Incase you want the lyrics (I don’t enunciate well when I sing) We both grew up in the church But you turned out differently than I did Reverent and faithful the lord While I’m some of those things It doesn’t feel enough, when I’m compared to you I don’t belong in your world Where you wear church attire and read scriptures every night No I’m not the girl for you, with my sailors mouth and pride I can’t let go of I’ll never belong to you Good Mormon boy, you dedicate your time to a god I’m not sure is mine anymore You sit behind me in church, with your picture perfect family Who intimidate me every Sunday Because I don’t think they’d approve of how my parents raised me I’m not made for you, I don’t belong in your world With your hymns and words of prophets I’m not the girl for you with my arrogance and bad habits No I don’t belong to your world No I don’t fit it In don’t belong at all Maybe I am a lost sheep And you’re here to save me From the pits of hell, some claim to believe I’m so tired of this faith, but you make me wanna stay Why do I wanna stay? Why do I wanna stay for you? I’m not made for you I don’t belong I don’t fit in, I never did But I wish I did I wish I was the girl for you For you
You have a beautiful heart and soul. You are passionate. You have something to sing to us....to tell us. Let us hear your voice. Its beautiful and you are keeping it all to yourself. I'm a professional singer...I finally let go of trying to be perfect and actually became quite a good one.. I see good things in the future for you. You know you love this....just try to not be so shy about it. It's who you are.❤ BTW I LOVE your LYRICs...Now that I'm seeing them. You are certainly gifted.💫
Ahhh thank you so much! I’m definitely working on trying to project my voice better, my singing teacher is helping me learn how to so I hope to improve in the future! But thank you again for your words, they mean a lot! 🤍
I have no idea how this appeared in my recommendations. I'm grateful tho, it's nice to see someone sharing their passion. However its sounds you inspired me to focus on my passions today and I needed it, thanks! There is a lot of potential in you, keep up good work and you will only get better! :)
Well done, it was very good for a first song! I love the emotion you put into it, I advise practicing your craft more bc I think with enough practice you can go a long way! But very good effort, keep it up!
Your song somehow reached me overseas (Belgium) and all I want to say is thank you for sharing because I really enjoyed it keep on (I know noting about this exact subject but if it is anywhere like chrisianism here or even other types of faith I think I understood and besides your voice and writing I can feel your wish to be the best version of yourself is honest)
omg. you are acutally insane. keep it up! ive seen a couple of comments about this already but i think you are perfect in higher ranges and you should focus on that if you decide to make a new song. but from the bottom of my heart, i dont usually comment but this deserves one. good jobb!!
I'm older and bit deaf so I could hear none of the lyrics. Glad you printed them, great lyrics, you can clearly sing so as they say 'sing it like you want those in the back to hear':)
@@londonplatt Lots of times in songs the lyrics are unintelligible, but unlike most of us you can clearly sing, so hearing the 'vocal instrument' is the main thing, but also just emoting the song even if the words can't be understood. Singing is all about confidence, which is hard in a world of critics, but you sound like a 'natural singer' so belt it out:)
I'll be the critisism you don't want :) The song is good, but your singing needs more practice. Judging from your other videos, you're better in the higher ranges :)
You should record this and get it mixed because the lyrics are actually deep and unexpected tbh since i know you've done all this on a phone i would love to mix this particular song for free if you can somehow record it properly you can connect with me, anyways the lost sheep doesn't need help some are not made to be a part of herd 🤍 cuz they are unique in their own beautiful way, more power to you🫵🏼
Thank you so much! Maybe i can attempt to record it on my mic or something for better quality. But for now just don’t have the greatest resources haha. but thank you again!
Incase you want the lyrics (I don’t enunciate well when I sing)
We both grew up in the church
But you turned out differently than I did
Reverent and faithful the lord
While I’m some of those things
It doesn’t feel enough, when I’m compared to you
I don’t belong in your world
Where you wear church attire and read scriptures every night
No I’m not the girl for you, with my sailors mouth and pride I can’t let go of
I’ll never belong to you
Good Mormon boy, you dedicate your time to a god I’m not sure is mine anymore
You sit behind me in church, with your picture perfect family
Who intimidate me every Sunday
Because I don’t think they’d approve of how my parents raised me
I’m not made for you, I don’t belong in your world
With your hymns and words of prophets
I’m not the girl for you
with my arrogance and bad habits
No I don’t belong to your world
No I don’t fit it
In don’t belong at all
Maybe I am a lost sheep
And you’re here to save me
From the pits of hell, some claim to believe
I’m so tired of this faith, but you make me wanna stay
Why do I wanna stay?
