If you wanna support my channel, you can donate here: www.paypal.me/bangtanff It doesn't need to be a lot, even 1$ is already a lot for me! Thank u guys for all the love and support💜 PART 2 IS HERE!! I know it took me a whole month, but I was busy with my thesis and now I finally graduated college. Now I finally got the time to finish part 2 so here it is!! Please let me know what u think of this part, and yes there will be a part 3 on the way🌚 Part 1: th-cam.com/video/KU0pqfsVk_Q/w-d-xo.html Do u want me to write you a personal FF, with any kind of story and character you want? Or do you want me to write a bonus part on any FF that's on my channel? Then contact me on fiverr: www.fiverr.com/s2/79fe733bf8 Intro music: The uninvited soundtrack th-cam.com/video/JhpMM24IdTg/w-d-xo.html Song used: Lana del rey -Honeymoon th-cam.com/video/U4PYgn4rNJ4/w-d-xo.html Follow me on insta: instagram.com/btsjams16/ Follow me on tiktok: tiktok.com/@btsevenarmy
And my mind isnt creative enough to come up with names for them, like this one time it took me 2 days to name a character in my FF, so most of the other times im like nvm ill name that person "friend." 😂
I can feel 30% of what she is feel now ,it feel numb and i am not going to watch whole part i watched only half of it cause it is too strong for my brain to handle it Thank you so much 💜
@@ifyoujiminyoucantjimout6605 girl I totally feel you and I actually imagined myself being in this situation but I added my childhood memories too and even thinking about it makes me wanna scream and cry . I would go beautifully insane
I guess jungkook loved y/n but he makes her suffer so that he can come over the feeling of love for y/n Jungkook just dont wants to be weak after being in love
Yk the first time I read this comment I didn't know want did u mean but now Ik Jane btw I was so impatient for the third part that I watched this ff quiet sometimes and then also watched the previous 1 .. Btw author-nim u nice keep going... Luv yaa
The fact that the author is so good t writing, she’s literally making us feel what y/n feels, like we want y/n to get back to him but at the same time we want her to escape him... I’m feeling what she feels to the point where I feel like I can’t even finish the video cuz of how suffocating it is but at the same time it’s too good to stop reading.
I'm not saying that I hate jk's character but this story is soooo intense....I love it jungkook exactly knows how to make her crave for him..when to leave her when to come it's the best he has made her crazy in love
I can't believe why someone gives a dislike to this hella amazing ff Ooo waiiiiiiit I think they were so much into that they forget which one is a like button 😁
U know whats scarier...when a psycho is so potent n the victim is so weak that he has the power to make her like one of him. Another masterpiece 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 Thanku...🙏🏻
It is a dark ff. But I don't know what make me calm in this? Music, storyline or dialogue. It is so smoothing to watch it. I am gonna miss this after part 3 ❤️
I broke my sleep just to see this... I am yawning the shit out of hell😶 Edit : THIS WAS MASSIVE... i could feel myself going undel blanket in terror 🙄🙄....unnie you are really something... I can't find words
This story these edits give me goosebumps I really can't handle this much perfection in a ff I can feel all these happenings I really can never see something more better than 3 ffs 1. Mafia boss wants me 2. You're mine 3. This one which I just saw the one that is totally a dark themed ff and all three of them are jungkook ff only I fell in love with these three ffs sorry if sounded crazy
@@crystalreed7624 I have watched one series named exactly the same by "bts army forever" but it was just awful like it cant be compared to this masterpiece..and i think the authour had not been updating for one year now idk
I went in a trance while reading this.. The editing is perfect, the song selection gives the perfect vibes.. They way you formed the words and narration is perfect the way you made us feel How a Y/N would have felt if it would he real... It's just wow.. Congratulations.. It's a great work
