This was pretty good. If I might offer one small criticism though, the crown shown would be a "Show crown" They were quite heavy and incredibly uncomfortable to wear. Due to this they would be locked away and only worn for very special occasions such as meeting the king/queen of another nation, or other affair that called for 'Peacocking". The song however references a circlet, which was the "Everyday crown". This would be a thin and simple band of gold, silver, or both. These could still identify your station quickly but were far lighter and more comfortable to wear for extended periods. Going with the humble perspective the queen singing portrays, this would have not only been simpler to draw, and more technically correct to the lyrics, but also more thematically appropriate to the message.
I love this! Your style is really nice, it must have taken you so long to become this good! However, if you want my opinion (and I understand if you don't), I think you could maybe use less text, especially when the text repeats what's said in the song already - I think the song and the images speak well enough for themselves, and I personally find the text on the animation a little bit jarring
The stars are very beautiful, above the palace walls, They shine with equal splendour, still above far humbler halls. I watch them from my window, but their bright entrancing glow, Reminds me of the freedom I gave up so long ago. The royal circlet of bright gold rests lightly on my brow, I once thought only of the rights this circlet would endow. But once I took the crown to which I had been schooled and bred, I found it heavy on the heart, though light upon the head. Although I am the head of state, in truth I am the least, The true Queen knows her people fed, before she sits to feast. The good Queen knows her people safe, before she takes her rest, Thinks twice and thrice and yet again, before she makes request. For they are all my children, all, that I swore to defend, It is my duty to become both Queen and trusted friend- And of my children high and low, from beggar to above, The dearest are my Heralds, who return my care with love. The dearest are my Heralds, swift to spring to my command. Who give me aid and fellowship, who always understand That land and people first have needs that I may not deny- So I must send my dearest friends to danger-and to die. A friend, a love, a child-it matters not, I know indeed, That I must sacrifice them all if there should be the need. They know, and they forgive me-doing more than I require, With willing minds and loving hearts go straight to grasp the fire. These tears that burn my eyes are all the tears the Queen can't shed, The tears I weep in silence as I mourn my Heralds dead. Oh gods that dwell beyond the stars, if you can hear my cry- Amd if you have compassion-let me send no more to die
i realy ike it but for me it has to much this dark bluse color but thats just personal preferences sooo yea good job :P edit: also i think you have talent but work on the body proporsions tho, i knoiw the style and all but in many scenes the lenght of body parts are diffrent ;)
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You did great with this!
This was pretty good. If I might offer one small criticism though, the crown shown would be a "Show crown" They were quite heavy and incredibly uncomfortable to wear. Due to this they would be locked away and only worn for very special occasions such as meeting the king/queen of another nation, or other affair that called for 'Peacocking". The song however references a circlet, which was the "Everyday crown". This would be a thin and simple band of gold, silver, or both. These could still identify your station quickly but were far lighter and more comfortable to wear for extended periods. Going with the humble perspective the queen singing portrays, this would have not only been simpler to draw, and more technically correct to the lyrics, but also more thematically appropriate to the message.
Lol such a egghead but ah last I too am a egghead for you are correct 😂😂😂
❤omg that was a amazing video and beautiful animation for such a song❤
oh my god this is beautiful. love your art style
Something about about the simplicity of the animation really gets to me
I very much love how you made "I found it heavy on the heart tho light upon the head"
I like to think this is like prequel to battle dawn
Just splendid work, a great visual
Please make this a full animation!!!!! This is so pretty. Thank you.
Yes! I love it 😄! It's nice to see someone finally use this song.
Really good work 👏
TOO UNDERRATED
I love this! Your style is really nice, it must have taken you so long to become this good!
However, if you want my opinion (and I understand if you don't), I think you could maybe use less text, especially when the text repeats what's said in the song already - I think the song and the images speak well enough for themselves, and I personally find the text on the animation a little bit jarring
Beautiful \o/
Very much like it!
Nice!❤
The stars are very beautiful, above the palace walls,
They shine with equal splendour, still above far humbler halls.
I watch them from my window, but their bright entrancing glow,
Reminds me of the freedom I gave up so long ago.
The royal circlet of bright gold rests lightly on my brow,
I once thought only of the rights this circlet would endow.
But once I took the crown to which I had been schooled and bred,
I found it heavy on the heart, though light upon the head.
Although I am the head of state, in truth I am the least,
The true Queen knows her people fed, before she sits to feast.
The good Queen knows her people safe, before she takes her rest,
Thinks twice and thrice and yet again, before she makes request.
For they are all my children, all, that I swore to defend,
It is my duty to become both Queen and trusted friend-
And of my children high and low, from beggar to above,
The dearest are my Heralds, who return my care with love.
The dearest are my Heralds, swift to spring to my command.
Who give me aid and fellowship, who always understand
That land and people first have needs that I may not deny-
So I must send my dearest friends to danger-and to die.
A friend, a love, a child-it matters not, I know indeed,
That I must sacrifice them all if there should be the need.
They know, and they forgive me-doing more than I require,
With willing minds and loving hearts go straight to grasp the fire.
These tears that burn my eyes are all the tears the Queen can't shed,
The tears I weep in silence as I mourn my Heralds dead.
Oh gods that dwell beyond the stars, if you can hear my cry-
Amd if you have compassion-let me send no more to die
I'm a bit confused at the ending. Was he alive? A ghost? Pretty good though.
He survived the attack on the castle :3. Thank u tho
i realy ike it but for me it has to much this dark bluse color but thats just personal preferences sooo yea good job :P
edit: also i think you have talent but work on the body proporsions tho, i knoiw the style and all but in many scenes the lenght of body parts are diffrent ;)
Remind me of Aphmau's old Diaries
The color scheme is to dark. It's hard to tell what's going on.
I think it was supposed to be
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