Kinda reminds me of a dog that I met during a tour in Afghanistan. She was almost all white, a few spots of black. She took some beef jerky from me, ate it, then rolled onto her back. I squatted down to scratch her chin & chest when a member of the Afghan National Police came up and said “Dog dangerous”. I slowly turned my head to the ANP and said “I’m dangerous, the dog isn’t”. Then went back to petting her. Few weeks later I seen her again at the same district center. One of the ANP threw a small rock at her, missing. I proceeded to pick up a pebble then whizzed it sidearm, smacking the Afghan between the shoulder blades. When he turned around he seen me walking at him quickly. I stopped about 6’ away and said “Did you like that?”, the Afghan replied “No”. “Then neither did the dog, don’t do it again”, then walked away. I seen her again a couple months later, with a litter of puppies in tow. She had a tick on her right eye brow, swollen with blood. She sat there calm as can be while I burned the tick off of her. Every time I was at that District Center she, and later her pups, were my constant shadow. She was incredibly useful, especially when I was pulling guard at night. Really wished I could’ve brought her & the pups back Stateside with me. Spots & her pups were a bright spot during my deployment.
Dogs are nothing but livestock in that culture. The Shafi`i and Hanbali scholars say that the whole dog is essentially impure. Some scholars say that any liquid excreted by the dog is impure (not the dog itself). The saliva of the dog is extremely impure. "If a dog licks the vessel of any one of you, let him throw away whatever was in it and wash it seven times." This why the base patch on the fur missile reads 'DO NOT PET' and the patrol collar reads in Pa5htun 'PULL MY EARS'
@ “Pull My Ears”!!? Now that’s funny. My MP Plt didn’t have a Kilo element, although I had been on a few jumps with Kilos, their Fur Missiles just chilling in their harnesses.
I'll never understand cruelty to animals. I've rescued a few dogs and cats here in the US due to people abusing them, leaving them to die, or were actively trying to kill them.
@@mikealdag7309 You're living a fuller life than I have right now. But, you gotta feed yourself to keep everyone alive and healthy They need their brother in arms to remain a constant in their lives,.
Yeah my dog does that But if I don't lift up my blanket and let him in he whines like a big baby and he is 80 lb of pure muscle. Needless to say I get to snuggle an 80 lb pillow lol
Hope there are more stories about Grimm and Jack, making their story more about their healing these stories always seemed to be too short. Really hope this writer takes this story much much further.
I would immediately take Furbaby....he would be extremely spoiled, even though i am rough and brutal, Grimm would never know another day of deprivation.
Far better than the average youtube short scifi stories. The writer has real potential as this is as good as the stories many of the professional writers produce.
@@jankasfthat’d be great but with the way Hollywood does its crap and the way Amazon screwed up Wheel of Time and LoTR books is hard to find who can do it justice Netflix have the money but are they capable of doing this story justice I doubt it cos they’ve got some imbeciles on their books working for them. 😂
A 68kg Bull-Arab named Sable because of her coats colour, was my best ever canine companion though she was not trained to hunt as many of her breed were. She was a friend to all who didn't fear her great size. She could read people so was a great help to me and my then partner. Will always miss her company.
Great story needs a part two, love animals especially the pups.love allways wins in the end! no one is deserving of bieng thrown away wish the world thought the way we do.
Akitas are not easy dogs… Good for you! What do you think is the most important thing to know about Akita dogs? Imho they are nothing like GSDs..Thank you..
@toneenorman2135 to many things about them like they are highly intelligent, once the bond is made they are extremely protective of family, you never need entertainment cause they always play and act goofy, extremely quiet as they seldomly bark and only do so if there's a threat, like the one Akita that I had in 13 1/2 yrs only barked 15 times ! Seriously !, but training is all the time every walk, every day of their lives they love to learn every day, there is so much about them that's mis-understood and alot of myths it's crazy insane lol, like one of their ways is regardless if you go out the door for 1 minute or 4 hrs they always greet you with a playful energetic ur home Yippee dance and goofiness, it's just how they are, I'd say hardest thing about them is the shorter than normal lifespan most dogs live past 12 yrs akitas generally live only to 10 yrs but depending on life style and exercise and medical care, and proper diet they can live longer like dreamer lived to 13 1/2 yrs of age and his little brother was 12 1/2 yrs of age, they generally are a layed back calm breed, but can move extremely fast when needed, as I tell others proper exercise daily, train daily, as in teach tricks and most importantly talk to them trust me they understand words big time and even know how to read sign language if you teach them, I can fill this comment page with to much stuff lol, some have said do videos about what I know sorry but camera shy lol anyhow akitas are an amazing breed, they make laugh when your down, always greet you with love and respect, the only down fall with akitas is that you must make it clear properly that your the dominant alpha, your the boss not them because that will lead to huuuge issues, and I use the golden rule nose tap, and other tricks like alpha male and female holds, all which were taught to me by a certified trainer that was ex military turned civilian police dog and security expert many many many yrs ago when I was very young.
