This feels so much like a predecessor to that time an american reincarnated, same abilities more or less super intelligence, summon guns and fast leveling though in this one he's OP way to quick imo. Shows how the author has improved with his later series.
First thing you do if you find yourself in an unfamiliar environment is to climb to the highest point you can find and survey the area... he was probably walking in the wrong direction the whole time
In a world with magic and one of the 1st things he wants to do is get back on the internet... Lost in the forest for 2 weeks he summons everything, except a knife... 2 hours into the stoey and we still don't even know what 1/2 his skills do...
LOL. This author literally introduced the gf by saying that "I mustered up the courage and got a girlfriend" then proceeds to not even give her a name before having her killed for motivation purposes by the 8 minutes mark... This is all backstory stuff that should gradually be revealed as within appropriate context during the actual story. Like have the MC be living with (or staying with her on that evening) when a gun goes off unexpectedly in some scene use that as a way to introduce his past experience with losing someone to a shooting.
17 years old is not even CLOSE to bring a man. Sorry.AND the writer has never hunted before; he is WAY too complacent about letting the animals suffer. Real hunters are instinctively aware of their pain, and try to limit it.
Western novels are more coherent to me tbh. Chinese novels are hard to comprehend. Japanese novels depends on how simple to complex (i did run "ascendance of a bookworm" raw through google translate and it feels like being hit like a brick in every paragraph.
It's good, but Dream's approach to romance is... weird imo. It feels a bit M'lady-like. (It gets a little less awkward, fortunately.) Biggest detractor from the story though is the amount of wish-fulfillment. I don't mind a protagonist having nice things, but make them work for it. However... to any writers out there, don't let opinions like mine stop you from writing what and how you want. I'm just opining from the point of view of 'how to improve your craft'. Remember that everyone's opinion other than your own will always be trash/10 when it comes to writing. Edit: After getting to ch260... Spoiler-free thoughts. This could be either a 6/10 or 8.5/10 depending on your tastes. It's a 7/10 for myself. This is sci-fi with magic. There is less plot/character progression or interaction than I'd like. Lots of potentially interesting character interactions are glossed over or outright skipped :/ Instead, you're going to get huge info dumps how magic works and theorycrafting, basically going from the magical equivalent of lighting a fire to... supertech . If anything, SP4DE put a lot of thought into it, though I wish there was more character interaction- some characters are even forgotten in favor of a new magical theory. At least it makes sense when viewed from what type of person Dream is.
I wonder , can the text to speech AI learn to not pronounce punctuation ?`Or can you tell it that when talking about guns its most likely caliber not calories ? Or would that take a human going over the first draft and manually correcting it in the text ?
The main character got creepy around hour 4. I'm done. It's by the same writer as that time an American which is way better. It's almost like the author wrote this first and based the mc's untimate skill after Ciel in Slime. Then, they decided not to copy slime anymore and worked out all the bad character designs and bad decision making. I'm on something like hour 50 in American and really love that one.
@Zizis-ly6hj Understood. So why do magic, only to have a gun. It defeats the purpose. That's like saying I'm on a diet, but I'm going to eat whatever I want.
@Zizis-ly6hj Not a Gundam, simply because I don't want to. But I have written a book about people with superpowers. And am currently working on my second. So.....
gotta ask since I’m like half way in and it seems there gonna be at least some romance, this doesn’t turn into some harem or poly relationship does it cuse i hope not
I mean, that's practically a given considering the ethereal entity already basically set up the three of them. Remember, monogamy is our default because of our religious and societal pretenses. That is not necessarily the case for another world.
@@93gamrx that’s why I dropped this not a fan of the stereotypical isekai harem trope, also don’t get why you’re explaining how people view harems in a fantasy light novel
@sunnysolaire6565 to each their own, as for the explanation, just context, Nothing more. Sounds like you've made up your mind tho, so I'll leave it at that.
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This feels so much like a predecessor to that time an american reincarnated, same abilities more or less super intelligence, summon guns and fast leveling though in this one he's OP way to quick imo. Shows how the author has improved with his later series.
First thing you do if you find yourself in an unfamiliar environment is to climb to the highest point you can find and survey the area... he was probably walking in the wrong direction the whole time
Lol this is like Sp4de's wild free-for-all hobby project when his other series get too serious.
This was one of his earlier stories
@hogfell oh, interesting. That makes a lot more sense. Thanks for the insight, and of course for your work here transcribing his tales.
In a world with magic and one of the 1st things he wants to do is get back on the internet... Lost in the forest for 2 weeks he summons everything, except a knife... 2 hours into the stoey and we still don't even know what 1/2 his skills do...
My man is hunting with a 50. Cal thats a little over kill but the fun kind
A 50 cal will turn meat into blood pudding in the blink of an eye 😮
50 cal BMG, or 50 cal Muzzle loader? 😉
AK-50 Enters Chat
"Don't do anything crazy"
-proceeds to summon grenade launcher and starts thwoomping-
"Patterson fire a warning shot"
Sir this is a M32 Rotary Grenade Launcher@@usernamealreadytaken9330
You mean open the slide and look inside the "gun's Chamber." plz dont look down in a barrel of a gun to check for bullets😂 😂 😂.
Indeed. We don't want anyone to try to be isekaid too soon
Isekaid Darwin Award...
It's OK apparently his guns only shoot calories 😅
how to put your self on a tee shirt
I don’t know how looking down a barrel would tell you anything, other than how dumb you are. 😂
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LOL.
