So...here I am, minding my own business when I see this story. Wasn't going to watch it but, I did. I, a 71 year old woman, am sitting here crying over an imaginary beast and a little girl. This was so well done! The inflection is perfect, the words were all said correctly and the story flowed like fine wine with zero repeats!! BRAVO!! I subbed, this was great. Just had a litter of kittens a few weeks ago (surprise, I know) I think with 4 boys, Thorn shall live on, on Earth a while longer.
Well what do you think of a continuation.. How about Thorn's child? Lily's own daughters as teenagers on their way to see mom at the statue unveiling get attacked by those warlords that had owned Thorn decided to take revenge for losing their power within their ranks due to Thorn's protection of Lily. They had started torturing his children a female & male who had known of their sires act of protection of a human child. They had roared in sadness & anger when they felt their psychic link with their father severed suddenly. He had sent out all of what had transpired since his waking. As an ancient one of their race he had been used for breeding & unknown to the Warlords their species had a psychic link to their offspring they kept secret from their Masters so this could not be used against them....
@@mimig474 honestly? it isnt easy to top that story here... i would not "ruin" it with the try to create another story... but its just my humble opinion.
FINALLY!!! An excellent AI story that wasn't riddled with plot errors, mispronunciations and repeating the same things over and over. I was even rooting for Thorn. Lilly's speech to the council reminded me of Rocky's after he beat Drago.
It is one of the better AI stories I have come across. Little repetition, little weird or awkward sentences, and that for the most part, flow and make sense. It is not perfect, and things like her intelligence as a kid and the way the military attempted save thorn and the lesson with how much it changed things for the galaxy don't make sense but are entirely possible. Side note: this plot sounds familiar and like a kids' book with too much idealism as kids' books tend to have.
How about Thorn's child? Lily own daughters as teenagers on their way to see mom at the statue unveiling get attacked by those warlords that had owned Thorn decided to take revenge for losing there power within their ranks due to Thorn's protection of Lily. They had started torturing his children a female & male who had known of their sires act of protection of a human child. They had roared in sadness & anger when they felt their psychic link with their father severed suddenly. He had sent out all of what had transpired since his waking. As an ancient one of their race he had been used for breeding & unknown to the Warlords their species had a psychic link to their offspring they kept secret from their Masters so this could not be used against them....
Well what do you think of a continuation.. How about Thorn's child? Lily's own daughters as teenagers on their way to see mom at the statue unveiling get attacked by those warlords that had owned Thorn decided to take revenge for losing their power within their ranks due to Thorn's protection of Lily. They had started torturing his children a female & male who had known of their sires act of protection of a human child. They had roared in sadness & anger when they felt their psychic link with their father severed suddenly. He had sent out all of what had transpired since his waking. As an ancient one of their race he had been used for breeding & unknown to the Warlords their species had a psychic link to their offspring they kept secret from their Masters so this could not be used against them....
a dam good one for Lilly and Thorn show what human can do and what we have in us . but look that this world and what it doing , we no longer hear the stars call to us .
I suddenly found myself crying like a baby, had to stop listening for a bit, but then I kept going, lovely ending ❤❤❤❤❤❤ Why does it feel like I've lost my pet?
No. It was the perfect ending... but might see @ronsindric4241 entry above.... That could work... FYI - Ever see the movie "Love Story" (1970)..? Very emotional...
I luv it ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ I WILL ALSO SHARE HIS SACRIFICE ❤❤❤❤❤❤ THROUGH MY SHORTS - I am Atma Di Ace in your atmosphere speaking Real talk Raw and Uncut facts truth always - One luv respect always my pure hearted people 💞
There is war. And then there are the atrocities of war. The story shows that even tho we go to war, there are those we go to war to protect. Thorn chose to go to war to protect the innocent child.
Love, friendship, honor, and enduring bonds last long after our physical bodys give way. What if as Thorn were dying, he chose to NOT kill the remaining soldiers who were killing him. Or better yet, what if Thorn was given the chance for deathly vengeance against the Overlords who used him. What if these Overlords were trapped, frozen in fear as the dying Thorn approached them pressing his massive head against the Overlord's bodies. What if Thorn waited, then moved back choosing NOT to kill the Overlords to die before them ? What if Thorn's biology was similar to that of THE DRAC fighter pilot Jeriba Shigan in the movie ENEMY MINE whose body held his child Jammis ? What if within his dying body, Thorn bore a new Life like a Jammis ? What if Thorn's dead body with the new Life trapoedbwithin was visited by Lilly just prior to Thorn being placed on a Warrior Hero's Funeral Pyre ? What if Lilly sensed the presence of Thorn's offspring and enlisted the help she needed to save Thorn's offspring? What if the bond shared by Thorn and Lilly passed to His offspring? What if. .. .. ..
