The Captured Human | HFY | a Short Sci-Fi Story

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  • @johnking8789
    @johnking8789 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +85

    No wonder they got obliterated, they stole a Tasmanian.

  • @tobiasmoller3837
    @tobiasmoller3837 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +118

    A 12 year old obliterated alien slavers!!!

    • @johncunningham4820
      @johncunningham4820 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

      Still 11 really , but Yep .

    • @somnorila9913
      @somnorila9913 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      they were probably very small

    • @johncunningham4820
      @johncunningham4820 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

      @@somnorila9913 . Not necessarily .
      Just from a Lower Gravity Place .

    • @davelamis9773
      @davelamis9773 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      ​@@woswasdenni1914 🤔📸

    • @christopherbrown9188
      @christopherbrown9188 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Ha! They should get a kid in their terrible twos.

  • @szalkaisa69
    @szalkaisa69 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

    Ok I, as a father of 2,have to admit I cried. I can only imagine what that little girl went through in the last moments 😢

  • @notcherbane3218
    @notcherbane3218 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +38

    Damn they ran into sigourney Weaver ....

  • @FeedMeSalt
    @FeedMeSalt 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +38

    87-99 she... Was 12.
    She was fucking 12.
    And she tore that ship apart. Imagine if they had taken her father as well. Would have been a different story.

    • @ServantOfOdin
      @ServantOfOdin 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      Or an actual USMC in their prime....

  • @smokinggnu6584
    @smokinggnu6584 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +76

    What the hell are they feeding 12 year olds in the 2080s??

    • @craftysmithkeith3653
      @craftysmithkeith3653 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

      aliens were simply as strong as twigs

    • @sandrosliske
      @sandrosliske 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +18

      Vegemite on toast

    • @vanguard9067
      @vanguard9067 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @@sandrosliskeThat’s what makes them tough. Builds character:-)

    • @staticbuilds7613
      @staticbuilds7613 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +12

      Sounds like the aliens were the same size as a 12 year old. Kids are strong for their size and have far more energy than a adult

    • @oiltoast3723
      @oiltoast3723 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      Pure beef.

  • @JohnBowman-o4e
    @JohnBowman-o4e 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +39

    Very sad tale but, masterfully told. Damned decent AI voice, too. If there is more, great. If not, then I suspect that we'll see more from this stellar author.

    • @hiddendesire3076
      @hiddendesire3076 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      It isn’t an AI voice as it turns out. He’s very much human.

  • @Bigstone-xn8gg
    @Bigstone-xn8gg 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +29

    they stole an aussie

    • @TehKazlehoff
      @TehKazlehoff 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      As soon as I read that the majority of the inland area was desert I started to snicker. They stole an auzzie. That was a bad call.

    • @BurningGhosts
      @BurningGhosts 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • @Shadow.Dragon
    @Shadow.Dragon 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +46

    Great story! Aliens learn that you don't kill Humanity's children!

    • @ireallyreallyhategoogle
      @ireallyreallyhategoogle 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Not in this story.
      In this story, all aliens are appalled at what those kidnappers have done.

  • @Crazy49er
    @Crazy49er 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +17

    I remember listening to someone else read this story back in 2021... its an older one. Still good.

  • @edmondreynoldsjr.4445
    @edmondreynoldsjr.4445 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    Awesome story, wish it was longer but really hoping for a second chapter.

  • @Enderwave22
    @Enderwave22 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Indomitable survival instincts at its finest.

  • @hibiscus779
    @hibiscus779 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +17

    yeah this is the best AI voice - so how do the aliens know 1. how to sedate a human 2. that she was female

    • @Echowhiskeyone
      @Echowhiskeyone 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      Makes you wonder how many times this happened before.

    • @rndmukn
      @rndmukn 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      In the beginning, they said they had received intel from other aliens about humans.

    • @ServantOfOdin
      @ServantOfOdin 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      2: Observation of media.
      1: Either trial from previous captures, or they went with something that should work due to similar biology. Remember the worry of the captain due to the unusual length of her unconsciousness.

  • @LaculusA.Lassus-bj7iw
    @LaculusA.Lassus-bj7iw 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    That's not fair, this video actually made me cry

  • @gvuedgjnfri
    @gvuedgjnfri 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    18:40 good story but there's one major plot hole / inconsistency. The only way that aliens, close to the same size as a human, would be so much weaker than a 12-year-old girl would be if the gravity on their planet was vastly lower than it is on Earth. But if that was the case, they would have barely been able to walk once they landed on the planet much less run back to their ship carrying a being with much higher muscle and bone density many times their own by several factors, on a planet that has already increased their own body weight by many times what they are used to.

