You know what? I’m unsubbing. I loved hearing these stories but getting a fckn commercial every 3 minutes… I know more about the commercials than the story! Just gonna rip it out of yt and listen to it without interruptions. Your greed made you lose 1 sub. Not much, insignificant, really, but I don’t stand alone. I’m just the only one saying it.
@MrJaxparadize I do not make any changes to TH-cam or try to make you watch more adverts to make moremad-revenue. Everything is totally standard. I think different people experience different amounts of adverts, and I'm sorry you're getting one every 3 minutes?!? For your info, I'm the only channel that gives authors a share of the ad-revenue so every advert actually makes the author more money. Which I think is a good thing. If you like this story, check out "the coalition." Same author.
I just want to list the parts of this story I really enjoyed. I know you probably wont care to read them, but here they are anyways. 1. Japanese ambassador demanding total surrender or death (Lose all honor and die, or just let us kill you) 2. We aren't done with them! (Almost sounded like a child with a toy, but with the threat of force. Just felt very ironic in it's delivery) 2. Pankiformed planets (Not terraformed) 3. Pankin: Eventually they'll give us something we can leverage, right? Terrans: Have some more glass. 4. Pankin surrender was done publicly to ensure they were completely broken 5. Other ambassadors "consuming abundant Terran media" (I know it has a more varied meaning, but I immediately just imagined all the ambassadors being weebs) 6. Well thought out conditions of surrender. 7. Pankin preffer hot arid climates. -> lots of deserts -> Actual glass instead of the weird glass that dirt makes -> much more clear image of glassed planets 8. Aliens having cultures similar to their earthly counterparts 9. Pankin only being able to pay billions of their reparations despite the terms of their surrender demanding trillions 10. exponential growth of cloned populaces leading to increased risk of incestuous issues. 11. ambassador for "humanity's closest allies" being paranoid about the threat of humanity's rapid growth and overthinking a simple gift TLDR: I can't wait for the next chapter.
I actually enjoy seeing what people like and don't like about my work. :) It helps me learn more about what people want to see. This story was a lot of fun to write, though if I'm being a little self critical it lacks some depth that I usually like to throw in my work. But it might serve as the foundation for another novel in the future. Glad you liked it. :) @@arcticfox6478
OK I am not sure if it was intentional but "Nobunaga" saying, "we're not done with them", is fitting to say the least. Y'know... sengoku literally means thousand year warfare.
Im actually like how coherent the cloning process is. Normally in media clones are are nothing but things ir objects and not people per se. So the adding of the clone being raise by actually people that would be there perents is refreshingm
Aliens accusing humans as monsters while they themselves allow such monstrosities to exist 🤣🤣🤣 they suddenly forgot that they were the aggressors when their defeat was imminent.
Is it unconditional surrender xeno: no bu- death korps of krieg happy noises GRAB YOUR SHOVELS MEN WE STILL HAVE A FIGHT xeno: what the fu channel closed literally every xeno that helped them what f**kin aybss did we just let fly into the void of space also even if this storys humans werent helped into space since it sounds like 2000s since already had some space travel yeah that area and every other wouldve exploded in new tech even without external help it wouldnt even be halo level tech itd be war hammer 40k tech if anyone wonders yeah just remove radation nukes and scale there size up by 9000x what it currently is
the author probably modeled it on the capitulation of Germany in World War 2, exactly the same situation, as soon as the Germans talked about the terms of capitulation, the allied delegation left the room several times
I like it but this is not a HFY story, I would be embarrassed to be a part of this humanity. The terms really remind me of the congress pf Vienna and I would be shocked if the galaxy didn’t erupt into war again within a few decades.
