A different avenue...Sees woman in basement no wheelchair. Gets scared and runs. Takes shower to relax. Goes into kitchen and her reflection is in the microwave glass. He turns and she kills him. Next shot. "Apartment for Rent. Reasonable rate."
She's in a wheelchair then she's not and standing! Much better if he took a shower. Heard the knock and saw her in the hall. Put a bit of suspense by having him scream to leave...and the door knob moves...fade to black...scream. The end.
Creepy but a little predictable. Glad it wasn't longer or I don't know how that would have worked. Short films are difficult to nail, but when they are this short you can often get a better effect if the story is a little weak, which I didn't have to worry about here even though this type of horror short (who is that at my door when I just saw something scary) has been done to death. By keeping it this short you can slip by with it. I liked how it was filmed though, it was a good looking film. Keep at it- believe me, as a person with a passion for short films, I've seen far worse. :)
Well...it wasn't a BAD film by any means! I actually liked it! But, there were quite a few gaping holes in the story. Like...why is the ghost in a wheelchair? What's the story with this ghost? Usually, we get a bit of backstory so we know why that ghost is haunting that person/place. I guess that's my biggest issue with this. That, and the dark haired ghost girl in white dress. SO overdone! But, like I said initially, it's not a BAD film. Take this as the constructive criticism it was intended to be. Thanks for sharing!
Great job!
😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂dude couldn't get that door lock fast enough lol lol lol
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Enjoyed this short especially the score. Thank you.
I thought he was safe!
2:31. Me trying to get to class on time. 😄
Ok ;)
A different avenue...Sees woman in basement no wheelchair. Gets scared and runs. Takes shower to relax. Goes into kitchen and her reflection is in the microwave glass. He turns and she kills him. Next shot. "Apartment for Rent. Reasonable rate."
Great Job😊
That's why you call the matinence man
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Its cool, not bad!
Good job
Cool, not bad👍
Ghosts don't knock.
Nice
Music was really good!
3:01 cameraman in the reflection
She's in a wheelchair then she's not and standing! Much better if he took a shower. Heard the knock and saw her in the hall. Put a bit of suspense by having him scream to leave...and the door knob moves...fade to black...scream. The end.
I like the suspense part, the acting and the sound effects. I hope you also like our horror short film with the link provided. Thank you!!!
not too bad
Creepy but a little predictable. Glad it wasn't longer or I don't know how that would have worked. Short films are difficult to nail, but when they are this short you can often get a better effect if the story is a little weak, which I didn't have to worry about here even though this type of horror short (who is that at my door when I just saw something scary) has been done to death. By keeping it this short you can slip by with it. I liked how it was filmed though, it was a good looking film. Keep at it- believe me, as a person with a passion for short films, I've seen far worse. :)
Me parece que el corto tiene un montaje de planos muy rápìdo. Así es muy difícil conseguir dar tensión. también es previsible
not bad
Well...it wasn't a BAD film by any means! I actually liked it! But, there were quite a few gaping holes in the story. Like...why is the ghost in a wheelchair? What's the story with this ghost? Usually, we get a bit of backstory so we know why that ghost is haunting that person/place. I guess that's my biggest issue with this. That, and the dark haired ghost girl in white dress. SO overdone! But, like I said initially, it's not a BAD film. Take this as the constructive criticism it was intended to be. Thanks for sharing!
just goddamn awful is what this is....
hell dey never show how do dey get inside ?????
What a load of bs.
Kirty Wright no u
Great job😊