“To father her orphan child” I don’t think the writer if this title understands how wrong it is. How can he “father” a child that has already been conceived and born? He can most definitely become a father to the child, by filling in that role and even through adoption, but he can never “father” the young child, for the reasons I have already stated above.
@scifiaudiostory It Must be Nice for Zara Being That She is Perhaps the Only Person who Is Rarely Allowed to Even Get as Close to this Guy as She Does Who She Serves No One Ever Gets To Touch Him and Not be Scolded For it Yet He Trusts Zara Enough to Allow Her to Do So
Editing seems typically nonexistent. Bomb for Balm, the missing Orphan child, just to mention a few, at least the pronouns are used correctly. Still a good story, not hung out with a sequel that will never come for the rest of the story. Have fun
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Not an alien widow in sight. However, this was a very good, if a little drawn out, tale about the need to be free.
“To father her orphan child”
I don’t think the writer if this title understands how wrong it is. How can he “father” a child that has already been conceived and born?
He can most definitely become a father to the child, by filling in that role and even through adoption, but he can never “father” the young child, for the reasons I have already stated above.
Actually, when I wrote this title, I meant that he was going to be his stepfather, sir :))
@@scifiaudiostory Lol. Oops, an honest mistake!
But I changed the title, thanks for warning me
@@scifiaudiostory Well done! Thanks. Now I can resume with my life again. Lol
@scifiaudiostory It Must be Nice for Zara Being That She is Perhaps the Only Person who Is Rarely Allowed to Even Get as Close to this Guy as She Does Who She Serves No One Ever Gets To Touch Him and Not be Scolded For it Yet He Trusts Zara Enough to Allow Her to Do So
You do know that a person's title and their name are pronounced title name not like Mrs . . . Fairfax. Other than that it's a good... Story.
Editing seems typically nonexistent. Bomb for Balm, the missing Orphan child, just to mention a few, at least the pronouns are used correctly. Still a good story, not hung out with a sequel that will never come for the rest of the story. Have fun