tbvh this story stinks of redditor "humanity is le brutal and badasse" cringe, while it is understandable that humanity would be livid as a whole if even 1 child was killed, the idea that humans would kill civilians and children of those aliens is just idiotic, not only that but the idea that humanity would go so far as to allow these aliens who honestly were probably not involved AT ALL with the war/pirates to starve to death/war then we just steal their worlds is utterly ridiculous. we have a thing called "the Geneva convention" aka there are RULES to war and i don't think a alien invasion with aliens low-tech enough to send actual troops instead of robots or drones who caused mass destruction of capitals and shit would deserve to be STONE-AGED on a species wide level, that is a VERY thin excuse for the native american reservations but in space. its so cringe because in the context of this story humans became the villans they sought to kill, glassing entire worlds full of CIVILIAN POPULATIONS "b-but they didn't sign the genev-" does that matter? so didn't those mfs on the island who kill any mfs who come onto their isle with bows and arrows, we not only don't bomb them to shit but ALLOW them to do that, so the idea that we'd just go about burning their entire empire to the ground, killing EVERYONE and NOT build it back up better than it ever could have been out of spite is fucking goofy good narration tho
Humanity shoots first and asks questions later. Also, in spite of the geneva convention, WW1 and WW2 happened in which we, as a species, broke many of the rules of war. I would love to argue more, but I can see that you are passionate about this stance so I won't actively try to shake your foundations. Just maybe try to keep your criticism of a FICTIONAL story more... critical.
I also noticed the brutality of the terms and thought they were highly counterproductive. As for Geneva convention rules, easy enough to forget about them. Clones raising clones is unlikely to build "human" societies, maybe slaves and that is its own problem. But,,, it's not my story and I am finding it interisting. I wonder where the author will go with it.
If you haven't seen it yet, watch the 1st part here: We Thought Wrong: th-cam.com/play/PLkBGMBYRr0mEeLO_hoIkYIbk_oyNuNhsj.html
You know what? I’m unsubbing. I loved hearing these stories but getting a fckn commercial every 3 minutes… I know more about the commercials than the story! Just gonna rip it out of yt and listen to it without interruptions. Your greed made you lose 1 sub. Not much, insignificant, really, but I don’t stand alone. I’m just the only one saying it.
@MrJaxparadize I do not make any changes to TH-cam or try to make you watch more adverts to make moremad-revenue. Everything is totally standard. I think different people experience different amounts of adverts, and I'm sorry you're getting one every 3 minutes?!?
For your info, I'm the only channel that gives authors a share of the ad-revenue so every advert actually makes the author more money. Which I think is a good thing.
If you like this story, check out "the coalition." Same author.
I hope y'all enjoyed my work! :)
you the author? if so nice story! 😁
I just want to list the parts of this story I really enjoyed. I know you probably wont care to read them, but here they are anyways.
1. Japanese ambassador demanding total surrender or death (Lose all honor and die, or just let us kill you)
2. We aren't done with them! (Almost sounded like a child with a toy, but with the threat of force. Just felt very ironic in it's delivery)
2. Pankiformed planets (Not terraformed)
3. Pankin: Eventually they'll give us something we can leverage, right?
Terrans: Have some more glass.
4. Pankin surrender was done publicly to ensure they were completely broken
5. Other ambassadors "consuming abundant Terran media" (I know it has a more varied meaning, but I immediately just imagined all the ambassadors being weebs)
6. Well thought out conditions of surrender.
7. Pankin preffer hot arid climates. -> lots of deserts -> Actual glass instead of the weird glass that dirt makes -> much more clear image of glassed planets
8. Aliens having cultures similar to their earthly counterparts
9. Pankin only being able to pay billions of their reparations despite the terms of their surrender demanding trillions
10. exponential growth of cloned populaces leading to increased risk of incestuous issues.
11. ambassador for "humanity's closest allies" being paranoid about the threat of humanity's rapid growth and overthinking a simple gift
TLDR: I can't wait for the next chapter.
More please
I actually enjoy seeing what people like and don't like about my work. :) It helps me learn more about what people want to see. This story was a lot of fun to write, though if I'm being a little self critical it lacks some depth that I usually like to throw in my work.
But it might serve as the foundation for another novel in the future. Glad you liked it. :) @@arcticfox6478
Nice story 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
OK I am not sure if it was intentional but "Nobunaga" saying, "we're not done with them", is fitting to say the least. Y'know... sengoku literally means thousand year warfare.
Well then , THAT Genie is Certainly out of the Bottle .
