Bring More Insight Into Your College Essay (10 Different Ways)

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  • @mortismain6719
    @mortismain6719 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    Tip 1: Think of the opposite of something else might say
    Tip 2: Try shifting from one value to another
    Tip 3: Redefine a value
    Tip 4: Connect to something we totally didn't expect (but briefly)
    Tip 5: Turn a specific example into a representative example (zoom out)
    Tip 6: Teach me something
    Tip 7: Realize you were wrong about something
    Tip 8: Embody Paradox
    Tip 9: Find/Use a phrase that has a double-meaning
    Tip 10: Drop in a surprise connection to your career

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Thanks for this!

    • @mortismain6719
      @mortismain6719 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@Collegeessayguy Thank *you* for this!

  • @batboldsodgerel1383
    @batboldsodgerel1383 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    Appreciating for your existence in the right time. 😊

  • @amarmendamaka124
    @amarmendamaka124 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    It is really helpful Ethan!
    I had 5 “Aha” moments while watching it! I am definitely coming back for those amazing ideas

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Amazing! So good to hear 😄 Good luck through your application process!

  • @nahomdaniel161
    @nahomdaniel161 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you Ethan

  • @be_happy90
    @be_happy90 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi Ethan , I heard somewhere that I should not give background information on my common app essay. How can I avoid this if im writing about my background. Thank you. I absolutely love your videos👑

    • @user-zl8vs1vf8j
      @user-zl8vs1vf8j 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      What do you mean by 'background information'

    • @be_happy90
      @be_happy90 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@user-zl8vs1vf8j An explanation of the place where I live here in Kenya.

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      That's interesting feedback🤔 There isn't necessarily anything wrong with including information about where you live in Kenya. There could be a danger of writing an essay that is similar to other students' stories of applying to college in the United States. Think about how you can come at the essay in a unique way. You can do this by focusing on displaying your values through your personal statement. There's more information about identifying your values here: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/the-values-exercise

  • @joshuatewobola-jq4sd
    @joshuatewobola-jq4sd 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you Ethan for yhi this wonderful video. Please could you help me review my college essay. Please. Thanks ☺️

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Unfortunately Ethan isn't available to work with students one on one right now, but we have a few options for getting essay support:
      1.) If you're looking for 1-on-1 help with your college application and essays, please submit a request form at this link and our team will be in touch with you soon to share more details about our 1:1 support and how to schedule a call to learn more: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-coaching
      2.) If our packages are out of range, we are offering asynchronous reviews of college essays/applications with our Complete Application Review service, which you can learn more about and sign up for here: students.collegeessayguy.com/complete-application-review
      Lastly, we always have free and pay-what-you-can courses. We recommend starting with our two signature essay courses here: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-courses
      Happy Writing!

  • @groovygravy3496
    @groovygravy3496 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Ethan, can I by chance run my common app essay by you?

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Hi there! Thanks for writing in.
      We have a few options for getting 1:1 college essay support:
      1.) If you're looking for 1-on-1 help with your college application and essays, please submit a request form at this link and our team will be in touch with you soon to share more details about our 1:1 support and how to schedule a call to learn more: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-coaching
      2.) If our packages are out of range, we are offering asynchronous reviews of college essays/applications with our Complete Application Review service, which you can learn more about and sign up for here: students.collegeessayguy.com/complete-application-review
      Lastly, we always have free and pay-what-you-can courses. We recommend starting with our two signature essay courses here: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-courses
      Happy writing,
      CEG Team

  • @batboldsodgerel1383
    @batboldsodgerel1383 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi can you give feedback my essay?

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Hi there!
      We have a few options for getting 1:1 college essay support:
      1.) If you're looking for 1-on-1 help with your college application and essays, please submit a request form at this link and our team will be in touch with you soon to share more details about our 1:1 support and how to schedule a call to learn more: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-coaching
      2.) If our packages are out of range, we are offering asynchronous reviews of college essays/applications with our Complete Application Review service, which you can learn more about and sign up for here: students.collegeessayguy.com/complete-application-review
      Lastly, we always have free and pay-what-you-can courses. We recommend starting with our two signature essay courses here: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-courses
      Happy writing,
      CEG Team