Cara Menulis Essay Beasiswa LPDP 2023 | Waitatiri, Harvard Graduate School of Education

Sesi Pengantar Workshop Essay Studentnesia Spesial Beasiswa LPDP 2023
Pembicara Waitatiri
Mahasiswa Indonesia di Harvard University
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Ikuti program Studentnesia Mentorship program persiapan mendaftar beasiswa.
1. Mentoring Studentnesia One-on-One
- Paket Menulis Essay
- Paket Persiapan Interview
- Paket Full (Dokumen, Essay, Interview)
2. Review Essay
- Proofread Essay Beasiswa
- Proofread Essay Kampus Tujuan
3. Translate Dokumen
- Terjemah Tersumpah
- Legalisasi Notaris
- Apostille
4. Studentnesia Scholarship Centre
- Konsultasi Kuliah S2
Untuk info lengkap bisa menghubungi kami via
Admin WA (Tata):
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Website:
www.studentnesia.org

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🎯 Key Takeaways for quick navigation:
00:02 🎤 *Introduction and Workshop Overview*
- Introduction to the session on essay writing for scholarship applications, highlighting its importance for those preparing to apply.
- Welcome and introduction of speakers.
- Invitation for participants to introduce themselves in the chat.
01:40 📝 *Essay Writing Workshop Details*
- Explanation of the session's focus on essay writing for scholarship applications.
- Overview of the upcoming segments, including a presentation on essay writing experiences and a Q&A session.
03:44 🌍 *Participant Introductions and Diversity*
- Acknowledgment of the wide geographical distribution of participants, emphasizing the power of social media in bringing people together for educational opportunities.
04:29 🏆 *Speaker Introduction and Background*
- Introduction of the speaker's background, educational journey, and professional experience.
- Discussion on the importance of education and personal growth through diverse experiences.
06:35 📘 *Overview of Scholarship Application Process*
- Detailed walkthrough of the scholarship application process, emphasizing the critical role of the essay in the selection process.
- Insights into the speaker's personal experience with the scholarship application, highlighting the importance of aligning one's goals with the essay's content.
09:07 💡 *Finding Your Contribution Idea*
- Strategies for identifying a meaningful contribution theme for the scholarship essay.
- Encouragement to reflect on personal passions, goals, and the desire to effect positive change as the foundation for the essay's content.
12:07 🎯 *Setting Goals and Identifying Passions*
- Guidance on how to define clear goals and passions that can drivethe content of the scholarship essay.
- Tips for connecting personal objectives with broader social or environmental issues, emphasizing the importance of authenticity in the essay.
17:09 🤔 *Identifying Personal Goals and Observations*
- Insights on how personal observations and concerns can shape educational goals and contributions.
- Examples of deriving goals from education, work experience, volunteering, and personal background.
- Emphasis on the importance of goals being closely related to personal experiences and the desire to address specific issues in Indonesia.
18:33 🌱 *Impact and Contribution*
- Discussion on the dual nature of impact: internal (personal growth) and external (contributions to society).
- Encouragement to consider both personal and societal benefits when planning educational and career goals.
- Highlighting that contributions do not need to be nationwide but should be significant to Indonesian communities.
22:09 ✍️ *Essay Structure and Writing Tips*
- Detailed breakdown of a successful essay structure for scholarship applications, including introduction (hook), background, study motivation, and choice of institution.
- Strategies for making the essay engaging and reflective of personal aspirations and potential contributions.
- Emphasis on authenticity and relevance in discussing personal background and achievements in relation to study goals.
29:08 🎯 *Personal Background and Motivation for Study*
- Explanation of how to integrate personal background and professional experiences into the essay to support study motivations and goals.
- Suggestions for highlighting relevant experiences, family background, and personal challenges to underscore the applicant's commitment and relevance of their goals.
32:50 🎯 *Goal Setting Strategy*
- Discussion on setting achievable short, medium, and long-term goals post-study.
- Short-term goals should be immediately actionable and not overly ambitious to appear realistic.
35:25 🌟 *Importance of Connectivity in Goals*
- Emphasis on the connection between short, medium, and long-term goals.
- Goals should be related but not necessarily linear, allowing for flexibility in their achievement and relevance to Indonesia.
38:04 🔄 *Goal Flexibility and Uniqueness*
- Clarification that goals do not need to be grandiose or unique to be valuable.
- The importance of goals being related to Indonesia and the allowance for goals to evolve based on new experiences and insights.
40:07 🎓 *Selecting Study Programs and Institutions*
- How to align program selection with personal goals and demonstrate serious commitment through research on specific courses and faculty.
- Importance of showing detailed interest in the chosen program to prove dedication and the significance of education beyond obtaining a degree.
44:26 🔄 *Feedback and Revision Process*
- Encouragement to seek, accept, and thoughtfully consider feedback from others.
- Importance of being open to criticism without being defensive, and the ability to discern which feedback to incorporate into revisions for improvement.
48:48 🔄 *Self-awareness in Feedback Selection*
- Emphasizing the importance of being selective with feedback to ensure it aligns with personal conviction and goals.
- Acknowledgment that while feedback is crucial, the final decision on essay content rests with the individual.
49:59 ⏳ *Focus on Controllable Elements*
- Advice on focusing efforts on aspects within one's control, such as time management and preparation.
- The significance of dedicating time and effort to the application process, including revision and practice for tests and interviews.
55:31 📝 *Essay Writing Specifics*
- Discussion on the approach to including data in essays, recommending restraint to avoid excessive word count usage.
- Highlighting the importance of using data to strengthen arguments without overwhelming the narrative or detracting from the essay's personal elements.
01:03:26 🌟 *Importance of Personal Branding and English Proficiency*
- Debate on prioritizing English proficiency over personal branding in the scholarship application process.
- Acknowledgment that while building a personal brand is beneficial, meeting the essential requirements, such as language proficiency, should be the initial focus.
01:05:39 🎓 *Prioritizing Essential Requirements*
- Emphasis on focusing on essential requirements such as language proficiency before building personal branding.
- Advice on utilizing time between application submission and selection process for personal development and branding.
01:06:24 🤔 *Choosing Multiple Study Programs*
- Guidance on selecting and justifying three different study programs in an application.
- Importance of ensuring all chosen programs are aligned with personal goals and adequately explained, avoiding the appearance of backup options.
01:09:06 🚀 *Transitioning Between Different Fields*
- Discussion on the feasibility and strategy of transitioning from one field of study or work to another for higher education.
- Highlighting the importance of framing the transition in the application essay to show relevance and commitment to the new field.
01:16:49 🌱 *Developing Skills and Experiences*
- Suggestions for undergraduate students to prepare for postgraduate studies, focusing on participation in organizations, publication, and building relationships with faculty for strong recommendations.
- Encouragement for engagement in activities that showcase leadership and teamwork skills, and the pursuit of relevant certifications or courses.
01:23:10 ✍️ *Writing a Strong Essay Without Direct Experience*
- Tips for writing a compelling essay focused on future goals rather than past experiences.
- Advice on how to demonstrate knowledge and commitment to a field through a well-articulated vision and goal setting, compensating for lack of direct experience.
01:24:52 🎯 *Maximizing Focus on Goals in Essays*
- Advice on focusing the essay on goals rather than limited experiences to bolster the application.
- Emphasis on the importance of clearly defined goals to compensate for any perceived lack of relevant experience.
01:25:44 🤝 *Selecting Feedback Providers*
- Guidance on choosing individuals for essay feedback, suggesting either close trusted individuals or professional mentors.
- Highlighting the balance between personal confidence and openness to feedback.
01:28:45 📚 *Application Process Insights*
- Clarification on the LPDP scholarship application requirements and suggestions for frequent website consultation for updates.
- Advice on how to demonstrate commitment and knowledge through direct engagementwith prospective faculty.
01:32:23 🚀 *Incorporating Career Aspirations into Essays*
- Discussion on how aspirations like becoming a civil servant in a field related to the essay topic can be integrated as medium or long-term goals.
- Stresses the validity of including such career goals as part of the contribution to the country.
01:34:13 🌟 *Closing Statements and Encouragement*
- Final thoughts emphasize the importance of staying focused on one's goals and not fearing rejection or failure.
- Encouragement to view the scholarship and educational journey as a means to an end, not the end itself.
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[@fatimatuzzahra7686]

