do u want me to write you a personal FF, with any kind of story and character you want? Or do you want me to write a bonus part on any FF that's on my channel? Then contact me on fiverr: www.fiverr.com/s2/79fe733bf8 Intro music: The uninvited soundtrack th-cam.com/video/JhpMM24IdTg/w-d-xo.html Follow me on insta: instagram.com/btsjams16/ Follow me on tiktok: tiktok.com/@btsevenarmy
Authornim please make a part 2😭 your ff are just an amazing piece of artwork please authornim. This just my opinion please don’t stress yourself out authornim 💜 thank you for making this amazing ff💜💜
This ff is amazing. I love how you showed the real side of mafias and didnt make like every other mafia ff where jungkook has a soft side for u and becomes so cute and cuddly after he meets you. I like how you showed that mafias are actually cruel and the real side of mafias. And i really loved how you made sarah as y/n's sanity. Over all this ff is just *chefs kiss*
This is a masterpiece the way you portrayed y/n who has lost her very own self and her sanity is leaving a big impact on us. The character SARAH was such a beautiful piece of art. This was really a piece of art here I say. I wish you'll consider our wishes to work on the bonus or the pt2 of it.
I thought I was the only one lmaooo last time I saw a ff I thought it was gonna have a happy ending but it didn't and I cried a lot , when I cry I won't shut up that's why I started reading the comments first
No one is talking about the background music it's making this ff more real.I really like the background music. And I need to say that it is a masterpiece. I really appreciate this ff maker.
Y/n is the sweetest soul i have ever seen "After all the pain you gave me, i still protect you with all my heart" That had me in tears If ever you have time can you make a bonus part of how jungkook is now? Is he missing her or smth But other than that its a masterpiece ❤️
This oneshot ended leaving thousands of questions in my mind..... What's behind his evil smile What's behind his monster side What's behind his weak smile that he gave her at last And what's her past and why He behaves like that....🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧 Pls bonus auther !!! I love youuuu
I didn't even finish it. This is literally the best fanfiction I have ever read on TH-cam. I was so surprised when we found out that Sarah was y/n's sanity, that she was a hallucination. Y/n is so sweet too. Really, this deserves an award or at least more recognition!
I haven't even read half of this ff but I could it's going to be a blast, the visuality, the sounds, you made the ff looked and felt so darn real, you are a one of a kind author and I hope you make more amazing ff's
This deserves best oneshot of the yesr award. Like damn that story line,all those pictutres and music wow i think you are the only author i have ever seen with such a unique concept of oneshot and i am glad that I found this masterpiece.💜
Girl... Why your ff feels so real, all the music choice you made and all the editing... You got some really brilliant creative skills I must say. The way you portrayed everything in this ff I felt like I was watching a live drama written by some author of Elizabethan era... Girl this is a masterpiece 💕💕❤️❤️
@@justinseagullfics4186 It was nice but u have to work on your sentence construction and placement of words on correct places..some of ur words were not in the correct place which made it meaningless..but except this ur story was good..Keep it up 👍🏻.. Edit:This is my personal opinion..I don't intend to insult anyone.. ☺️
I think this just became my most favorite ff I’ve ever read. The way you wrote it was so mature and well thought. It was so interesting to read. I honestly have no words to describe the way I feel about this it’s just so good. I look forward to your other works. Please keep doing what you’re doing because you’re amazing at doing it 💜💜
The lines in the start made it look like a legit thriller drama. This is so good , it has no flaws, I hope this becomes into a real drama or a flim with real people
This is the freaking 3rd time im watching this masterpiece that Im obsessed of and never get rid of... Please sis make these kind of ff's again they deserve everything u r the best writer ever❤️
This had it all - some K-Drama 'pull in closer' vibes, a great plot twist and perfect attention to details in the edit. You're the best FF author out there. You nice, keep going 💜
The part where sarah died, the inside of me died, it truly felt like i was seeing myself, the real myself, cus this is how i have been for all my life, i dont think i can kill a part of me, in the same time i cant live without it to This really is a masterpiece Can i get a shoutout??
