@@harveyhams1572 Weel, the US Marines certainly are good soldiers. But they are far from what is described here. There is plenty of special forces from other countries that are as good, or even better. But they do have the best equipment, I'll give them that.
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Marines are not soldiers and why you may believe there are others just as good they don't have the same heart as US Marines @@palmarolavlklingholm9684
Some of these stories make me feel like I've lost my place in the story and I'm rereading paragraphs. Stopping this could give time to expand characters.
Alien conversation: Staff: "Admiral we have exceeded our allowed loss rate for this planet." Admiral: " (sigh) Very well, withdraw all forces. Once the last craft is off planet proceeding with the glassing operation. We can neither allow them to continue to improve, nor show any weakness to our enemiews or those we have already conquered."
Ubisoft should have this as their next game in the some style of The Division games... Think about, BioWare had Commander Shepard, Halo has Master Chief, this could be something Bigger for them using the style of Division (to stay in cover without having to move unless needed).
@@paulacornelison243 Morale, self-confidence, discipline, training, faith, are all elements of “the moral” element or aspect of combat power, which is generally considered to be about three times as important as “the physical” aspects (number of troops, tanks, weapons, ammo, etc). People defending their own nation, community, etc. are generally more motivated and more determined than the invaders.
Sargent Major Avery Johnson: Dear Humanity We regret coming to Earth We regret being Alian bastards And we most definitely regret the Corp. Just blew up our raggedy ass fleet.
New marines are SOFT, much of the training has been dropped and standards lowered, used to have to do 3 mile run in full gear, do obstacle course in full load. full combat load was around 175lbs of gear.
Except that our Marines always kick the US Marines arse in every exercise. Our SAS are probably the BEST SPECIAL FORCES in the world. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧
if you want more than 3k subs...clean up the stories...stop the repetition, otherwise this will be a channel I listen to....when I am searching for other channels.
All these stories are repeating the same things over and over, no personality in the story telling. That is the reason I unsubscribe from this channel.
@@jons387 Not just AI Narrators but written by AI. That's why they are so repetitive. They don't even bother to edit or proof read the story. They just plug some basic outline material into the AI and it writes the script. Imagine those of us who actually write short stories trying to compete with this crap and getting absolutely nill for exposure.
Another Marine here... Although presented fairly well, the story begs further development. Why didn't the aliens retreat to orbit and bombard the planet flat? I know that Humans would have dug deeply into the 'bones of the world' to weather such bombardment if given time. In fact, while operations were going on 'in the field' against alien soldiers, world governments would have turned every resource to digging deeply and filling such excavations with as many people as possible, along with as much technology as could be moved and implemented. No mention of such an occurrence or occurrences happened in the story. Possibly, in order to focus on the Marines. After the aliens retreat, Humanity would work tirelessly to 'gain the high ground'. Building orbital defenses against any further invasion. The entire Solar System would become a deadly minefield, as well as have multiple staging areas for space-based counterattacks. The story does not specify if Alien ships were 'taken', in whole, or salvaged wrecks. The Marines would have put the obtaining of such as a high priority mission, to enable them to counter Alien threats, especially orbital attacks. By finding a way to counter Alien shields, the Marines and others would make the Alien's ships vulnerable to attack, and further make them wary of Humans and their fiendish inventiveness and adaptability. Post story, Humanity would have turned its Solar System into a vast 'killing field', to reduce any invasion force as much as possible before they ever encountered Orbital Defenses. The Aliens seem to rely upon energy-based defensive and offensive systems. They would be ill-prepared for solar-powered, gigantic Rail Guns, and C-Fractional, nuclear-tipped missiles. After all, what is the real difference between a multi-gigawatt laser and a rail-gun projectile? Both deliver the same energy at impact. Do the math. Just a few thoughts.
invaders relied on superior tech X 100, marines fought for their very way of life etc. etc. X 100. I get it. This is a love note to the US Marines but a big old insult to every other fighting force the world over.
As much respect as I have for the U.S. Marines and their international allies of which I am one, I am sad to think you just described, in detail, the Vietnam war.
VERY generic and VERY repetitive. There are only so many ways you can say they underestimated the marines...and you managed to say each and every one 5 times over.
never watched G.I.JOE cartoon? shooting cool guns and no one ever dies. and don't forget rambo the cartoon. through it had ads every 2 minutes i swear.
Ironic, the big baddy underestimates the "awsome" US Marines that save the world? Cant you see that the US has that exact same mindset as the "big baddie" in this story? Learn from your own stories dude...
US Marines recruitment video 😂😂😂 almost no story to tell but if you spend most of the time hacking up is Marines the minutes add up. Sounded like a school paper that had to be 32 min long so just repeat Marines are the best 5000 times makes a great filling material.
This is simply an outline-ish thing. Just a very bare bones mess of a quasi-story that an author might wish to fleash-off and write, and then it repeats. Lol! No characters, and so there's certainly no character development. It's not even to the point that we could call it an actual story.
