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  • @ViVi-yw5sr
    @ViVi-yw5sr ปีที่แล้ว +86

    I adore this kind of plot, random strangers whose lives get connected one night in a random cafe. Superb job.

    • @WendyP1965
      @WendyP1965 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Me too!

  • @2hard2knock
    @2hard2knock ปีที่แล้ว +86

    Loved the gripping dialogue between the newbie and expert criminal. Great short film!!

  • @dc-wp8oc
    @dc-wp8oc ปีที่แล้ว +53

    The manager is Jack, Mr. Jack Ass. The world is full of them.
    Great acting, great dialogue, lighting and frame composition. Awesome work by everyone.

  • @Robanimates
    @Robanimates 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +19

    everytime i watch something like this it reminds me how i gave a waitress a 100 tip then my friends joined in and gave her a total of 260 dollars, she cried so hard and thought we were joking and it was just so emotional. i will always remember that moment, she even took a picture with all of us. that's how cool she was. I hope she's doing better in her life

    • @EarthSublime_369
      @EarthSublime_369 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      That was incredibly human of you ❤

    • @Robanimates
      @Robanimates 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@EarthSublime_369 thank you I hope she's doing better now

  • @GlasUndMetall
    @GlasUndMetall ปีที่แล้ว +29

    I love this channel so much, binge watched the last two days while making a dolly for my granddaughter. It's wonderful to see all the creativity in film.

  • @angiek9254
    @angiek9254 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Thanks!

  • @tracyzoon5805
    @tracyzoon5805 ปีที่แล้ว +19

    She was part of the process showing up every day.

  • @foreverbeloved8956
    @foreverbeloved8956 ปีที่แล้ว +102

    Really great to see Gene Jones! I think he deserves more roles. Loved him in No Country for Old Men

    • @anilachar323
      @anilachar323 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      So, that was him! - well, he did sweat in that movie scene with Javier Bardem! - and who wouldn't?

    • @eugenetswong
      @eugenetswong ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Which character was Gene? I looked at the credits, but I don't recall the names of the characters in the film.

    • @debloml
      @debloml ปีที่แล้ว +6

      @@eugenetswong He was the gas station owner in the first scene.

    • @sparkythancztwise
      @sparkythancztwise ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@eugenetswong in the beginning when the criminals are in the car, the younger says to the older, "Sydney, it says cash only". And when the credits roll, it states that Gene Jones played the role of Sydney.

    • @sparkythancztwise
      @sparkythancztwise ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@debloml I think eugenetswong was asking which character in *this* film was Gene Jones. Not sure why they didn't simply go back and check for themselves in a such a short film (which makes it really easy), but I chose to be magnanimous and explained for them.

  • @alwayspooh1588
    @alwayspooh1588 ปีที่แล้ว +52

    Short films have more depth of character and better writing than most 2 hour + films these days.

    • @Vinsomer
      @Vinsomer ปีที่แล้ว +3

      To be honest, I think it's much easier to create tense situations and interesting characters in a shorter time frame sometimes. There doesn't have to be a massive build up before the climax. Given the opportunity to be 2-3hrs long, most of these shorts would flop from having to pad out and dilute their films.

  • @thebookdoc.writing.and.editing
    @thebookdoc.writing.and.editing ปีที่แล้ว +17

    6:00 ... That guy is from No Country for Old Men... Good actor.

    • @bonktownboy
      @bonktownboy ปีที่แล้ว

      yes good actor

    • @sarahcorrie2953
      @sarahcorrie2953 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Omg no wonder i always thought he looked familiar! He was the store owner and Anton asked him to 'call it' right?

  • @mooksschmooks
    @mooksschmooks ปีที่แล้ว +12

    this was so incredibly nice. from the dialogue to the music choice.

  • @YoungBlaze
    @YoungBlaze ปีที่แล้ว +4

    This is well shot well lit well-edited acted everything

  • @Munt_digital
    @Munt_digital ปีที่แล้ว +7

    The writing was superb!

