This is a great story. If any budding authors out there would like to extend this story by a part 2 or 3 or more, then please get in touch with me as I think it could give a budding author a great opportunity to get some visibility and their name out there. You can contact me on Reddit under the username u/SciFiStories1977 This was exactly how "The Black Ship" was extended and that has been a fantastic continuation. Please forward this story to a friend who might be interested. I'd love to hear from you.
@@Nakorli I've watched (listened to) a few with Amia, but don't really remember their titles. The most recent one i think is one where an Amia zoologist joins the humans on an expedition to a planet sized Australia or something
Yeah... I knew that they fucked up when the assault tech "pressed some strange buttons" and "something came online"....you just don't press strange buttons.
Great Story . A stand alone I would think . After Exfil I imagine the the Mothership eradicated the Interlopers , unless they had IMMEDIATELY De-Camped .
Forcefully penetrating an unknown ship, then again forcefully penetrating to kidnap an alien you don't even know if dead or alive? That's just asking for trouble. At least have some tact and delicacy, for flarks sakes.
@@mugenokami2201 No. a fancy Minigun shaped weapon, mounted on the forearm of tactical dreadnought armor that fire a FUCKU rate of fire of said 'bolters' (0.75 cal)
you're right! I've pinned a comment to this video asking if anyone would like to do exactly that. That's what happened with "The Black Ship" so maybe someone will come forward and continue the story.
I wrote on one of the humans are space orc reddits two very short stories about non terrans trying to reconcile the conflicting ideas of no man left behind and the willing sacrifice (beau geste). The idea that you bring back your comrades no matter what in one story. In the other, one person stays behind willingly to ensure the safety of others. these were about 5 lines apiece.
This is a great story. If any budding authors out there would like to extend this story by a part 2 or 3 or more, then please get in touch with me as I think it could give a budding author a great opportunity to get some visibility and their name out there. You can contact me on Reddit under the username u/SciFiStories1977
This was exactly how "The Black Ship" was extended and that has been a fantastic continuation.
Please forward this story to a friend who might be interested. I'd love to hear from you.
i actually might
Is there a continuation of The Black Ship? Or any similar stories. T'is one of my favourites
good story and i look forward to more
If the Black Ship was a continuation what was the 1st please
@@timiiewhiteI think he means the black ship was just 1 or 2 parts but was extended to its current lengtg
Seems kind of foolish to blow a hole in the side of someones ship, then hope they are friendly.
If they had implemented a seal after departure we probably wouldnt be that mad! ^^
These jokers are at about the same level as the Stat'Staans from another story.
Lol, yeah @@LeongGunners
Edit: I found two stories from that universe so far, both consistent with the Amia alien race.
You know of more?
@@Anon_Omis Just now discovered the playlist. Watching it right now xD. There’s a new video from the universe out today 🎉
@@Nakorli I've watched (listened to) a few with Amia, but don't really remember their titles. The most recent one i think is one where an Amia zoologist joins the humans on an expedition to a planet sized Australia or something
everyone's gangsta till the terminator space marine squad shows up
In the Emperor's name,let none survive! 😂
Yeah... I knew that they fucked up when the assault tech "pressed some strange buttons" and "something came online"....you just don't press strange buttons.
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"Not one left behind!" Yea that seems like something the Remnant of our species would chant if our homeworld was murderedraped by aliens.
Great story! Never blast holes in an unknown ship. You and your Government may regret that decision...especially if it is a Terran ship! 🙂
And IF you do that do NOT abduct anyone onboard the vessel.
The gunner on the ship after they blew a hole in the other ship:
“Whoops”
First contact protocol involve blasting holes in the hull? I'm glad they aren't at war.
More like a salvage operation on a ship belonging to an unknown dead civilisation...
Brilliant last line. I'm enjoying these stories. So nice to see sci-fi stories where the 'human' aren't the weakest slowest race.
Great Story . A stand alone I would think . After Exfil I imagine the the Mothership eradicated the Interlopers , unless they had IMMEDIATELY De-Camped .
english do you speak it
@@snache1330 . Yes . I do .
What about You ?
Humanity: "LEAVE NO DWARF BEHIND!" oT
Good story! I really like this universe and agree there could be a lot to expand upon. Great job!
Well they basically kidnapped a human and blew a hole in their ship, what did they expect will happen.
we sure do love our ships.
How many brilliant minds have you got behind this Channel? Newly found but Deffinity is a permanent sub
Just me... but I love the stories so i love to do it.
@@scifistories1977- Care to share any details on where you get the voice from?
@Erin-Thor check-out elevenlabs. And, you might be interested to know that I'm in the process of setting up a sister channel using a real human voice.
Forcefully penetrating an unknown ship, then again forcefully penetrating to kidnap an alien you don't even know if dead or alive?
That's just asking for trouble. At least have some tact and delicacy, for flarks sakes.
The minigunner 😂
Assault cannon, firing 0.998 caliber sized, rocket propelled, Armor penetrating, explosive rounds.
@@MacKnighta fancy proto boltor?
@@mugenokami2201 No. a fancy Minigun shaped weapon, mounted on the forearm of tactical dreadnought armor that fire a FUCKU rate of fire of said 'bolters' (0.75 cal)
17:29
Fallout
Exploding minigun
This is begging for a part 2, 3, 4, and more.
you're right! I've pinned a comment to this video asking if anyone would like to do exactly that. That's what happened with "The Black Ship" so maybe someone will come forward and continue the story.
Yes
@scifistories1977 Yes. Please do 2 through 980.
I wrote on one of the humans are space orc reddits two very short stories about non terrans trying to reconcile the conflicting ideas of no man left behind and the willing sacrifice (beau geste). The idea that you bring back your comrades no matter what in one story. In the other, one person stays behind willingly to ensure the safety of others. these were about 5 lines apiece.
This i your best reader. Story was good too. Well done.
While normally a meme regarding the USA, I still feel it fits here. Don't mess with Terrain boats.
Finally, a spot where humans actually win.
Mastercheif entered the chat.
I very much like this short sfyi story.
Looking forward to part two
Great story is this part of a story line?
Intersting story, really nicely done.
Though I am confused, they say the ship was around the second planet? Venus?
I do hope this at least gets a few follow up chapters
HE round Minigun? what gun they use? GAU-8?
Great story, but please use captions with punctuation, we need to keep up literacy levels!
ythc seems to be uncertain on the pronunciation of the name :D
I agree, if done right this has the makings of a fantastic series 💯🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Another great story!!!
This is a great story, any chance for a part 2?
Great story.
Interesting
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Good story
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