so basically: "there's this place that is really REALLY bad. DON'T GO THERE. MY FRIEND DIED AND IM A BROKEN MAN" jack: "sounds like a cool place to check out"
"Oh God, Jack! You died in Nebraska!" "Imagine dying in Nebraska of all places!" These lines cracked me up. They should make one of those commercials for trendy vacation spots- "Nebraska- at least you didn't die here."
@@TheMattc999 I'd think the implication would be obvious. Your soul is trapped permanently with no hope of an afterlife....right? Why else would people be so afraid to die in Nebraska if it wasn't some metaphysical, existential horror? Anything else would just seem too mundane.
Ive been listening to this guys storys for about 6 years now. I just wanted to let him know how much it means to me personally that he's still doing this.
Jack and jerry always at it lol. This is the traumatic even that caused jack to have his sleeping problem. He had no use for his writing major other than to write his blogs about the gas station.
As a Jack who is a horror nut/gorehound, I, it's oddly accurate. (Like literally, I have insane luck and a shit ton of trauma throughout my life. I'm just waiting for my horror story at this point.)
@@lilatune pfff I mean, my online handle is, but my name is Jackson irl. I'm not shy sharing that, my first and last name aren't rare, nor is it even my legal name yet, since I still need to get it properly changed. This username I've used for like 6 years now, I made it when I was like 12 because I liked Japanese stuff and was wanting to make friends, so I just put into google translate "killer" and then threw it together. It's funny cause people assume I made it in reference to Death Note, but I watched Death Note post-username. It's funny to talk about because the cause was kinda cringe, but I really love the username, and it used to be more familiar to me than my legal name, before I became Jack. (I'm a trans guy, so I chose my name, technically. That's a whole other story on how I chose the name I did, if ya wanna hear it, lmfao.) Sorry for rambling and dumping a story on you, I like to talk about this stuff, and I'm a bit of a talker. (Partially cause I got ADHD and talking a lot is a bit of that tbh, although I'm also just a huge talker and person who likes to share a lot, especially anecdotes and stories.) Hope it's not too annoying. Thanks for replying though! Hope your day is wonderful! :)
I think this has the most realistic version of the “scarred drunkard” trope, it really feels like he is scarred and scared. Not just scared but scared of the prospect that it may not even be real. I love this and it’s writing.
Perhaps it's because the story is told from Jack's perspective or because I have a hyper-empathy problem, but I couldn't for the life of me understand how Karen couldn't see how much the showers bothered him. I wanted to pop her in the jaw a few times. People like that frustrate me so much.
No srsly as someone suffering with mental illness and trauma who can very well relate to how she's feeling, fuck Karen. I'm not through the story yet, but I will not feel much sadness if something happens to her. Maybe it's because she has the same name as someone I know who's really awful, but there isn't a thing about her that I can stand.
I mean, Jack does say that she's a bad influence on him. Her being a terrible person who either is totally ignorant of or willfully ignores his emotional trauma isn't all that surprising. After all, from what we know of this relationship, the two don't seem to actually share that much of a true connection. Jack says that she, "understands," him, but what does that really mean? Does she truly empathize with his situation, or does Jack just perceive her twisted interest in his story as such? Jack seems to be a textbook case of the unreliable narrator, so how can we be certain that Karen even cares about him? Jack admits to using Karen as a means to cope, so why couldn't Karen also be using him for an ulterior purpose?
Well...she’s a presumably unmedicated (because she seems like she’s ALWAYS manic), bipolar 1 (presumably, since he said they have two different types of bipolar disorder and he seems more depressive and, again, she sounds like she’s almost always manic) alcoholic...and he’s a confirmed unmedicated bipolar 2 (presumably) and also an alcoholic. You ever watch intervention? Or, ya know, know any addicts in relationships with other addicts? You add mania on top of that, and...yeah, you’ve got some insane and insanely selfish behavior going on
@@oliveranderson928 She might have narcissistic tendencies, could explain why she kept acting like the MC was overreacting until she faced his fears. Just a guess.
Police : what happened? Jack: ghost children dragged her body into some weird pit that's been around for god knows how long that I visited years ago after my high school teacher told me a story about it. Police: seems legit uncuff him
in all honesty I find a very unusual why would anyone wants to force somebody to remember something traumatic. I think it's one of the signs of an abusive relationship....
@@cyborghype8648 He did. The Supreme Court didn't do it's job when needed, and the evidence continues to pile up of the fraud and irregularities, etc. Literally, it looks like in Arizona with the current audit that showed Biden with a 56~58 lead, that a VAST MAJORITY of the legal ballots (hand counted) are for Trump at an overwhelming 70~71 lead. And that's just one state that fucked with the election. The biggest problem state was Georgia or New York.
@@kadeskorni296 Looks like I am going back to Nebraska. I will meet up with up at the Pump North East of Hastings. If I remember correctly it is Donaphin.
I’ve been listening to your channel for over a year now and I’ve never heard a story that gave me such an intense feeling of pure terror. The author reflected every emotion PERFECTLY in his words and the way you read it just made it all come to life. Fucking perfection man...
Honestly, I don’t feel the same way. I felt as though the children, or whatever entity that was possessing those showers, was only out to scare them and not to harm them. Both times the main character went into the building the children had every opportunity to hurt him or kill him if they wanted to, but both times they let him go for no reason. After the first time this happened I felt as though the stakes were greatly lowered for his return. Don’t get me wrong, the story was well written, but you have to admit this was a flaw.
@@Vladamite this has been one of the more disappointing stories I’ve heard so far from mrcreepypasta. Still not able to understand why the showers were so terrible
Is it me or has his views been going down? He is my favorite person to listen to while im cleaning or doing absolutely nothing. His voice so soothing and stories so interesting, i just hope he never stops making videos because no matter what i will always come back to his channel in my free time.
Yeah iv noticed this trend among the creepypasta community. MCP and CMP reached a little over a million subs but it stopped and each video gets less views. I think its probably because of a lack of interest and the oversaturation of creepy stuff. Back in 2012, 13, and 14 they were still commonly reaching at least 100k views when the topic was still fresh
@@BobPantsSpongeSquare97 I totally agree with you!!! I wish everything was still like it was back in 2013, 14 and 15. Those were seriously the best times to be on TH-cam. I guess all we can hope for is that theres a new wave of people coming in and watching everyone.
Re-reading the House of Leaves made me realize The Showers has many interesting parallels to the novel. Both are excellent and definitely worth reading/listening.