Every emotion was so lively that I can't express The background music giving that perfect setting to feel more of it The editing The storyline The dialogues The emotions which were raw and realistic... That pain ..that love..that hate..that frustration....that agony..... everything...every feeling I felt along with her ...I cried so hard for her.. You(author) really have an amazing way of ..kinda intoxicating way of writing... I'm getting obsessed with you and obviously your writing skills. Can't wait for the next part And don't take tension of how it will go ...okay ...just write the way you thought to write Lots of love bae❤️✨
11:54 OMG!! That sentence gives me vibes from when Jungkook said _"You seem like you need a drink. Alcohol helps to ease the pain inside"_ in your fanfic called _'When you have a one night stand but he turns out to be a wanted criminal'_ . Leave me alone, please. I miss that ff so much!! 😂😭
god - so, do you need a good writing skills or a vocabulary? which one •BangtanFF• - YES (btw I really did enjoyed this part too) YOU DESERVE MORE SUBS tbh
Ig Y/N is just hallucinating everything....I mean....like how Jungkook would know where she was after 2 years? Also when all were arrested, how come he managed to escape.....ig jungkook is just a figure her mind created
Oh don't say that... I already imagined them staying happy in pt 3..i don't want it at all that jk's actually no one rather than an imaginary character created by yn. Oh please .. 😭
Meanwhile jungkook in real life: cries his lungs out when he does a little just a bit mistake in stage😑😂😂😂 How could you make him this heartless my baby just look at his bambi eyes🥺🥺🥺💜
Y/n: "I love him-" Me: No, get him out of your mind, get him out of your mind! *1 year later* everything seems normal and y/n seems like she has gotten over him Me: YES as you should Friend: so who is your past bad experience? Y/n: start getting flashbacks and feels feels herself still loving him Me: NOOO Y/n: *gets better again* Me: yes, find yourself a better guy Jungkook: *Appears* Me: OH COME ON!!! Also me: *wants Jungkook and Y/n to be with eachother again* 🥲
This is the MOST BEST FF THAT I HAVE EVER WATCHED!! EXCELLENT STORY!! EXCELLENT THUMBNAIL!! EXCELLENT BACKGROUND MUSIC!! EXCELLENT BACKGROUND!! EXCELLENT EVERYTHING!! I subscribed after 5 mins of watching the first part!! Thanks for making such an EXCELLENT FF!! I wish that there should have been a movie based on this same story.
Probably the only ff for which I didn't had to go back and rewatch the previous part even after it was posted a month apart cause the story was so vivid in my mind, one of my most favourite ff ever
I set out to learn English with your fanfics hehe. But with the little I know, I can say that your stories are art. You have a great imagination. I admire you a lot! 💖
Music, storyline , everything is mind blowing....I don't know how u came up with those lines.....it feels so real...I'm literally falling for every ff you make ...thank you for making realistic stories like this 💜💜💜💜💜
My major is psychology ! Literally im impressed from this ff not just because of jungkook or something else im impressed from dialogues , characters making , using and especially mental powers , in short great ff 🙌
People will call me mad but I still connect with Y/N and this is most connecting ff I ever read. The music 🎶 , the pictures with that smoke, the words she used in story all catches my heart and mind. I know y/n has a deadly life but idk why I still want to be at her place and live this life❤
I have read so many ffs but I just realised that this is one that I've been wanting the most... I admit that the other ff authors have a great idea and plot... But the way you put it in sentences is the most important thing... And I've been expecting it for 2years now... And I finally find it here... I love the background music , the way you carry on the story , the way you express the real identity of the characters , everything... It just makes readers to get into the story and feel the pain and cruelty in them like they are undergoing through this for real... And I can see that your are gonna have a great future ahead of you if you pursue to be an author... Btw I am a new subscriber to your channel... And I can't wait to read the 3rd part 🖤🖤🖤 Hwaiting 💜💜💜💜💜💜
I was feeling so intense feeling while reading and I just can't express that feeling .I don't know it was fear ,thrill,hate or something else .salute to your talent , creativity you made feel like I am myself in the FF . Eagerly waiting for part 3 😘😘😘
Jungkook doesn't deserves forgiveness and pity. He deserves to be in prison or die how can someone be this heartless? Y/n is too strong for this but kinda stupid for still loving him yet hating him. Can't wait for the part 3!!
