How to Write a Good Thesis Statement

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  • @MariaVargas-yk3wm
    @MariaVargas-yk3wm 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    the way you speak is very clear and it really helped me stay focused during the video, also , the information is really easy to understand, it really helped me with my college writing class material.

  • @liontweedle
    @liontweedle 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Clear and concise, your voice holds attention. Thank you.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks Glory, I appreciate that!

  • @cherylhartnett6887
    @cherylhartnett6887 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thank you, Dr. Hamilton. Your presentations reinforce what I've said in many of my classes. I teach Composition I for freshmen and I appreciate this very much.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Cheryl, thanks for letting me know that you found this video to be helpful! :)

  • @natty-v5y
    @natty-v5y 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you very much. As esl student. Your videos are so helpful to me. You speak clearly, slowly. Giving examples. Explain things using simple word. Please do more videos like this. I love all your work. Thank you.

  • @alessandro3867
    @alessandro3867 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This was an excellent explanation of making a thesis statement. I'm sure that following your advice, I'm going to do great in my class. So, thanks a lot for the video!

  • @KEVO221
    @KEVO221 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thank you so much, is so easy to learn thanks to the flow of your voice thank you

  • @IngleezyTasisMinAlsifr
    @IngleezyTasisMinAlsifr 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Thank you, thank you, thank you. I watched tens of videos on the topic, but I seemed to understand nothing, until I found this video. Thank you ♥️.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Hi Achuil, I'm glad you found me! Thanks for your lovely comment. :)

  • @theodorewilliams2023
    @theodorewilliams2023 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    A thesis has been throughly been explained to me better than ever before thank you very much

  • @MehediHasan-ul6ov
    @MehediHasan-ul6ov 6 ปีที่แล้ว +19

    Thanks a lot..it has just turned all my confusions and questions to answers

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      শঙ্খচিল (Shonkhochil) Hello! I'm so glad you understand now! Thanks for watching. :)

  • @watsonholmes3703
    @watsonholmes3703 6 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I'm going to watch your every video. I'm starved to get my hands on this type of instruction.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hi there! Thank you so much for watching my videos! You will certainly learn a lot. Good luck! :)

  • @jaisonfrancisco3732
    @jaisonfrancisco3732 7 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Ms Ashan, you're one of my favorite lecturers.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hello Jaizon. Wow, thanks so much. I hope my current students feel the same as you! :)

  • @chenluj9894
    @chenluj9894 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    After watching so many videos about essays, only this really helps!

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  5 ปีที่แล้ว

      I am so glad you found what you needed in this video. :)

  • @aliceflowers5966
    @aliceflowers5966 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Accurate finally just the way my lecturer teaches this topic

  • @andresacebedo6431
    @andresacebedo6431 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    im going to be for real i didint know that a thesis stament is used on writing i never knew as a student but know it helps me to understand the importance of it. Keep up the content is very reat and specific. 👍

  • @philippebeaulieu851
    @philippebeaulieu851 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This video is really good and very clear

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thanks for your kind words!

  • @sashannadavis4340
    @sashannadavis4340 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    THANK YOU!!! My son needs help and you helped him alot.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  5 ปีที่แล้ว

      That's so good to hear! Thanks for letting me know. 😊

  • @catherinebinayan8563
    @catherinebinayan8563 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    The best explanation so far specially for younger writers.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks, I appreciate that!

    • @catherinebinayan8563
      @catherinebinayan8563 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@profarhampton Ma'am, how about a video of how to write a research essay introduction of an opinion essay for any controversial topic today? Most instructuonal vidoes just talk theoretucally without showing how it is actually done

  • @jackienuttall4107
    @jackienuttall4107 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thank you so much for bringing such clarity to my understanding of
    a thesis!

  • @leannestauss2955
    @leannestauss2955 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Excellent! Thorough and succinct at the same time. Very clear explanation.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      I am honored by your comment. Thanks!

  • @blancalongoria7677
    @blancalongoria7677 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Hello Professor Hampton,
    I really enjoyed your video, I saw many videos but only yours was concise and to the point. Your voice is so soothing and invites the listener and viewer to stay tuned. I think Morgan Freeman should be worried..:)
    Best

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Hi Blanca, thank you so much! I'm reading your comment at work, and I am absolutely delighted. Yes, maybe I can get some voice over work and make lots of money like Morgan Freeman. 😁😊😄

  • @sulaymanlecturerdarboe472
    @sulaymanlecturerdarboe472 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you for this powerful and helpful guide.

  • @조권준-z7d
    @조권준-z7d ปีที่แล้ว +1

    omg! you are very helpful
    my sir`s homework is too hard

  • @ilianadiaz9977
    @ilianadiaz9977 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

    What a great video!!

  • @nwenwekhin1932
    @nwenwekhin1932 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thanks a lot. It is very clear and helpful.

  • @warfme2567
    @warfme2567 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    this was SUCH a good video. Im in high school and I got a 100% on my thesis thanks to you. You are my FAVORITE TH-cam ever!! I am going into the army national guard so the thesis might not help that much but thanks anyway! :P Keep up the good work. lol I'm using my little bros account.