It was great meeting you in person and I was the person who told you this was my favorite creepypasta when I bought one of your books so you doodled in it a shower head. Love you Mr Creepypasta and your stories will always have a place in my heart
I popped some headphones on and played this while I was working. I was completely zoned out in what I was doing, and before I knew it, over 2 and a half hours go by, and I got everything done with time to spare. Gonna have to do this more often...
The way he reads is to give emotion to speed up in his reading when it gets intense and slow down when there are more details then the combination of speeding up and raising his voice is to strike fear in you and it’s works really well
I feel like there's more to this story than meets the eye. It's very meta regarding story telling. It's really interesting. Feels like it has more to say than the story it self. Reducing it to simply a "scary story" would be a disservice. There's more to this, I feel.
I mean, he said he was obfuscating stories from the start so, much like Johnny Tremain in House of Leaves, we don’t know if ANY part of the story is “true”, but you have to ask; does it matter?
"Um... Bob, what are we going to do with all these vampire children??" "I have a great Idea, Carl! We lock them up in the old cultist's showers and feed them a deer once a month! No one is going to find out!"
I finally sat down and listened to all of this in one setting. Really reminds me of Borrasca V but I really like how it still maintains the mystery of what the Showers, the deer and the kids are or were. Thank you for the content and merry Christmas MCP
There feels like the mystery is too vague to me. Like, why are there kids, and why are they tied to these showerheads? There's no hints at lore, nothing to theorize off of. This pasta is just plain
@@johnleathers514 he lives right by the place the stories fake not broken bow obviously you don't know what your talking about cause the only fake thing is the story
This one is interesting to me. Though, I'm sure the story is fictional, there's some chatter about it a couple years before it came out and it's consistent with this one. IE, someone asking about it a year before the story with that OP saying they heard about it in a previous post blah blah blah. From my search, the very first post is on Yahoo answers from 2010. 2 full years before the story was posted,. It seems to go deeper than that but I cant find anything before that.
You probably won't see this since it's been over a year since you posted this, but most of the creepypastas online have been around for a couple of years. There's just so many out there that it can take a long time for the narrator's to either get around to do them or even find them. There's also always the possiblility that the original post was stolen from someone more influential in the creepypasta community and that's why it seems like it may be real. All of that aside, this is one of my absolute favorites that mcp has ever done though. His narration brings so much life and added character to the already great main characters. Though I wasn't too fond of how Karen, or maybe I just hate those types of people in general idk haha
I love stories like this, only have one complaint about them. Why don't they at least visit the terrible place during the day .-. And visit while not being drunk or on drugs so that you can trust what happens more. I get that all that is for the story and it is still awesome. I just love trying to find those more realist stories that can truly give you the creeps! But this does pretty good :) and your narration is always superb
Im actually amazed that story hasnt becomes own universe. I mean in the first chapter Jack mentions that if you get lost anywhere you could wind up at the gas station, implying it doesnt seem to exist in just one place.
I noticed “In the House, In a Heartbeat” at 01:55:35, and although it’s a song from a zombie movie that was also used in Metro Exodus, zombie and post-apocalyptic stuff isn’t really what I’d call horror even if it technically is. But the song still is a perfect choice as part of the buildup as the main character goes back into “the showers”.
Two men came upon the showers, cold and damp in morning hours One man said "inside we go!" the other man said "oh, no. no. no." So went one within the walls, to hear the echoes and the calls Then shouting, raving, he did call out, "By god man let me out!" All fell silent in the showers, cold and damp in morning hours And one man crouched a whistling, as he chewed on gristling Of the man who shouted out, "Please god let me out!" For when you go to secret showers, in the cold damp morning hours Go alone and not with friend, for friend shall fiend and then shall rend while whistling a silly tune, a military song, over body hewn For madness lies without not in, and trapped you'll be there within And witness you, your own demise, in your friends maddened eyes. In the showers cold and red, quiet now save for the dead.
He didn't write this. Some dude made a thread about an urban legend about the showers in Hastings Nebraska, in 2011 before the first story was ever even wrote. There was a guy in that thread who only wrote in poems and this one was one of them.
Amazing story and narration! I think this might be the best breakdown of what role the manic pixie dream girl plays, AND the true danger of such a character; working from unknowable and unalterable motives.
God damn this was one of the best horror stories I've ever listened to! The voice acting was really good, the writing was incredible, I got sucked in so fast I had to finish it all in one go.
I listen to the first few parts of this in high school before it was conplete. Then one day mrcreepypasta uploads the complete series of the showers? Nostalgia overload.
The fact he mentions how he felt in the first story shows something powerful than fear is truly scary and shows how much he felt extreme fear with that fight-or-flight reaction gone is honestly astounding. I couldn’t have someone better to narrate it!
Mr. Mayes sounds so awesome. 52 minutes in, and I'm deeply immersed in the atmosphere. This is the best story I have ever heard make such an atmosphere. Even got me paranoid! I love it! Spoilers: I'm done with it now. By the third part, I didn't feel paranoid or experience the same atmosphere. I had a feeling of dread and wanted Jack to not return at all costs. But once in the tunnel and things started happening, it wasn't like before. It was still and cold. I felt no paranoia, no dread, or anything negative nor positive. Pure emptiness and nothingness. But around the end I felt a twinge of dissatisfaction due to the rise of atmosphere, then I'm presented with what I'm not sure with. But the feeling nothingness was probably deliberate for that part. If so, I commend you. But listening to this story showed me what my fear is. I now know what it is, and am grateful for this story to have helped.
Out of the ocean of spooky story readers on youtube, you are my favorite cup of salt water. Your voice and reading talent is neither grating nor monotonous. I've been watching this channel for years, but damn if I haven't just found the other readers.
every time i see someone with this profile picture i wonder if they’re a pewdiepie fan bc in like 2016 he told people to make they their youtube profile pic
I love mcp! He helps me calm down and be able to relax enough to sleep... It was super hard to fall asleep before I listened to him but since I love nightmares he gives me that and it brings me relaxation
You have such a tremendous storytelling ability You have really given me a sort of inspiration I would love to start narrating creepy pastas. I know that the art is somewhat lost since creepypastas became like old news but I still think they may be appreciated. I really would love to try to conjure up the imaging that you were able to do with your voice escalating and then quieting and then everything you're able to do is just such an amazing talent I think you're great.