I've had unstable emotions while reading this great masterpiece. Y/n in this oneshot is the purest, sweetest, and loveliest at all. Can we have a bonus part? 🤗💜
This might be one of the best ffs I've ever read???? I've been reading since 2018 and this...it's a MASTERPIECE like everything! The story,the music,the writing style,the videos even..EVERYTHING IS A MASTERPIECE PERIODT
I feel insane watching this. Btw, good job author!!! Your story, background, and backsong are amazing!!! Could you make part 2, please, when Y/N start move on and jungkook miss her 😊💜 thank you ✨✨
Dawg this writer deserves an award.. I'm completely blown away. The music in the background. The pictures to bring everything together. The plot twist. Everything just came together 😭😭
Ok ... I have never commented on anything before..but I must say that it is a masterpiece The writing ... the lines ...the story everything was perfect It was not a typical ff where the mafia had a soft side He just showed his love by letting her go I literally wish u goooddd life
Wow. This is a perfect art piece. I'm blown away by the storyline. This ff is so intense that I could actually feel the emotions, the craze, the love of yn towards jungkook.Thanks for an amazing MASTERPIECE.💜💜💜💜😍
Worth seeing it!!!... But i believe that "don't be crazy over someone who will leads you towards your destruction.... it's better to kill that love there it self rather to be destroyed"..... I want everyone's opinion over this....
This is called Stockholm Syndrome! It is a condition in which hostages develop a psychological bond with their captors during captivity.[1] Emotional bonds may be formed between captors and captives, during intimate time together, but these are generally considered irrational in light of the danger or risk endured by the victims. This term was first used by the media in 1973 when four hostages were taken during a bank robbery in Stockholm, Sweden. The hostages defended their captors after being released and would not agree to testify in court against them. Stockholm syndrome is paradoxical because the sympathetic sentiments that captives feel towards their captors are the opposite of the fear and disdain which an onlooker might feel towards the captors. There are four key components that characterize Stockholm syndrome: A hostage's development of positive feelings towards the captor No previous relationship between hostage and captor A refusal by hostages to cooperate with police forces and other government authorities A hostage's belief in the humanity of the captor, ceasing to perceive them as a threat, when the victim holds the same values as the aggressor. It has also come to describe the reactions of some abuse victims beyond the context of kidnappings or hostage-taking. Actions and attitudes similar to those suffering from Stockholm syndrome have also been found in victims of sexual abuse, human trafficking, terror, and political and religious oppression.
Man!!!! I don't remember when I read this fan fic, but after so many months I've been trying to find it like crazy, I still remember that at that time when I read this ff the part 2 wasn't released, I was so eagerly waiting for it, But poor me my account got deleted and after months I even forgot the title, but now when I was re-watching your series- one night stand with a wanted criminal, I went through this channel and again found this fan fic! ily
This is the best oneshot ever, it makes me feel like I was watching a movie, it was so real, I went through this story so deeply. Hats off to u author nim
Believe me when I say, beautiful. The emotion feels so surreal. The writing has so much significant description, you are a talented young soul I tell you. Keep it up!
Oh my god!!! What a masterpiece....It gives me goosebumps..I freaking love it..I really can feel the whole story..it was beyond the world.. Your storyline is beyond anything else..it gives me shivers...pls make bonus part of it
This is THE BEST ff i've EVER read. The masterpiece that you've created is absolutely beautiful. I could literally feel every emotion that y/n felt and i was shocked by how amazing it all was. I'm speechless...
I loved this FF so much! Its very intens and shows a different side to what Mafias are like. I think you did a very good jobb with Jungkooks character as well, its very cold, mean and his taking advantge of her.
This FF was just a masterpiece..It is done so nicely..and author-nim gave a 3D look and amazing background sounds to it which increased the feeling of reading..It's just beyond imagination..U should become a professional FF writer..u r amazing.. don't let ur talent go waste! .. Edit:Is the second part out?? Edit 2:I watched the second and third part too 😀and it's just awsm..🌚👌🏻
This story is soo good that i am crying hardly and i can feel every pain as if it was really happening and the background music, the images and the story lines makes everything so real. This is the perfect story so far i have read. Thank you so much Authornim for making such a good artwork.
Sisss.... You dont know how much i searched for this ff-... This was the first ff i read- I forgot to save this- These past 7 months i was searching for this ff- Finallyyy i got it-
This is the first video I saw . From your edits . I really loved it . I am waiting for second part . I really got a goosebumps by ff. Hope you public second part of ff soon.