A/N you are just perfect I can't find word to describe how much I Like the Series of yours.I Have read a lot of ff's but never had read a ff like this, It's just something in it.. A/N plz make a happy end,I want Jk and Y/N together at the end.Both of them had suffered a lot specially y/n,Plz make them together Waiting for next part, love you💜 And congratulations 🥳
SHIT!. . . . .I cried a pool of tears I'm sure my hamster can take a bath on it . . .🐹 I loved it so much even though I was a little dissapointed on the fact that the Jungkook before was just a hallucination ...😢 But it was still really unique and wonderful...!☺
She's not depressed it's likes she's dead Inside Blindly Inlove to Jungkook like her Obsession Jesus Christ She's not thinking about her self just Thinking About Jungkook oh god poor Yniee
Girl you are out of this world your talent should take you to another place your ff seriously is ✨ I watched a lot of ffs but yours is just talent . You truly deserve an award
You should start writing Moves and Dramas, love. You'll win ''...of the Year Award''. I cannot explain, how good this is. The words you use, the story, the EVERYTHING gives me goosebumps. The love, the craziness, the possesivness, the psychopatheticness, the way it is so lost. The obsession she has over him. It describes possesivness in the best way possible. I havn't Part 3 yet but it is my favourite fanfiction, already. I recommended this to my bestie and boyfriend a minute ago and I saw my bofriend literally, watching this while eating popcorn in his office.....
This felt so real like my heart literally hurt😭🥺 but that also says a lot when you can make you audience feel that you just know you are a good writer 😭
When the video ended suddenly I was snapped into real world woaaaaaahh author you really have the ability to make me dive into imaginary world so badly.. I felt insane for few seconds after coming out of this ff
I really loved how the way author just created it, i must say that the author is talented enough the way she puts everything which is just so perfect like have you seen the background!
author your ff's is on another level no one can make some ff's that looks so real this is so overwhelming every lines you make is so realistic damn you should get a best author writer award your ff's is definitely a masterpiece
I seriously have nothing to say im speechless the amount of talent you've got and the way you're dedicating yourself and time to do these such amazing ffs is just amazing you are truly the best author I've ever seen. Keep going girl you have true talent, i just really appreciate you're progress and i can truly see you're hardwork and you're researches, highhh fivee!! Can't wait for part 3 i hope it doesn't take a lot of time. And congratsss girll!! Fighting!!
Please part 3 I am dying for part 3 I never cried so much after seeing a movie or drama but I CRIED watching a fan fic I can’t believe myself and I badly want part 3 I just can’t wait 😭😭😭😭😭
![𝐊𝐢𝐬𝐬𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐝𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐫𝐨𝐮𝐬 𝐦𝐚𝐟𝐢𝐚 𝐡𝐮𝐬𝐛𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐧𝐨𝐭 𝐤𝐧𝐨𝐰𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐡𝐞'𝐬 𝐚𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐭𝐨 𝐞𝐧𝐝 𝐲𝐨𝐮 | Jungkook FF [OneShot 3/4]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/vOcV9GMtrXA/mqdefault.jpg)
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PART 2 IS HERE!! I know it took me a whole month, but I was busy with my thesis and now I finally graduated college. Now I finally got the time to finish part 2 so here it is!! Please let me know what u think of this part, and yes there will be a part 3 on the way🌚
Part 1: th-cam.com/video/KU0pqfsVk_Q/w-d-xo.html
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The uninvited soundtrack th-cam.com/video/JhpMM24IdTg/w-d-xo.html
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Hope to get part 3soon
Author do you have an account on Wattpad???