OMG!!!! After the 300 stories from MCP, Dr. Creepen, and Corpse Husband, this is BY FAR my favorite story that I've ever listened to. I work nightshift as a boiler maker and sometimes it can be very mindless and repetitive work. This was one of those times. I put this on before my final break, listened intently until just now when I'm completing my hour drive through this black and white blizzard. I have never had such an entertaining last quarter of work and drive home in my life. Sincerely, MCP. Thank you.
Dude. Lemme just tell you this. You're by far my favorite creepypasta reader. I find it so fascinating how you read all these creepypastas. It's like you put yourself in the character's shoes and emerse yourself in certain environments. As I listen to you, I notice how strangely soothing and bone chilling your voice is when you lower your tone to describe some of the more disturbing scenes, and when you raise your tone to stimulate either fear, anger, or insanity in a character, I find myself getting very disturbed. You are the master at this kind of stuff, even though sometimes you repeat lines at certain points. You are the reason why I decided to start my own creepypasta-reading channel. Thanks for inspiring me for so long.
As I banged against the cellar door with all my might, wood splinters chipping off revealing strong beams of light burning my skin it finally gave way. I dropped to the floor sobbing and heard a familiar laugh. I looked up at the figure standing before me with his infamous grin... David fucking King...
anybody else wanna go visit this place now? visiting places people wrote creepypastas about is huge on my bucket list. can't wait until it's *compelte*
You know how to tell these stories perfectly, I remember being 12 and getting my first glimpse into the internet with my very first phone. I was always into horror and McCreepyPasta is how I spent most of my school nights and summer time. My friend and I were wrapped up into creepy pastas until the slender man stabbing in Wisconsin. I live in a small town about an hour away from where it happened. But I’ve been getting into these stories again, I’m 18 now, and these haven’t changed from my childhood. Still keep me up all night, questioning shadows in the corners of my room that just end up being piles of clothes. But no matter how scared I get, I keep clicking for more, your voice and the way you narrate these tales just keeps me hooked. Really happy you’re still telling these stories, and I hope you don’t stop anytime soon. Your posts are always a highlight in my notifications 💕
I like the story a lot but I have so many questions. Where did the body of Mr Mayes' friend go? What was the significance of deer down there? What WERE the children and why were they there? How did they get there? What was the significance of the two ladies who said the exact same damn thing about it, and were obviously related? Did they take all of these children and kill them underground? What was the motive, the method? How much of this was real and how much was in his head? Was the smell of death BECAUSE of the children or something else like whatever water came from the showers? Was it because their bodies were buried down there in the muck somewhere? There was just a lot that either wasn't explained or completely went over my head. Someone please send help in the form of explanations or theories
Go find it yourself. A second time if need be. if you didn't manage to solve it the first time. True answers are seldom told to you but figured out on your own.
I agree that its left too open and unexplained. This is not a good story. A retelling of an event that doesn't really have significance if you weren't there to experience it with the author.
The supernatural events of the showers are an allegory to traumatic experiences involving insanity and deranged dread and mental illness in general. The light turning and cutting off symbolizes the destruction of reality into incorherant mad dread. The children stand for your own personal demons coming for you, the uncertainty of what they do when they get you represents the fear of letting your problems overtake you. The animal screaming also represents this, it's the inability to ignore/cope with the situation. The door represents the matrix of your greatest fears, when it's opened all hell breaks loose as a consequence of a person being forced to confront that what they fear the most And the showers and fluids represent the state of mind of people who go through such things as this. This whole creepypasta is an allegory of overcoming traumatic experiences that hold you back
I’ve watched this so many times and it never gets old I can’t even listen to anyone else tell this story because this guys voice, the way he tells it, fits it so well.
Thank you mrcreepypasta. I’m not a fan of TV and the quality of movies these days and find myself only listening to the stories you post. I’ve been listening to you for years and hope for many to come. Thank you for your work.
*learns about story were guy dies because they fell into a cave with 20 creepy ghost kids* *proceeds to go there completely unprepared. Gets seriously injured but manages to escape from creepy ghost girl* *returns a second time and comes unprepared again with his bipolar girlfriend. Gets injured a second time and doesn't get proper rest before venturing down into cave.* Uh. Climbing rope? Glowsticks? Flashlights? Medkit? Shotgun? Knife? Thick clothes? Flares? Flare gun? Waterproof clothes? No? Ok. At least you got your iPhone and a pair of boots and you found an old flashlight. Presumably the one you dropped 10 years ago.
@@parkeralan19 kinda thought that too but if there was some _twist_ like finding the body of Mr Mazes friend then it will be a lot more scary, but unrealistic. I know this story is just made up but it does give a slight sense of realism to it, also making it scary
@@DevereI I just thought the story was trying to be wayyy.... to vague and artsy. I get some story's aren't suppose to have conclusion but this to me was a lazy amount of take your own guess at what it is. It just made no damn sense. Like I actually liked the first half of the story but even the second half just listening to how long he described his anxiety on the drive there made me wanna throw up. Idk lot of creepy pastas by this dude that I love. This one is not one of them lol
From doing some small research, looks like there is actually urban legends of this place predating this story by 2 years (2010). It makes me interested about this.
I love the vibrant and livid way You narrate !! You always keep me at the edge of my seat gasping my hand over my mouth!!! Thank you for keeping my nights creepy!! Never Stop!! Xoxo
When I first heard you read The Showers, I was in high school, around the same age as Jack was when he first heard the story. For some reason I don’t think I listened to the second part until I was in college, around the same age as Jack when he went to the showers himself. Finally when I listened to the last part, I was out of college, probably a good bit younger than him when he went the second time, but still I could definitely relate to that feeling of living a shitty life. The fact that this story has almost grown with me over the years is almost poetic
*he goes down the stairs after karen* *the walls slowly close in a bit* "I honestly, truly didn't think you'd fall for that. In fact, I devised a much better trap for when you got through that easy one. If it would've been that easy, I would've just dangled a turkey leg from the ceiling."
I honestly haven't felt this terrified of a story in a while. It's not a lot out of the ordinary, but the way you read it was incredible. I literally cried and one point because of how urgent and scared you sounded. Kudos my dude
This had me the most spooked out of any pasta i'd listened to, but then to realize what the ending was, it just left me feeling uneasy. Like that feeling after vomiting, you don't feel good, a bit shaky, but you are relieved of a pressure that had built up and you didn't even know was there. I suppose that's what the shower was.
I was one of the first couple thousand people to listen to this man tell stories, and because of the dumb TH-cam algorithm changes for a few years I lost Mr. Creepypasta and forgot. MCP's unrivaled storytelling prowess helped me through a lot of the hardest times in my early adolescent and adult life, and it makes me so happy to come back and see that his channel is thriving. You deserve it all homie, your content is unparalleled. Thank you for sharing your gift with us.
