Hello, please post a link to the written version of the story. It would allow me to translate these into German to understand them better. Unfortunately, my knowledge of English is not sufficient for this.
I tend to like more action...space opera. This could be the opening pages of a great story, but the real story had best start soon, or lose us readers/viewers in too much dialogue and not enough action. I await chapter #2....
OMG..... 28:46 of nothing...... Who ever made this story thank you for your work..... BUT so many holes in this story it is just wrong...... You have 1,000 Years to dig a hole in the ground and not trying to fix the earth all you did was build your own tomb..... Elysium..... They were not coming home to help or even see if it had changed in 1,000 years they came back because they were running and needed help to survive what they could not kill and only had a little control of it..... this was BLA, BLA, BLA, BLA to get to nothing Like this story started with a bang and went nowhere slowly. In 1,000 ears they could find nothing..... and sounds like they were not happy they were sent out into the void to give them a chance to live but came back to see that earth was still here and it still had people on it and they are not happy what they had to go through for 1,000 years........................... I would not trust them EVER...... They had all the information of the other worlds around earth, and they came back to do WHAT......??????
Why are women portrayed as soldiers/warriors/leaders and successful generals in these stories when they have none of the above qualities or abilities? It's akin to telling stories about how mice led cats to victory over birds.
Can't listen when it's that damn robot voice only reason I listen to your channel is because it's actually a human voice I guess if your going to start doing Ai like everyone else I won't be listening anymore
What do you think about the 1st person perspective in this story?
Is this ai generated? It kept repeating.
great story thx for uploading it and i like the first person perspective it makes the whole story deeper.
How many times will the barsoomian question be plagiarized?
Hello, please post a link to the written version of the story. It would allow me to translate these into German to understand them better. Unfortunately, my knowledge of English is not sufficient for this.
Ok, ich werde schauen, wie ich das in Zukunft für dich machen kann!
Thank you
you're welcome :D
Wish i there was a link to the author or the original story. Please
all our stories are original and written by us :)
I think it's AI or part Ai generated.
I don't wanna be eaten by Zorax!! Subbed.
My grandfather watched you leave....
Later: aeons ago ....😂
I tend to like more action...space opera.
This could be the opening pages of a great story, but the real story had best start soon, or lose us readers/viewers in too much dialogue and not enough action.
I await chapter #2....
I like dialog. The ones with the never ending themes of war are tiring to me.
GET TO THE POINT.
It's gotta be at least part AI
OMG..... 28:46 of nothing...... Who ever made this story thank you for your work..... BUT so many holes in this story it is just wrong...... You have 1,000 Years to dig a hole in the ground and not trying to fix the earth all you did was build your own tomb..... Elysium..... They were not coming home to help or even see if it had changed in 1,000 years they came back because they were running and needed help to survive what they could not kill and only had a little control of it..... this was BLA, BLA, BLA, BLA to get to nothing Like this story started with a bang and went nowhere slowly. In 1,000 ears they could find nothing..... and sounds like they were not happy they were sent out into the void to give them a chance to live but came back to see that earth was still here and it still had people on it and they are not happy what they had to go through for 1,000 years........................... I would not trust them EVER...... They had all the information of the other worlds around earth, and they came back to do WHAT......??????
Interesting tragic story.
Boring, repetitive, and predictable. The only reason I listened to the whole thing was the stunning graphics. I'm out.
Why are women portrayed as soldiers/warriors/leaders and successful generals in these stories when they have none of the above qualities or abilities? It's akin to telling stories about how mice led cats to victory over birds.
This must be Ai written. It is repetitive and lacking action. The last few minutes were especially obvious
Can't listen when it's that damn robot voice only reason I listen to your channel is because it's actually a human voice I guess if your going to start doing Ai like everyone else I won't be listening anymore
Terrible narrator. 😢. I hope this type of story never repeats on this channel.
BORING 😔
think of it as an audio book. do other stuff like cleaning while listening to it
No. Well written
The IA is awful
I liked it tnx