MASTER ENGLISH WRITING: How to Correct Thesis Statement Problems

แชร์
ฝัง
  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 13 ธ.ค. 2024

ความคิดเห็น • 63

  • @LearnAcademicEnglish
    @LearnAcademicEnglish  2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    😀Hi everyone! Thanks for watching!
    ✍ QUESTIONS TO PRACTICE:
    Can you fix these thesis statements?
    Three ways in which Brazil and the U.S. are similar are diverse, population size, and natural beauty. (Use P\parallel forms)
    This essay is going to discuss the four main causes of homelessness in the United States. (Don't make an announcement)
    Would you like to join my academy for English learners? Join my email list for details coming soon! 😃
    bit.ly/3QzoGgI
    Subscribe to my Instagram Community for personalized feedback on your speaking, and group chats with me and other English learners! instagram.com/englishwithjenna/ 🤓
    WHAT TO WATCH NEXT:
    All My Writing Videos: th-cam.com/play/PLTaPDxv5nudk2w9s_xU4zrbQ3NJuiaMh3.html
    How to write English sentences: th-cam.com/play/PLTaPDxv5nudkueBaTBejyvPM8tFNj-Wda.html
    How to Write Research Questions th-cam.com/video/yxCd8WmUPvg/w-d-xo.html
    How to Write Thesis Statements th-cam.com/video/-u5X_k04BeA/w-d-xo.html
    10 Common Grammar Mistakes: th-cam.com/video/W8oTgCAikkc/w-d-xo.html
    My book recommendations for English learners: www.amazon.com/shop/jennafrancisco

  • @humbled9948
    @humbled9948 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Even as a native speaker, I'm learning from your videos.
    I'm planning on going back to college after years out of school, so these videos help.
    Thank you very much. God bless you.

  • @jdpritchettheard
    @jdpritchettheard 8 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I am a 50 year old that is back in school and taking English I found your video so helpful. Thank you so much

  • @aravindanmuthuvote221
    @aravindanmuthuvote221 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Explained superbly.

  • @MahmoudGenidy-fz3eu
    @MahmoudGenidy-fz3eu 23 วันที่ผ่านมา

    You're specific, simple and immersive

  • @V4MP_4EVA
    @V4MP_4EVA 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I'm learning from this topic. Thank you

  • @williamsdonkor7753
    @williamsdonkor7753 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wow, you have enlightened me with this useful information. Thanks so much

  • @DANIELKENNETHKENNYPOWERCOMMUNI
    @DANIELKENNETHKENNYPOWERCOMMUNI ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank so much am enlighten from your lectures

  • @2126sammy
    @2126sammy หลายเดือนก่อน

    Amazing help ❤thank you so much I really appreciate it ❤thank you

  • @samialqasmee6123
    @samialqasmee6123 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    You are really so unique and you have chosen very useful subjects and to be honest you have made relentless efforts and you are amazing

  • @anv.4614
    @anv.4614 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Dear Tutor, well appreciated. thank you.

  • @fagrkamareya8195
    @fagrkamareya8195 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Amazing!👌👌👌❤

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  ปีที่แล้ว

      So glad you found it helpful! And thanks for joining as a member. Please let me know what type of information you are most interested in, and I will keep that in mind when I make member videos. :)

  • @nickbrooks7171
    @nickbrooks7171 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Teacher can I ask you a question. what is the most general essay/common essay that teachers start teaching. I mean, they obviously teach about introduction/thesis statement , body and conclusion. But what is the name of the most common essay that they start teaching ? Thanks .

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      We usually just refer to it as the 5-paragraph essay. We usually start with how to write a good paragraph with 3 supporting reasons and then show them that they can change that paragraph into a whole essay by taking those 3 reasons and creating a body paragraph for each one. When we first introduce this type of essay, we start with an easy prompt like Do you prefer to live in a big city or small town? Why? We usually start with a narrative essay or cause/effect (discussing reasons).

  • @KarubeSimon
    @KarubeSimon 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I like your explanation

  • @mahbobehmaleki2910
    @mahbobehmaleki2910 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you!!💕🌸🌸

  • @fabiolatorres6740
    @fabiolatorres6740 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you!!!