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so basically: "there's this place that is really REALLY bad. DON'T GO THERE. MY FRIEND DIED AND IM A BROKEN MAN"
jack: "sounds like a cool place to check out"
Jack: "I'll even bring a friend"
Jack: Fuck it I'll do it Again.
Lol
Road trip to Nebraska!!!!
@@user-TheEngineer YAAAAAS, Broken bow can't be that big!
"You have a good head. Make sure you use it."
Proceeds to do the exact opposite thing for the whole series
Every horror movie person ever: LeT's gO dO StUpID sHIt tHat WiLL kILl uS
Wrong head
That's what we in the biz call
~~***~~FoReShAdOwInG~~***~~
@@pinkymcnastystinky3465🤣
*The kid in the tunnel is smiling in his face*
"Do you have gameth on your phone?"
Only if the kid is Mike Tyson in makeup
FLMKane I wath jutht making a joke about Mike Tython’th lithp.
That is horrifying 😂
HAHAHAHAH OMFG YES
DEAR GOD NO!
"Oh God, Jack! You died in Nebraska!"
"Imagine dying in Nebraska of all places!"
These lines cracked me up. They should make one of those commercials for trendy vacation spots- "Nebraska- at least you didn't die here."
😂😂😂
Joleen Phillips it, what if you DID die in Nebraska? 😮
LMAO
Sounds like a great life insurance commercial in Nebraska
@@TheMattc999 I'd think the implication would be obvious. Your soul is trapped permanently with no hope of an afterlife....right? Why else would people be so afraid to die in Nebraska if it wasn't some metaphysical, existential horror? Anything else would just seem too mundane.
Ive been listening to this guys storys for about 6 years now. I just wanted to let him know how much it means to me personally that he's still doing this.
wow!
Jax Russell, i feel the same exact way thank you mr writer and mr narrator
TurtleBOi707. I hope this channel lasts as long as i do
I couldn't agree more. Watching this to find out I have to use the bathroom
Heinrici Gotthard thanx for the feed back its kinda odd for people to actully read what i said
If I were Jack, this would be called, "The story of how Karen got left at a Nebraskan gas station and I ordered a pizza."
"You're all smart kids, except Jerry." Was my favourite part
Toddles same
Thus Jerry from the gas station was born
cantbeattheheat1 Que the dramatic music
It all leads back to the gas station
Jack and jerry always at it lol. This is the traumatic even that caused jack to have his sleeping problem. He had no use for his writing major other than to write his blogs about the gas station.
I swear to *GOD* every Jack in a horror series just has the dumbest luck that saves them from being killed, but leaves them wanting to die.
Not Jack Torrence
I like Gas Station Tales Jack the best. He reminds me of myself.
As a Jack who is a horror nut/gorehound, I, it's oddly accurate. (Like literally, I have insane luck and a shit ton of trauma throughout my life. I'm just waiting for my horror story at this point.)
@@kiralonely i thought ur name was kira
@@lilatune pfff I mean, my online handle is, but my name is Jackson irl. I'm not shy sharing that, my first and last name aren't rare, nor is it even my legal name yet, since I still need to get it properly changed.
This username I've used for like 6 years now, I made it when I was like 12 because I liked Japanese stuff and was wanting to make friends, so I just put into google translate "killer" and then threw it together. It's funny cause people assume I made it in reference to Death Note, but I watched Death Note post-username. It's funny to talk about because the cause was kinda cringe, but I really love the username, and it used to be more familiar to me than my legal name, before I became Jack. (I'm a trans guy, so I chose my name, technically. That's a whole other story on how I chose the name I did, if ya wanna hear it, lmfao.)
Sorry for rambling and dumping a story on you, I like to talk about this stuff, and I'm a bit of a talker. (Partially cause I got ADHD and talking a lot is a bit of that tbh, although I'm also just a huge talker and person who likes to share a lot, especially anecdotes and stories.) Hope it's not too annoying. Thanks for replying though! Hope your day is wonderful! :)
I think this has the most realistic version of the “scarred drunkard” trope, it really feels like he is scarred and scared. Not just scared but scared of the prospect that it may not even be real. I love this and it’s writing.
Yes, it is writing
LETS GO JUMP OFF A CLIFF KIDS!
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Perhaps it's because the story is told from Jack's perspective or because I have a hyper-empathy problem, but I couldn't for the life of me understand how Karen couldn't see how much the showers bothered him. I wanted to pop her in the jaw a few times. People like that frustrate me so much.
No srsly as someone suffering with mental illness and trauma who can very well relate to how she's feeling, fuck Karen. I'm not through the story yet, but I will not feel much sadness if something happens to her. Maybe it's because she has the same name as someone I know who's really awful, but there isn't a thing about her that I can stand.
I mean, Jack does say that she's a bad influence on him. Her being a terrible person who either is totally ignorant of or willfully ignores his emotional trauma isn't all that surprising.
After all, from what we know of this relationship, the two don't seem to actually share that much of a true connection. Jack says that she, "understands," him, but what does that really mean? Does she truly empathize with his situation, or does Jack just perceive her twisted interest in his story as such? Jack seems to be a textbook case of the unreliable narrator, so how can we be certain that Karen even cares about him?
Jack admits to using Karen as a means to cope, so why couldn't Karen also be using him for an ulterior purpose?
It's called no empathy....
Well...she’s a presumably unmedicated (because she seems like she’s ALWAYS manic), bipolar 1 (presumably, since he said they have two different types of bipolar disorder and he seems more depressive and, again, she sounds like she’s almost always manic) alcoholic...and he’s a confirmed unmedicated bipolar 2 (presumably) and also an alcoholic. You ever watch intervention? Or, ya know, know any addicts in relationships with other addicts? You add mania on top of that, and...yeah, you’ve got some insane and insanely selfish behavior going on
@@oliveranderson928
She might have narcissistic tendencies, could explain why she kept acting like the MC was overreacting until she faced his fears. Just a guess.
I would've left Karen behind and never look back
I wanted him too before, he saved her.
Police : what happened? Jack: ghost children dragged her body into some weird pit that's been around for god knows how long that I visited years ago after my high school teacher told me a story about it. Police: seems legit uncuff him
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"Works at a gas station in the outskirts of town"
mMMMMMMMMMM OH REALLY NOW
I WONDER WHAT THAT REMINDS ME OF
Different writer, different Jack.
a shitty gas station ? ;p
oooooohhh i dont know nowwww hmmmmmmmmmm
AnymousScreams dont ruin the fun
every horror movie ever?