@toneenorman2135 and also I don't know everything about akitas, but what I do know is hands on practical 30+ yrs of being owned by an Akita and doing my research and not just interfret lol, but hard copy books, trainers, rescue operators, handlers of every kind, and yes some knowledgeable vets which are few and dang near like ghosts lol, but like the old saying goes every breed is not for everyone, all have that one breed that just clicks for them, akitas are mine but then I take in all the list causes patch them and some stay and some leave to other homes, don't get me wrong I love all furbabies but my dedicated own preferred breed is the Akita, but I've had many many many ........ Many different breeds and again previous owners must understood their breeds and did NOT do their due diligence about that specific breed, the parents of that dog etc.
This story reminds me of how the current military now adopts out their military working dogs instead of putting them down, if your a veteran you can adopt one for free, many mwd’s suffer from ptsd symptoms and when match with a soldier suffering from the same condition they seem to form an unbreakable bond because the soldier and the mwd have experienced the same thing. On the fun side though, I’ve never seen a grisly hardcore marine who doesn’t turn into a huge pushover talking baby talk when they come across a super cute puppy! America breeds some strange warriors! Ferocity in combat but gentle when it comes to animals and children, especially when they’ve been neglected.
As a person who's family had alot of large dogs. I mean ALOT. When I heard how large this dog was the first thing I thought of was. What does "walkies" and bathtime look like.😂
More of these two🤔 . A series of Grimm and Jack. How was Grimms first bath after battle? How much and what does Grimm eat? How does Grimm handle different weather? Can Grimm adopt a space possum? (Have you seen the teeth on a possum?). Can Grimm read the actual thoughts of Jack? Other species? I'll subscribe but I'm just here for Grimm and Jack.
Awesome story! I started listening out of curiosity, but then hung on every word. A great story of second chances. Grimm reminds me of our rescue dog that was really mistreated. Stella was given a new life and home by us and eventually learned how to trust people and know what love is. She’s on in years now, but totally different than she was when we first got her years ago.
I was hoping the narrator could work a female (for Grim) into the story. She would have a huge litter of pups, and the military base would be full of soldiers vying for a chance to raise (spoil rotten) one of Grim's pups. Pups, all of which had inherited their fathers ferocity and loyalty. A base known to all as a fool's endeavor.
Maybe they should have broadcast that they had the Corgathian War Hound on Duty and did the invading force "really" want to invade? They might have had second thoughts and left for an easier target. PLEASE, let me know when the next story comes out with Jack Harper and Grimm. Hope Grimm gets some kind of "flac jacket" for the next fight. WELL DONE!!!
We domesticated dogs. They will always feel like we’re the same as them. Dominant to them, but part of the pack. They might be timid, but they WANT to trust us, love us, and follow us. Humans who abuse that…deserve no mercy. The merchant who left him like this… would fall down a lot of stairs, and then accidentally fall on unshielded power lines a few times.
I am old enough to remember listening to radio stories at home and in the car in the late 40's and very early 50s; belore TV put video to the audio in many homes. This is very much like that except for the artwork. I like this new artform. The visual art above gives the imagination a kick stark and lets the mind imagine how things would look at different parts of the story.
When my friends grandson got back from Afghanistan he spent weeks just soaking daily in the bathtub. He was scarred from head to toe. Shot 4 times, 6 mos. of recovery than mustered out and back to the states. Lucky to be alive. The families dog and cat took turns never leaving him alone. He now has a service dog keeping him from eating his gun. His dog is a rescue from a pit ring. Big, ugly, scarred badly, cuddle baby. But he's protective of his family and he loves his grandma (she brings the best treats 😂)
This was super good! Thanks so much. I’m guessing it’s original you don’t exactly say. I hope there is more to come. Definitely subscribing and turning on notifications ❤
Damn, this was a great story. SUBBED …I can see this being a movie to remind us of what the superhero movies USED to be about. Just keep the project away from DISNEY and don’t dare make it WOKE in any way. Those sad humans would never willingly be on a battlefield facing the wrong end of life’s shotgun to the face.
