9 College Essay Mistakes (And How to Avoid Them!)
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- AVOID THESE 9 COLLEGE ESSAY MISTAKES! Here are some of the most common college essay mistakes I see students make when applying to college. Lucky for you, there are ways to avoid these college essay mistakes so that you can submit a college application and essays that you're proud of.
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Do you have videos for transfer students? I'm at a community college and will transfer next fall
No video (yet!) but I have a full guide for transfer applicants here: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/college-transfer-essay-examples
Hello!
Can u explain more on the focusing lens, and what exactly do you mean by a thematic thread? Should I use an essence object from the essence objects exercise, would that work as a focus lens?
"get most of it done in the summer" - me watching this in late august
same
Haha same
me rn
Classic! :)
I’m watching it in September 😂😂🤦🏽♂️
POV: me watching this with 5 essays due in 4 days
Lol!
girl me too
7:41
well here i am the day before i have to turn in all my applications
heather goncalves mine deadline is Sunday 😬
Dravin Allen Vlogs stay strong soldier 😔✊🏼
Hope it blew over well! Thanks for watching. :)
Man, these tips were fantastic. My only regret? Not being able to avoid the last mistake. Watching this two weeks before starting any of the essays due in two weeks for regular decision.
Wherever you're at is OK. :) Thanks for sharing!
Same lmao
I think I'm just stuck.... I have a pretty solid idea, but I can't seem to put it into words. My rough draft is also very disorganized and my thoughts are just scattered everywhere...
SAME
You got this!
this is late but its for anyone else reading this and feeling the same: we can do it, i promise. we're enough and we can do it. my current method is that train of thought rough draft, and then pulling themes and sections out of it. prioritize one theme and a path through it to form a bit of an outline. then reference that and your first draft to write up an official lil rough draft
Dang I’m a senior and I’m just starting now
Hey same. Really stressed now.
I had a fever dream last night about the college application process
You got this, Mark. I BELIEVE IN YOU.
I started like two weeks ago
Same
Watching this in September check!
thats cute i just got here lmaoooo
Lol!
4:33 great brainstorm different parts/focusing lens (a thread that connects everything)
:)
Always great tips! Thank you. It will be nice for my students to hear this from someone else and not me all of the time.
Thanks, Megan! It doesn't hurt to hear good advice from a few different people.
thank you so much! the splitting into three really helped.
I love that structure.
Wonderful video Ethan! Keep up the good work! We love you and the kids do too! You are touching kids lives all over the country with your willingness to share your expertise with them and those of us who all are in this work together! THANK YOU!!!
Thank you, Virginia! You are too kind.
Thank you! Your videos are actually making me start to enjoy college apps (a bit)
That's awesome! You got this.
It’s pretty nice listening to your tips, love your work👏🏼
I appreciate that!
Thank you! This is so helpful for me creating a montage type essay.
Glad it was helpful!
Hopefully this video helps, I always have that mistake from any essays especially this year, it's time for me that I fixed them better and tried to memorize them better. I have trouble trying to do the new essays too and to write some topics that don't make sense for some reason. I don't know what's been holding me back, it's ridiculous I want to end this suffering. I always do it every minute for no reason and it's getting on my nerves. I do a bad job trying do the right things for myself.
Thanks for sharing. You're putting in the work...and that's something worth acknowledging! I think you will find my online (pay-what-you-can) courses very helpful! The next sessions start in November. I would love to see you there. A nice perk too is that you will get access to our College Essay Guy Discord server where over 1,000 students are helping and supporting each other through the college application process. You're not alone!
www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-courses
It was quite informative:) thanks a lot!
Welcome!
Thank you!!’ I 👍🏻, shared and Subscribed immediately after listening to this. My son is a Junior so I will be using this site a lot; As Will He😉 You are amazing. So Grateful :)
Welcome aboard!
Yeah getting great advices actually am loving it and with the guidance l am going write the best
You got this!
My students LOVE your videos!
That is awesome! Thanks for sharing!
Thanks man this 🙏 🙌 👌 ❤ 👍 💯 🙏
Thanks for watching!
Good Morning - I am a school counselor and have been following you for the past couple of years and a bunch of students from our school district have attended your workshops. I am looking to run a college essay group meeting for juniors in June and we are working through the agenda. What is your recommendation for the best video of yours to show to the group? I don't want to overwhelm the students. The 9 College Essay mistakes video seems to be our frontrunner, it hits on fantastic points. Thanks so much for all of your help and let me know what you think!
I'd recommend this video: th-cam.com/video/uk7pLY4jbDU/w-d-xo.html&t
Why? It focuses what students can and should focus on, which I think is more practical and useful.
Also, consider signing up your school for College Essay Guy for Schools! www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-guy-for-schools
It's pay-what-you-can (so free!) and I'll walk your students live through writing great college essays.
Wow I wish you were able to look over my essay
If you register for my online courses, you may be able to get your essay reviewed live. More info here: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-courses
This guy: recommending getting things done months in advance.
Me: “my essay is due in a week...”