  • @SageofStars
    @SageofStars 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +23

    Now wasn't that a great intro to this author? Shows a lot of forethought, having those pirates gun this woman down in their ignorance, but then having the whole thing turn on tis head as we see the results are less than ideal in any way. Revenge isn't justice, after all, and it wasn't the whole of their species who did the crime, merely the outlaws and reprobates. Are we to judge one guilty, and assign that sin to the whole of their race?
    But it also shows that there are those for whom that question is answered yes, that sometimes, it takes a lot to forgive, and they want it known that their forgiveness does not come easily, to them, nor is it earned with small gestures and token platitudes.
    A good, well paced, well reasoned tale.

    • @SpitfiretheCat16
      @SpitfiretheCat16 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

      She wasn't a woman, she was a little girl.

  • @DasHeino2010
    @DasHeino2010 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Love this capture stuff!

  • @lvluptoaverage52
    @lvluptoaverage52 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    That explains the fear of humanity and why they really needed an alone human. 12 year old girl f them up

  • @jefferywise1906
    @jefferywise1906 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    So one basically pirate vessel kidnapped and killed one person. Horrible and tragic yes, but would that destroy an entire people and their peaceful history? I very much doubt that….
    One bad apple 🍎?

  • @jeffjames4064
    @jeffjames4064 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +12

    Well done 👍. Looking forward to more. Now if I can find out who's the author.

    • @sandrosliske
      @sandrosliske 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      u/Tashdacat

  • @delmccormack7001
    @delmccormack7001 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Very well written. Very well written.

  • @RobertMattison-w4p
    @RobertMattison-w4p 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I like your story, found it well thought out and interesting.

  • @anonygent
    @anonygent 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    Should have switched to a different voice for the second part.

    • @julesmasseffectmusic
      @julesmasseffectmusic 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Its apparently a real bloke. He speaks like this normally too apparently.

  • @henrymcbark7337
    @henrymcbark7337 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    So, How did she break down the ships door to the pilots deck?
    And I know she had a pipe but this seemed to give the human more strength then i was expecting.
    Edit: BRO SHE WAS 12!! And did that much damage? Like i get that her father seemed military but what the devil kind of race can't stand against a 12 year old girl with a metal poll

    • @Mark_Agamotto1313_Smith
      @Mark_Agamotto1313_Smith 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      Very low grav worlders. The bulkheads were likely as thin as necessary to maintain pressure to lighten the craft.

    • @henrymcbark7337
      @henrymcbark7337 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      ​@@Mark_Agamotto1313_Smith Even if that is the case, a 12 year old girl took out like a larger portion of the crew... was bleeding and injured. Broke down the bulk head after Being shot through the bulkhead. And then processed to still have the energy to run to glass and jump around waving still full of energy like the 12 year old girl was a 28 year old women whose gone through physical training to endure that amount of pain.

    • @lostShadowLord
      @lostShadowLord 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I stories like this it's usually:
      1)Earth is a usually high gravity world (usually to the point that any higher and it would impossible to generate enough trush to leave orbit)
      2) Humans are either deathworlders, which means they're far stronger than 'universal' standards, and unlike more deathworlders, Humans are intelligent and therefore can outsmart you. (or their Hellworlder which worst form the alien POV
      3) both
      4) Alien materials are not designed to contain an intelligent deathworlder.
      It just HFY stories/ humans are space Orks.
      Although I believe the high Gravity thing might be Theorically true.

    • @seanthiar
      @seanthiar 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Ever tried to contain a frightened person ? Even a toddler? It's a known fact that people who panic can do things that they couldn't do in a normal state. And kids are strong compared to their size, especially females in puberty. And how the story was told she was the same size as those aliens. When I was in school with 12yo I had a girl in my class who was a head taller than the rest in my class and nearly as tall as the teacher and she was strong. BTW size doesn't really tell how strong someone is. A chimp has enough strength to kill an adult person and it's smaller than a 12 year old. And we don't know the how the air and gravity is for the aliens. If they have more oxygen in the air and less gravity, she would have much more strength in comparison and more energy.

    • @ultimaterecoil1136
      @ultimaterecoil1136 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Hysterical strength and light and flimsy materials. People have been reported to be able to lift cars off loved ones at their most stressed. A child Busting down a door is well child’s play in comparison

  • @Gundamortal
    @Gundamortal 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    😮‍💨 In none of the stories, Earth doesn't get hit by an FTL asteroid, or the sun gets blown up or someone shines a Saturn size mirror at Earth Before humans get FTL. 😮‍💨

  • @arnandias8742
    @arnandias8742 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    You made a ship out of cardboard or something.
    How the doors break so easily

    • @seanthiar
      @seanthiar 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

      Weight and cost. The entrance door to your home is different in material, thickness and weight compared to a simple room door. Just think of the first commercial airplanes where the pilots were separated by a curtain and only a after the terrorist kidnappings they started to use such sturdy doors that a kidnapper can't enter the pilots cabin with kicking it. Before that it was simple thin door to block the view.
      It's the same with European walls and USA walls - It happens so often in movies that I see someone shooting thru walls or punching a hole in it. Try that in Europe - you will hurt your hand when you punch the wall and shooting in a normal home would just chip the stone.