Please never delete this ff...this is insane and it makes me insane ...I'm insanely in love with it ...my life kinda relate to this!! This can save someones life😭✨
l just finished reading this masterpiece.no actually watching this great film.....whenever l read ff's l feel something badly . . . . . . . that, these stories can be a true story of someone's life in the world.l always wanted happy endings in ff's..But one-day l realized that every story doesn't have a happy ending as it's the reality. So now l read these and just think abt life and all ............
This is literally a MASTERPIECE!!! What if get to know about his terrible past that made him a heartless mafia??? I strongly believe that , sometime, he was a innocent child with a soft heart... he needs someone to heal his wounds, as y/n does, and slowly to become sane capable of love in a healthy way:)))) just my opinion,anyway, i hope you don t overwork yourself to finish this too fast, don t forget , health must be a priority!😘😘😘😍
-This was the best ff ive watched.❤️😭 lets appriciate how long the video was and how much work she/he did in this video! thank you for this. 💜 Saranghae~ ❤️ please part2🥺
OKAY, NO ONE CAN DENY THE FACT THAT THIS IS A MASTERPIECE... BUT PLEASE WE NEED A BONUS PART AUTHOR NIM... WHERE Y/N WILL MEET JK AGAIN... PLEASE I'M REQUESTING YOU FOR A BONUS PART... OTHERWISE I WON'T DIE PEACEFULLY...
Omg!! This is so fucking good! look how much work u did here not even a single mistake ive seen in this video! Love it author nim. ❤️ Please do a part 2 💜
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It doesn't need to be a lot, 1$ is already a lot for me! Thank u guys for all the love and support💜
⚠️SPOILER ALERT⚠️
I have seen many comments being confused about some stuff so here is a quick explanation on them:
• JK married YN for business reasons, just for use, there is no specific reason behind it, its pure business matters
• In order to completely take control over YN, they made her lose her memories of who she was before (there are many ways to do this, so a mafia organisation surely has its way for this)
• Because YN doesnt know anything or anyone else besides Jungkook, she gets deeply attached to him (He has her completely in his power)
• Because YN doesnt have any memories of who she is and doesnt have an identity anymore, she loses sight of her own reflection, there is a little piece of her mind that still hold those memories and her real self, which she sees as 'Sarah'. Thats why she sees her own face as Sarah. The moment sarah tell YN her real name, thats when she starts seeing her reflection since she gains a piece of her identity. The whole thing is more of a metaphor rather than being too literal.
• The fact that she has no memories and identity and being thrown in a mansion, getting controlled by Jungkook, is what made her lose her sanity slowly. Thats how she created this imaginary Sarah character. Which is a part of herself, the little part that still is sane and normal. Thats why sarah keeps stopping her from loving jungkook. But a big part of her is already ill thats why sarah (her sanity) gets defeated.
• At the end JK wants to kill YN bc she became too insane and he doesnt wanna deal with those problems
• Questions about YN's past life, the reason why JK became a mafia remains unknown.
Hope this cleared up most of the things! If there are more questions, let me know💜
Songs used:
• Tommee profitt - You are so beautiful th-cam.com/video/JQ8zWIQFRWI/w-d-xo.html
• Tommee profitt - Cant help falling in love [Dark version] th-cam.com/video/PDboeQfAsww/w-d-xo.html
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The uninvited soundtrack th-cam.com/video/JhpMM24IdTg/w-d-xo.html
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Authornim please make a part 2😭 your ff are just an amazing piece of artwork please authornim. This just my opinion please don’t stress yourself out authornim 💜 thank you for making this amazing ff💜💜
Please make part 2
At least a bonus plssssss just don't overwork yourself to much ilysm
Please can you do a bonus part?? Please!!!💕💕
Please make a part 2
This ff is amazing. I love how you showed the real side of mafias and didnt make like every other mafia ff where jungkook has a soft side for u and becomes so cute and cuddly after he meets you. I like how you showed that mafias are actually cruel and the real side of mafias. And i really loved how you made sarah as y/n's sanity. Over all this ff is just *chefs kiss*
exactly!!!!