Halo Kak Wai dan Studentnesia, terima kasih ya, materinya sudah turut membantu aku untuk lolos LPDP

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padat banget isinya, not even a second ever wasted, thank you so much for sharing, kak!

[@Studentnesia]

Semoga bermanfaat ya kak

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wah terimakasih kak wei dan tim studentnesia, jadi dapat banyak insight ❤

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terima kasih, semoga sukses untuk semuana

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Pembahasa esai dimulai dari 10:05

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terima kasih kak

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Terima kasih informasinya kak

[@maluunn]

terimakasih banyak Kak Wai dan Studentnesia untuk sharing2 nyaa!! alhamdulillah jadi tercerahkan bangeett

[@Studentnesia]

Yey, semoga lancar untuk persiapannya ya kak :D

[@clarisajesika5675]

Keren bgt pengampaiannya, on point dan membuka insight!! Thank you kaaa

[@Studentnesia]

Semoga bermanfaat ya kak

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kalau ada info beasiswa lain mohon info juga kawan2 yang lagi cari beasiswa

[@achmadhanifmardinsyah5825]

8 jam lagi ges ditutup

[@i.ekasumiyanti4465]

aku hadir di seminar ini sebelumnya, tpi dibagian essay yg menjelaskan tentang alasan memilih kampus dan jurusan nya gaada ya?

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Ada kaa

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dalam essay boleh tidak mencantumkan foto/dokumentasi pendukung?