  • @AtikaSaif
    @AtikaSaif 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Can I write about causes and solutions of depression in the same eassy ..or it is going to be confusing

    • @AtikaSaif
      @AtikaSaif 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Please I need the answer... can I write about both ..causes and solutions or should I choose one?

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Yes you can write about both

  • @mahmoudurrahman6742
    @mahmoudurrahman6742 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thanks

  • @jonathanhuerta5460
    @jonathanhuerta5460 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I love writing

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      That's great! Having a positive attitude about it makes a huge difference. :)

    • @jonathanhuerta5460
      @jonathanhuerta5460 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@LearnAcademicEnglish I always like to think of writing as creativity because you get to make your own story

  • @OTIFRANCIS-wf6tt
    @OTIFRANCIS-wf6tt 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    How can l start writing my thesis topic? What are the basic requirement for a great sermon.

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thanks for your question. You need to make sure you brainstorm ideas, outline, and then write your thesis. Here's a video to show you how to write a thesis statement: th-cam.com/video/-u5X_k04BeA/w-d-xo.html
      And the basics of how to write an essay: th-cam.com/video/uFyuuSZYkY8/w-d-xo.htmlsi=Gr46cRFTwSxq-oOf
      And sometimes it's helpful to know how to start the writing process with a good question. th-cam.com/video/yxCd8WmUPvg/w-d-xo.html

  • @englishlanguage7153
    @englishlanguage7153 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I'm a new subscriber I just saw your Vedio on Facebook

  • @RichardJones-xx3vi
    @RichardJones-xx3vi 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    practice
    “Three ways in which Brazil and the U.S. are similar are diverse, population size, and natural beauty.”
    Correction: The US and Brazil are similar countries due to their population size, diverse cultures, and their beautiful landscape.

    “This essay is going to discuss the four main causes of homelessness in the United States.”
    Correction: There are four main causes of homelessness in the United States.
    Are these good thesis statements?

  • @nazeerKakar4896.
    @nazeerKakar4896. 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Please make a vedio on paragraph as well

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Check my playlist and watch my video about how to write an essay. There is a handout, too. It shows paragraph structure.

    • @nazeerKakar4896.
      @nazeerKakar4896. 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@LearnAcademicEnglish okay plethora of thanks for the guidance dear mam

  • @ramayuni4681
    @ramayuni4681 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Ms, i wanna ask you about one of example in this video. does the "Permanent housing should be provided to the homeless for the following reasons: to reduce long-term costs, clean up city centers, and encourage rehabilitation and emplyment" is tobe the tittle of our thesis?

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      That is the thesis. The title and the thesis are different. The thesis tells a sentence that tells the main idea of the essay.

    • @ramayuni4681
      @ramayuni4681 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      i have an assignment the topic is "stigma behind the mental health and access to treatment in developing countries". so this topic is tobe the tittle of my assignment or i can make a new tittle may be more narrow?. i still confuse

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@ramayuni4681 It is too long, so I would make a new title. I have a video all about how to write a title.

  • @CatherineCudjoe
    @CatherineCudjoe 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    helpful

  • @AkeliaDelpesche
    @AkeliaDelpesche 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I love you you are the best

  • @sharifullahjan7556
    @sharifullahjan7556 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello madam,
    I hope you are doing well.
    I have a question. Do all essays have hook statement, background, thesis thesis statement, supporting and conclusion? Kindly reply. Thank you.

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Great question. Most essays have that structure:
      Introduction paragraph w/ hook, background, and thesis statement
      Body paragraphs that support the thesis statement
      Conclusion paragraph
      There are a few exceptions. For example, right now I am teaching my students how to write a summary & response essay, which is a bit different, but that is like an exception. Almost all essays follow the structure you mentioned.

    • @sharifullahjan7556
      @sharifullahjan7556 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you ❤️

  • @marysabelbeck2772
    @marysabelbeck2772 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello, Please I need you help with the thesis statement and with English, I need to learn well. I am new fallow you

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  ปีที่แล้ว

      Sorry, I'm not teaching online classes right now, but I will have some in the future. You can sign up for my email list to be notified when that happens: bit.ly/41uaI4Z
      or you can join my TH-cam memberships for more lessons and chance to ask me questions.

  • @abdoel-masry223
    @abdoel-masry223 ปีที่แล้ว

    I wish I had watched your videos earlier.