You’re not familiar enough with politics,or the military to write this. Your knowledge of space is also lacking. The vastness of a galactic battle couldn’t not possibly be observed by one man. The military leader could not possibly be observing and training the military drills. Galactic wide battles would be spread over untold distances,involving huge numbers of persons. You have huge divisions of labor and a hierarchy to follow orders. This sound like he’s traing a high school football team. Do some research. Many multiple civilizations involved against a galactic empire. You might expect millions,if not billions killed in a battle for extinction.
Ah, good sir. You are forgetting cosmic quantum holo screens that let you see everything at the same time through a pair of sunglasses. It's got chaos string quartets, neutrino finger tunnels, glitter, and elbow macaroni.
Oh yeah, for a different set of worlds, lets see C.J Cherryh's "Hunter of Worlds" being incorporated in this system. That is a world I can see as working far better than any of this HFY rubbish.
What is the base AI for all this sh*t? Where can I find it and is it free to try and teach it how to write pulp sci-fi? At the very least, someone feed it the Perry Rhodan world and everything from E.E Doc Smith. Edit: As far as I can tell, these HFY stories are just another piss-poor attempt at the yanks trying to pretend they're the best thing ever created. Perfect example: D.Trump.
Just amazing
major AI narrator fail
This should be a movie😊
Horrid AI narration.
AI should be doing stuff humans don't enjoy, not things we actually do enjoy, like reading (and writing, and making art)
The war was far from over and over and over.🎉🎉🎉
Image: Ground troops and dogs should be behind tanks.
You’re not familiar enough with politics,or the military to write this. Your knowledge of space is also lacking. The vastness of a galactic battle couldn’t not possibly be observed by one man. The military leader could not possibly be observing and training the military drills. Galactic wide battles would be spread over untold distances,involving huge numbers of persons. You have huge divisions of labor and a hierarchy to follow orders. This sound like he’s traing a high school football team.
Do some research.
Many multiple civilizations involved against a galactic empire. You might expect millions,if not billions killed in a battle for extinction.
Ah, good sir. You are forgetting cosmic quantum holo screens that let you see everything at the same time through a pair of sunglasses. It's got chaos string quartets, neutrino finger tunnels, glitter, and elbow macaroni.
@@themichael3410 he is also forgetting this is a sci-fi short story...
"The galactic stage" 😅 Ai garbage
"Grim determination" ✔
I mean, it IS a common sci fi term
Oh yeah, for a different set of worlds, lets see C.J Cherryh's "Hunter of Worlds" being incorporated in this system.
That is a world I can see as working far better than any of this HFY rubbish.
What is the base AI for all this sh*t? Where can I find it and is it free to try and teach it how to write pulp sci-fi?
At the very least, someone feed it the Perry Rhodan world and everything from E.E Doc Smith.
Edit: As far as I can tell, these HFY stories are just another piss-poor attempt at the yanks trying to pretend they're the best thing ever created. Perfect example: D.Trump.
.... The fuck are you even talking about