You got this. I recommend this blog since you're in a bit of a hurry: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/write-your-college-essay-in-just-one-night
OMG I am a newish to English teacher and you just saved me! (Department mysteriously has nothing to share!) Are you available for group question/answer sessions?
Thanks for watching! I'm swamped during this time of year, but I think you'll find some value from the free counselor resources on my website: www.collegeessayguy.com/counselor-resources
Hope this helps!
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Maybe I can use this video to pass my english class. I absolutely hate writing essays though and see next to no point in writing them... Stil can't decide if I'm going to actually try to regurgitate the information I've been taught in word form and actually try, or if I'm going to practice malicious compliance and just make them the most absolutely boring thing ever read in the history of man.
LOL. I appreciate your thought process. You got this.
I didn’t do a lot of extra-curriculars in high school because there weren’t a lot of active clubs and I’m not athletic, what do I do I’m scared
If your school didn't offer a lot of activities or you had other responsibilities that stopped you from joining ECs, explain that in the Additional Information section. It usually won't count against you. :)
Sir I wrote my essay in the narrative structure but cannot add the turning point one specific part. Will you please help me with that? How can I contact you?
Unfortunately I can't review essays for every student, but if curious about working with my team, you can reach out here: www.collegeessayguy.com/one-on-one/
Also, check out my free guide here: www.collegeessayguy.com/
hi, What is the link to the brainstorming exercise?
All my brainstorming exercises can be found here: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-admissions-blog#E
Where is the link to how to write a Montage essay?
Here you are: www.collegeessayguy.com/cwiab-student-18-montage-structure-sample-essay
Is it okay that I wrote my personal essay as if you would write a book chapter 1 ,2,3 they were short cause it was only 650 words
Sounds like a pretty cool idea to me if you can pull it off in 650 words!
Me starting my own essays in November like 😶
You got this. :)
2:27
"So what?" moments
Thanks for that!
Well, here I am with my EA application due in three days...
Same😂😂
You got this.
This video is great
Thanks for watching!
I am legit watching this in December TTT IMAO
You got this!
i’m about 10 drafts into my common app essay now but it just seems too cliche. is it too late to write another one
dude i haven’t even started
@@chloecollins7513 DKSADSAJSAKFSA same.... I really am so nervous
Good writing is re-writing! Don't be afraid to start over.
pov- you’ve decided to rewrite your common app essay 3 hours before it’s due
LOL! You got this.
yo mama
Thanks so much Alex for this beautiful insight.
@Alex Maestas Woah woah woah, chill out dawg chill out
84k views? How? How such a great college essay tip video has only 84k views 🥲
Appreciate you!
I guess I shouldn't be starting my why us for my ED now
You're doing exactly what you should be doing. :) You got this.
When it’s due in 4 days😓
You got this!
This guy has an amazing course online tho
Thanks for chiming in with that! Here's a link for those looking for more info: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-courses
Do u review essays?
Hi there! Thanks for writing in. We have an essay review platform where you can submit college essays for review by our CEG team. There are paid and free options available. review.collegeessayguy.com/
If you're looking for 1-on-1 help with your college application and essays, please submit a request form at this link and John from our team will be in touch with you soon. www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-coaching
Hope this helps! We believe in you.
Not my fault but I just started applying to the University a month before application deadline and now I'm writing the essay less than a week before the application deadline i wish someone told me to apply to international universities earlier. Wish me luck guys!
You got this!
@@Collegeessayguy I got in!!!!!
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Hi there. I'm not understanding your question. Could you rephrase it for me?
First off all TNX for you vedioa it really helps a lot but I did write an essay and I can't help my self if it is good or not for me it is not that bad but I really need an expert plsss on GOD I can you review it an give me an honest opinion it's like my entire chapter learning journey depends on it so are you willing to help me 😢
Hi there! Thanks for writing in. Unfortunately, Ethan is swamped this time of year and cannot review or provide feedback on essays.
We suggest referring to these blog posts to help with revising your essay:
1. www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/5-steps-revising-your-college-essay
2. www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/improve-college-essays-last-minute
If you're looking for 1-on-1 help with your college application and essays, please submit a request form at this link and John from our team will be in touch with you soon. www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-coaching
Hope this helps! We believe in you.
My essay is about a chicken toy😂😂😂😂
Love that!
“Summer”
Me in December:
LOL! You got this
Me watching this in october!
You got this!
Watching this In Feburary smh!
You got this!
Can we send our essays for you to leave comments on ?
Hi Geovany! Unfortunately, since I get so many requests from students asking for feedback, I'm not able to offer comments on your essays. Check out my free guide linked in the description for resources on guiding you through the process, plus my favorite exercise for helping students revise their own essay. It's called the Great College Essay Test: th-cam.com/video/1-wApCQBu_8/w-d-xo.html
Im watching it now... Do u think ill make it?
You got this!
...w-watch me speedrun this
You got this!
Too bad I'm starting last min igh
You got this. :)
i have 9 days to write an essay LOL
You got this.
i dont believe in college
OK! College isn't for everyone.