I like how the author didn't added idols and just wrote "Friend" "Therapist"
Ikr I also like that kind of ffs where they didn't include other idols except the main one
And my mind isnt creative enough to come up with names for them, like this one time it took me 2 days to name a character in my FF, so most of the other times im like nvm ill name that person "friend." 😂
@@BangtanFF LOL
@@BangtanFF hey...unnie.. pls make a happy ending.... 😭
I truly appreciate you. This author is on another level 💜
Imagine being that much depressed
, she's not depressed she is dead inside 🙂
I can feel 30% of what she is feel now ,it feel numb and i am not going to watch whole part i watched only half of it cause it is too strong for my brain to handle it Thank you so much 💜
@@ifyoujiminyoucantjimout6605 girl I totally feel you and I actually imagined myself being in this situation but I added my childhood memories too and even thinking about it makes me wanna scream and cry . I would go beautifully insane
@@Belloo00033 wow you cried,💜
@@ifyoujiminyoucantjimout6605 nahh lol i was about to cry
@@Belloo00033 ooookyyy and be happy and safe
This is good, and more depressing than that "one-night stand w mafia."
💆🏻♀️
Edit: *Wanted Criminal. Not mafia.
I don't want to edit because I will lose that "Heart" 😢 by her.
@@EmmaTheSecretWriter 😂
This story is so twisted but I can’t help but wish there’s a happy ending 😭
Ikr me too😭
This is my first time watching something so dark and honestly.....I'm scared
Maybe I'm in the wrong place.
I want a happy ending😭😭😭😭
Samee here 🥺
@@sharmy6176 same
Same here...I think I don't need any emojis...cz you can see my dp 🙂
Exactly like ion know how much I frickin cried it was way to much I was getting upset it sad asl but so good I couldn’t stop reading it😢😩💜
Me not caring if they end up together or not anymore I just wonder how long the back n forth from toxic to not toxic will last 😂😂
me not caring either .... but seeing the FF THAT IS 42 mins freaked me out of happiness lmao
@@blackpinksfairy733 xD ikr
I can't decide if care or not but now my curiosity is over the moon..
SHe really needs to find a good therapist.
she found one
She just need to find her real self,I guess.
😂
💀
She needs Medicine😊....And that is JUNGKOOK🙂
This is what we called
Dark ff
I don't like those psycho ff which
Called as dark .
But this is something insane and dark love 😍.
exactly, this ff is literally definition of Dark
yes ur right
Ikr
agreed
I guess jungkook loved y/n but he makes her suffer so that he can come over the feeling of love for y/n
Jungkook just dont wants to be weak after being in love
I agree with you even i think that but if he'll keep making y/n suffer won the fall out of love with him
HE JUST WANTS TO SATISFY HIS EGO
he is just trying to be cold and heartless so that people won't call him weak and he is trying to satisfy his ego
I was low-key hoping that therapist is Jane
Who is Jane btw
@@saniascontent6794 A character in the author prev story "One night stand with the wanted criminal"
haha
Yk the first time I read this comment I didn't know want did u mean but now Ik Jane btw I was so impatient for the third part that I watched this ff quiet sometimes and then also watched the previous 1 .. Btw author-nim u nice keep going...
Luv yaa
The fact that the author is so good t writing, she’s literally making us feel what y/n feels, like we want y/n to get back to him but at the same time we want her to escape him... I’m feeling what she feels to the point where I feel like I can’t even finish the video cuz of how suffocating it is but at the same time it’s too good to stop reading.
Ah….why is this so true, istg I started crying and shivering when jungkook left Y/N with his gun
@@Camila-nf9gc me also
I'm not saying that I hate jk's character but this story is soooo intense....I love it jungkook exactly knows how to make her crave for him..when to leave her when to come it's the best he has made her crazy in love
Imagine that Y/N woke up and realized that everything was just a dream. But... she actually dreamed about her past life
And then she actually meets jungkook again and he remembers everything as well👀
Exciting!!🔥
damn! the plot twist!