This is a stupid story. They keep saying the same sentences over and over. This ain't a story, it's a stretched out paragraph. This one sucks. Who is this page? I'm gonna make sure I don't follow them
Improvise, Adapt and Overcome. Hoooo'rah
Semper Fi
I’m a Marine Corps disabled veteran…and yes, this seemed like a recruiting video for us. 😂😂
Ryly?
@MatkaPrzeozonaSelenaAgna oh God, I've been bagging these channels for months over this very thing
Thank you for your service
My husband is a disabled army veteran he said that too
o7
My God... its like listening to leviticus and numbers in space... im 5 min in and its repeating the same this over and over.
The redundancy probably doubled the length of the story.
No kidding lol.
i like this wonderful story.
while listening to it i felt proud to be an "earthling" ❤
thanks for sharing!
Was this a recruitment ad for the US Marines?
We don't need recruitment like this. The Marines are their recruitment.
@@harveyhams1572 Ooh-Rah
@@harveyhams1572 Weel, the US Marines certainly are good soldiers. But they are far from what is described here. There is plenty of special forces from other countries that are as good, or even better. But they do have the best equipment, I'll give them that.
Marines are not soldiers and why you may believe there are others just as good they don't have the same heart as US Marines @@palmarolavlklingholm9684
Semper Fi/ Right On! J
Effing A.
Semper Fei.
Some of these stories make me feel like I've lost my place in the story and I'm rereading paragraphs. Stopping this could give time to expand characters.
And they haven’t even run into our special forces yet…
Alien conversation: Staff: "Admiral we have exceeded our allowed loss rate for this planet." Admiral: " (sigh) Very well, withdraw all forces. Once the last craft is off planet proceeding with the glassing operation. We can neither allow them to continue to improve, nor show any weakness to our enemiews or those we have already conquered."
Ubisoft should have this as their next game in the some style of The Division games... Think about, BioWare had Commander Shepard, Halo has Master Chief, this could be something Bigger for them using the style of Division (to stay in cover without having to move unless needed).
Welcome to the hurt locker.
“The moral is to the physical as three is to one.”
What does "as 3 is to 1"?
@@paulacornelison243 Morale, self-confidence, discipline, training, faith, are all elements of “the moral” element or aspect of combat power, which is generally considered to be about three times as important as “the physical” aspects (number of troops, tanks, weapons, ammo, etc). People defending their own nation, community, etc. are generally more motivated and more determined than the invaders.
Improvise, adapt, and overcome
An infantry marine wrote this 100%
Feels a bit disrespectful to all other soldiers all over the world that ain’t USMC
Too much repetition. 32 minutes should be no more than 15 minutes.
Sargent Major Avery Johnson:
Dear Humanity
We regret coming to Earth
We regret being Alian bastards
And we most definitely regret the Corp. Just blew up our raggedy ass fleet.
Good story, good narration. However there was a bit of redundancy.
Yet again the US marines save the world. Please.
New marines are SOFT, much of the training has been dropped and standards lowered, used to have to do 3 mile run in full gear, do obstacle course in full load. full combat load was around 175lbs of gear.
As stated in other comments. The Americans don't think that other countries go to war as well. Too far stuck up their own a55😅😅😅
Not a story that may attract new SF fans.
Has advanced technology and spaceships……..decides a ground invasion is the best way. Ridiculous story, not worth the time I lost
For a moment reminde me Afganistan
🫡
Thank you for your service 🇺🇲
I was thinking of Ukraine...
Us marines? Oh you mean a GSG9 member!
Got it! 😎😉😉
edit it down to 10-15 minutes after the AI has created it.
Thank heavens for the U.S. marines! No specialised armed forces units from any other country on Earth could defeat those pesky aliens! 😂
Except that our Marines always kick the US Marines arse in every exercise. Our SAS are probably the BEST SPECIAL FORCES in the world. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧
Sounds like the Afghanistan War
if you want more than 3k subs...clean up the stories...stop the repetition, otherwise this will be a channel I listen to....when I am searching for other channels.
All these stories are repeating the same things over and over, no personality in the story telling. That is the reason I unsubscribe from this channel.
All these channels r rhe same , copying each other , crap stories, crap AI Narrators
I agree. Repetitive within the story too. Saying the same things over and over.
@HFYAdventure I have read a couple of them. They are much better.
Yes, but THIS ONE ist sponsored by the US NAVY!!!
as Seen in mentioning of the US marines in every 2. Sentence 😂
@@jons387 Not just AI Narrators but written by AI. That's why they are so repetitive. They don't even bother to edit or proof read the story. They just plug some basic outline material into the AI and it writes the script.
Imagine those of us who actually write short stories trying to compete with this crap and getting absolutely nill for exposure.
