Galactic Council Demands Tribute, Humanity Sends a Fleet of Battleships | HFY | Sci-Fi Story
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One statement " This Is Sparta !!"
Can we have just one story without the " Far from over " ? I think it was said like four times in this story.
Well, we only got two "bristling with weaponry " out of this one.
Oh crap…the asteroid field again.
The star wars asteroid field is an orbiting mess that doesn’t exist.
They are miles apart and small.
Yeah these stories use that a lot it's funny😂
Can we also talk about how everyone wants to attack through the plane of the bodies orbiting Sol? Why not warp/ftl/whatever to a space above the Earth and travel in from there? There is no need to fight your way through fleets hidden in rocks or gas giants.
A Lieutenant would never be Second in Command to an Admiral. Maybe his ADC but never 2IC. 😂😂😂
Add ignorance to stupid and you get a 2nd Lieutenant all too often.
Another story has a Sargent as second in command.
And if everyone in between the commander and the 2nd LT. were injured. who would be the 2nd in command?
Its always the end of humanity.
Sarah Connor? Is this before or after Terminator?
A LT might be an aide, or maybe even advisor, but NEVER the second in command to an Admiral.
Writer needs to do research to try to sound intelligent.
this is the 3rd channel to screw up a story you mention the lt conducting a stralth opp to take out the command ship in the next line that same lt is getting ready for battle oh yeah after the battle near the asteroid field had already started the enemy is on the way get your shit together or dont tell the stories
Earth is the slave masters.
Please the alien ships did nothing but wait for their flag ship to fall and then it said they were leaderless. They were incapable the wntire time.
Really? Sarah Connor? Is a terminator going to help the humans also..
The narrator voice might be good for reading poetry but not Galactic War, sorry. It's kind of like using a drill sergeant voice to read children's books. Doesn't quite cut it.
It's AI. No emotion and completely ill suited to read stories of any kind
The I.A. Isn't well trained in military structure and ranks. A lowest junior officer as second in command of a flag officer? 🤔
I'm not sure why I watch AI narrated crap. Decent stories are ruined with horrible grammar, misunderstanding of what it is "reading", and a monotone and emotionless narration that is unnatural which destroys the flow and suspense of the story.
Please do better
Weak narration. So ho-hum.
These AI generated stories are terrible....a Lieutenant second in command to an admiral? really? Just stop.
Direct Hit😂
I think I am the one who should stop.Stop listen to this mess that is.
poor story-line. just another copy of several older ones here
These AI generated stories are so funny when considered as satirical versions of classic Sci-Fi stories. The voice should be a stoner's stupid uncaring drawl and the drama treated as over-the-top world-ending exaggeration.