Almost DNF this series because of the gaping plot holes, holes in logic, contradictions to its own lore and lack of explanation towards said lore. It got to a point where it felt lazily written. Just finished the book and the ending felt rushed in I can't say that I'm surprised. I bet there will be some part two split off like a Harry Potter or hunger Games movie to get more money. I tried to get with the hype and genuinely get into it but I just feel like other authors do this so much better. My intelligence as a reader felt insulted off and on and in my humble opinion violet soaringale is one of the worst characters and protagonist to ever lead a book. Honorable mention - Dain wasn't that bad 😂
Omg I hated Dain 😂😂😂 but I totally get how you could DNF this one. I really really think they rushed her too much to get this book out and you can tell with the plot and the writing for Onyx Storm. Honestly the ending was so fast and confused me so much I reread it three times 😂😂😂
Yeahhh I did not feel the same “OMG this is amazing” that I felt for Fourth Wing and Iron Flame. Honestly feel like it has a lot to do with how Rebecca Yarros said she was so rushed for this one as is.
dedication to a temple - do you remember Samuel from the Bible? -this is when parent give up their right over their child to make it a temple servant, it can be done temporalily - e.g. for education - or for the whole life - this is common in cultures where the parental power over a child is full authority - which means it is/was quite common in most world cultures worldwide beyond the modern ones - see also e.g. the Vestal virgins
Can some one look up how many times knits brows or knitted brows or brows furrow Is said because it's excessive. I listened audio and this is killing me (81 times) some variation of that phrase is said
Haha oh my gosh I hate when I notice a phrase like that because then you can never un-notice it 🤣🤣 if I do a reread I already know I’ll be looking out for it
Thank you for the recap! Now I'm starting onyx storm and I am fully caught up. Love how this was short and sweet. Thank you❤
Glad to help ☺️ I wanna know what you think of Onyx Storm after you finish because I’m still going crazy 🤣
@heididischler will def comment here once I'm done!
Almost DNF this series because of the gaping plot holes, holes in logic, contradictions to its own lore and lack of explanation towards said lore. It got to a point where it felt lazily written. Just finished the book and the ending felt rushed in I can't say that I'm surprised. I bet there will be some part two split off like a Harry Potter or hunger Games movie to get more money.
I tried to get with the hype and genuinely get into it but I just feel like other authors do this so much better. My intelligence as a reader felt insulted off and on and in my humble opinion violet soaringale is one of the worst characters and protagonist to ever lead a book.
Honorable mention - Dain wasn't that bad 😂
Omg I hated Dain 😂😂😂 but I totally get how you could DNF this one. I really really think they rushed her too much to get this book out and you can tell with the plot and the writing for Onyx Storm. Honestly the ending was so fast and confused me so much I reread it three times 😂😂😂
I was so disappointed in the whole book. The ending felt like a rushed nightmare
Yeahhh I did not feel the same “OMG this is amazing” that I felt for Fourth Wing and Iron Flame. Honestly feel like it has a lot to do with how Rebecca Yarros said she was so rushed for this one as is.
dedication to a temple - do you remember Samuel from the Bible? -this is when parent give up their right over their child to make it a temple servant, it can be done temporalily - e.g. for education - or for the whole life - this is common in cultures where the parental power over a child is full authority - which means it is/was quite common in most world cultures worldwide beyond the modern ones - see also e.g. the Vestal virgins
Can some one look up how many times knits brows or knitted brows or brows furrow Is said because it's excessive. I listened audio and this is killing me (81 times) some variation of that phrase is said
Haha oh my gosh I hate when I notice a phrase like that because then you can never un-notice it 🤣🤣 if I do a reread I already know I’ll be looking out for it
15:50 watch Inception
Therapy here i come
😂😂😂
Also same issue with my pre order
It’s the worst 😩😩