Alien Vietnam has been discovered
2;40 ell i have a 155mm cannonn
This is seriously probably a 10min video if you cut the fluff and repeat sentences
The aliens wouldn't ever land, orbital bombardment and done.
didnt know i was reading /listening BATTLE: Los Angeles 2
Another Marine here... Although presented fairly well, the story begs further development. Why didn't the aliens retreat to orbit and bombard the planet flat? I know that Humans would have dug deeply into the 'bones of the world' to weather such bombardment if given time. In fact, while operations were going on 'in the field' against alien soldiers, world governments would have turned every resource to digging deeply and filling such excavations with as many people as possible, along with as much technology as could be moved and implemented.
No mention of such an occurrence or occurrences happened in the story. Possibly, in order to focus on the Marines. After the aliens retreat, Humanity would work tirelessly to 'gain the high ground'. Building orbital defenses against any further invasion. The entire Solar System would become a deadly minefield, as well as have multiple staging areas for space-based counterattacks.
The story does not specify if Alien ships were 'taken', in whole, or salvaged wrecks. The Marines would have put the obtaining of such as a high priority mission, to enable them to counter Alien threats, especially orbital attacks. By finding a way to counter Alien shields, the Marines and others would make the Alien's ships vulnerable to attack, and further make them wary of Humans and their fiendish inventiveness and adaptability.
Post story, Humanity would have turned its Solar System into a vast 'killing field', to reduce any invasion force as much as possible before they ever encountered Orbital Defenses. The Aliens seem to rely upon energy-based defensive and offensive systems. They would be ill-prepared for solar-powered, gigantic Rail Guns, and C-Fractional, nuclear-tipped missiles. After all, what is the real difference between a multi-gigawatt laser and a rail-gun projectile? Both deliver the same energy at impact. Do the math.
Just a few thoughts.
Our system is the Solar system because our star is called Sol, other systems are star or stellar systems.
Good job they didn't meet an SAS soldier them.
Nice clean editi g ckean read good job thanks ❤😂🎉😢😮😅C.S.A. BABY
invaders relied on superior tech X 100, marines fought for their very way of life etc. etc. X 100. I get it. This is a love note to the US Marines but a big old insult to every other fighting force the world over.
As much respect as I have for the U.S. Marines and their international allies of which I am one, I am sad to think you just described, in detail, the Vietnam war.
5:30 The Marines?? Really?
Who else?
Yes. Really. Semper Fi.
wonder why they dont ever include the Australians probly cos wed kick everyones arse
@johnathangoldsworthy you lost to a bunch of emu's mate. You aren't beating your way out of a paper bag. No comparison to the USMC.
@@y0ur_name_here ask the talibans or others guerrilla groups.
usmc are not a guerrilla group.
Too repetitive
So much repetition. You said time and again the exact same thing
Do you think the Person who wrote the AI was a US Marine?
Repetitive...over and over
tip of the spear.
Where’s Chen?
VERY generic and VERY repetitive. There are only so many ways you can say they underestimated the marines...and you managed to say each and every one 5 times over.
If you don’t like it then don’t watch. Don’t whine about it
never watched G.I.JOE cartoon? shooting cool guns and no one ever dies. and don't forget rambo the cartoon. through it had ads every 2 minutes i swear.
Cool Story, but what is with the repeating narrative
This is narrated by Ai
Too generic in battle description
Ironic, the big baddy underestimates the "awsome" US Marines that save the world?
Cant you see that the US has that exact same mindset as the "big baddie" in this story? Learn from your own stories dude...
This is by far the worst storyline I’ve ever listened. A Marine Promo-Story nothing more.
Far too much repetition. seems like an AI creation. i lost interest after i heard the same thing 7 times & didn't even get 1/3 way through
This would be two minutes long only, without all the repeats and verbal redundancy of speech in oh do many forms. Waste of time
People of earth's army is called US- marines????
They think so. 😆
US Marines recruitment video 😂😂😂 almost no story to tell but if you spend most of the time hacking up is Marines the minutes add up. Sounded like a school paper that had to be 32 min long so just repeat Marines are the best 5000 times makes a great filling material.
I like hfy stories from net narator but these ones are not good. Its repeating the same lines in different ways...
Constantly saying the same say get over and over! Plus they would have just nuked the planet from orbit
Kinetic energy ballistic missiles would do.
How many more times are the jar heads, going to save the universe. Is this crap written by a marine recruiter.
Piss poor ai written repetitive rubbish
This is simply an outline-ish thing. Just a very bare bones mess of a quasi-story that an author might wish to fleash-off and write, and then it repeats. Lol!
No characters, and so there's certainly no character development. It's not even to the point that we could call it an actual story.
This is a stupid story. They keep saying the same sentences over and over. This ain't a story, it's a stretched out paragraph. This one sucks. Who is this page? I'm gonna make sure I don't follow them
It's obsession with internal conflict meh I out here this channel sucks
Very disappointed, extremely repetitive. Your AI syory teller has failed here.