  • @rggndfw
    @rggndfw 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    This is like an all-star cast. So well done.

  • @letstalk6007
    @letstalk6007 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    Old man in red has been putting his whole life on that coin flip.

  • @Havanacuba1985
    @Havanacuba1985 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    The best part of this was the elderley robbers philosophy of “The Process” that was pure genius ,the rest Well what can I say

    • @ermo5623
      @ermo5623 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I agree-the dialogue with them is great. The story just never really went anywhere.

    • @Melscomments
      @Melscomments 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I thought so many different things...that the older guy was setting him up...either to take the money for himself or leave the guy to get caught..or shoot him. He actually wait for him outside and they went on to the next step of...the process lol

  • @Morbius1963
    @Morbius1963 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Marvelous. A whole movie in 15 minutes. Superb storyline and acting.

  • @pumpupthevolume4775
    @pumpupthevolume4775 ปีที่แล้ว +29

    More like this please. Good directing and the dialogue was excellent and so was some of the acting. Love Jack. The premise and plot were a bit lacking, but were well made up for by the writing, acting and directing.

  • @bonktownboy
    @bonktownboy ปีที่แล้ว +10

    great directing. cool to see the supporting cast with recognizable faces from projects like uncut gems and no country for old men. and is this the cinematographer from Barbarian? pretty legit stuff. would love to see what all of these actors and this filmmaker do next.

    • @HoldenNY22
      @HoldenNY22 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Wasn't the Manage the killer Thug who killed the Adam Sandler character in Uncut Gems?

    • @bonktownboy
      @bonktownboy หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@HoldenNY22 yep

  • @willowclay5406
    @willowclay5406 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Brilliant dialog, acting, and camera work! The underdog comes out on top!

  • @marnyfrancesca2526
    @marnyfrancesca2526 ปีที่แล้ว +44

    If the bank notes were marked with anti-theft ink, how would they be of any use to the waitress?

    • @TehF0cus
      @TehF0cus ปีที่แล้ว +13

      Either that or it was blood. In both cases, tough luck

    • @irfanjames6551
      @irfanjames6551 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Someone here said the Anti-Theft Ink will Dry

    • @thebigdog2295
      @thebigdog2295 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      I get money from the bank sometimes with dye pack ink on it. I don't think they really care about it at most banks.

    • @roberthoffhines5419
      @roberthoffhines5419 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      @@thebigdog2295 I think the dye is supposed to explode to eventually/potentially ID the robbers, the bills go back into circulation?

    • @bjb7587
      @bjb7587 ปีที่แล้ว

      ​@@roberthoffhines5419Dye, or a separate device?

  • @AndreasIreland
    @AndreasIreland 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Tack!

  • @thecluuchannel4705
    @thecluuchannel4705 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Great film. Those criminals reminded me of Morgan Freeman and Chris Rock in "Nurse Betty". I was so happy the waitress came out on top.

    • @TheSamosaCritic
      @TheSamosaCritic ปีที่แล้ว +2

      She's a terrible human being and an even worse employee.

  • @narutoroxanne22
    @narutoroxanne22 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I'm so happy for Nicky 💖

  • @rickandosca8262
    @rickandosca8262 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    VERY well done in all ways. In one of these short films on this platform(Chipper) and see/hear this short has terrific people in front and behind the camera.

  • @Mooncatdadon
    @Mooncatdadon ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Beautiful story told. Wow and great cinematography

  • @alwayspooh1588
    @alwayspooh1588 ปีที่แล้ว +33

    Tipping on take away/take out??? WTF? The USA is strange with tipping!