This was a very touching story I hope to run into dog man and Susquach with love and understanding friendship in West Virginia someday we need alies. Like them to fight the evil on this planet
THAT is some pretty high level thinking for a 6 year old child. Also how did she eat and drink? It would be nice if these stories could make some kind of logical sense.
Well honestly children who've dealt with war,abuse,death,etc can even at 6 have this adult-like behavior. I personally had a very adult like behavior as did a few other kids I've met throughout my years My own kids though smart & all didn't have that adult like thinking due my kids not having to survive & grow up in a terrible environment. Unfortunately if you have never talked to kids raised around this type of environment you wouldn't be surprised by her intelligence in her environment. Also not very many novels talk about bathroom breaks or eating often unless it is a part of the plotline so that's not surprising at all. It was an enjoyable story with a good amount of description of the scene with decent detail
An intelligent, thinking creature might react with mercy, but in nature, that is the exception and newborn are often the target because they represent an easy meal.
Some of the concepts being expressed by a 6 year old seem a little advanced... Working them out maybe believable, but her ability to articulate these concepts, not so much. That however is my only real criticism
Just once, I would love to see a happy ending to a story. Just once. But, I guess that in a real world as on earth, reality is so depressing and sad. Might as well have that reinforced.
0:50 "a girl no more than 6 years old". You established her age that early in the story. But by around 9:50 or so she is suddenly plotting an escape and doing all kinds of thinking that no normal 6 year old is going to do. Sound more like a teenager at least for all the plotting and observations about the captors behaviors.
So...here I am, minding my own business when I see this story. Wasn't going to watch it but, I did. I, a 71 year old woman, am sitting here crying over an imaginary beast and a little girl. This was so well done! The inflection is perfect, the words were all said correctly and the story flowed like fine wine with zero repeats!! BRAVO!! I subbed, this was great. Just had a litter of kittens a few weeks ago (surprise, I know) I think with 4 boys, Thorn shall live on, on Earth a while longer.
❤
Well what do you think of a continuation..
How about Thorn's child?
Lily's own daughters as teenagers on their way to see mom at the statue unveiling get attacked by those warlords that had owned Thorn decided to take revenge for losing their power within their ranks due to Thorn's protection of Lily. They had started torturing his children a female & male who had known of their sires act of protection of a human child. They had roared in sadness & anger when they felt their psychic link with their father severed suddenly. He had sent out all of what had transpired since his waking. As an ancient one of their race he had been used for breeding & unknown to the Warlords their species had a psychic link to their offspring they kept secret from their Masters so this could not be used against them....
@@mimig474 I would so be there for it!
There are stories are addicting don't get hooked. LoL ✌️
@@mimig474 honestly? it isnt easy to top that story here... i would not "ruin" it with the try to create another story... but its just my humble opinion.
A touching story of friendship, sacrifice and even love. Well done.
FINALLY!!! An excellent AI story that wasn't riddled with plot errors, mispronunciations and repeating the same things over and over. I was even rooting for Thorn. Lilly's speech to the council reminded me of Rocky's after he beat Drago.
Or *THE INDOMITABLE HUMAN SPIRIT*
gets fucking annoying after hearing 6 other ai reading channels say it every 3rd paragraph
The AI graphics are terrible.
This was written by AI? It was ok then it was boring.
This is 'By FAR' the best that I've listened to of these SCI-FI stories . . . ❤
very much!
I agree.
Beauty and the Beast. Different angle, but the same story. Way to go Thorn
I'm gonna name my next dog Thorn in tribute. ✌️
Agreed
Why not scripture, gave man charge over beasts of the field or something like that.
I was thinking more like Old Yeller, but I can see the B&TB elements.
Can I pet that dawg? Never underestimate humanity in our ability to go "you fren shaped be we frens!"
Good story! I'm an animal lover so it touched me. I really like that there is no forced CC.
What a great story! Being a visual artist,I appreciate how well this was written an performed. Well done !
😮❤❤❤❤👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾☝🏾☝🏾☝🏾☝🏾
This is the best story I've listened too in at least the past 3 months or so. Great job
Never let a Death Worlder pack bond with a apex predator.
Like respects like.
Trying not to cry, trying not to cry, O fuck it! Beautiful story!!!
Humans . . . Pro-tip: Humans can pack bond even with animals who will eat them.