So Karen officially earns a spot in my top 10 worst fictional girlfriends ever list.
She took the kids.
in all honesty I find a very unusual why would anyone wants to force somebody to remember something traumatic. I think it's one of the signs of an abusive relationship....
BRING THE KIDS BACK KAREN!!! AHHHH!!! 😭😭😭
She took the kids
Captain Morgan IV then she took away their vaccines 😥😥😰
Hands down best story teller I was pulled into this as if I was there
Jason Ferguson shwb
This one is pretty good but KingSpook's narration is better. His voice is chilling to the bone when he reads this.
What’s your favorite song from Xavier wulf
Jason Ferguson yea other storytellers don’t really put emotion into it so it was always hard for me too pay attention
Chris M just checked him out and I 10/10 agree with you, the deep ness of his voice is very chilling.
"Alright everybody! Let's go jump off a cliff!"
"Okay, Mr. Hayes!"
I want a teacher like that😂
Made me think of Trump followers, wish they would jump 🙄
@@ferretfriend5458
I'm a Trump supporter.
Trump won.
Why don't the Democrats commit Seppuku?
@@gabriellockwood2780 in reality he didn’t win lol
@@cyborghype8648
He did.
The Supreme Court didn't do it's job when needed, and the evidence continues to pile up of the fraud and irregularities, etc.
Literally, it looks like in Arizona with the current audit that showed Biden with a 56~58 lead, that a VAST MAJORITY of the legal ballots (hand counted) are for Trump at an overwhelming 70~71 lead.
And that's just one state that fucked with the election. The biggest problem state was Georgia or New York.
I live in Nebraska and I all I can say is the whole state is hell on earth
Huge Disappointment You are a literal icon.
Dude same here. NE sucks..
dude ive never been outside of new england in my life but i fully agree
Put a bandaid on it
just amputate it. let canada take it. they can have the Dakotas aswell we dont need those little shits.
I live in nebraska and hearing the words broken bow just sent chills down my spine
Let’s meet at the pump from the story and see if the old lady can give us directions
@@kadeskorni296 Looks like I am going back to Nebraska. I will meet up with up at the Pump North East of Hastings. If I remember correctly it is Donaphin.
The locker room showers... Now that was a horror story.
All Praise Goddess Monika JUSTTTT MONIKAA
@Larry Velasco Monika with a c? SMH my head
correction *Prison Showers*
Yes... Yes it is... I say that still being in high school
All Praise Goddess Monika :
Why am I not allowed to give this story more than one like? This was amazing, terrifying and intriguing. I really enjoy your narrartions!
There’ll be too many likes than the TH-cam algorithm can handle 😔
I’ve been listening to your channel for over a year now and I’ve never heard a story that gave me such an intense feeling of pure terror. The author reflected every emotion PERFECTLY in his words and the way you read it just made it all come to life. Fucking perfection man...
Sam Kunde only just over one year? You're still a baby ;)
it feels a lot like a steven king book.
Honestly, I don’t feel the same way. I felt as though the children, or whatever entity that was possessing those showers, was only out to scare them and not to harm them. Both times the main character went into the building the children had every opportunity to hurt him or kill him if they wanted to, but both times they let him go for no reason. After the first time this happened I felt as though the stakes were greatly lowered for his return. Don’t get me wrong, the story was well written, but you have to admit this was a flaw.
Yea I almost stopped listening cause I was getting anxiety when he was trying to get through the cellar door
@@Vladamite this has been one of the more disappointing stories I’ve heard so far from mrcreepypasta. Still not able to understand why the showers were so terrible
Jesus. Now my anxiety has anxiety. Thanks jack
Is it me or has his views been going down? He is my favorite person to listen to while im cleaning or doing absolutely nothing. His voice so soothing and stories so interesting, i just hope he never stops making videos because no matter what i will always come back to his channel in my free time.
yeah theyve been in the ten thousands and barely hitting hundred thousands
There's a lot of us but we can do better
Yeah iv noticed this trend among the creepypasta community. MCP and CMP reached a little over a million subs but it stopped and each video gets less views. I think its probably because of a lack of interest and the oversaturation of creepy stuff. Back in 2012, 13, and 14 they were still commonly reaching at least 100k views when the topic was still fresh
@@BobPantsSpongeSquare97 I totally agree with you!!! I wish everything was still like it was back in 2013, 14 and 15. Those were seriously the best times to be on TH-cam. I guess all we can hope for is that theres a new wave of people coming in and watching everyone.
Same! I love cleaning my room and listening to these!
Re-reading the House of Leaves made me realize The Showers has many interesting parallels to the novel. Both are excellent and definitely worth reading/listening.
Literally reading house of leaves right now and had the same thought lmao
It was great meeting you in person and I was the person who told you this was my favorite creepypasta when I bought one of your books so you doodled in it a shower head. Love you Mr Creepypasta and your stories will always have a place in my heart
I popped some headphones on and played this while I was working. I was completely zoned out in what I was doing, and before I knew it, over 2 and a half hours go by, and I got everything done with time to spare. Gonna have to do this more often...
I love this channel but does anyone agree that when things get intense he just starts shouting 😂
The way he reads is to give emotion to speed up in his reading when it gets intense and slow down when there are more details then the combination of speeding up and raising his voice is to strike fear in you and it’s works really well
Tbh I feel that his voice acting of these stories is great. I love me some creeps mcpasta but he is monotone at times not gonna lie
I love those parts best. It makes it more intense. He's one of the only narrators that do that.
Yeah I didn’t like that
it sells the mood and emotions so well
I feel like there's more to this story than meets the eye. It's very meta regarding story telling. It's really interesting. Feels like it has more to say than the story it self.
Reducing it to simply a "scary story" would be a disservice. There's more to this, I feel.
Very good observation. I remember watching an interview with the author and I think that was one of his themes.
I mean, he said he was obfuscating stories from the start so, much like Johnny Tremain in House of Leaves, we don’t know if ANY part of the story is “true”, but you have to ask; does it matter?
@@tanuki01 please don't mention house of leaves, I mean DEAR GOD!
@@alchemicmercury I mean, it's pretty applicable to this situation
i feel like that's typical of psychological horror
"Um... Bob, what are we going to do with all these vampire children??" "I have a great Idea, Carl! We lock them up in the old cultist's showers and feed them a deer once a month! No one is going to find out!"