I can't believe why someone gives a dislike to this hella amazing ff Ooo waiiiiiiit I think they were so much into that they forget which one is a like button 😁
I agree with you so Author nim Don't be sad 😂😂🤣💜💜
YEAH UR RIGHT XD.
AUTHOR NIM JUST FORGET THAT THERE IS A DISLIKE BUTTON
Jin Jin Jin Jin Jin Jin Jin Jin
I am out of my mind
Oh maria Jin
🤦🤦
U know whats scarier...when a psycho is so potent n the victim is so weak that he has the power to make her like one of him.
Another masterpiece 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Thanku...🙏🏻
It feels like the tragic love story of Harley and Joker
It is a dark ff. But I don't know what make me calm in this? Music, storyline or dialogue. It is so smoothing to watch it. I am gonna miss this after part 3 ❤️
I would say the music.. 🙂🙂
Not me still wanting them to end up together despite how twisted things are 😅
Same I want them to end up together in the best way possible 😂💜
sameeeeee! this also shows how good the author is because she is twisting our minds too into wanting something like this🥴🥴 she is A M A J I N
Same here.
Not me saying "not again " out loud whenever he showed up 🤣😭
I broke my sleep just to see this... I am yawning the shit out of hell😶
Edit : THIS WAS MASSIVE... i could feel myself going undel blanket in terror 🙄🙄....unnie you are really something... I can't find words
@Kookarrot your here Unnie 🥺❤️
Unnie you are here....💜❤
Bae you also here🥺
What more can I wish when I find two fav author of mine together 😌❤️
exactly what I'm thinking
It's nice to see you here.
By the way your new ff MTM is so good.
O gosh ....Her whole existence is Screaming PATHETIC on the top of it's lungs 😭🔥🔥🔥🔥
can we get a part with jungkook pov??? Like we didn't really get to know what he thinks or how he actually feels.
Yea your right I was waiting for jk pov in the whole
Agreed
@@BangtanFF I agree with you
God I'm crying like crazy. My mom is calling me for lunch and i can't go outside my room like this . 😭😭😭😭😭
And the best author award goes to........... "•BangtanFF•"
YOU stole my heart away 💌
I ditched my online classes for it 😂
lol same my biology class is goin on🌚
Me too
Me too lol
This story these edits give me goosebumps I really can't handle this much perfection in a ff I can feel all these happenings I really can never see something more better than 3 ffs
1. Mafia boss wants me
2. You're mine
3. This one which I just saw the one that is totally a dark themed ff and all three of them are jungkook ff only I fell in love with these three ffs sorry if sounded crazy
damn mafia boSs wants me was lit but when author's your mine are you talking about
and this story is best
@@crystalreed7624 can u tell me the author name of mafia boss wants me??
@@thebillo7274 i don't remember the author but just search '' mafia boss wants me''
it was a popular series so you can easily find it
@@crystalreed7624 I have watched one series named exactly the same by "bts army forever" but it was just awful like it cant be compared to this masterpiece..and i think the authour had not been updating for one year now idk
@@thebillo7274 it just depends on the taste
many peopl liked it many didn't
and yeah that was the author
i hate the fact how he ruined her and is gonna ruin her more ''SEVERLY'' but i love the fact how she still loves him insanely i love u unii💜💜😭😭
I went in a trance while reading this.. The editing is perfect, the song selection gives the perfect vibes.. They way you formed the words and narration is perfect the way you made us feel How a Y/N would have felt if it would he real... It's just wow.. Congratulations.. It's a great work
Every emotion was so lively that I can't express
The background music giving that perfect setting to feel more of it
The editing
The storyline
The dialogues
The emotions which were raw and realistic...
That pain ..that love..that hate..that frustration....that agony..... everything...every feeling I felt along with her ...I cried so hard for her..
