Professionally Roasting your Art.. (ROAST & REVIEW)
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How do we submit a piece for a good roasting? 😆
I love these videos! And now I share your pet peeve 😬
👨🏽💻We've been looking for AGES more people in TH-cam that maes art content (like us).
We had little time left to surrender. And then, we discovered your channel
🤭I guess we have plenty of work this weekend watching all your videos
✍🏽Do you have a newsletter by the way?
Greetings from Spain!!
Kommentar
07:36 - 07:40 my favorite moment, when the painting made him so happy - he zoned out for full 4 seconds. Wonderful!
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Find yourself someone who will look at you like Alpay looks at that cat 🤣
I feel like your 'profesional critiques' were more like personal preferences than advice to help people improve.
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I would disagree with the first one about teeth. It also depends on a context. But even here.
I totally like the original better. The teeth are really well done.
Me too. I liked the original one :3
I came here to say the same thing. The original was actually less distracting and felt more cohesive.
Definitely the original because it fit with the art style the artist was going for. After he tweaked it, the teeth stood out too much because of this difference.
I don't get it too. Like how can an artist tell other artist what to do? Still don't get it..
Seriously no one explained the Leonardo one? So in the beginning of the movie Jack 'saved' Rose from 'falling' of the Titanic, (actually she wanted to kill herself by jumping off the ship, because she had to get marrried to an asshole for money) he then later asked her fiancé's bloodhound Lovejoy for a cigarette. But him being poor af he took two and put one behind his ear 'for later'. So the reference picture is accurate. Klassisch geschnorrt. 😉 Tolles Video wie immer.
My next painting will be TEETH 🦷🦷🦷
I wonder if you guy's critic eachothers work too, or if that is off limits 😅👍
Shots fired!
lol
Complex and detailed teeth over a simple and no detail face.
😂🌸🕊️😂😂 do it! Get your teeth into it 😂
I actually like the extra Bateman in the American Psycho painting. He is supposed to be the perfect narcissist, so having just him again in the reflection makes total sense to me.
Agree but also agree that it's a missed opportunity to have it show a different side to the character....if the reflection was admiring itself, for example, it would just elevate it so much more. It's still fantastic though!
To watch this kind of critics is SUCH a great way to learn! Thank you to everyone that post their art for this video.
I don't agree with erevything, but this is a good show!
Leonardo DiCaprio painting is Jack from the movie "Titanic", and he really smoke one cigar whille holding another at his ear, he is actually a painter too.
“These splatter effects… don’t, yeah don’t do these ever again.” 😂 Some of your side comments crack me up. Maybe I’ll have the guts to request a roast from you soon.
Do it!
I actually liked the splatter xD
@@AngryPanda. Yeah I dunno, it looks like the artist tried to visualize his emotions with the splatters. I don't think it's a bad idea at all, though they are incorporated a little bit awkwardly.
The splatter is amazing 🤩
The cigarette one that is bothering you is referenced from the movie Titanic. And yes the character commonly has a cigarette in his mouth while he is smoking one.
Yes, it would be difficult any other way, lol!
1:19 - "Why you do this? Why? What does it do? What is it for? It doesn't make any sense? This is what people often associate with, like, pretentious art that kinda does things just for the sake of doing it."
Weird to see you critique someone for painting a perfectly good portrait and then smearing color on it for no reason...
i dont think he was talking about color my man
@@lazar2949 What is he talking about then?
@@lazar2949 so what he was talking then my man?
@@lazar2949 we are waiting my man
Oh mein Gott. I mean I already noticed that that you are not a native English speaker but never would I have guessed that you are German...😲
Love your art. Love your videos. Keep on doing it, you're great!
Mega Video, freue mich schon auf part 4😄
I could guess he's German from the moment he opened his mouth, and I am not an English native speaker.
*don't know why but alpay getting annoyed by the extra cigarette on leonardo's ear is so fricking funny to me lol.* 😂
Yes! I love how he had to get back on that. Like, the video is almost over..but he just couldnt shake it off😆👍
@@propelakarlson7260 ikr! i mean, finish the first cigarette and move on to the next idk. 😂
And he actually had a second one on the ear on this part of the movie...