Yesssssss👍👍👍👍
Yes!!!😊
@Shahmeen Shahid wait what?? Im complimenting the video what do u mean why did u watch the video?
@Shahmeen Shahid its night time for me but ok lol
I haven't seen something so perfect and intense in my life.
*pure masterpiece.*
Girl but this needs part 2 where they see eachotjer THIS WAS PERFECT
hmm
Same here.....we need part 2
Yeah i agree with u
Yesss !!! Totally agreeing with that .....pls make a bonus part.....apart from that ITS AMAJIN 😍😍😍
yea
All the drama happening and all the security guards be standing there like: 👁👄👁
😹😹😹😹😹
😂😂😂
Guard would be like
Guard 1 = should we go now ?
Guard 2= No let just see the drama
Some more guard
Other Guards = I am so f done l🤦♂️
@@BangtanFF unnie when will the next part come? Btw im your new subscriber 😃💜
they be like : i did nothing to dieEE!! 🤣🤣
This is a masterpiece the way you portrayed y/n who has lost her very own self and her sanity is leaving a big impact on us. The character SARAH was such a beautiful piece of art. This was really a piece of art here I say. I wish you'll consider our wishes to work on the bonus or the pt2 of it.
yes please give us part2
I couldn't have explained it any better 😌💜
There's only one word to say "MASTERPIECE."
I DON'T THINK I'LL BE OKAY WITHOUT A BONUS PART 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Same 😭😭😭
DAWG SAMW IM FUCKIN CRYING THO LIKE SHIT GOOD AND IT WAS SOMEHOW RELATABLE-
Yes definitely we need bonus part plzzzz 😇😇😇😇😇
Even me😭😭
same here
This ff made me cry, it's so emotional. This told me a fact that "Love is is blind" love is like a venom
Am I the only one who has a habit to read the comments first before reading the story?to know if its a happy ending or not
Oh ma gawd same ...I just do this for spoilers 😉😁
Same. Sad stories traumatizes me lol
I do the same don't worry you never walk alone😉😂
I thought I was the only one lmaooo last time I saw a ff I thought it was gonna have a happy ending but it didn't and I cried a lot , when I cry I won't shut up that's why I started reading the comments first
Point that it has no ending 😏😂
No one is talking about the background music it's making this ff more real.I really like the background music. And I need to say that it is a masterpiece. I really appreciate this ff maker.
Y/n is the sweetest soul i have ever seen
"After all the pain you gave me, i still protect you with all my heart"
That had me in tears
If ever you have time can you make a bonus part of how jungkook is now? Is he missing her or smth
But other than that its a masterpiece ❤️
Yess unnie please.
Yes she is right
I cried after this ff we surely need pt 2 and then make jk desire her plz 💜💜💜💜💜
I AM SERIOUSLY WONDERING THAT IF JUNGKOOK WATCHES IT WHAT WILL BE HIS REACTION 😳😮😶
Yaaa he will be 😂😂😂😂😂 like this emoji
I GUESS HE WOULD NOT BE ABLE TO SAY EVEN A WORD COZ OF SHOCK🤣🤭🤣
He is like ohh army do that with me 😂😂
same i was also wondering that what a coincidence
He will be *jungshook*
This oneshot ended leaving thousands of questions in my mind.....
What's behind his evil smile
What's behind his monster side
What's behind his weak smile that he gave her at last
And what's her past and why He behaves like that....🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧
Pls bonus auther !!! I love youuuu
@@justinseagullfics4186 keep it up😊
Hmm me too🙂
hey i read your stories as well. i love your writing
I didn't even finish it. This is literally the best fanfiction I have ever read on TH-cam. I was so surprised when we found out that Sarah was y/n's sanity, that she was a hallucination. Y/n is so sweet too. Really, this deserves an award or at least more recognition!
CAN U ALL STOP YOUSELF FROM COMPLEMENTING THIS MASTERPIECE . I CHALLANGE U 😎😎 You will definitely fail tough.
no one will cuz all r on your side
@@cutielilboi860 😎😎😏😏😁😁
I haven't even read half of this ff but I could it's going to be a blast, the visuality, the sounds, you made the ff looked and felt so darn real, you are a one of a kind author and I hope you make more amazing ff's
Wtf this is art!! Put this in a museum I’m crying😭
So Sarah was supposed to represent y/n herself … what a masterpiece this fan fiction was .