I'm sure I've heard this story before only thing was the soldier found an abandoned alien hound that had been left behind after the battle and decided to look after him. They developed a strong bond . They went into action together and Grimm always knew what to do in battle
I like these stories. Majority of them is to show the human race in a good and strong way. We can be, if we chape up and let our lust for power, money and lack of understanding end. My hope for the human race is almost over.
Seems fast pace so hard to get too deep. It might be a better longer story with more details about the day to day or montage of the training or how they became friends
I like story but... Grimms size keeps going from huge to small. One minute he towers over everything and the next his human smiles down at him or kneels down to pet him. The rest is good though.
Kinda reminds me of a dog that I met during a tour in Afghanistan. She was almost all white, a few spots of black. She took some beef jerky from me, ate it, then rolled onto her back. I squatted down to scratch her chin & chest when a member of the Afghan National Police came up and said “Dog dangerous”. I slowly turned my head to the ANP and said “I’m dangerous, the dog isn’t”. Then went back to petting her. Few weeks later I seen her again at the same district center. One of the ANP threw a small rock at her, missing. I proceeded to pick up a pebble then whizzed it sidearm, smacking the Afghan between the shoulder blades. When he turned around he seen me walking at him quickly. I stopped about 6’ away and said “Did you like that?”, the Afghan replied “No”. “Then neither did the dog, don’t do it again”, then walked away. I seen her again a couple months later, with a litter of puppies in tow. She had a tick on her right eye brow, swollen with blood. She sat there calm as can be while I burned the tick off of her. Every time I was at that District Center she, and later her pups, were my constant shadow. She was incredibly useful, especially when I was pulling guard at night. Really wished I could’ve brought her & the pups back Stateside with me. Spots & her pups were a bright spot during my deployment.
Dogs are nothing but livestock in that culture. The Shafi`i and Hanbali scholars say that the whole dog is essentially impure. Some scholars say that any liquid excreted by the dog is impure (not the dog itself). The saliva of the dog is extremely impure. "If a dog licks the vessel of any one of you, let him throw away whatever was in it and wash it seven times."
This why the base patch on the fur missile reads 'DO NOT PET' and the patrol collar reads in Pa5htun 'PULL MY EARS'
@ “Pull My Ears”!!? Now that’s funny. My MP Plt didn’t have a Kilo element, although I had been on a few jumps with Kilos, their Fur Missiles just chilling in their harnesses.
You are too funny!
I'll never understand cruelty to animals. I've rescued a few dogs and cats here in the US due to people abusing them, leaving them to die, or were actively trying to kill them.
@@spiritfox6066 I hope you're not saying that roughneckMP having to leave the dog behind being was cruel.
Most of us humans have no time for those who mistreat their dogs, so as a warning to all aliens, do this at your peril.
Agreed. I have 2 Tibetan Mastiffs. If I see anyone mistreat any dog they will have a bad day.
my mutts eat better than I do ! I don't really like most people these days , my boys are my best friends . that's all lol
@@mikealdag7309 You're living a fuller life than I have right now. But, you gotta feed yourself to keep everyone alive and healthy They need their brother in arms to remain a constant in their lives,.
My dog has saved me more times than i can count
ONLY in the West
That sigh when Grimm layed on that blanket is something dog owners know lol too well
Definitely lol
Yeah my dog does that But if I don't lift up my blanket and let him in he whines like a big baby and he is 80 lb of pure muscle. Needless to say I get to snuggle an 80 lb pillow lol
It seems to me that Grimm is an allegory to how most people treat war-torn soldiers.
I think that was the point
I got called a Baby Killer and refused a jab after 2 tours in Vietnam; 23 months of unpleasant and then people behaved like white trash. 1955-1968.
After a tour in Vietnam at our discharge our reintegration consisted of one short sentence by a senior NCO. "Don't kill civilians it upsets people"
God bless you guys
Being called a baby killer and genocider is par for the course
Hope there are more stories about Grimm and Jack, making their story more about their healing these stories always seemed to be too short. Really hope this writer takes this story much much further.
Hate to tell you, I think this story was written by AI.