Yeah actually in the movie where he asked the rich guy for a cigar after being a hero he took two and put one on he’s ear lol
Oh my God, i had totally forgotten that in a moment of courage i did submit something to be roasted and was totally taken by surprise 😅 but hey now i know i need to work on composition 🙏 i haven’t studied art so it is helpful to know what i’m lacking (oh and yaayyyyy it’s my painting in 15:36 😅)
But I love your painting. I am an a school specifically for Arts and design (also dosen’t mean i’m an expert). In my opinion the big blank spot is not the main problem, i just think you had to zoom the painting a bit out, so that there are a bit mor dark areas on the right sight. So it don’t gets too heavy in the left. Other than that you’re very talented specially in the coloration❤️
@@maxbenoit2973 thank you so much i really appreciate it 🙌 i actually kinda get what you mean, i'm kinda learning by trial and error 😂 and maybe i should be more methodical about it. thank you so much for the encouragement
You are very talented!
@@DocBree13 thank you so much
Looks good.
This was really fun xD
I disagree on some of them though:
The one with the realistic dude mixed with the comic book characters i'm not sure about, i think it'd look odd to have all the characters on the left side, and if you still had the hulk on the right also it would be too cluttered
The one with the old guy and the black space on the left.. i feel like it was just enough black. Sometimes a sense of "void" is good! It feels contemplative, almost meditative, like that sense of "i am just a speck in the universe"
And the splatter in the one with the lakers player... kinda crazy, but i love it xD ! The exuberant energy he has is exactly what the splatters convey - untidy, chaotic.. if anything I'd like to have seen more of them splash off-canvas rather than swimming around so neatly within the composition!
Yea I feel the same about the comic layout... exactly my thoughts too .. cant comment on the others yet i havent seen them yet still watching :)
I feel the same about the guy and the black space: because he's looking at something distant in that direction, the blank space suggests there's something more. The subject here isn't the guy on his own, but his stare and what he's supposedly looking at. But maybe covering a bit more would have helped, leaving just a third of the image black
I agree with you on the realistic guy in the void because the painting as a whole follows the rule of thirds to an extent. The plane of the face takes up about the center third of the painting. I do think the composition could have been zoomed out a bit if you will. I'm kind of living for the negative space, especially because it's a fairly even tone of black
As an art teacher… and NO HATE FR hear me out 😆
ik this is a roast and it’s supposed to be funny, but just in case for those of you who are going to take it more seriously (cuz the line between roasting and critique is rly fine esp in art and you rly do want to improve) - id say no need to listen to everything Alpay says. No hate but I disagreed a lot with his critiques 😂 There’s no rule in art! If you want to paint the teeth then paint the teeth lol. There are literally so movements out there past and present. Alpay has an established style and that’s great but he will be speaking from that specific train of thought. Yours can be completely different and in yours the teeth maybe highlights the personality in your subject. Or maybe you want to show the grittiness in the atmosphere. Idk. Point is you can still be a bombass artist regardless of whatever art rule you hear from anyone! Just do you. That’s what will make you shine.
I kinda agree. However, these artists willingly submitted their pieces for him to "roast", so I think they already know that Alpay will be talking about them in his perspective. 👍
I absolutely agree. Thanks for pointing it out.
I agree :)
I always think 'as long as you have a good reason for doing it a specific way, do it'.
I generally agree that painting the teeth individually doesn't add anything and makes the face look weird. If you put that much detail in that part of the face I'd say it needs a reason why the viewer should pay attention to the teeth.
Because they'll spend more time on the teeth than they should, so it makes sense when the teeth have a special meaning...
Like the titans in attack on titan for example. The teeth are important and we know that right away, but if your grandma doesn't eat people don't paint every single tooth of hers lol
It all comes down to "where do I want the viewer to look first and where should they end up focusing" and it's usually not the teeth 😅
@@Anni_Mau Well said!
I absolutely agree. I called this a critique Show with an entertainment ingredient spiced with Alpay's charm. It is funny, especially I am not the one whose "art" is roasted. However, I personally see this critique as an expression of somebody's opinion and only, not more , not less. To be on the objective side, I found an interesting comments about some issues that I am struggling with ....