    • @warfme2567
      @warfme2567 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      btw I would just like to hope you comment

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Sorry, I'm just seeing this comment, but I'm glad you found this video helpful. :)

  • @DDavis-mi2cg
    @DDavis-mi2cg 6 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Love your voice and guidance. Thanks!

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      D. Davis Thank you so much! :)

  • @aharafHossain
    @aharafHossain 7 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    more of these videos please .....subscribed . 👍

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  7 ปีที่แล้ว

      Yes, I will do that, and thanks for watching! :)

  • @MsHantubelau
    @MsHantubelau 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Oh I love her voice

  • @sadiobayne1642
    @sadiobayne1642 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    This was very helpful. Thank you.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Good deal! I'm glad the video helped. :)

  • @SuperDj2000
    @SuperDj2000 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you so much! 🙏🏽

  • @toasterstrudelx2687
    @toasterstrudelx2687 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks this video helped

  • @manelkhelfaoui5719
    @manelkhelfaoui5719 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Ommg i wish my teacher explaned the lesson like you thanks a lot for this amazing explanation it really helped me i'm looking forward for another lesson see u :)

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you so much for your kind words!

  • @jadarig2542
    @jadarig2542 6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    this is so good keep doing what you do

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Jadari, thanks so much! :)

  • @isabelsakura2420
    @isabelsakura2420 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you.🌹🙏

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      You're welcome. Thanks for watching!

  • @profarhampton
    @profarhampton  8 ปีที่แล้ว +3

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    • @saronabartaula255
      @saronabartaula255 8 ปีที่แล้ว

      Can you please help me to edit my essay?

  • @moes.d6548
    @moes.d6548 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you this is great explanation

  • @jenniebaez6947
    @jenniebaez6947 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Will this work for a GED extended response? I am trying to learn how to write a response for my test. I need to learn how to start the topic and body of the essay for an argumentative response.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Jennie, so sorry that I'm just seeing this, but my videos on the writing process and on the argument/persuasive essay show you how to get started.

  • @rubabbaloch5759
    @rubabbaloch5759 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks a lot mam... It's really helpful for me...

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Awesome, thanks for watching! 😊

    • @rubabbaloch5759
      @rubabbaloch5759 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      And keep doing such work for the benefit of beginners.

  • @melaniefuifui1802
    @melaniefuifui1802 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    How can you write a thesis statement for a self introduction speech?

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Hi Melanie, a thesis is for essays and research reports. Speeches are different. Speeches usually begin with a thought provoking question or quote. You should choose one of those openings that is meaningful to you and fits your personality. Hope that helps. Good luck!

    • @melaniefuifui1802
      @melaniefuifui1802 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Ashan R. Hampton thanks so much

  • @yasmensafi2260
    @yasmensafi2260 6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Hi please can you help me ? I have to analyze and write an essay the poem (On being brought from Africa to America) can you give me a good thesis statement to this poem?? and I’m sorry if I have mistakes ☺️

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Yasmen, first you need to decide what theme you will examine in your essay. I believe this poem is by Phyllis Wheatley. An example might be, "In the poem, "On being brought from Africa to America," Phyllis Wheatley expresses feelings of emotional and physical loss of self and culture." Hope that helps!

    • @yasmensafi2260
      @yasmensafi2260 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Ashan R. Hampton really thank you so much .

  • @dheverma
    @dheverma 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    its really Helpful.

  • @kennedyoloo7370
    @kennedyoloo7370 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi Ms Ashan, my lecturer asks me to write an essay on the pros and cons of hybrid cars, which theis will be good for my paper

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hi Kennedy, Use the 3 point thesis statement. You need to come up with three areas that you can compare both cars on such as gas mileage, affordability...and think of one more! Watch my video on comparison/contrast essays. Good luck! :)

  • @dooshimagbahabo2533
    @dooshimagbahabo2533 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks, apt

  • @chantellstallworth4637
    @chantellstallworth4637 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hi i need all the help i can get on how to do a thesis statement

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Chantell Stallworth, did the video help? Do you have specific questions the video didn't cover? Let me know.

    • @Nadeen76
      @Nadeen76 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Do we put an opposite view in thesis statement ?

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Hello Nanoosh, no, do not include an opposite view in the thesis. The thesis should prepare the reader for the subject and points of your essay. Your essay should focus on one point of view. You would only mention an opposing viewpoint in the concluding paragraphs of an argument essay. Thanks for your question!

  • @watsonholmes3703
    @watsonholmes3703 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I just subscribed to your channel I'm looking for help. I was wondering if I may submit a question privately related to education and professors.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Waston, I am so sorry that I'm just seeing this comment. Hopefully your situation was resolved. Thanks for watching!

  • @nx97i17
    @nx97i17 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi, I have a question does the thesis statement come before or after the topic sentence?

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hi there, a topic sentence is the first line of a paragraph. A thesis is usually the last line of the introduction for a full student essay.

    • @nx97i17
      @nx97i17 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@profarhampton oh I get it now, thank you so much for your quick respond 🥺💗💗

  • @lydiabrown3723
    @lydiabrown3723 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    HELLO, good video!

  • @shinaayomiawolola8773
    @shinaayomiawolola8773 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks