TLDR Sp4de wants feedback on the story, he is unsure if he wants to continue it. Join the discord and go to#feedback to give your thoughts. (discord.gg/BwM6xE8sHM) From Sp4de: Here is the story. My intentions with this were to write a story in a very similar premise to "Release that Witch!" created by a chinese dingus. I loved the worldbuilding and its whole aspect of letting a modern dude affect a more primitive world in a very obvious way, but I didn't like the mc so I'm basically rewriting it with my own twist. However, as you'll see in the first two chapters, the backstory is a little out there. I made it to give my mc basically unhinged advanced knowledge in all areas. After all, in RTW, the mc knows a lot of everything that he would never actually know in real life. I learned just how much I don't know just by researching cement. It's apparently an incredibly simple yet complex material that I knew nothing about. Anyway, I want to know if I should remove the backstory and just go with a regular modern dude isekai, in which case his wide knowledge would be valid through suspension of disbelief. Discord: discord.gg/BwM6xE8sHM
TLDR Sp4de wants feedback on the story, he is unsure if he wants to continue it. Join the discord and go to#feedback to give your thoughts. (discord.gg/BwM6xE8sHM)
From Sp4de:
Here is the story. My intentions with this were to write a story in a very similar premise to "Release that Witch!" created by a chinese dingus. I loved the worldbuilding and its whole aspect of letting a modern dude affect a more primitive world in a very obvious way, but I didn't like the mc so I'm basically rewriting it with my own twist.
However, as you'll see in the first two chapters, the backstory is a little out there. I made it to give my mc basically unhinged advanced knowledge in all areas. After all, in RTW, the mc knows a lot of everything that he would never actually know in real life. I learned just how much I don't know just by researching cement. It's apparently an incredibly simple yet complex material that I knew nothing about.
Anyway, I want to know if I should remove the backstory and just go with a regular modern dude isekai, in which case his wide knowledge would be valid through suspension of disbelief.
Discord: discord.gg/BwM6xE8sHM
Spade is awesome.
You folks are killing it, I’m very pleased with these stories. Thanks for sharing your talents.
Just started listening and I think I might have found another one I love if it's done right
I love it next part please.
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Good Story. Hopefully it continues. 😊
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Good story and have a lot of potential to be great.. 😊
Rock and stone!!!
I feel in love with release that witch and how it combined science and magic! If it is anything like that I look forward to it
Favorite author on this channel
more stories by him are coming soon!
Its awesome! Hopefully it continues!
thanks and more plz
Moreeeeee! 🙏🏻
I’m disappointed. I want more. Please don’t stop. Great write and great imagination. Love it.
This is excellent fan fake please continued
Great story. It's a shame that chapter 18 isn't available. 🙂
As long as there is no harem everything will be fine.
Next part
There is a manwha that is very much like this story
Lol i didnt read the authors note till after i made this comment.
There is no more of this novel out it is ongoing 😢 but I will wait for updates
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The odd non eglish words keep throwing me off lol
more?
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Please don't make video's of the story that is on Hiatus
If the story gets more views the creators might go back to writing it.