I love it when you go back to German just for a split second.
really shows how genuine you reactions really are ^.^
I’m the one who painted the miniature at 8:03!!! Thank you so much chi for the critique, I was very careful when deciding my palette, glad you complimented it!
Great job! I love it!
Alpay, you crack me up every time lol. I like to pause the video before hearing what you’ll critique, and try to figure out what you’ll say. It’s actually a good way for me to learn.
Thank you as always for these videos. Not sure how you find time!
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I enjoy watching these because as you give your opinion, you also include how you would approach the piece. And in doing so, you share good tips that we can apply in our own art. 👍🏼
The baby with a big head...what if his hair is just fluffy and he really looks like that...you just called him an anatomy error, LOL
I always love the humor of these roasts! I would totally get super roasted if I submitted a painting, mainly because of my terrible background work. I can never get those right unless they´re chiaroscuro paintings.
"These splatter effects here? Don't... I don't... don't, uh....don't do this ever again. Please." Omg, these roasts are so funny. I've made similar mistakes in my own work so this has been helpful. There is one creepy, gross painting here that I wish I can unsee...
i generally agree with the "no individual teeth" rule, but you kinda made them look weirder than they were before?
No... he didn't?
I like the teeth as a stylistic choice in that painting
I agree with you in most of your critics, especially the realistic ones where you criticize anatomical knowledge, teeth and overdetailing. However, what I've observed in your critisizm is that your focus is mainly on easthetics. While that is acceptable in professional artists that have been there in their previous experience and experinments (coloring, drawing based) I don't believe the art is only meant for the eyes. I think it is also meant for the brains and the heart. And I don't know what your other followers think but I would appreciate these critics more if you could also regard the pieces on this subjects and comment on these thoughts as well.
These are my critics on your critisizm, though I'm not a professional artist or an old follower, just wanted to let you know.
Have a good day.
nice I made it into the roast at 10:20 !! I was curious so I overlaid my reference and the final and it's actually pretty close, sean astin really just has a heavy set jaw haha. but the center line is a bit off which is something I'm realizing I struggle with so I will take it. Thank you Alpay!
I wanted to say I really love your roast videos I feel like I learn a lot from them (including how to take helpful criticism). Of course art is subjective but I think it comes down to whether the parts you critique are done with intention from the artist to subvert conventions or just from lack of awareness. Your suggestions are really helpful, and whether people take them or leave them it guides artists towards what to consider when making their art which is always a good thing! :-)
I adore depicting teeth individually, I think that picture has so much personality 🥰🥰
So interesting! I actually liked the composition of the spider man piece, but love hearing your thoughts on everything! Brilliant feedback, very thought provoking.
You're a great painter- but i don't think you're right about the second or third image. Not every image needs to be absolutely clarified. They're interesting and very cool, especially the purple one. It's a bit chaotic and that's part of what makes it amazing.
The smudged lip is a matter of preference. I think it's an interesting touch to an otherwise fine portrait. That streak/smudge gives it personality. Maybe it could use another smudge, like around the eyes, but point still stands.
The smudged mouth looks contrived and gimmicky. It’s the only thing that weirdly stands out in a relatively good image otherwise.
I can of course only give my own personal/professional opinion… at the end of the day it’s all subjective 😉
I don't think it went far enough. It should look like it's really smeared as it would on a face.
Hehehh, alright you guuuuys. I get it. I completely agree with him now that i think about it. Honestly i didn't think of it much as i did it. Now im sweating here of embarrassment. 😅😬
@@AlpayEfe agreed :)
The Jack from Titanic painting is how it is in the movie he asks for 1 cigarette and takes 2 and puts one behind his ear for later and smokes the one in his mouth
You have such an obvious soft spot for fantasy characters!😂 Great roast again!😁🙌
great video as always! favorite paintings: the ork and leonardo dicaprio (scene from titanic with TWO cigarettes) 🤙🏻
In case anyone is wondering, the background song is Wesly Thomas - Paris Café
This is so cool, especially everytime he gives a pro tip to improve awesome looking paintings
danke für die kritik :)
Regarding the painting at 13:07 I love the almost cubist treatment of the neck and upper chest. It complements the art deco head scarf and the stained glass velvet blouse. Too bad the face isn't drawn very well, but I love the idea behind this one. I hope the artist will consider re-working the face, or doing the whole thing over again. I think it's great, and worth another try.