@@RD9_DesignsReally!? I can believe it.
SOLDIERS AND MARINES KNOW GRIM WELL, ALL OF US, "A BIT WORN"! I TO WOULD LIKE TO SEE MORE OF JACK & GRIM, MAYBE A DEPLOYMENT!! 🎉🎉🎉😅❤
Semper fi brothers Semper fi. Excellent story my friend.
I would immediately take Furbaby....he would be extremely spoiled, even though i am rough and brutal, Grimm would never know another day of deprivation.
Dogs like him make the best companions.
Good boy
Far better than the average youtube short scifi stories. The writer has real potential as this is as good as the stories many of the professional writers produce.
Great story. Definitely needs a sequel. This could very easily become a mini series all on it's own
A video game!
A TV show would be awesome
My thoughts exactly soon as it finished I was like where’s the second one now lol.
@@jankasfthat’d be great but with the way Hollywood does its crap and the way Amazon screwed up Wheel of Time and LoTR books is hard to find who can do it justice Netflix have the money but are they capable of doing this story justice I doubt it cos they’ve got some imbeciles on their books working for them. 😂
The biggest of part of my takeaway is that no matter where in the universe, a dog is pure, innocent, loyal, loving, and protective of their pack.
A 68kg Bull-Arab named Sable because of her coats colour, was my best ever canine companion though she was not trained to hunt as many of her breed were. She was a friend to all who didn't fear her great size. She could read people so was a great help to me and my then partner. Will always miss her company.
I have always shown my respect for every soilder and veterans, and other first responders.
The "training" of the dog was even quicker than Rockys "Eye of the tiger" training...
Never underestimate the bond between a man/woman and their dogs
Great story needs a part two, love animals especially the pups.love allways wins in the end! no one is deserving of bieng thrown away wish the world thought the way we do.
A great story.
Give me more, in particular, more about these two.
Well worth the time taken to listen.
Don't underestimate the bond between man/woman and "beast" . Great story. There can be more stories about Jack and Grimm. ❤
I love this story. Great job. Thank you!
This is me and the senior akitas I rescue that everyone else walks away from ! Both old battered ! Love this story wish there was more graphics !
Akitas are not easy dogs… Good for you! What do you think is the most important thing to know about Akita dogs? Imho they are nothing like GSDs..Thank you..
@toneenorman2135 to many things about them like they are highly intelligent, once the bond is made they are extremely protective of family, you never need entertainment cause they always play and act goofy, extremely quiet as they seldomly bark and only do so if there's a threat, like the one Akita that I had in 13 1/2 yrs only barked 15 times ! Seriously !, but training is all the time every walk, every day of their lives they love to learn every day, there is so much about them that's mis-understood and alot of myths it's crazy insane lol, like one of their ways is regardless if you go out the door for 1 minute or 4 hrs they always greet you with a playful energetic ur home Yippee dance and goofiness, it's just how they are, I'd say hardest thing about them is the shorter than normal lifespan most dogs live past 12 yrs akitas generally live only to 10 yrs but depending on life style and exercise and medical care, and proper diet they can live longer like dreamer lived to 13 1/2 yrs of age and his little brother was 12 1/2 yrs of age, they generally are a layed back calm breed, but can move extremely fast when needed, as I tell others proper exercise daily, train daily, as in teach tricks and most importantly talk to them trust me they understand words big time and even know how to read sign language if you teach them, I can fill this comment page with to much stuff lol, some have said do videos about what I know sorry but camera shy lol anyhow akitas are an amazing breed, they make laugh when your down, always greet you with love and respect, the only down fall with akitas is that you must make it clear properly that your the dominant alpha, your the boss not them because that will lead to huuuge issues, and I use the golden rule nose tap, and other tricks like alpha male and female holds, all which were taught to me by a certified trainer that was ex military turned civilian police dog and security expert many many many yrs ago when I was very young.
@toneenorman2135 and also I don't know everything about akitas, but what I do know is hands on practical 30+ yrs of being owned by an Akita and doing my research and not just interfret lol, but hard copy books, trainers, rescue operators, handlers of every kind, and yes some knowledgeable vets which are few and dang near like ghosts lol, but like the old saying goes every breed is not for everyone, all have that one breed that just clicks for them, akitas are mine but then I take in all the list causes patch them and some stay and some leave to other homes, don't get me wrong I love all furbabies but my dedicated own preferred breed is the Akita, but I've had many many many ........ Many different breeds and again previous owners must understood their breeds and did NOT do their due diligence about that specific breed, the parents of that dog etc.