    • @karolinaszczudlo9871
      @karolinaszczudlo9871 ปีที่แล้ว +19

      Yep... it's absolutely insane, sure she should be rewarded extra just for bringing few boxes from kitchen window to his table....wow indeed 😂 and then get worked out about not receiving extra for it 😅 seriously victim mentality+entitlement big time

    • @groyperfuhr4871
      @groyperfuhr4871 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      it's not the people that follow that though, it's the greedy restuarants for even suggesting it. when I get takeout and they ask me what the tip is I stare blankface. most normal people do this too, only bootlickers tip on a takeout order. cause that tip aint going to the chef so it's pointless

    • @PeetaGrifffin
      @PeetaGrifffin 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Ikr especially that she didn't even do anything.

    • @ermo5623
      @ermo5623 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I was a waitress in college & I’d rather wait on 2 tables than have to do 1 takeaway order. It takes more time to box everything up, put sides & condiments in there individually than to just bring the plate right to the table. Also, I don’t think people understand that at the end of the day your server has to then tip out other people (busboys, bartenders, food runner) based on their sales not what you actually made. So, when someone stiffs you, you actually have to pay out for it. It’s a messed up system, but you can make good money.

    • @rickandosca8262
      @rickandosca8262 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@karolinaszczudlo9871 Guess you never did this kind of job. Lucky you.

  • @magicsinglez
    @magicsinglez ปีที่แล้ว +2

    That’s the shop-keeper from. . .’no country for old men’.

  • @carlosidelone8064
    @carlosidelone8064 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    Very well acted and shot. Interesting characters. A little suspense. Worth a watch.

  • @CatherineDover
    @CatherineDover 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Great drama, again, thank you. x

  • @ThereWasABadKittiFromBmore
    @ThereWasABadKittiFromBmore ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Dang...she didn't break the dish boy off😆

  • @williamhoude4165
    @williamhoude4165 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Omeletto you really do a great job with your short films. I’m surprised you have never made a full length feature.

  • @williamhoude4165
    @williamhoude4165 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This was a really good one!

  • @joywilliams5861
    @joywilliams5861 ปีที่แล้ว +22

    Wow! That money came right on time. I wonder why he left her so much though. Did the blood scare him off?

    • @aspirespire8847
      @aspirespire8847 ปีที่แล้ว +13

      They were inked

    • @carlosidelone8064
      @carlosidelone8064 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      @@aspirespire8847 The money had anti-theft ink on it. I hope, that she would be able to pass them.

  • @planreview
    @planreview ปีที่แล้ว +1

    “Call it. Excuse me? Call it.”

  • @oneill765
    @oneill765 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    That's the guy from no country for old men, that owns the gas station.

  • @missKate72
    @missKate72 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Great acting and plot

  • @revilo1340
    @revilo1340 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    really liked this
    definitely deserves some sort of award

  • @AP-gv6oz
    @AP-gv6oz ปีที่แล้ว +1

    He stopped working at the gas station after the coin toss. Hes a changed man.

  • @christineodonnell9391
    @christineodonnell9391 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    Can we have a one I understand next please? The last couple have baffled me 😂

    • @hank1519
      @hank1519 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      😂 I feel the same way!

    • @rudylikestowatch
      @rudylikestowatch ปีที่แล้ว +4

      When I don't get it, I read the description. Then the comments. Someone will often explain the scene that isn't clear.

    • @felipelotas5609
      @felipelotas5609 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Same here...three in a row and today wasn´t my Omeleto day. I need a beautiful round and closed story from time to time.

  • @webstercat
    @webstercat ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Is this the coin flip guy from No Country for Old Men?

  • @gmmunguu
    @gmmunguu ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Nice parallel stories. Boss and female employee vs Old man and young man.
    Old man keeps talking about his processes and don't let the daily task to be your master. Which is reverse situation to the boss and employee where boss is very nervous guy that the daily tasks are his master. And the female employee stay true to her principle all the and gets rewarded in the end.
    1. compount interest = tips
    2. process = principle

  • @jordanbrown8278
    @jordanbrown8278 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Old guy almost got killed due to the results of a coin flip once.

  • @thedudeabides3138
    @thedudeabides3138 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    My goodness, but Gene Jones is an incredibly natural actor.
    Mores the pity we don’t see more of him.