Unnie I m not the only one who is crying. IT WAS JUST AMAJIN! LUV U UNNIE!
yes it really was
deabak!! ❤️❤️❤️
This deserves best oneshot of the yesr award. Like damn that story line,all those pictutres and music wow i think you are the only author i have ever seen with such a unique concept of oneshot and i am glad that I found this masterpiece.💜
i don't know why but it gave me " i'll love you forever Sid" feeling
Girl... Why your ff feels so real, all the music choice you made and all the editing... You got some really brilliant creative skills I must say. The way you portrayed everything in this ff I felt like I was watching a live drama written by some author of Elizabethan era... Girl this is a masterpiece 💕💕❤️❤️
Make a bunos part plsss just let jungkook know that Y/n is fine even y/n miss him😁🤥
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@@justinseagullfics4186 It was nice but u have to work on your sentence construction and placement of words on correct places..some of ur words were not in the correct place which made it meaningless..but except this ur story was good..Keep it up 👍🏻..
Edit:This is my personal opinion..I don't intend to insult anyone.. ☺️
I will try to correct my mistakes
Thanqq for ur advice💜💜
@@justinseagullfics4186 ☺️yes 👍🏻
I think this just became my most favorite ff I’ve ever read. The way you wrote it was so mature and well thought. It was so interesting to read. I honestly have no words to describe the way I feel about this it’s just so good. I look forward to your other works. Please keep doing what you’re doing because you’re amazing at doing it 💜💜
this was such a masterpiece,it was like a whole movie.ur editing skills are way too good.this itterally deserves a pt2.luv ur work
The lines in the start made it look like a legit thriller drama. This is so good , it has no flaws, I hope this becomes into a real drama or a flim with real people
This is the freaking 3rd time im watching this masterpiece that Im obsessed of and never get rid of... Please sis make these kind of ff's again they deserve everything u r the best writer ever❤️
This had it all - some K-Drama 'pull in closer' vibes, a great plot twist and perfect attention to details in the edit. You're the best FF author out there. You nice, keep going 💜
This is a freaking masterpiece. I haven't ever read something like this. This is so cool
The part where sarah died, the inside of me died, it truly felt like i was seeing myself, the real myself, cus this is how i have been for all my life, i dont think i can kill a part of me, in the same time i cant live without it to
This really is a masterpiece
Can i get a shoutout??
I've had unstable emotions while reading this great masterpiece. Y/n in this oneshot is the purest, sweetest, and loveliest at all. Can we have a bonus part? 🤗💜
How is she pure and sweet
I liked each and every point of the story especially that concept of reflection of Y/N as Shara.
You r excellent in writing. Keep it up 👍👍👍
This might be one of the best ffs I've ever read????
I've been reading since 2018 and this...it's a MASTERPIECE like everything!
The story,the music,the writing style,the videos even..EVERYTHING IS A MASTERPIECE PERIODT
I feel insane watching this.
Btw, good job author!!! Your story, background, and backsong are amazing!!! Could you make part 2, please, when Y/N start move on and jungkook miss her 😊💜 thank you ✨✨
I’m screaming rn you are the best person at these you made everything realistic and some plot twist I wasn’t expecting I LOVE THISSS
may i ask, how do u get those moving backgrounds? ive always been so curious ever since i saw ur videos!
I get them from YT when i type in "ambience" 💜
@@BangtanFF ohhh okie THANK U SM FOR ANSWERINGGG
@@mozzarellacheeze SIS THANK U FOR ASKING!
@@BangtanFF AND A/N THANK U FOR TELLING!!
@@disgustaeingsheet6166 LMFAO NO PROBLEM BOO
This is the most matured ff so far. Author-nim this is too good😭😭😭😭
We need part 2 girl
This is a masterpiece
Dawg this writer deserves an award.. I'm completely blown away. The music in the background. The pictures to bring everything together. The plot twist. Everything just came together 😭😭
We have been waiting for this
This was so beautiful, that it brought tears to my eyes..
We need to talk about her skills.