I'm so happy the pup made it through. Great story
This story reminds me of how the current military now adopts out their military working dogs instead of putting them down, if your a veteran you can adopt one for free, many mwd’s suffer from ptsd symptoms and when match with a soldier suffering from the same condition they seem to form an unbreakable bond because the soldier and the mwd have experienced the same thing. On the fun side though, I’ve never seen a grisly hardcore marine who doesn’t turn into a huge pushover talking baby talk when they come across a super cute puppy! America breeds some strange warriors! Ferocity in combat but gentle when it comes to animals and children, especially when they’ve been neglected.
"Born to kill" and a peace symbol...
It speaks to the duality of man.
No matter what star you orbit, there will always be good bois.
As a person who's family had alot of large dogs. I mean ALOT. When I heard how large this dog was the first thing I thought of was. What does "walkies" and bathtime look like.😂
This needs to be either a book series or TV series. Had me entranced the whole time.
Liked this alot. Narrator has very good storytelling voice.
This was an awesome story I very much enjoyed I hope you make more.
LOVE THIS story. PLEASE consider make more based on this one ❤❤❤❤
This story needs to go on. I want more Grimm storys
Grim should have a rank, don't you think so? Police dogs have ranks, don't they? Get more hounds!
Very good story, a fun listen
Great story!!!!
Would love to see this as a movie
A heartwarming story about a boy and his dog.
Of course we'd become friends with an alien dog. We befriended wolves.
Good doĝgo.
Sounds like the military needs to incorporate more hounds into their ranks.
More of these two🤔 . A series of Grimm and Jack. How was Grimms first bath after battle? How much and what does Grimm eat? How does Grimm handle different weather? Can Grimm adopt a space possum? (Have you seen the teeth on a possum?). Can Grimm read the actual thoughts of Jack? Other species? I'll subscribe but I'm just here for Grimm and Jack.
American opossom has 52 teeth, 46 of them are like needles. Old nickname I heard given them is "mutant sewer rat".
@sandoe41
yep. Alien space rats. A full third of its body with those kind of teeth.
Awesome story! I started listening out of curiosity, but then hung on every word. A great story of second chances. Grimm reminds me of our rescue dog that was really mistreated. Stella was given a new life and home by us and eventually learned how to trust people and know what love is. She’s on in years now, but totally different than she was when we first got her years ago.
I was hoping the narrator could work a female (for Grim) into the story. She would have a huge litter of pups, and the military base would be full of soldiers vying for a chance to raise (spoil rotten) one of Grim's pups. Pups, all of which had inherited their fathers ferocity and loyalty. A base known to all as a fool's endeavor.
Agree 100%
This would be wonderful
Beautiful work! Keep up the great work!!
This would make a great movie. Enjoyed the story. Tks for sharing.
Wonderful Story! I am so glad I listened to it.
I love that the artist has used The Nothing, from The Neverending Story as the basis for Grim. X
I think you're thinking of Gmork. But, yeah, I can see it.
Heart of a Chihuahua.
🤣 Scariest dogs in the world, four-legged piranhas.
Chihuahuas are fierce. Good call.
Vicious little beggars, chihuahuas.
AN AMAZING STORY ! WELL WRITTEN AND THE NARRATOR WAS AWESOME ! ❤
My Rhodesian Ridgeback was my girl. She was a beautiful 60kg specimen. Nobody ever touched me, not even to greet 😂. She was jealous as hell.
Maybe they should have broadcast that they had the Corgathian War Hound on Duty and did the invading force "really" want to invade? They might have had second thoughts and left for an easier target. PLEASE, let me know when the next story comes out with Jack Harper and Grimm. Hope Grimm gets some kind of "flac jacket" for the next fight.
WELL DONE!!!
And a mate to make puppies with for people to spoil and raise as terrifying war dogs who are also fur babies
Wasn't expecting to sob over a fictional dog like figure and his soldier buddies, but here I am 😅
I bet the food bill went up 200%!😏
Just 200%?
If Grimm is as big as the picture, I'd say more like 500%.
Because that's a 500kg beast, easily.
Great story, well read and paced. An allegory but very enjoyable.