Been listening since I was 13, I'm turning 23 next week. Just wanted you to know I really appreciate you and the channel
The main character in this story sounds like he's got PTSD
And his girlfriend has more traits of BPD than bipolar :v
Well no shit
Almost dying can do that to ya.
I mean yeah having to see that stuff can fuck you up
I can't tell if the comment is just making a joke and the replies are r/whooosh's, or just pointing something out, or what. :/
I finally sat down and listened to all of this in one setting. Really reminds me of Borrasca V but I really like how it still maintains the mystery of what the Showers, the deer and the kids are or were. Thank you for the content and merry Christmas MCP
There feels like the mystery is too vague to me. Like, why are there kids, and why are they tied to these showerheads? There's no hints at lore, nothing to theorize off of. This pasta is just plain
@@OrtegaSaucemaybe you don't think hard enough
@@timrosswood4259 so explain it to me. What am I missing?
@@timrosswood4259 still waiting on that explanation
@timrosswood4259 still waiting on an explanation...
Man, living in Nebraska and living only about 45min from Broken Bow has me curious
@Ta'Maira Leventry broken bows fakr
@@johnleathers514 that's wrong it is an actual place
@@johnleathers514 lmao umm no
@@johnleathers514 he lives right by the place the stories fake not broken bow obviously you don't know what your talking about cause the only fake thing is the story
@@simonginger3179 o I bet it's real
This one is interesting to me. Though, I'm sure the story is fictional, there's some chatter about it a couple years before it came out and it's consistent with this one. IE, someone asking about it a year before the story with that OP saying they heard about it in a previous post blah blah blah. From my search, the very first post is on Yahoo answers from 2010. 2 full years before the story was posted,. It seems to go deeper than that but I cant find anything before that.
It's probable that this story is inspired by that
You probably won't see this since it's been over a year since you posted this, but most of the creepypastas online have been around for a couple of years. There's just so many out there that it can take a long time for the narrator's to either get around to do them or even find them. There's also always the possiblility that the original post was stolen from someone more influential in the creepypasta community and that's why it seems like it may be real. All of that aside, this is one of my absolute favorites that mcp has ever done though. His narration brings so much life and added character to the already great main characters. Though I wasn't too fond of how Karen, or maybe I just hate those types of people in general idk haha
Deci
Or it actually exists, one way to find out
🚴🏻♂️
I don’t think I’ll listen to this until I take my shower because with a title called The Showers that’s gonna make shampooing my hair a nightmare
ElectroNinjaHD same
-_- .... HAHAHAHAHHA!
Yo dudes I got my shower! It’s show time!
ElectroNinjaHD lol
I listen WHILE taking a shower
I love stories like this, only have one complaint about them. Why don't they at least visit the terrible place during the day .-. And visit while not being drunk or on drugs so that you can trust what happens more. I get that all that is for the story and it is still awesome. I just love trying to find those more realist stories that can truly give you the creeps! But this does pretty good :) and your narration is always superb
So. Who’s up for a field trip to Broken Bow Nebraska!? :D
Yo I'm in *grabs shotgun an sword* let's go.
"Time for a fucking crusade."
Let's go!
Music choices for this drive?
@@bretlemieux2489 What will we do with a drunken sailor.
Listened to this a few times over the past few years.
Sometimes a story just grabs hold and doesn't let go. This is one of them.
Its becoming so that I can't remember how I ever passed the time without your voice in my ear. Wow. Thank you so much. This was fantastic!
Every creepypasta I hear leads back to the gas station haha
Im actually amazed that story hasnt becomes own universe. I mean in the first chapter Jack mentions that if you get lost anywhere you could wind up at the gas station, implying it doesnt seem to exist in just one place.
Gas stations are scary ya know
Hmmmmm... Jack huh. Of course!
Need a FIRST class MOVIE made from the GAS station STORY I'd pay to see it
Don't be a Karen
At 01:41:34 I noticed "Promise" by Akira Yamaoka, from Silent Hill 2 was being played as background music and legitimately got chills down my spine!
I noticed “In the House, In a Heartbeat” at 01:55:35, and although it’s a song from a zombie movie that was also used in Metro Exodus, zombie and post-apocalyptic stuff isn’t really what I’d call horror even if it technically is. But the song still is a perfect choice as part of the buildup as the main character goes back into “the showers”.
@@thevoices5880idk zombies can be quite horrific
Karen is blaming him??? She ain't 💩
Ole ole! Great job. Still one of my top 5 stories after all these years
Two men came upon the showers, cold and damp in morning hours
One man said "inside we go!" the other man said "oh, no. no. no."
So went one within the walls, to hear the echoes and the calls
Then shouting, raving, he did call out, "By god man let me out!"
All fell silent in the showers, cold and damp in morning hours
And one man crouched a whistling, as he chewed on gristling
Of the man who shouted out, "Please god let me out!"
For when you go to secret showers, in the cold damp morning hours
Go alone and not with friend, for friend shall fiend and then shall rend
while whistling a silly tune, a military song, over body hewn
For madness lies without not in, and trapped you'll be there within
And witness you, your own demise, in your friends maddened eyes.
In the showers cold and red, quiet now save for the dead.
Nobody Special dam thats actually pretty cool
This needs to be on a wall somewhere.
You are talented
He didn't write this.
Some dude made a thread about an urban legend about the showers in Hastings Nebraska, in 2011 before the first story was ever even wrote.
There was a guy in that thread who only wrote in poems and this one was one of them.
Thanks Khoruis. But still, I enjoyed it, so thanks for sharing it, Nobody Special. Maybe put a name at the end next time.
Amazing story and narration! I think this might be the best breakdown of what role the manic pixie dream girl plays, AND the true danger of such a character; working from unknowable and unalterable motives.
brian never got his goddamn sunflower seeds
God damn this was one of the best horror stories I've ever listened to! The voice acting was really good, the writing was incredible, I got sucked in so fast I had to finish it all in one go.
I listen to the first few parts of this in high school before it was conplete. Then one day mrcreepypasta uploads the complete series of the showers? Nostalgia overload.
The fact he mentions how he felt in the first story shows something powerful than fear is truly scary and shows how much he felt extreme fear with that fight-or-flight reaction gone is honestly astounding. I couldn’t have someone better to narrate it!
out of every story ever told on this channel, this one will always been my favorite
This one and "I Dared My Best Friend To Ruin My Life And I Think It's Working" I read the whole thing including the sequel on Zandsand's Reddit.