  • @nikkisjeans
    @nikkisjeans ปีที่แล้ว +2

    No diner serves peas 😂

  • @magicsinglez
    @magicsinglez ปีที่แล้ว +1

    It’s kind funny how the boss criminal is a bit similar to the Boss proprietor?

  • @joymelton-bollen6383
    @joymelton-bollen6383 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    This was great!!!!!

  • @eddiemorris6428
    @eddiemorris6428 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Gene Jones - what a GREAT actor. can't wait for some smart casting director to put him in his own movie ~ as the LEAD. He can be a scary mother****er, he was the BEST thing about "Killers of the Flower Moon"

  • @dthomas4566
    @dthomas4566 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This was very well done, but i hated that waitress 😂

  • @barkeyes8592
    @barkeyes8592 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I'm still trying to figure it out. I'm a Virgo and I trip out over this kind of a plot. That's why I love Omeleto.😅

  • @philreynolds2465
    @philreynolds2465 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I enjoyed the film but the guy who played Sydney (Gene Jones) was brilliant.
    Cheers

    • @jackhayden3953
      @jackhayden3953 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi sidekick was brilliant too

    • @vincentdimitri169
      @vincentdimitri169 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      What's the most you ever lost on a coin toss?

    • @philreynolds2465
      @philreynolds2465 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@vincentdimitri169 I hardly gamble

    • @vincentdimitri169
      @vincentdimitri169 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@philreynolds2465 Never seen "no country for old men" i take it?

  • @conniehanses
    @conniehanses ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Definitely could have watched longerrrrrrr!💙🌎

  • @georgemiller151
    @georgemiller151 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    What’s the point? The waitress will spend the marked money which will almost immediately be identified and she will gain nothing except a police interrogation.

  • @wannabemedontu
    @wannabemedontu ปีที่แล้ว

    Tips with that service?😂

  • @albertchehade9916
    @albertchehade9916 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Brilliant! 10 great THUMBS UP!

  • @salvatorefolisi3102
    @salvatorefolisi3102 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    great acting!

  • @szlvid6
    @szlvid6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Gene Jones made this! He rocks!

  • @jackkoffman166
    @jackkoffman166 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Didn't they already release this?

    • @JoshPhoenix11
      @JoshPhoenix11 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Only released on the internet a few days ago on the 2nd, but it was screened at film festivals all throughout last year.
      How long ago were you thinking? Im just wondering if you could be experiencing a Mandela Effect.

    • @jackkoffman166
      @jackkoffman166 ปีที่แล้ว

      ​@@JoshPhoenix11I think I originally saw this on Film Shortage a couple days ago

    • @bonktownboy
      @bonktownboy ปีที่แล้ว

      it went to Santa Barbara International Film Festival last year, if I'm not mistaken

  • @IgorOcash
    @IgorOcash ปีที่แล้ว

    good acting all the way around. Very impressive.

  • @afveteran6564
    @afveteran6564 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Something about these puts me in a depression....

  • @RHKhan86
    @RHKhan86 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Happy Ending.

  • @charlesgauci1405
    @charlesgauci1405 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Acting was great

  • @KateSuhrgirlPlays
    @KateSuhrgirlPlays 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I only clicked on this one because i recognized her as from the show Insatiable.

  • @thecakeredux
    @thecakeredux ปีที่แล้ว +3

    So, she's clumsy, unfriendly, ungrateful, argumentative, aggressive and loud and gets rewarded with what? 3k cash? I must be misunderstanding something here.

  • @h8shunlou
    @h8shunlou ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Everything was fantastic, but those visuals were creamy! Great job Zack Kuperstein

  • @DrMontrays
    @DrMontrays 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I'm a little confused on the part where he just throws in all of his money

    • @tananario23
      @tananario23 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      It’s counterfeit.