Ok ... I have never commented on anything before..but I must say that it is a masterpiece
The writing ... the lines ...the story everything was perfect
It was not a typical ff where the mafia had a soft side
He just showed his love by letting her go
I literally wish u goooddd life
I am here 😭❤️ I know this is gonna be a masterpiece ❤️😭
Wow. This is a perfect art piece. I'm blown away by the storyline. This ff is so intense that I could actually feel the emotions, the craze, the love of yn towards jungkook.Thanks for an amazing MASTERPIECE.💜💜💜💜😍
Worth seeing it!!!... But i believe that "don't be crazy over someone who will leads you towards your destruction.... it's better to kill that love there it self rather to be destroyed".....
I want everyone's opinion over this....
This is called Stockholm Syndrome! It is a condition in which hostages develop a psychological bond with their captors during captivity.[1] Emotional bonds may be formed between captors and captives, during intimate time together, but these are generally considered irrational in light of the danger or risk endured by the victims. This term was first used by the media in 1973 when four hostages were taken during a bank robbery in Stockholm, Sweden. The hostages defended their captors after being released and would not agree to testify in court against them. Stockholm syndrome is paradoxical because the sympathetic sentiments that captives feel towards their captors are the opposite of the fear and disdain which an onlooker might feel towards the captors.
There are four key components that characterize Stockholm syndrome: A hostage's development of positive feelings towards the captor
No previous relationship between hostage and captor
A refusal by hostages to cooperate with police forces and other government authorities
A hostage's belief in the humanity of the captor, ceasing to perceive them as a threat, when the victim holds the same values as the aggressor. It has also come to describe the reactions of some abuse victims beyond the context of kidnappings or hostage-taking. Actions and attitudes similar to those suffering from Stockholm syndrome have also been found in victims of sexual abuse, human trafficking, terror, and political and religious oppression.
Yes you are right !!!
@@Rakshavlog1988 👍😊
@@saniaafrin7518 ❤️❤️
The quality of this video is high as my standards 😍
This was a "MOVIE" i have never read a ff like this IT'S A MASTERPIECE
OH MY GAWWWWWD THIS IS A FUCKING MASTERPIECE THAT DESERVES AN AWARD
DEAR AUTHORITY I DEMAND ANOTHER PART PLEASEUUU
You made this like an actual movie it’s rlly good keep doing what ur doing
Your stories make me go through emotions I never knew I could feel honestly
Man!!!! I don't remember when I read this fan fic, but after so many months I've been trying to find it like crazy, I still remember that at that time when I read this ff the part 2 wasn't released, I was so eagerly waiting for it, But poor me my account got deleted and after months I even forgot the title, but now when I was re-watching your series- one night stand with a wanted criminal, I went through this channel and again found this fan fic! ily
This is really are MASTERPIECE but it need a bonus part and it was AMAJIN
I- girl you are so talented this is the first ever story which is 24/7 in my mind you killed it you should become a writer
Oh my ghosh. This is best ff and I want part 2 badly.
And this is how real mafias are🙂
What a great story 😭I just loved it
This is the best oneshot ever, it makes me feel like I was watching a movie, it was so real, I went through this story so deeply. Hats off to u author nim
AND I-
PLEASE I LOBH IT SO. MUCH
AND WAITING FOR NEXT PART 😭😭
I LOVE YOU!!
It's hard for me to compliment this masterpiece, Everytime you post something it's just amazing 💜💜💜💜
Believe me when I say, beautiful. The emotion feels so surreal. The writing has so much significant description, you are a talented young soul I tell you. Keep it up!
Oh my god!!!
What a masterpiece....It gives me goosebumps..I freaking love it..I really can feel the whole story..it was beyond the world.. Your storyline is beyond anything else..it gives me shivers...pls make bonus part of it
DUDEEEEEEEE WHY IS THIS THE BEST STORY FF IVE EVER WATCHED ITS LITERALLY STRAIGHT OUT OF A FANTASY BOOK!!!😭❤👍
The music'are just
✨ Perfect ✨
This is THE BEST ff i've EVER read. The masterpiece that you've created is absolutely beautiful. I could literally feel every emotion that y/n felt and i was shocked by how amazing it all was. I'm speechless...
