He plays the full animation at 26:12. I'm also very interested in the rig, I've looked around for it but haven't found anything. Great notes! Great animation. Great series. Much props.
it won't be better if he puts the fireworks in the table with an arc action? (taking the fireworks, up in the air on the travel, and then placed on the table. making some kind of accent on this action)
The eye lines really bother me in this shot. Both characters have crossed eyes, and the principle is looking over the boys left shoulder when he talks. No eye contact. But overall, it's very nice.
He plays the full animation at 26:12.
I'm also very interested in the rig, I've looked around for it but haven't found anything.
Great notes! Great animation. Great series. Much props.
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how do you get into these critique?! is there a link to this contest?
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nice.
This guy knowwwsss! :D
Nice critique Jay, respect.
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the critique seems good, but please play the animation in full before the frame by frame breakdown. Its impossible to understand otherwise.
enjoyed it :)
it won't be better if he puts the fireworks in the table with an arc action? (taking the fireworks, up in the air on the travel, and then placed on the table. making some kind of accent on this action)
The eye lines really bother me in this shot. Both characters have crossed eyes, and the principle is looking over the boys left shoulder when he talks. No eye contact. But overall, it's very nice.