Why do I wanna stay for you?
I’m not made for you
I don’t belong
I don’t fit in, I never did
But I wish I did
I wish I was the girl for you
For you
Oh damn the lyrics were not what I expected, considering how your "didn't put your heart it it too much" the song is still very deep.
Well done
Hey thanks gangsta
You have a beautiful heart and soul. You are passionate. You have something to sing to us....to tell us. Let us hear your voice. Its beautiful and you are keeping it all to yourself. I'm a professional singer...I finally let go of trying to be perfect and actually became quite a good one.. I see good things in the future for you. You know you love this....just try to not be so shy about it. It's who you are.❤ BTW I LOVE your LYRICs...Now that I'm seeing them. You are certainly gifted.💫
Ahhh thank you so much! I’m definitely working on trying to project my voice better, my singing teacher is helping me learn how to so I hope to improve in the future! But thank you again for your words, they mean a lot! 🤍
This is beautiful I love it you sing so heavenly 💛
I have no idea how this appeared in my recommendations. I'm grateful tho, it's nice to see someone sharing their passion. However its sounds you inspired me to focus on my passions today and I needed it, thanks! There is a lot of potential in you, keep up good work and you will only get better! :)
Ahhh thank you!!! Def focus on your passions! 🤍
Well done, it was very good for a first song! I love the emotion you put into it, I advise practicing your craft more bc I think with enough practice you can go a long way! But very good effort, keep it up!
❤ you just gonna get better and better as your confidence grows 😊
Your song somehow reached me overseas (Belgium) and all I want to say is thank you for sharing because I really enjoyed it keep on
(I know noting about this exact subject but if it is anywhere like chrisianism here or even other types of faith I think I understood and besides your voice and writing I can feel your wish to be the best version of yourself is honest)
omg. you are acutally insane. keep it up! ive seen a couple of comments about this already but i think you are perfect in higher ranges and you should focus on that if you decide to make a new song. but from the bottom of my heart, i dont usually comment but this deserves one. good jobb!!
Ahhh thank you so much!! I’ll definitely try and work on them higher ranges. This means a lot to me, thank you again.
@@londonplatt yeah! npp of course ur amazing so i kinda have to 😭
I'm older and bit deaf so I could hear none of the lyrics. Glad you printed them, great lyrics, you can clearly sing so as they say 'sing it like you want those in the back to hear':)
Thank you so much! Hopefully next time I can sing louder in hopes you can hear the lyrics :)
@@londonplatt Lots of times in songs the lyrics are unintelligible, but unlike most of us you can clearly sing, so hearing the 'vocal instrument' is the main thing, but also just emoting the song even if the words can't be understood. Singing is all about confidence, which is hard in a world of critics, but you sound like a 'natural singer' so belt it out:)
Londy this is amazing you’re so talented omg
Ahhh thank you 😖😖😖
loved it!
I love this song and I love you ❤❤
Ahh thank you! I love you too! 🤍
bro go america got talent you will win
I’ll be sure to make up a sob story too
@@londonplatt no, go and if you didnt want to its fine
Early on a video
Not a bad song
I'll be the critisism you don't want :)
The song is good, but your singing needs more practice. Judging from your other videos, you're better in the higher ranges :)
I will keep note of this, thank you so much!
You should record this and get it mixed because the lyrics are actually deep and unexpected tbh since i know you've done all this on a phone i would love to mix this particular song for free if you can somehow record it properly you can connect with me, anyways the lost sheep doesn't need help some are not made to be a part of herd 🤍 cuz they are unique in their own beautiful way, more power to you🫵🏼
Thank you so much! Maybe i can attempt to record it on my mic or something for better quality. But for now just don’t have the greatest resources haha. but thank you again!
Welldone