*Masterpiece✨✨
It felt like a movie
The dialogues 🤩
The background music perfectly matches the scene 🤩
Lovely
Whoa Author ur so fast....this is gonna be awesome💜
Omo!! I never saw this type of ff in my life 😯i love this my imagination got real 💜
I really loved this , your background , music , texts everything is just great!!!! I'm ur new subscriber . Loved it 💜💜
I loved this FF so much! Its very intens and shows a different side to what Mafias are like. I think you did a very good jobb with Jungkooks character as well, its very cold, mean and his taking advantge of her.
This FF was just a masterpiece..It is done so nicely..and author-nim gave a 3D look and amazing background sounds to it which increased the feeling of reading..It's just beyond imagination..U should become a professional FF writer..u r amazing.. don't let ur talent go waste! ..
Edit:Is the second part out??
Edit 2:I watched the second and third part too 😀and it's just awsm..🌚👌🏻
One word to describe
AmaJIN
This story is soo good that i am crying hardly and i can feel every pain as if it was really happening and the background music, the images and the story lines makes everything so real. This is the perfect story so far i have read. Thank you so much Authornim for making such a good artwork.
Sisss.... You dont know how much i searched for this ff-...
This was the first ff i read-
I forgot to save this-
These past 7 months i was searching for this ff-
Finallyyy i got it-
Just came again to rewatch this masterpiece. I'm obsessed 💜
This is the first video I saw . From your edits . I really loved it . I am waiting for second part . I really got a goosebumps by ff. Hope you public second part of ff soon.
Aren't you tired of making masterpieces huh? 🥲
Please never delete this ff...this is insane and it makes me insane ...I'm insanely in love with it ...my life kinda relate to this!! This can save someones life😭✨
l just finished reading this masterpiece.no actually watching this great film.....whenever l read ff's l feel something badly
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that, these stories can be a true story of someone's life in the world.l always wanted happy endings in ff's..But one-day l realized that every story doesn't have a happy ending as it's the reality. So now l read these and just think abt life and all ............
So much English I can learn!
I LOVE THIS!
This is literally a MASTERPIECE!!! What if get to know about his terrible past that made him a heartless mafia??? I strongly believe that , sometime, he was a innocent child with a soft heart... he needs someone to heal his wounds, as y/n does, and slowly to become sane capable of love in a healthy way:)))) just my opinion,anyway, i hope you don t overwork yourself to finish this too fast, don t forget , health must be a priority!😘😘😘😍
Insane!! This FF is one of the best artworks I've found on TH-cam!!
-This was the best ff ive watched.❤️😭
lets appriciate how long the video was and how much work she/he did in this video! thank you for this. 💜
Saranghae~ ❤️ please part2🥺
Man the intro of the fan fiction only give me goosebumps
THIS WAS AMAZING, PERFECT!!!! WORDS CAN NOT DESCRIBE IT!!!!
author-nimmmmmmmmm this needs a pt.2 it's a masterpiece
This ff gives you 19s vibe😭🤚
WE NEED PART TWO!! JEEZ THIS IS PERFECT 🤩
I haven't read it yet but I know it's another masterpiece. ♥️♥️♥️♥️..well lubb you unnie ♥️😘😘
The story the dialogues the music everything is just perfect. Chef's kiss 💜
This was just PERFECT ✨
Omg the effect that you put in the starting was damn cool I m impressed by you editing just in the start
Owemji can we have next part? it’s heartbreaking yk
I have been watching ffs for 2 years and so far this is the most creative and realistic and sad and scary one I have ever watched you are AMZING
It's a masterpiece , amajin work ....Amajin mind and Everything was just so perfect .....
THIS
IS
PERFECT.
no words
just perfect
I mean the oneshot even has credits :D
thats so cool :D
OKAY, NO ONE CAN DENY THE FACT THAT THIS IS A MASTERPIECE... BUT PLEASE WE NEED A BONUS PART AUTHOR NIM... WHERE Y/N WILL MEET JK AGAIN... PLEASE I'M REQUESTING YOU FOR A BONUS PART... OTHERWISE I WON'T DIE PEACEFULLY...
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I am cryingggg 😭😭
this story is beautifully written... ahhhh we all want part 2 plssss
Omg!! This is so fucking good! look how much work u did here not even a single mistake ive seen in this video! Love it author nim. ❤️
Please do a part 2 💜