Hi Guys, this is my first TH-cam video so I would love to see feedback on what I can do to improve the next ones. Please don't be shy - any and all pointers are welcome! :)
Good luck mate on your TH-cam Journey. CC: dynamics and pacing: building some soundscape/background music + sometimes little dynamic breaks with short clips of audio from videos shown (like you do at 6:30, but a bit more regular and more intensional). Also, a foreshadowing of the structure at the beginning to help the viewer navigate your video and also motivates to stick around. But overall a very decent first video! And good luck with all the keyboard warriors that never did anything but shit on other people's work ;) They are a plenty!
Great video. I love the perspective of it being like Christian rock. Consider using some soft ambient music in the background to hide the difference between your voice overs.
@@tylerroussin1623 thanks man! I'll definitely experiment with that on the next one. I'm not a great fan of my own voice so this actually sounds very appealing to me 😂
I never thought much of Star Wars. For me, they were more or less children's films, with lots of explosions, laser shots that missed or strange monsters that reminded me of The Muppet Show. (Mei, that was 50 years ago.) And yet - it will have its reasons that almost everyone knows Darth Vader, that the design of a star destroyer is the epitome of an icon and that the 2nd part was so good, probably because it finally showed a merciless empire that crushes its enemies in the dust, that is powerful beyond all measure, unfair, violent ... that was pretty damn cool. That said, I don't think the Star Wars World can ever be saved again and I hope that in the future we focus on movies that offer something new. In recent years, the major movie channels seem to almost only cover Marvel, Star Wars, Star Trek or similar franchise juggernauts ... how boring.
@Dunderslag Fair enough! It was a big deal in my family growing up so I'm a little bit biased towards it, despite notbenjoying the prequels OR the Disney ones. I think Star Wars is a loose enough concept and a big enough world that it could one day be good again. They just need to get away from the Skywalkers and use a different time period. It definitely needs a long break before it can even think of that though. The Disney trilogy was such a missed opportunity - I remember looking forward to the force awakens because the trailer looked awesome 😂
You're a bit late to the culture war party. All the other grifters have moved on to a different children's movie/TV IP as the vehicle for their asinine whining. If you think Star Wars has only recently taken a nosedive in quality, you've clearly never seen: The Holiday Special; The battle for Endor; Caravan of Courage; Droids; Ewoks; The prequel trilogy; all the shitty novelisations. There's been more bad than good Star Wars content now for decades.
Thanks for the comment! I think as far as the propaganda element goes it's definitely gotten worse and worse since the Disney takeover but I take your point about some of the poor writing in some of the more obscure stuff 👍 This channel is going to be about encouraging good writing so I'd be interested to see if Disney can turn things around after the negative feedback around the new stuff. Never say never! 😄
@@Vivifyre " This channel is going to be about encouraging good writing" and yet, all you've offered thus far is a hodge podge of third hand AltRight talking points and culture war jargon. Be the change you want to see. You think the prequel trilogy is "obscure?"
Hi Guys, this is my first TH-cam video so I would love to see feedback on what I can do to improve the next ones. Please don't be shy - any and all pointers are welcome! :)
Good luck mate on your TH-cam Journey. CC: dynamics and pacing: building some soundscape/background music + sometimes little dynamic breaks with short clips of audio from videos shown (like you do at 6:30, but a bit more regular and more intensional). Also, a foreshadowing of the structure at the beginning to help the viewer navigate your video and also motivates to stick around. But overall a very decent first video! And good luck with all the keyboard warriors that never did anything but shit on other people's work ;) They are a plenty!
Dude thank you so much for the feedback! That's exactly what I need, thanks for taking the time to comment, it's really appreciated 🙂
@@Vivifyre My pleasure! "Treat other like you'd like to be treated" or something like that ;D. Cheers!
Great video. I love the perspective of it being like Christian rock. Consider using some soft ambient music in the background to hide the difference between your voice overs.
@@tylerroussin1623 thanks man! I'll definitely experiment with that on the next one. I'm not a great fan of my own voice so this actually sounds very appealing to me 😂
I never thought much of Star Wars. For me, they were more or less children's films, with lots of explosions, laser shots that missed or strange monsters that reminded me of The Muppet Show. (Mei, that was 50 years ago.)
And yet - it will have its reasons that almost everyone knows Darth Vader, that the design of a star destroyer is the epitome of an icon and that the 2nd part was so good, probably because it finally showed a merciless empire that crushes its enemies in the dust, that is powerful beyond all measure, unfair, violent ... that was pretty damn cool.
That said, I don't think the Star Wars World can ever be saved again and I hope that in the future we focus on movies that offer something new. In recent years, the major movie channels seem to almost only cover Marvel, Star Wars, Star Trek or similar franchise juggernauts ... how boring.
@Dunderslag Fair enough! It was a big deal in my family growing up so I'm a little bit biased towards it, despite notbenjoying the prequels OR the Disney ones.
I think Star Wars is a loose enough concept and a big enough world that it could one day be good again. They just need to get away from the Skywalkers and use a different time period. It definitely needs a long break before it can even think of that though. The Disney trilogy was such a missed opportunity - I remember looking forward to the force awakens because the trailer looked awesome 😂
You're a bit late to the culture war party. All the other grifters have moved on to a different children's movie/TV IP as the vehicle for their asinine whining. If you think Star Wars has only recently taken a nosedive in quality, you've clearly never seen: The Holiday Special; The battle for Endor; Caravan of Courage; Droids; Ewoks; The prequel trilogy; all the shitty novelisations. There's been more bad than good Star Wars content now for decades.
Thanks for the comment! I think as far as the propaganda element goes it's definitely gotten worse and worse since the Disney takeover but I take your point about some of the poor writing in some of the more obscure stuff 👍
This channel is going to be about encouraging good writing so I'd be interested to see if Disney can turn things around after the negative feedback around the new stuff. Never say never! 😄
@@Vivifyre " This channel is going to be about encouraging good writing" and yet, all you've offered thus far is a hodge podge of third hand AltRight talking points and culture war jargon. Be the change you want to see.
You think the prequel trilogy is "obscure?"
@@dinogoldie9716 Man,... you are tense. I hope everything is ok.
@@PierreChe You're past tense.
@@dinogoldie9716 gayyyy 😂