And what about "Borrasca"? This is an absolute masterpiece.
@@llilacprince yep Borrasca is easily my favourite story of all time
Tales from the gas station for me
borrasca is my favorite story of all time
Mr. Mayes sounds so awesome.
52 minutes in, and I'm deeply immersed in the atmosphere. This is the best story I have ever heard make such an atmosphere. Even got me paranoid! I love it!
Spoilers:
I'm done with it now. By the third part, I didn't feel paranoid or experience the same atmosphere. I had a feeling of dread and wanted Jack to not return at all costs. But once in the tunnel and things started happening, it wasn't like before. It was still and cold. I felt no paranoia, no dread, or anything negative nor positive. Pure emptiness and nothingness. But around the end I felt a twinge of dissatisfaction due to the rise of atmosphere, then I'm presented with what I'm not sure with. But the feeling nothingness was probably deliberate for that part. If so, I commend you. But listening to this story showed me what my fear is. I now know what it is, and am grateful for this story to have helped.
@Very Scary
At the time I wrote that comment, I thought it meant deeply immersed.
Out of the ocean of spooky story readers on youtube, you are my favorite cup of salt water. Your voice and reading talent is neither grating nor monotonous. I've been watching this channel for years, but damn if I haven't just found the other readers.
This is good enough to be a book, I would totally buy it
It has be turned into a book and it expanded on the og creepypasta
According the some reviews the expanded stories in the book just makes it less interesting?, but needless to say I’m going to buy it anyways
@@Nonexistent_Music this comment is 4 years old. There is no point in commenting friend
@@kubokubo6347 "NiCe NecRo" hurr durr
His VIOCE makes it 10x better
V I O C E
His voice too!
Yes, his falwless vioce
Gotta love his vioce.
every time i see someone with this profile picture i wonder if they’re a pewdiepie fan bc in like 2016 he told people to make they their youtube profile pic
I love mcp! He helps me calm down and be able to relax enough to sleep... It was super hard to fall asleep before I listened to him but since I love nightmares he gives me that and it brings me relaxation
The "compelte" version is *always* the best version ;D
Author: Nebraska isn’t so bad
Also Author: YOU DIE IN NEBRASKA
Wow. The fact that I had not listened to this until today is baffling. Incredible.
Master class voice acting and pasta, 10/10
this is honestly one of the best stories. not even like just out creepypastas this is just a creative masterpiece
Listening to your voice to fall asleep is worth having the most terrible dreams :)
You have such a tremendous storytelling ability You have really given me a sort of inspiration I would love to start narrating creepy pastas. I know that the art is somewhat lost since creepypastas became like old news but I still think they may be appreciated. I really would love to try to conjure up the imaging that you were able to do with your voice escalating and then quieting and then everything you're able to do is just such an amazing talent I think you're great.
OMG!!!! After the 300 stories from MCP, Dr. Creepen, and Corpse Husband, this is BY FAR my favorite story that I've ever listened to. I work nightshift as a boiler maker and sometimes it can be very mindless and repetitive work. This was one of those times. I put this on before my final break, listened intently until just now when I'm completing my hour drive through this black and white blizzard. I have never had such an entertaining last quarter of work and drive home in my life. Sincerely, MCP. Thank you.
I’ve fallen asleep to this story nearly every night for the past couple months ☺️
I never believe Mr. Mays' stories.
Five gallons of bleach for only $19.99 is way too good to be true
BossCrazyRoss 😂😂😂😂
Lol that’s about right if you get it at Costco
Summary of the story: Man goes to prison, drops the soap. The end.
Great video!
Hahaha!
O shit
Synister 🤣😂🤣😂🤣
Plot twist... There were 80 black guys behind him.
Synister spoilers much? Guess i don't need to watch this then lol
Dude. Lemme just tell you this. You're by far my favorite creepypasta reader. I find it so fascinating how you read all these creepypastas. It's like you put yourself in the character's shoes and emerse yourself in certain environments. As I listen to you, I notice how strangely soothing and bone chilling your voice is when you lower your tone to describe some of the more disturbing scenes, and when you raise your tone to stimulate either fear, anger, or insanity in a character, I find myself getting very disturbed. You are the master at this kind of stuff, even though sometimes you repeat lines at certain points. You are the reason why I decided to start my own creepypasta-reading channel. Thanks for inspiring me for so long.
My 5th grade SS teacher was Mr. Mayes, now I'm scared
Are you Jerry or one of the stoners
I had one in 10th grade like him. Bad part is I showed him this and he tell the story every year😒
@Madison Arnold I was always scared of my teachers that had the last name Myers 😂😂
(Edit): Also, we love your profile pic of James 😂
SS? Nazis????
@@alecdestroyer0757 no
Holy shit that ending. This is the sort of open-ended implication that I love from these sorts of stories. Good shit man!
As I banged against the cellar door with all my might, wood splinters chipping off revealing strong beams of light burning my skin it finally gave way. I dropped to the floor sobbing and heard a familiar laugh. I looked up at the figure standing before me with his infamous grin...
David fucking King...
David fucking King😂😂😂😂
Myuu's work coupled with Mrcreepypasta's narration makes these stories 1000 times better.
(Not to say they aren't amazing on their own)
anybody else wanna go visit this place now? visiting places people wrote creepypastas about is huge on my bucket list. can't wait until it's *compelte*
I think I found it on Google maps but I can't put a pic in the comments. Hit me up on twitter @justin00211020
@@ravynreimer8987 hey u still on TH-cam?
No
Best story in years. More than a scary story.
Started listening to you 7 years ago, still as good as you were then, if not better!💥💥
You know how to tell these stories perfectly, I remember being 12 and getting my first glimpse into the internet with my very first phone. I was always into horror and McCreepyPasta is how I spent most of my school nights and summer time. My friend and I were wrapped up into creepy pastas until the slender man stabbing in Wisconsin. I live in a small town about an hour away from where it happened. But I’ve been getting into these stories again, I’m 18 now, and these haven’t changed from my childhood. Still keep me up all night, questioning shadows in the corners of my room that just end up being piles of clothes. But no matter how scared I get, I keep clicking for more, your voice and the way you narrate these tales just keeps me hooked. Really happy you’re still telling these stories, and I hope you don’t stop anytime soon. Your posts are always a highlight in my notifications 💕
I like the story a lot but I have so many questions.
