@@StarboundHFY I once spent 45 minutes talking to a Mom, on her sons account in EverQuest trying to convince her I wasn't an NPC and her son was playing with real people, I was not successful. Are you sure you're real?
@@arekpetrosian4965 Not only scientific fact but multiversal law. Orks, Char Aznable and his clones among so many alternate timelines, The Flash and his fellow Speedsters, Ferrari in our own reality... There are probably more examples out there.
WOW! Somebody has been reading Robert A Heinlein. Felt almost giddy to read a story of self determination and positive forward looking. A breath of fresh air in the literary world. Thank you..
Jax, "Now should I go for ludicrous speed or keep it some sort of sensical?" Ambassador, "I will be detained for another hour, I hope this is sufficient time for you to complete your paltry 'upgrades'." Jax, "Ludicrous it is then."
Challage a human mm yes very much and totally the best idea you ever had since well even id we arent as advanced as this story we still are overclocking shet that shouldnt be overclocked to like 50% more effecency now i think and if i rember right in total stuff goes from like 100% which should be peak to like 170% or higher i can only imagine what would happen if that ambassador let jax rebuild the entire shuttle
Is that vocal inflections? tone shifts? an actual human reading? What a novel concept.
Or the ai has gotten this good xd
@@iPlayGamesX if that is an AI, keep that AI it's good.
@@Joshua-fo9zw defo not an AI hahah
So real @@Joshua-fo9zw
@@StarboundHFY I once spent 45 minutes talking to a Mom, on her sons account in EverQuest trying to convince her I wasn't an NPC and her son was playing with real people, I was not successful. Are you sure you're real?
The shuttle could go even faster with a good coat of red paint.
Ridiculous, what good is speed going to be if you run into an asteroid? Paint it blue so it's too lucky to hit anything.
Don't forget to add the obligatory 'Racing Stripe's⏩
Red paint makes everything faster...this is a well-known scientific fact.
@@arekpetrosian4965 Not only scientific fact but multiversal law. Orks, Char Aznable and his clones among so many alternate timelines, The Flash and his fellow Speedsters, Ferrari in our own reality... There are probably more examples out there.
@@javierpatag3609 So very, very true. Those are excellent examples of the multiversal, well-established FACT: Red things are faster.
"we may have ignited a fire, but we have not accounted for the wind" is one of the best written lines I've ever read.
Agreed. It's got a old west feel to it, like something out of a John Wayne picture.
To the Author: Thank you very much for the story. And I my opinion, a well crafted one.
Self contained story. Well done! I want to work there!
WOW! Somebody has been reading Robert A Heinlein. Felt almost giddy to read a story of self determination and positive forward looking. A breath of fresh air in the literary world. Thank you..
"Grease stained human who talked to machines."
Jax, "Now should I go for ludicrous speed or keep it some sort of sensical?"
Ambassador, "I will be detained for another hour, I hope this is sufficient time for you to complete your paltry 'upgrades'."
Jax, "Ludicrous it is then."
"They've gone to plaid!"
Well done. Great vision. A cautionary tale. Prescience personified. Thank you.
WOW! this is one story i totally loved!
Glad you enjoyed it!
Story and narration were both excellent.
Good story indeed
we need the spirit of these 2 now.
From suping up alien hot rods to building a mechanical world. Even Scotty would be impressed.
Hmmm every time I imagine Jax under a spaceship all greasy and tangled in wires, I see Charlton Heston as he was in Soilent green. 😅
I have a saying "not all forward motion is progress"', just ask any hamster.
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Pretty good story, enjoyed it start to finish.
Glad to hear it!
This story went from boring trope to captivating ideas and story.
1:11 Space Mechanic: "SERIOUSLY?!"
Challage a human mm yes very much and totally the best idea you ever had since well even id we arent as advanced as this story we still are overclocking shet that shouldnt be overclocked to like 50% more effecency now i think and if i rember right in total stuff goes from like 100% which should be peak to like 170% or higher i can only imagine what would happen if that ambassador let jax rebuild the entire shuttle
👏🏻 Bravo 👏🏻 Bravo 👏🏻 Great story!
Thank you! 😃
On the inside of a panel should of left a grease hand print with a blood thumb print as a signature
Aliens: The shuttle is fine.
Humans: MORE POWER!!!!
Aliens: This isnt safe!!
Humans: This is fine
A great grease jockey added nos and a Whipple with some 4.11s to the grocery getter
I have to say it. The AI art of the shuttle is hilarious.
Great! I'm already chuckled a few times! Just 1/4-1/3 in
Humanity: We make the things you make *better* .
😂
"HuMaN It's ToO FaSt!"
your too slow
Remembering a scene from "Ford vs. Ferrari"....
Hi, nice story smelling of life story, especially the lawyers part when succeeding…
These stories need weekly episodic live-action acting. I'm thinking episodes that are stories themselves. Sort of like Tales from the Crypt, etc.
Pimp that ride!
I love this. The voice is really good
The dude is a big fan of Babylon-5.😀
Love it...
Interesting ❤❤
Okay, who gave Jeremy Clarkson a space station?
Who is John Gault
Lame beginning and very weird progression, but an interesting concept towards the end.
Thank you I was about to bail after the test ride.
Anytime lol @@Xsiondu
Have to ask, how did you like it?@@Xsiondu
Human reader=subbed
What happened to that Alex guy
Its nice but Big - for AI gen photo
Why would space ship be aerodynamic
Atmosphere reentry at high speed.
can anyone help me find the author?
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I feel like the story went on a bit too long. It could have been 15-20 minutes.
Sorry 😞
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