2000 quatloo's the humans cannot be contained!
3,000 quatloos the evil twin eats her
I very much liked this story! Well written and performed .Well done!
Right on, Dave!❤️♊🧐🦬
The onion ninjas got me in this one. It was great.
Onion Ninjas! Love it.
Lily is a 6 year old???
I've heard of precocious children but lily took it to a whole new level
Two souls linked, one goal, power focused towards good!
❤thank you for the great story.
It is one of the better AI stories I have come across.
Little repetition, little weird or awkward sentences, and that for the most part, flow and make sense.
It is not perfect, and things like her intelligence as a kid and the way the military attempted save thorn and the lesson with how much it changed things for the galaxy don't make sense but are entirely possible.
Side note: this plot sounds familiar and like a kids' book with too much idealism as kids' books tend to have.
To quote the great Jaydog fetch
"White women ain't scared of shit!"
"Oh are you a little death beast? You're Mommy's little death beast now..."
Human pack bonding strikes again.
All warbeasts love skritches.
Much better narration than the majority.
Old battle veteran protects a young life.
No! No!! No!!! You MUST find a way to reunite Lilly and Thorn! It's a story so make ANOTHER ONE!!
How about Thorn's child?
Lily own daughters as teenagers on their way to see mom at the statue unveiling get attacked by those warlords that had owned Thorn decided to take revenge for losing there power within their ranks due to Thorn's protection of Lily. They had started torturing his children a female & male who had known of their sires act of protection of a human child. They had roared in sadness & anger when they felt their psychic link with their father severed suddenly. He had sent out all of what had transpired since his waking. As an ancient one of their race he had been used for breeding & unknown to the Warlords their species had a psychic link to their offspring they kept secret from their Masters so this could not be used against them....
What do you think?
Well what do you think of a continuation..
How about Thorn's child?
Lily's own daughters as teenagers on their way to see mom at the statue unveiling get attacked by those warlords that had owned Thorn decided to take revenge for losing their power within their ranks due to Thorn's protection of Lily. They had started torturing his children a female & male who had known of their sires act of protection of a human child. They had roared in sadness & anger when they felt their psychic link with their father severed suddenly. He had sent out all of what had transpired since his waking. As an ancient one of their race he had been used for breeding & unknown to the Warlords their species had a psychic link to their offspring they kept secret from their Masters so this could not be used against them....
I am going to put in far more detail,but I did a quick start just to set-up my idea
Best story I've heard in a long time, Beauty and the Beast. The write outdid himself.
Beautiful story. 😢❤
Great story well narrated.
That brought tears to my eyes! Thorn, you need to some how extend this plot! This was brilliant 👏
a dam good one for Lilly and Thorn show what human can do and what we have in us . but look that this world and what it doing , we no longer hear the stars call to us .
The beast may survive years without eating the child can't
*LIKE SHERA SHE'S A BEASTMASTER*
Very well done. Narrator spoke excellently. I'd watch and listen to another.
i was deeply moved by this story
BEAUTY AND THE BEAST
I suddenly found myself crying like a baby, had to stop listening for a bit, but then I kept going, lovely ending ❤❤❤❤❤❤ Why does it feel like I've lost my pet?
Big kitty 😂
Absolutely the best story! Keep it up and you know it you will 😂❤[🎉😊
I'm a 59 year old man in tears the story is awesome
I'm right there with you!!! Forever Thorn!!!
That was a great story loved it, and I did subscribe.
Fantastic story, go Lilly and Thorn!
Oh my ! This is so exciting! I could just squeel with glee!
Love the truck in the background!
Well done. I cried.
Yay for human pack bonding!
Very heartwarming and beautifully read. Thank You💖
If he survives thorn is going to have a feast.......just saying.......
Very good story. Gratitude😊
Wonderful story. Well made.
An apex predator knows when another apex predator is near…
Cool story
A fantastic story❤
Love the voice💛
a very touching story
Poor Lily and Thorn, I don’t think I could have left him
Great story
This was so beautiful ❤ this made me cry the same way scp-harbinger did.
Is there more of this story? I just accidentally found this and I'm with you Charlie Baltimore. This is great! Where can i find more?
She looks like a tiny version of Daenerys Targaryen.😊
Wow this is so very good. It actually made me tear up😢
This was a great story, it would’ve been better if Thor would have survived but more stories like this, please but with a happier ending
No. It was the perfect ending... but might see @ronsindric4241 entry above.... That could work... FYI - Ever see the movie "Love Story" (1970)..? Very emotional...