We spent years trying to be a really good artists when in reality the worst artist are the ones who make all the money
2:07 I think the artist wanted to show that in this social media era, the mind has so much to process that we can't focus on a single thing, and since every single corner is filled he must be a perfectionist 😅
I like the Lord of the Rings painting. Now that you point it out, the background on the left without the pencil lines does look better than the right side
These roasts never disappoint!! Hearing all of your insights is such a treat 🙌 10/10
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It's so weird how a picture of a beautiful smile is great but as soon as you draw those teeth it looks awful lol
Just go easy on the darkness between the teeth and often you’ll be fine.
I actually love everything about the painting at 2:15 so much. Especially how busy it is hahah🙈 live it when paintings are like a „wimmelbild“
Ahhh, i made it into a roast!😍😬 (13:08) Thanks for the critique und Liebe Grüße aus Deutschland😎
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Never expected to see mine here 13:55.
Great video.
Great video! Thanks so much. I love the idea for painting teeth, great advice. Excellent critique and great tips about composition. Blessings and take care.
I think the teeth look better before his 'Improvement"!
Hi Alpay!! I enjoyed so much your critiques!! Bravo!!.. btw where to learn composition? Is there any course/book you would recommend? Thanks a lot!! and looking forward to seeing more of your work, as excellent as always.
I liked Gandalf best... but that may be just because of the subject matter. I suspect the background problem was because it was done with watercolor pencils that didn't dissolve well, or with colored pencil on cold-pressed paper that had too much texture. I have fought with the paper texture when using colored pencils and lost... should have started with the correct paper.
Don't mind him. He's just bad at drawing teeth. You guys are doing great. .
I made it to the end and even forwarded it to friends and family. I was most impressed. Love the art and love the stores......bravo
I personally find the overpaint of the teeth way more off. While most takes are objective the whole don't paint teeth thing always bothered me. How does a white blob look less weird? Sometimes it works but in this case it somehow made it worse. I'm also a professional btw
Nice roasts. But Alpay , Leo in titanic did have a cig tucked behind his ear while puffing away one... Probably to be lit as soon as the current one is almost done 😀. The painting was nice but bit bland. could've been better with some artistic strokes
I know, I know 😅… it’s been like 15 years since I saw that movie the last time
I want a part 4 🎨🖌️
I disagree about the teeth; it can be very interesting to get into the teeth and teeth can be descriptive to the character of the person you are painting.
You getting excited over the dogs ok a boat was really cute 😂🥰
"Ach du scheiße" was exactly my first thought when I saw that painting, too 😂😂 But I kinda dig it. The cat is my favourite tho 😍 Your roast videos are really, really helpful, btw! You give so much advise here; it really helps my own painting decisions a lot even if it's not my paintings that you roasted. Just seeing little (or big) mistakes others made and hearing your tips 👌👌
Harikasın Alpay! Hem eleştirilerde nokta atışı yapmışsın hem de espirili! Brükselden selamlar! Ercan
Merhaba Alpay! Internet sitene contact bolumunden bir mesaj attim eline gecti mi?
Nice critiques, very helpful to me looking at what you are referring to.
Thanks for the critique Alpay!
Bravo! this is exactly what the internet/social media world needs, honest critique. The only way we can get better is if we stop handing out participation trophies. Everyone gets so offended by any type of negativity or critique these days. Let's not confuse trolling with honest critique. I'm so disgusted with the phase " good vibes only". The truth is you do not get to choose someone else's reaction or opinion will be to what you create. As an artist and creator myself I welcome someone to critique my work. I overly critique my work personally but when someone else gives their opinion it adds a different perspective. Potentially one that I did not consider. I like to be challenged rather than praised. It's the only way that I can learn to grow. Great video and great production, thank you for sharing.
Love this format for i've never seen such honest reviews before. I was wondering about this till i realized that you are german...
Jack in Titanic bums two cigs off another guy, putting one behind his ear for later and smoking the other one right away. At least that’s what I remember.
“Love me a good chicken painting” - a man after my own heart.