You(author) really have an amazing way of ..kinda intoxicating way of writing... I'm getting obsessed with you and obviously your writing skills.
Can't wait for the next part
And don't take tension of how it will go ...okay ...just write the way you thought to write
Lots of love bae❤️✨
11:54 OMG!! That sentence gives me vibes from when Jungkook said _"You seem like you need a drink. Alcohol helps to ease the pain inside"_ in your fanfic called _'When you have a one night stand but he turns out to be a wanted criminal'_ .
Leave me alone, please. I miss that ff so much!! 😂😭
This is so good. I felt all the emotions she was feeling. The way you write the stories, is really fascinating. ✨ Part 3 is all we need rn.
god - so, do you need a good writing skills or a vocabulary? which one
•BangtanFF• - YES
(btw I really did enjoyed this part too) YOU DESERVE MORE SUBS tbh
Wow that shit was wild I fuckin' cried my eyes out
this is more painful than the one night stand-mafia ksdsldksj a masterpiece ONCE AGAINN! Anyways,Congrats!
Ig Y/N is just hallucinating everything....I mean....like how Jungkook would know where she was after 2 years? Also when all were arrested, how come he managed to escape.....ig jungkook is just a figure her mind created
Sometimes I think the same too
When was jk arested
Okay I got know I actually confused when I was at the middle of the story but now I get ever
Oh don't say that... I already imagined them staying happy in pt 3..i don't want it at all that jk's actually no one rather than an imaginary character created by yn. Oh please .. 😭
No it seems too real
Meanwhile jungkook in real life: cries his lungs out when he does a little just a bit mistake in stage😑😂😂😂
How could you make him this heartless my baby just look at his bambi eyes🥺🥺🥺💜
"Best ff writer in the world" award goes to...... Our @•Bangtanff• unnieeeee 💜😇
"Loving someone means ignoring their flaws and see only perfection"
I was so excited for this!! Idc about what going on in class, to me this is more important :)
same girl
"I just... want to see you one more time, Jungkook... " This line really touched my heart
Plot twist : y/n is a secret savage agent whose mission was to capture the uncapturable mafia jungkook and everything she did was just an act
This. Is. I.C.O.N.I.C
I’ve never read something like this, I’m speechless really appreciate your writing and imagination
I’m so happy and excited that part 2 is out now I love you content please keep doing what you’re doing you are amazing 💗💕
Please make a part 3,it’s so good. This is one of the best ff’s ever.
I’ve been looking everywhere for ff’s like this. Your so talented.💜
Y/n: "I love him-"
Me: No, get him out of your mind, get him out of your mind!
*1 year later* everything seems normal and y/n seems like she has gotten over him
Me: YES as you should
Friend: so who is your past bad experience?
Y/n: start getting flashbacks and feels feels herself still loving him
Me: NOOO
Y/n: *gets better again*
Me: yes, find yourself a better guy
Jungkook: *Appears*
Me: OH COME ON!!!
Also me: *wants Jungkook and Y/n to be with eachother again* 🥲
Ahhh! First Jk said “I love you Y/N” I was like, OMG YASSS! but reality hits hard when you read that it’s just a hallucination?! My smile faded away…
Wtf author, I am literally in a sea of year. How could you make us suffer like this by pulling a 'To be continued' 🤧
This is better than any movie out there Author you can really write movies and books you are really talented
Oh god just I was so lost in it why did ff feels so real it feels like some one stabbing my heart rapidly
This is the MOST BEST FF THAT I HAVE EVER WATCHED!! EXCELLENT STORY!! EXCELLENT THUMBNAIL!! EXCELLENT BACKGROUND MUSIC!! EXCELLENT BACKGROUND!! EXCELLENT EVERYTHING!! I subscribed after 5 mins of watching the first part!! Thanks for making such an EXCELLENT FF!! I wish that there should have been a movie based on this same story.
I’m so excited for the last part…..