    • @bonktownboy
      @bonktownboy หลายเดือนก่อน

      it has blood on it

  • @estephaniap9027
    @estephaniap9027 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    At one point I thought she was part of the 'process'. The diversion was too perfectly timed

    • @helpstopanimalabuse8153
      @helpstopanimalabuse8153 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Could you elaborate on the "Diversion" i missed it, still scratching my head (Don't want to get splinters).

    • @estephaniap9027
      @estephaniap9027 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @helpstopanimalabuse8153 Lol, no worries. I actually don’t think there was a diversion. That was my first thought but looking back it just worked out like that. When the waitress and the guy who didn't pay were arguing, I thought she was a part of the plan, but there was no plan. Her surprise to the money confirms it.

    • @thecluuchannel4705
      @thecluuchannel4705 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I almost thought this too. When she poured their coffee, she was totally silent and cold, like she knew them.

    • @GFINHK
      @GFINHK 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I think inadvertently, she was part of the process & that's what he meant when he gave his speech on it

  • @nimmichagger165
    @nimmichagger165 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Gene Jones! Great actor!

  • @magicsinglez
    @magicsinglez ปีที่แล้ว

    It’s actually cute that this is. . .topical.

  • @MTCali70
    @MTCali70 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I just learned what TIPS means🙋‍♀️🤣

    • @dexterford8094
      @dexterford8094 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      I think it actually means "Trapped In Predatory System"
      or perhaps "Theft of Income by Petty Supervisors"

    • @MTCali70
      @MTCali70 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@dexterford8094 LOL..those are good too..

  • @HoldenNY22
    @HoldenNY22 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I don't understand why he gave the Waitress all that money. I gues I missed something.

  • @FedSher
    @FedSher ปีที่แล้ว

    This old ''FRIENDO'' looks familiar to me ...

  • @gretatudeg4877
    @gretatudeg4877 ปีที่แล้ว

    So good! So understated!

  • @khatpandwa9701
    @khatpandwa9701 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Cruel world, life is unfair, Is there a god? Enjoyed the shirt film.

  • @adriannathegreat9890
    @adriannathegreat9890 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Is the waitress going to be able to use the bills or not??

    • @user-McGiver
      @user-McGiver ปีที่แล้ว +7

      she has nothing to do with the crime, and she'll push them easily... the problem is that the rest of the loot in the trunk is inked too... so the lesson is about ''the process''... it failed!... it will be very difficult for them to push that money, and if they do, it will be cheap... that's why the ''fat tip''...

    • @MrMnmn911
      @MrMnmn911 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      No. If she uses them…she’ll be arrested and charged.

    • @eveleengray9067
      @eveleengray9067 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MrMnmn911 Self Check out would work lol

  • @margaretjohnson6259
    @margaretjohnson6259 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    so many good stories out there, but hollywood keeps giving us dreck.

  • @CraigNewellShow
    @CraigNewellShow ปีที่แล้ว

    Is that the actor from No Country For Old Men? The gas station store keeper?

  • @maximeanselot3007
    @maximeanselot3007 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Beautifully shot, superb acting, very interesting dialogues, but the scenario is weird with big holes and zero clues.

    • @jwakk1
      @jwakk1 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I don’t think it has holes, it’s just elliptical storytelling which works well for a short because you don’t have time fill in all the blanks but can leave things implied.

  • @BBB-Schmuck
    @BBB-Schmuck 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    It's the " No Country for Old Men" coin flip guy!

  • @anilachar323
    @anilachar323 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    So, the sub text of the hard life of waiters in the US is clearly stated. As is the exploitative nature of the small scale diners.
    But, why did the younger criminal intern dump the whole stash of cash, because one note was bloodstained? - because 'he didn't follow the process'?

    • @carlosidelone8064
      @carlosidelone8064 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      I believe, that all the bills were stained with anti-theft ink.

    • @therealJamieJoy
      @therealJamieJoy ปีที่แล้ว +6

      The bills were marked.