    • @rinconusmc
      @rinconusmc 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      ​@seanthiar also gravity needs to be considered. One accustomed to high gravity will be stronger than those who are accustomed to lower gravity.

  • @rileycassel6931
    @rileycassel6931 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    As someone in a different story said, "They done fucked up!"

  • @whotookmytoast6418
    @whotookmytoast6418 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    They discovered the indomitable human spirit

  • @voutsider190
    @voutsider190 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Damn... Very good

  • @darkestwilightt
    @darkestwilightt 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Not gonna lie this made me tear up a little

  • @denisemcdougal6445
    @denisemcdougal6445 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Good story, very sad

  • @menhyras
    @menhyras 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Story is overdramatic, but it could be worse. But voice acting is good.

  • @xanderortega4359
    @xanderortega4359 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Why did they pick australia then

  • @danielleriley2796
    @danielleriley2796 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    A 12 year old girl pre pubescent took apart a ship of guy aliens….

  • @damirserbanovic
    @damirserbanovic 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    great story

  • @JonAngell98
    @JonAngell98 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I'm getting to be a big HFY fan but some of them do push it a bit lol 😂

  • @DataStorm1
    @DataStorm1 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Hmm, she was only 11, almost 12...

  • @richardstone5552
    @richardstone5552 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    😢nice

  • @martyschrader
    @martyschrader 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    A twelve-year-old girl crushed the hardened crew of a smuggler vessel. Imagine what would have happened if the Televan had failed to negotiate a peaceful resolution with Terra and the respective militaries became involved. No wonder they were eager to make peace. Just sayin'.

  • @peterb9038
    @peterb9038 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    Interesting story, very much a fantasy, as we all know what would really happen. THey would be offered more girls which they can pick up from an exclusive island in exchange for the tech they have,

    • @reaseancavana994
      @reaseancavana994 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Epstein galactic enterprises.

  • @StevenHaze
    @StevenHaze 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I know Australians are strong and will die protecting their freedom but this is a little ridiculous! A 12 year old girl that can rip apart internal doors of a inter planetary space ship?

    • @julesmasseffectmusic
      @julesmasseffectmusic 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Internal, is the key word my dude,
      Thin as possible so less mass, less fuel, less inertia, also 9.8ms gravity gives us an escape velocity we have to train to deal with.
      We are gunna be hell a strong compared to many aliens. Our ape cousins are gunna be monsters to aliens.

    • @StevenHaze
      @StevenHaze 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@julesmasseffectmusic My point is they must be Japanese paper doors, my Australian internal doors are timber!

    • @Terran.Marine.2
      @Terran.Marine.2 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      The doors inside my house are hollow, and quite light.

    • @StevenHaze
      @StevenHaze 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@Terran.Marine.2 Still can a 12 year old girl rip them down with her bare hands?

  • @Grigorgale
    @Grigorgale 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Can We get this AI to Read some Warhammer 40k books they never maid audio books for

  • @Sarah-gw3ng
    @Sarah-gw3ng 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Reminds me of Universe Inside You, Interview With Reptilian Female Lacerta.

  • @AnIdiotFromGermany
    @AnIdiotFromGermany 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    What if they captured a 12 boy 💀
    They would've wish they never discovered earth

  • @Exile-exe
    @Exile-exe 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    What’s the interior of that ship made of? Tinfoil?

  • @KarterBigs
    @KarterBigs 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hey Jonothan do you plan to open up channel memberships? I would definitely join!

  • @lokken23
    @lokken23 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Shut up im not crying, you’re crying.

  • @johnnyrotten3175
    @johnnyrotten3175 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    👏👏👏👏👏

  • @rodlepine233
    @rodlepine233 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    he is in a Guild and Mando Broke Guild Rules

  • @davidturner4824
    @davidturner4824 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Very sad story.

  • @bymenz1388
    @bymenz1388 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Earth is a god world..

  • @MRsolidcolor
    @MRsolidcolor 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    all these story seem to avoid USA and always end up on aussie
    they got messed up by a 12 year old.

  • @MrJaxparadize
    @MrJaxparadize 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    😢😢😢😢

  • @joeuy4819
    @joeuy4819 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    They kidnapped an Amazon woman,😂