Where did the body of Mr Mayes' friend go? What was the significance of deer down there? What WERE the children and why were they there? How did they get there? What was the significance of the two ladies who said the exact same damn thing about it, and were obviously related? Did they take all of these children and kill them underground? What was the motive, the method? How much of this was real and how much was in his head? Was the smell of death BECAUSE of the children or something else like whatever water came from the showers? Was it because their bodies were buried down there in the muck somewhere?
There was just a lot that either wasn't explained or completely went over my head. Someone please send help in the form of explanations or theories
LlamLlams the best horror is found in the unknown, or something like that.
Go find it yourself. A second time if need be. if you didn't manage to solve it the first time. True answers are seldom told to you but figured out on your own.
LlamLlams point of the story is you don't know and can make up your own story.
I agree that its left too open and unexplained. This is not a good story. A retelling of an event that doesn't really have significance if you weren't there to experience it with the author.
The supernatural events of the showers are an allegory to traumatic experiences involving insanity and deranged dread and mental illness in general.
The light turning and cutting off symbolizes the destruction of reality into incorherant mad dread.
The children stand for your own personal demons coming for you, the uncertainty of what they do when they get you represents the fear of letting your problems overtake you.
The animal screaming also represents this, it's the inability to ignore/cope with the situation.
The door represents the matrix of your greatest fears, when it's opened all hell breaks loose as a consequence of a person being forced to confront that what they fear the most
And the showers and fluids represent the state of mind of people who go through such things as this.
This whole creepypasta is an allegory of overcoming traumatic experiences that hold you back
I’ve watched this so many times and it never gets old
I can’t even listen to anyone else tell this story because this guys voice, the way he tells it, fits it so well.
That voice acting is on point.
Thank you mrcreepypasta. I’m not a fan of TV and the quality of movies these days and find myself only listening to the stories you post. I’ve been listening to you for years and hope for many to come. Thank you for your work.
*learns about story were guy dies because they fell into a cave with 20 creepy ghost kids*
*proceeds to go there completely unprepared. Gets seriously injured but manages to escape from creepy ghost girl*
*returns a second time and comes unprepared again with his bipolar girlfriend. Gets injured a second time and doesn't get proper rest before venturing down into cave.*
Uh. Climbing rope? Glowsticks? Flashlights? Medkit? Shotgun? Knife? Thick clothes? Flares? Flare gun? Waterproof clothes? No? Ok. At least you got your iPhone and a pair of boots and you found an old flashlight. Presumably the one you dropped 10 years ago.
Yea idk if I'm the popular opinion or not but I thought this story sucked ass lol
@@parkeralan19 kinda thought that too but if there was some _twist_ like finding the body of Mr Mazes friend then it will be a lot more scary, but unrealistic. I know this story is just made up but it does give a slight sense of realism to it, also making it scary
Well i have 30 mins left so maybe they’ll find the body who knows ,_,
@@DevereI I just thought the story was trying to be wayyy.... to vague and artsy. I get some story's aren't suppose to have conclusion but this to me was a lazy amount of take your own guess at what it is. It just made no damn sense. Like I actually liked the first half of the story but even the second half just listening to how long he described his anxiety on the drive there made me wanna throw up. Idk lot of creepy pastas by this dude that I love. This one is not one of them lol
@@parkeralan19 The first part is fine. After that, it falls apart and becomes cliché and gets boring.
From doing some small research, looks like there is actually urban legends of this place predating this story by 2 years (2010). It makes me interested about this.
I love the vibrant and livid way You narrate !! You always keep me at the edge of my seat gasping my hand over my mouth!!! Thank you for keeping my nights creepy!! Never Stop!! Xoxo
Damn good story teller man. The way you tell them just keeps me excited!! Great job!
When I first heard you read The Showers, I was in high school, around the same age as Jack was when he first heard the story. For some reason I don’t think I listened to the second part until I was in college, around the same age as Jack when he went to the showers himself. Finally when I listened to the last part, I was out of college, probably a good bit younger than him when he went the second time, but still I could definitely relate to that feeling of living a shitty life. The fact that this story has almost grown with me over the years is almost poetic
Oof just listened to this whole thing in one sitting
Alex Whiting same
I feel asleep in the first 30 so minutes and then just kept listening to it, and I’ve been so confused these last two hours
*he goes down the stairs after karen*
*the walls slowly close in a bit*
"I honestly, truly didn't think you'd fall for that. In fact, I devised a much better trap for when you got through that easy one. If it would've been that easy, I would've just dangled a turkey leg from the ceiling."
I honestly haven't felt this terrified of a story in a while. It's not a lot out of the ordinary, but the way you read it was incredible. I literally cried and one point because of how urgent and scared you sounded. Kudos my dude
He really is drunk at 0.75 speed
Dalton Bay underrated comment damn
bless your soul brother, you made my day
Ha!
Bless you
its already 3 hours long why would you
i want to cry in just the thought
This had me the most spooked out of any pasta i'd listened to, but then to realize what the ending was, it just left me feeling uneasy. Like that feeling after vomiting, you don't feel good, a bit shaky, but you are relieved of a pressure that had built up and you didn't even know was there. I suppose that's what the shower was.
Watches the video for 3 seconds.Great video!
(Edited)
This is the second time I've listened to this story. The whole story, he just does a great job. I appreciate what he does, thank you.
Personally didn't like the way the story went with the updated parts, but it's still really damn good!
Yea it got a little uh toxic relationship
I was one of the first couple thousand people to listen to this man tell stories, and because of the dumb TH-cam algorithm changes for a few years I lost Mr. Creepypasta and forgot. MCP's unrivaled storytelling prowess helped me through a lot of the hardest times in my early adolescent and adult life, and it makes me so happy to come back and see that his channel is thriving. You deserve it all homie, your content is unparalleled. Thank you for sharing your gift with us.
His Bryan voice is great 😂😂 it’s totally smoker esque
The writer of this story used to be my boss at a movie theater. He moved to a new job, though. I miss him, he was a good guy.
Why do i always listen to this stuff at 1 am??
Because that is the best time to.
Idk why do you ask everyone else a question only you can answer?
Nathaniel .Lopez absolutely destroyed her
it was rhetorical
If you want to pull an all nighter just listen to these, if you are trying to pull an all nighter that’s why
Man, all I can think is... "My Brand!" @1:25:08 and the bit about American Spirits burning for an eternity? Painfully true.
So hard to take a drag of it too.haha
This should BE MADE INTO A MOVIE!!!
Tbh this would be a great horror movie if the producers can keep every detail on point
It was, but it wasn’t called the showers
One of the first creepypastas I ever listened to and even now looking back I can say this is probably one of the best, very underrated.