This author literally introduced the gf by saying that "I mustered up the courage and got a girlfriend" then proceeds to not even give her a name before having her killed for motivation purposes by the 8 minutes mark...
This is all backstory stuff that should gradually be revealed as within appropriate context during the actual story.
Like have the MC be living with (or staying with her on that evening) when a gun goes off unexpectedly in some scene use that as a way to introduce his past experience with losing someone to a shooting.
Loving this story so far, hell ya. Looking forward to more.
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5.7 sounds fun until you need something with any modicum of takedown power... I think he needed a few more "calories” 😂
17 years old is not even CLOSE to bring a man. Sorry.AND the writer has never hunted before; he is WAY too complacent about letting the animals suffer. Real hunters are instinctively aware of their pain, and try to limit it.
Lol. Calorie/Caliber
Joules/jowls 😂
Western novels are more coherent to me tbh. Chinese novels are hard to comprehend. Japanese novels depends on how simple to complex (i did run "ascendance of a bookworm" raw through google translate and it feels like being hit like a brick in every paragraph.
DO SOMETHING!!! He's been bullshitting for 20 chapters
If he didnt get her headphones with ears he missed a big opertunity
It's good, but Dream's approach to romance is... weird imo. It feels a bit M'lady-like. (It gets a little less awkward, fortunately.)
Biggest detractor from the story though is the amount of wish-fulfillment. I don't mind a protagonist having nice things, but make them work for it.
However... to any writers out there, don't let opinions like mine stop you from writing what and how you want. I'm just opining from the point of view of 'how to improve your craft'. Remember that everyone's opinion other than your own will always be trash/10 when it comes to writing.
Edit: After getting to ch260... Spoiler-free thoughts. This could be either a 6/10 or 8.5/10 depending on your tastes. It's a 7/10 for myself. This is sci-fi with magic. There is less plot/character progression or interaction than I'd like. Lots of potentially interesting character interactions are glossed over or outright skipped :/ Instead, you're going to get huge info dumps how magic works and theorycrafting, basically going from the magical equivalent of lighting a fire to... supertech . If anything, SP4DE put a lot of thought into it, though I wish there was more character interaction- some characters are even forgotten in favor of a new magical theory. At least it makes sense when viewed from what type of person Dream is.
Was he named by an exotic dancer of a mother? Dream? Really?
Just listening to the first 4 minutes has me thinking the author has been spying on me and decided to write a book...
A sci-fi magical adventure
I am hooked
Fr 🥶
Dropped. Hates how his old girl was everything to him and broke him. Now he sees "hot" "strong" girl he starts acting like a creep
why didn’t he just get a gun that consumes mana for bullets lol
He did, just with extra steps 😅
Fantastic story! luv it!
Guy looks like a porcupine with all the weapons, e assault rifle and a .50 is too much.
Thanks!
Thanks for listening!
I like this it is pretty good
I wonder , can the text to speech AI learn to not pronounce punctuation ?`Or can you tell it that when talking about guns its most likely caliber not calories ?
Or would that take a human going over the first draft and manually correcting it in the text ?
Wonderful English language lol. Like bow(sign of respect) and bow(weapon)
Are you going to pay someone to edit it?
Thank you
The main character got creepy around hour 4. I'm done.
It's by the same writer as that time an American which is way better. It's almost like the author wrote this first and based the mc's untimate skill after Ciel in Slime. Then, they decided not to copy slime anymore and worked out all the bad character designs and bad decision making. I'm on something like hour 50 in American and really love that one.
Hmm I like it so far
oh good idea fire off a super load weapon in a forest full of monsters yea lol
*proceeds to power level via mag dumping*
Love it❤
I’m sorry, but calories calories
Hey like your channel, and I know you use AI, but I gotta ask, why do some words get replace with “dash”?
It is sometimes literally a dash.
I said look ou-
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Why do people insist on having guns in a magical world?
guns are better than swords, magic better than guns, swords better than magic. rock paper scissors
@Zizis-ly6hj
Understood. So why do magic, only to have a gun. It defeats the purpose. That's like saying I'm on a diet, but I'm going to eat whatever I want.
@@Renodawriter can you make a Gundam?
magic can help with that.
@Zizis-ly6hj
Not a Gundam, simply because I don't want to. But I have written a book about people with superpowers. And am currently working on my second. So.....
@@Renodawriter that's just magic with steps
Lol a unideer
Please start working on The American again
Calories 😂😂😂
gotta ask since I’m like half way in and it seems there gonna be at least some romance, this doesn’t turn into some harem or poly relationship does it cuse i hope not
I mean, that's practically a given considering the ethereal entity already basically set up the three of them.
Remember, monogamy is our default because of our religious and societal pretenses. That is not necessarily the case for another world.
@@93gamrx that’s why I dropped this not a fan of the stereotypical isekai harem trope, also don’t get why you’re explaining how people view harems in a fantasy light novel
@sunnysolaire6565 to each their own, as for the explanation, just context, Nothing more. Sounds like you've made up your mind tho, so I'll leave it at that.
@@93gamrx sure thing mate thanks for the reply tho
Bruh the butterflies are extremely annoying just let it be 1 image without any effects that hurt the eyes while reading the text
Biggest self insert cope I've ever heard.
The pics u use isn't really nice use something more majestic or something not this lil girl who has horns on the head
Tbh is kinda terrifying
noted.
MC is a creep