Did it fall in a loop for a while? How many times was the same part being read? I thought I was replying the same part in my head But it's a good story
@@storystream10009 the narration is crisp and there are not the usual trite ai inspired phrases, that seemingly pop up in so much work today [I try to write, so notice things like that.]... have manged to catch a few of these, of late.
@@afterdarkwithchurch9207 this was one of my first writing while in school, it really could use a re write, but I’m leaving my first writings as they are, so I can see the progress I make over the years of creating. Thanks for the listening and the feedback
This is AI generated crap, a mediocre story at best. Lots of cliche's and phrases repeated over and over. Lots of plot holes. For one thing, you are halfway through the story, and you realize that not once, is an actual zombie attack described. Not once. of course, we, as the audience, know that thee are blood thirsty zombies that will tear you apart----but the charters in the story don't know that! If they never see a zombie attack or kill a person, then why are they running away? In the first half of the story, the zombies are only described as lurching and moving unnaturally-----but we witness no bloodshed. Honestly I wish people would stop posting these AI generated stories, they are never really worth listening to. If you really want to use AI stories, then add your own narration and put in bits that will make the story better.
Finally some one is making a state to state and different countries zombie apocalypse stories 🙌
Ive been looking for new listening im so glad i came across this channel. Tysm for your time
Thank you for the positive vibes, I appreciate you
Did it fall in a loop for a while?
How many times was the same part being read?
I thought I was replying the same part in my head
But it's a good story
Another story to have play for the end of an evening. Will try to listen to give some opinions, but can't promise with sleep looming.
Worth a listen! A lot of repeating the same phrases, never realized "surge" was a weird sounding word until this book made me think about it...
@@NativeZombie thanks for the feedback, we will improve with every story, thanks for listening
Yeah its ai written. Place must be lit up like a christmas tree with all the glimmering going on. But the grimness might cancel it out.
@@storystream10009 Using a thesaurus will greatly help.😊
Drink every time he says resolute
I was, that's why he kept saying it, lol. Thanks for listening
@@storystream10009 let me help you
this is well worth a listen.
Thank you for listening, we are listening to our audience and improving the story’s daily to be enjoyable.
@@storystream10009 the narration is crisp and there are not the usual trite ai inspired phrases, that seemingly pop up in so much work today
[I try to write, so notice things like that.]... have manged to catch a few of these, of late.
There's alot of trepidation in this story
@@afterdarkwithchurch9207 this was one of my first writing while in school, it really could use a re write, but I’m leaving my first writings as they are, so I can see the progress I make over the years of creating. Thanks for the listening and the feedback
Same words over and over again couldn't finish listening
@@wendy99lianne thanks for the feedback, this was one of my first story’s, I can only improve moving forward.
Probably AI generated salad of heavily duplicatied sentences about zombies
Fear & Determination 😂
But do they feel a sense of how bad this writing is?
@@EDYN15 thanks for the feed back
these AI stories really reuse the same phrases over and over.
Thank you for your feedback, we can only improve moving forward. Thanks for listening
This is AI generated crap, a mediocre story at best. Lots of cliche's and phrases repeated over and over. Lots of plot holes. For one thing, you are halfway through the story, and you realize that not once, is an actual zombie attack described. Not once. of course, we, as the audience, know that thee are blood thirsty zombies that will tear you apart----but the charters in the story don't know that! If they never see a zombie attack or kill a person, then why are they running away? In the first half of the story, the zombies are only described as lurching and moving unnaturally-----but we witness no bloodshed.
Honestly I wish people would stop posting these AI generated stories, they are never really worth listening to. If you really want to use AI stories, then add your own narration and put in bits that will make the story better.
Thank you for the feedback, I appreciate it and I can only improve moving forward. Have a great day