Probably the only ff for which I didn't had to go back and rewatch the previous part even after it was posted a month apart cause the story was so vivid in my mind, one of my most favourite ff ever
I set out to learn English with your fanfics hehe. But with the little I know, I can say that your stories are art. You have a great imagination. I admire you a lot! 💖
Music, storyline , everything is mind blowing....I don't know how u came up with those lines.....it feels so real...I'm literally falling for every ff you make ...thank you for making realistic stories like this 💜💜💜💜💜
This story is so heart touching I felt really really bad for y/n 🥺
My major is psychology ! Literally im impressed from this ff not just because of jungkook or something else im impressed from dialogues , characters making , using and especially mental powers , in short great ff 🙌
Your stories just makes me lost myself in a different kind of emotional feeling
I can't wait for more of this.
Dialogue writing is on the other level....really great work with the dialogues and emotions
The editing is of this ff is smooth like butter .....just wanna ask you how are you soo talented. ...I literally feel every word you write 😚
right on 20:19 Mafia in the morning came on and the gunshot scared the living soul out of me
The only thing am afraid now is you telling me that jungkook was also a character made by yn's hallucination
Haha😅
😲
Literally 🤣
it could be a whole asss movieeee wtffffffffff the editing,the story, i litreallyyy drowned in it...it felt sooo fucking realllll wth😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭🔥🔥
People will call me mad but I still connect with Y/N and this is most connecting ff I ever read. The music 🎶 , the pictures with that smoke, the words she used in story all catches my heart and mind. I know y/n has a deadly life but idk why I still want to be at her place and live this life❤
I'm so excited for the next part. It's literally like a movie with A LOT of suspense. Gosh I can't wait!
When we say this ff is INTENSE.... IT'S REALLY INTENSE 🙄🙄🙄 actually your every FF is INTENSE
bye you're literally the best ff writer out of all the fanfictions i've read
I have read so many ffs but I just realised that this is one that I've been wanting the most...
I admit that the other ff authors have a great idea and plot...
But the way you put it in sentences is the most important thing...
And I've been expecting it for 2years now...
And I finally find it here...
I love the background music , the way you carry on the story , the way you express the real identity of the characters , everything...
It just makes readers to get into the story and feel the pain and cruelty in them like they are undergoing through this for real...
And I can see that your are gonna have a great future ahead of you if you pursue to be an author...
Btw I am a new subscriber to your channel...
And I can't wait to read the 3rd part 🖤🖤🖤
Hwaiting 💜💜💜💜💜💜
Damn very well said 💗
THIS IS THE 1ST FF OF YOURS I HAVEN'T CRIED AT SO FAR LET ME APPRECIATE IT, I'm proud of you pt. 3 SOON PLSSSSS
I can't utter a word about how this off was......It deserves to televise as a movie or a drama....You worth writing this💜
I felt love ! Pain ! Creepiness ! Overwhelming emotions all at a time. This is worth reading . 💜
I was feeling so intense feeling while reading and I just can't express that feeling .I don't know it was fear ,thrill,hate or something else .salute to your talent , creativity you made feel like I am myself in the FF . Eagerly waiting for part 3 😘😘😘
Jungkook doesn't deserves forgiveness and pity. He deserves to be in prison or die how can someone be this heartless? Y/n is too strong for this but kinda stupid for still loving him yet hating him. Can't wait for the part 3!!