Great story it made me cry 😢
I luv it ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ I WILL ALSO SHARE HIS SACRIFICE ❤❤❤❤❤❤ THROUGH MY SHORTS - I am Atma Di Ace in your atmosphere speaking Real talk Raw and Uncut facts truth always - One luv respect always my pure hearted people 💞
There is war. And then there are the atrocities of war. The story shows that even tho we go to war, there are those we go to war to protect. Thorn chose to go to war to protect the innocent child.
Thanks 😊 what a cool Story
Love, friendship, honor, and enduring bonds last long after our physical bodys give way. What if as Thorn were dying, he chose to NOT kill the remaining soldiers who were killing him. Or better yet, what if Thorn was given the chance for deathly vengeance against the Overlords who used him. What if these Overlords were trapped, frozen in fear as the dying Thorn approached them pressing his massive head against the Overlord's bodies. What if Thorn waited, then moved back choosing NOT to kill the Overlords to die before them ? What if Thorn's biology was similar to that of THE DRAC fighter pilot Jeriba Shigan in the movie ENEMY MINE whose body held his child Jammis ? What if within his dying body, Thorn bore a new Life like a Jammis ? What if Thorn's dead body with the new Life trapoedbwithin was visited by Lilly just prior to Thorn being placed on a Warrior Hero's Funeral Pyre ? What if Lilly sensed the presence of Thorn's offspring and enlisted the help she needed to save Thorn's offspring? What if the bond shared by Thorn and Lilly passed to His offspring? What if. .. .. ..
Beautiful thought....
Omg this was so good I’m crying 😭
The story would have been better if Thorne would have lived!
It's a good storey but you did say the girls was sick and she can make a plan and fly a space ship
Escape pod
Well done.
An interesting twist on Old Yeller.
I'm not crying... You're crying!
it is definitely raining today
I think onions for the entire company of McDonalds are being processed somewhere nearby..
😂
She found a pit bull...
thorn recognize the god-inside of lily.. its simple as that.. what a beautiful story.. thank you
The beasts could not harm the girl
I really enjoyed this story - thank you. Who wrote it?
You should flesh this out into a novel. Great job
Well read!
I’m not crying, your crying 😭😭😭
This was a very touching story I hope to run into dog man and Susquach with love and understanding friendship in West Virginia someday we need alies. Like them to fight the evil on this planet
You’re breaking my heart.
The beast was once a man who was made into a monster by alien geneticist millenia before
The girl needs to be older than 6 to plan their escape and pilot a shuttle!
THAT is some pretty high level thinking for a 6 year old child. Also how did she eat and drink? It would be nice if these stories could make some kind of logical sense.
Really a 6 year old concentrated on navigation?!? Give me a break.
Well honestly children who've dealt with war,abuse,death,etc can even at 6 have this adult-like behavior. I personally had a very adult like behavior as did a few other kids I've met throughout my years My own kids though smart & all didn't have that adult like thinking due my kids not having to survive & grow up in a terrible environment. Unfortunately if you have never talked to kids raised around this type of environment you wouldn't be surprised by her intelligence in her environment. Also not very many novels talk about bathroom breaks or eating often unless it is a part of the plotline so that's not surprising at all. It was an enjoyable story with a good amount of description of the scene with decent detail
They did say in the story that they where going to keep her alive , so I assumed they fed her
@@alexdavis-mann8513 you should never assume.
Come on... just enjoy it!
An intelligent, thinking creature might react with mercy, but in nature, that is the exception and newborn are often the target because they represent an easy meal.
Love it
Aw, I wanted a happy ending. I wanted Thorn to be rescued, too. 😭
Some of the concepts being expressed by a 6 year old seem a little advanced...
Working them out maybe believable, but her ability to articulate these concepts, not so much.
That however is my only real criticism
Damn, a 6-year-old girl doing all this😮 amazing
Make the movie....
AI-tastic
🤟👍
This a movie?
The author does not seem to have experience with young preadolescent children.
So what was the reason they didnt just go after a defenseless ship full of high value targets?
Just once, I would love to see a happy ending to a story. Just once. But, I guess that in a real world as on earth, reality is so depressing and sad. Might as well have that reinforced.
who is the author? are there published books?
0:50 "a girl no more than 6 years old". You established her age that early in the story. But by around 9:50 or so she is suddenly plotting an escape and doing all kinds of thinking that no normal 6 year old is going to do. Sound more like a teenager at least for all the plotting and observations about the captors behaviors.
Note they offer up a white blond girl. Whoopi was unavailable
I’m gonna make up my own happy ending.
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