It dawned on my after almost 7 minutes that I am finally listening to one of these stories told by a real person. Instant subscription from me
No, it's still read by an AI voice synth.
@@ripl0x really? but they made an error part way through on a word and corrected themselves
I am impressed how good this story is. Loved it.
I really love these stories. at 75 they give me HOPE and there seems to be precious little of that these days.
H , good to hear you again
I'd love to have him ❤ so ugly he's actually beautiful ❤🎉. I'd never pity him ❤. Thank God for Jack ❤
Beautiful story.
We domesticated dogs. They will always feel like we’re the same as them. Dominant to them, but part of the pack. They might be timid, but they WANT to trust us, love us, and follow us. Humans who abuse that…deserve no mercy. The merchant who left him like this… would fall down a lot of stairs, and then accidentally fall on unshielded power lines a few times.
I am old enough to remember listening to radio stories at home and in the car in the late 40's and very early 50s; belore TV put video to the audio in many homes. This is very much like that except for the artwork. I like this new artform. The visual art above gives the imagination a kick stark and lets the mind imagine how things would look at different parts of the story.
I love this story! ❤Please do more like this 🙏
Heartwarming. There are so many who are cast away for no sane reason and who deserve a second chance.
He’s a sweetie boo boo baby!
This is awesome and wholesome!
0.12 too cool, loved the story, thanks.
nice Drama , thanks for posting
Space Doggo. I see, I upvote, I read…as is correct. Also, Grim needs a Groom.
When my friends grandson got back from Afghanistan he spent weeks just soaking daily in the bathtub. He was scarred from head to toe. Shot 4 times, 6 mos. of recovery than mustered out and back to the states. Lucky to be alive. The families dog and cat took turns never leaving him alone. He now has a service dog keeping him from eating his gun. His dog is a rescue from a pit ring. Big, ugly, scarred badly, cuddle baby. But he's protective of his family and he loves his grandma (she brings the best treats 😂)
This was amazing I hope there’s more in the works
Really enjoyed the story!
Grimm is just a good boy ♥
Doggy!!! ❤❤❤
That vehicle looks suspiciously like a Chevy space truck.
As long as it isn't some EV truck.
@@MrGchiasson It's Nuclear. Fusion powered.
@@got2kittys as long as it has a good 8-track tape player under the dash,. I'm happy.
This was super good! Thanks so much. I’m guessing it’s original you don’t exactly say. I hope there is more to come. Definitely subscribing and turning on notifications ❤
Love these short stories
Damn, this was a great story. SUBBED …I can see this being a movie to remind us of what the superhero movies USED to be about. Just keep the project away from DISNEY and don’t dare make it WOKE in any way. Those sad humans would never willingly be on a battlefield facing the wrong end of life’s shotgun to the face.
I've always had space in my heart for Doggies. I would do the same!
Need more, please. 😊
Is this what is descibed as a sci fi story I liked it. Felt sorry for the hound and the soldier they found companionship together.
I'm sure I've heard this story before only thing was the soldier found an abandoned alien hound that had been left behind after the battle and decided to look after him. They developed a strong bond . They went into action together and Grimm always knew what to do in battle
I love this channel.
When does the film come ❤😊
Should turn this into a series
He's a good boy 😭👍
great story
This would make a great movie
Oooh Please do make a movie. I would go see it.
a sequel and add a squad of grims they would be unstoppable
I like these stories. Majority of them is to show the human race in a good and strong way. We can be, if we chape up and let our lust for power, money and lack of understanding end. My hope for the human race is almost over.
I know all too well how the hound feels.
🔥🔥.
Where are the days when we heard stories that were generated by humans and not AI?
I really really enjoyed this story. Bonus points for not once saying "Beacon of *insert Virtue here*", or "Let's show what humans can do"...
Of course the 🦎 is afraid of em
Love Syfy and Sàlton SEA California USA
When we get to see other worlds, if there's something remotely like a dog, we'll find it.
What a great story
This ai stories are incredible
Seems fast pace so hard to get too deep. It might be a better longer story with more details about the day to day or montage of the training or how they became friends
Shades of Rodger Young. Grim has good antecedents.
I like story but... Grimms size keeps going from huge to small. One minute he towers over everything and the next his human smiles down at him or kneels down to pet him. The rest is good though.
Message to whoever has written this story gets your SH1T together and write sequels ASAP!! lol 😂. Now!!! Get to it. 😂😂
Good Boy.