Im actually like how coherent the cloning process is. Normally in media clones are are nothing but things ir objects and not people per se. So the adding of the clone being raise by actually people that would be there perents is refreshingm
Very enjoyable, keep up the good work. Thanks regards Mike J
Oh oh, this gotta be good
Great story!
the message.... in SCI FI form...
this is a great story, well done.
Throw yourselves upon our mercy.
Loving it!
And that’s why Star Wars has so many planets with humans on them.
Aliens accusing humans as monsters while they themselves allow such monstrosities to exist 🤣🤣🤣
they suddenly forgot that they were the aggressors when their defeat was imminent.
I enjoyed them
While a good story, this is nearly identical to Alan Dean Fosters books of the damned. There truly is nothing new under the sun anymore.
Nice story, will there be more?
Much more.
Is it unconditional surrender xeno: no bu- death korps of krieg happy noises GRAB YOUR SHOVELS MEN WE STILL HAVE A FIGHT xeno: what the fu channel closed literally every xeno that helped them what f**kin aybss did we just let fly into the void of space also even if this storys humans werent helped into space since it sounds like 2000s since already had some space travel yeah that area and every other wouldve exploded in new tech even without external help it wouldnt even be halo level tech itd be war hammer 40k tech if anyone wonders yeah just remove radation nukes and scale there size up by 9000x what it currently is
first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KILLROY WAS HERE!!!
The kelian shock when we they see how we enslaved and put a price on some of our own race just because they had a different skill color
Terrans in this galaxy are pretty much americans in our world
Can you find a complex story of a modern day alien invasion
The terms seem fair to me...
the author probably modeled it on the capitulation of Germany in World War 2, exactly the same situation, as soon as the Germans talked about the terms of capitulation, the allied delegation left the room several times
Of all the president youve choosen to put in the screen why does it resemble like Xi Xh
I forgot about germany
I like it but this is not a HFY story, I would be embarrassed to be a part of this humanity.
The terms really remind me of the congress pf Vienna and I would be shocked if the galaxy didn’t erupt into war again within a few decades.
tbvh this story stinks of redditor "humanity is le brutal and badasse" cringe, while it is understandable that humanity would be livid as a whole if even 1 child was killed, the idea that humans would kill civilians and children of those aliens is just idiotic, not only that but the idea that humanity would go so far as to allow these aliens who honestly were probably not involved AT ALL with the war/pirates to starve to death/war then we just steal their worlds is utterly ridiculous.
we have a thing called "the Geneva convention"
aka there are RULES to war and i don't think a alien invasion with aliens low-tech enough to send actual troops instead of robots or drones who caused mass destruction of capitals and shit would deserve to be STONE-AGED on a species wide level, that is a VERY thin excuse for the native american reservations but in space.
its so cringe because in the context of this story humans became the villans they sought to kill, glassing entire worlds full of CIVILIAN POPULATIONS
"b-but they didn't sign the genev-" does that matter?
so didn't those mfs on the island who kill any mfs who come onto their isle with bows and arrows, we not only don't bomb them to shit but ALLOW them to do that, so the idea that we'd just go about burning their entire empire to the ground, killing EVERYONE and NOT build it back up better than it ever could have been out of spite is fucking goofy
good narration tho
you funny....if it were ez , everyone would be writing stories
Humanity did not learned from the Versailles Treaty. Hard terms after a hard war, will come bavk to bite them in the ass later.
Humanity shoots first and asks questions later. Also, in spite of the geneva convention, WW1 and WW2 happened in which we, as a species, broke many of the rules of war. I would love to argue more, but I can see that you are passionate about this stance so I won't actively try to shake your foundations. Just maybe try to keep your criticism of a FICTIONAL story more... critical.
I also noticed the brutality of the terms and thought they were highly counterproductive. As for Geneva convention rules, easy enough to forget about them. Clones raising clones is unlikely to build "human" societies, maybe slaves and that is its own problem.
But,,, it's not my story and I am finding it interisting. I wonder where the author will go with it.
You all do know this came from a subreddit whos entire purpose basically "Humanity, Fuck yeah!.