Eventually I'll make it into a roast with a miniature ;) Glad someone is representing our "little" hobby in each roast at least!
Loved the video, the animal paintings are always top tier
Omg just found all these. Need another one!!
To be fair Julio Cortázar eyes are really wide apart irl
How did I not know you are German! 🙊 Ich mag deine Videos so gerne! Auch das ist wieder lehrreich 😊
I appreciate the comet you made about pretentious art, i believe it should be more talked about. As a fine art student myself, our professors always warn us about that and they also teach us to stay away from commercialized art.
I love your humor & perspectives. Your videos are clear & inspiring!
I disagree with most of your critique honestly, it also comes off as pretentious? Like you are a superior artist compared to the artist that you're roasting. This becomes evident as the majority of your videos titles is about a "professional" artist and so
Das war so krank unterhaltsam! ✨🫶🏻 danke dafür
Thanks for roasting me at 10:10. In my defense, I must say that Julio Cortázar, the reference, has very separated eyes (like a sloth) and I wanted to emphasize it. But looking again I agree that the eye needs to be repositioned :)
love these videos!! hysterical comments!!
Love me a good chicken painting! LOL!
I find that most beginner paintings lack volume. Not enough contrasts between lights and shadows, not enough form. It looks flat even the colors are faded and flat.
Always a pleasure to watch the master correct the kids.
The painting of the girl with her phone is amazing it did take a few minutes to tune into it but once I did I it all made sense
I learnt so much here it was unreal. To me all the paintings had flaws but also charm. It was interesting to see what you be done to make them better.
From a painterly standpoint I like the portrait of the woman with the art-deco scarf (actress Madaleine Khan?). Would like to see a revised version that follows Alpay's suggestions. The American Psycho portrait was conceptually engaging. I would like to see a revised version of that too. The hand that holds the knife was too chubby compared to the skinny faced actor.
Awesome insight. How would one go about getting on these videos?
Instagram hashtag 😁
I couldn't see the compositional problem for the white bearded guy. He occupies 2/3 and the black background gives him space. Not an issue. I liked it.
I disagree strongly with the teeth suggestion, it looked weirder and more distracting when the teeth were not separated
I really liked some of the stuff he criticized from some of the paintings.
there's a story behind the two cigarettes, it was taken from the movie Titanic.. where the actor asked for a cigarette.. and when the guy opened the box.. he took two.. he put one on his ears (to save) and other on his mouth to lit.
07:17 I'm late to the party but I'm pretty sure Leonardo DiCaprio with 2 cigarettes is a scene from a movie. He asks to bum a smoke from someone on the Titanic and takes two, putting one in his mouth and the other in his ear. It shows that he's a loveable rascal and not at all an entitled mooch of course.
17:10 I NEED TO KNOW WHO PAINTED THIS CUTE CHIHUAHUA
Leonardo with the cigar was the scene from Titanic when he saved Rose and asked the Buddy Guard of Rose's BF, he took two cigars and put it on his ear and use the other one. So, funnay Alpay was so dusturbed and annoyed. Lol
The 15:27
Seems like the right cup on the left as if cola turned in to a person ,the middle is a mug with milk tea turned in to a person ,the other one is the fish ,I think cola is looking at the spilled martini , the martini is spilled while cola has a head ,cuz cola is better than alcohol..(?)
I love the humor of the roasts!
That was a very enjoyable video!
Hi Alpay... i thought the red lipstick is cool maybe if its part of the face not blowing out of the cheek. Just a fan here.
Stay safe 🇵🇭💙💙💙
hach du schei*e - beste 😂😂
liebe dieses Format 🙏🏽, man lernt immer was dazu
Aww, my piece wasn’t roasted but nice to see it make a sneaky appearance at 7:16 🤣
I do that a lot when i dont have my cig case with me. Roll one and put it on the ear then roll one for smoking immediately
Such a good advice. Helped me alot
the tangerine painting comment got me! haha
how do you overcome apathy/lack of motivation?
I disagree with you on the teeth and the silhouette strokes. I thought the teeth were beautifully done and the strokes help draw the eyes toward the subject of the painting. Besides, in some mediums you can’t paint over the background without it bleeding through.
what do you use to clean brushes?