  • @rickyibarra
    @rickyibarra ปีที่แล้ว

    Gene Jones! Que gusto verlo desde 2008

  • @ericbain9016
    @ericbain9016 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    not to be a dick but her whole argument was that he didnt tip and she cant survive without it. firm believer in the reservoir dogs mr pink idea that its not on the customer to help sustain pay when the establishment should pay a decent living wage. i know this is out of left field. im just saying.

  • @jennagle5554
    @jennagle5554 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    To Insure Prompt Service.... never knew what TIPS stood for. My bad

    • @frankmerrill2366
      @frankmerrill2366 11 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

      I don't know if that meaning is an urban legend, but I did hear it 30 or 40 years ago. People have come up with a lot of creative meanings for acronyms. It may mean that...or it may be tantamount to "a tip of the hat" (old-timey saying) for good service.

  • @dfb2913
    @dfb2913 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I didn't get it

  • @CedroneTravels
    @CedroneTravels 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    great

  • @Andrewkibe22
    @Andrewkibe22 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you guys for supporting me ❤❤

  • @zenpanda25
    @zenpanda25 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Hot Damn 🔥

  • @DaRyteJuan
    @DaRyteJuan ปีที่แล้ว

    Mostly good except there’s insufficient motivation on the part of the restaurant owner for being such an over-the-top jerk. It’s not like the restaurant was even halfway busy.

  • @FelixIaccarino
    @FelixIaccarino ปีที่แล้ว

    why giving evidence to a waitress instead of tossing the money in the garbage? doesnt make any sense................

  • @razzlebautista79
    @razzlebautista79 ปีที่แล้ว

    this is what will happen if mr.beast becomes old and dine unnoticed which he cant do anymore .

  • @philochristos
    @philochristos 11 วันที่ผ่านมา

    That's not bad advice.

  • @The_Beast_666
    @The_Beast_666 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    God works in mysterious ways!!

  • @sparklebydiamond677
    @sparklebydiamond677 6 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Why tf he leave that much money very confused

    • @sparklebydiamond677
      @sparklebydiamond677 6 วันที่ผ่านมา

      IM JUST GLAD ITS IN HER HANDS 🙌 ❤❤❤😅

  • @janicemahan4772
    @janicemahan4772 ปีที่แล้ว

    Gripping stuff!

  • @jerryc3050
    @jerryc3050 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    PDG👍

  • @Vision_Voyagers
    @Vision_Voyagers 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    If its blood on the note, yiu can use it to buy meat and claim, it's animal blood.

  • @m.fadhiilhaekal7693
    @m.fadhiilhaekal7693 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I think the money was stained by the dye so the criminal just better of leave it

  • @leme3503
    @leme3503 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    So what's the story, I don't get it..?
    "Criminals come into a diner, where a waitress is having a hard day and one of the criminals leaves her all his bills because they're marked with blood/ink, just as she gets fired."
    .. aaaand then what? That's not a plot, that's a scene. There's no story here? What's the conflict? What's the climax? I don't follow short films like this that don't seem to be about anything really. Just a few minutes in time that happened were showcased, that's it.

    • @1SwiftAngela
      @1SwiftAngela ปีที่แล้ว +3

      You wrote ALL that for what 🤷🏽‍♀️

    • @leme3503
      @leme3503 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@1SwiftAngela an explanation? Re-read the first sentence, it ends in a question mark. Actually, there's a lot of question marks. Y'know why? 'Cause I'd love some answers. I've never understood short films with seemingly no plot, so I'd love to understand them. So please, do share any info on them you have.

    • @1SwiftAngela
      @1SwiftAngela ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@leme3503 sigh🤦🏽‍♀️

    • @leme3503
      @leme3503 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@1SwiftAngela It's a genuine question so idk what your problem is. I'm not trying to just bash it, I want to understand it.

    • @wamz9191
      @wamz9191 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@1SwiftAngela Are you slow?

  • @dalemehana5015
    @dalemehana5015 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    It's marked bills, I hope she she's that.

  • @hadasitalki7247
    @hadasitalki7247 ปีที่แล้ว