A/N you are just perfect I can't find word to describe how much I Like the Series of yours.I Have read a lot of ff's but never had read a ff like this, It's just something in it.. A/N plz make a happy end,I want Jk and Y/N together at the end.Both of them had suffered a lot specially y/n,Plz make them together
Waiting for next part, love you💜
And congratulations 🥳
Its funny how everytime you make a oneshot and then always endup making its several other parts cuz of the heavy demand. I just love it 💜 😂
This was amazing..... the writing was so good that I could feel the pain in her words.....good job author loved it 💜
BRO- I HAD SO MUCH HOPE AT THE PART WHEN JK CAME AND THAN JUST "PUF, ITS A GODDAM HALLUCINATION" WHY, WHY DO THIS 😭😭😭😭😭
Bro it's been a month please upload next part I literally commented for 5 times please fast
You better become a movie director when ur older cause these ffs are
A MASTERPIECE 😩💕💖💕💗💖💗💗😩😩‼
SHIT!. . . . .I cried a pool of tears I'm sure my hamster can take a bath on it . . .🐹
I loved it so much even though I was a little dissapointed on the fact that the Jungkook before was just a hallucination ...😢
But it was still really unique and wonderful...!☺
She's not depressed it's likes she's dead Inside Blindly Inlove to Jungkook like her Obsession Jesus Christ She's not thinking about her self just Thinking About Jungkook oh god poor Yniee
I agree
26:40 you know I hate him but like I still want y/n to be with him LMFAO
I love the way she turns the story and eventually gives us a happy new ending
It's worth reading every word written by her
When will part 3 come?...😭😭... I'm eagerly waiting
Girl you are out of this world your talent should take you to another place your ff seriously is ✨ I watched a lot of ffs but yours is just talent . You truly deserve an award
oh my GoD the intro is lit🔥🔥i dont regret watching this....imma subscribe right now😲
Why this is so emotional. Every word , every thing in this FF is emotional.
Whenever y/n and jungkook were talking about killing each other the vent beside jungkook looked like Ariana grande’s ponytail
Dude can't wait for part 3 anymore
Jk loves y/n more than anything but he is afraid of something , but I still want them together it's amajin 😭😭
You should start writing Moves and Dramas, love. You'll win ''...of the Year Award''.
I cannot explain, how good this is. The words you use, the story, the EVERYTHING gives me goosebumps. The love, the craziness, the possesivness, the psychopatheticness, the way it is so lost. The obsession she has over him. It describes possesivness in the best way possible. I havn't Part 3 yet but it is my favourite fanfiction, already.
I recommended this to my bestie and boyfriend a minute ago and I saw my bofriend literally, watching this while eating popcorn in his office.....
This fan fiction is literally like a movie.This is the best fanfiction i have ever read .I am so addicted reading it.hands off to the writer💜💜
IM OBSESSED W THIS ONE PLEASE PRT 3!!!
This felt so real like my heart literally hurt😭🥺 but that also says a lot when you can make you audience feel that you just know you are a good writer 😭
I loved it alot
I literally mean it, it’s the best FF that gave me a roller coaster ride
And this is what I call ‘MAFIA’ and ‘DARK LOVE’🖤
Omg the amount of times I cried during both part 1 and 2. AHHH~ anyway, can’t wait for part 3 and maybe a bonus/ part 4???
When the video ended suddenly I was snapped into real world woaaaaaahh author you really have the ability to make me dive into imaginary world so badly.. I felt insane for few seconds after coming out of this ff
the ability of author to make me cry in every single ff🤧
I really loved how the way author just created it, i must say that the author is talented enough the way she puts everything which is just so perfect like have you seen the background!
author your ff's is on another level no one can make some ff's that looks so real this is so overwhelming every lines you make is so realistic damn you should get a best author writer award your ff's is definitely a masterpiece
I seriously have nothing to say im speechless the amount of talent you've got and the way you're dedicating yourself and time to do these such amazing ffs is just amazing you are truly the best author I've ever seen. Keep going girl you have true talent, i just really appreciate you're progress and i can truly see you're hardwork and you're researches, highhh fivee!! Can't wait for part 3 i hope it doesn't take a lot of time. And congratsss girll!! Fighting!!
Please part 3 I am dying for part 3 I never cried so much after seeing a movie or drama but I CRIED watching a fan fic I can’t believe myself and I badly want part 3 I just can’t wait 😭😭😭😭😭