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Rule No.1: If u r so disturbed seeing a girl through the peep hole, u better not open the door. Rule No. 2: If u hear a cliche demon voice while u r narrating, run out of there like anything. Rule No. 3: If u r running from a ghost, get out of the apartment/building or city perhaps, dont hide in ur room. Rule No. 4: If the ghost is giving u some subliminal queer messages, dont listen.
She obviously recognizes the ghost, which might make a difference. If you have history with a ghost, sort it out before you move into a new place. Just saying... :)
I laughed when she first looked through the peephole and gasped in fear. What's so scary about a girl stood outside? She doesn't know somethings up yet! Lol
+WHITE DEER For what I understood, she was in some sort of accident that got the girl killed and had been having visions of her which is why she moved to the new apartment. So I'm assuming she recognized the girl standing at her door and the gasped because she had thought she would be free from such visions by moving away and starting a new life but the visions continued because they were in her head. Some sort of PTSD allucinations, judging by the end when she is killing herself with the pillow.
Oh...there was a ghost alright! Whether there was meant to be one or not, if that's how she died, there was a ghost, or SOMEONE/THING there cuz a person cannot suffocate themselves that way. Completely impossible. You would pass out b4 dying, letting go of the pillow, allowing you to then breath. Just FYI, ya know?
@@MissTique247 Good point, Kathy. The producers couldn't find an invisible ghost to play the part. They couldn't afford CGI so they just had her push the pillow against her face and they were hoping we wouldn't notice her arms doing it. LOL j/k no really, that's a good point.
Lol....u can't even imagine how unimaginable pshycopathy can be!!!! She's a pshycho fighting with herself n she lost the battle at the end.....A mentally sick person regretting immensely for smthng feels the presence of some extraordinary being n something happening unusual....🤣🤣🤣🤣
Not at all. Nobody can kill themselves by holding or interrupting their breath. This is psychic scientific medical research. As you say the content is good.
@@mohamedsenharshan3016 I said the same exact thing. A scientific impossibility. She would pass out before she died, effectively releasing the pressure on the pillow, therein freeing herself. Cant be done.
Actually is a conjuration of the ghost with a force, as you can see she' struggling to remove the pillow, but her hands are glued forcing the pillow down on her face as if her own arms developed some life of its own. And whats even stranger, you can see if she had a seizure before the door closes on its own. Thats is how I can see with my interpretation.
Ellan (or how ever you spell it): *peeps through hole* *screams* *opens door* "Hello?" (5 minutes later) Ellan: *has a conversation with a demon/ghost*
ive seen this before , its very sad , not scary , im guessing a car wreck , guilt . the actress is very good , its a lovely film first rate , well done
Very sincere attempt. There are three things that I think you should know. One is specifically about the horror genre. 1. Expositions are an art. You need to give the audience a back story without making it feel like filling the blanks. The diary was a good option because the exposition would have been an narrative, however, the first minute or so of this footage was wasted showing the laundry being done and coffee being made. In a short movie that is wasted precious space. 2. You should be very careful about making the antagonist in a horror movie speak. Giving them a voice means humanizing them and "breaking a wall". Some movies like Jaws didnt show the shark properly until the end. Blair Witch Project showed nothing, leaving everything to the audience's imagination. Just remember, the scariest monster lives in your head. What scares me wont scare you? So be careful about giving your monster a face and a voice. That is why some people felt a little scared but most people didnt feel frightened of a sweet looking girl in a pretty dress. 3. One page of script should translate to one minute of screen time. There are some exceptions but that is usually the standard. If you have a six minute movie, the script must be six pages long. If its not, you have to ask yourself if the writing was economical and spread enough.
I'm not sure if you've seen it, but there's an amazing British advertisement about road safety where some guy is going about his daily life, and keeps seeing this dead boys body everywhere. The message is so clear, immensely powerful and ridiculously freaky and it only runs for 30 seconds. Nothing is said. I feel your ghost spoke too much, like at one point they had a full on convo. She may as well have sat her down and made her a cup of tea. Xp I agree with the OP's advise on that part. Nice work though man.
just a thought....perhaps it wasn't a ghost at all but maybe this girl suffers from split personality disorder and the "ghost" is the other her, so by getting professional help ( she said shes not crazy), she "killed" her and that's why she is actually suffocating herself at the end.....
my thought is she did something terrible to this girl, idk, bullied her and caused her to commit suicide, killed her in a drunk driving accident, something like that and the guilt haunts the main character to point that she goes crazy and kills herself idk im rambling XD
1. I don't think there is a paranormal entity that can open a door. 2. No one in their right mind would casually sit and speak with a ghost like that. 3. Great story, poorly executed.
Change the name. ..this is not a haunted house/ apartment story its about a haunted girl. Call it Guilt trip or Unforgivable or something to do with a person haunted by someone they've accidentally killed , this has nothing to do with the apartment where it happens... its all about the back story. Was good though, once I knew what was happening.
A tray or a Japanese you cat or a Korean you are all work no nick there is no difference each your open his legs and say brother brother well you know what country you sound like a rat don t scream but you are complaining. Huh
Ok, this wasn't the worst, but far, far from anything good. Too fast into the ghost, her reaction to seeing the woman outside her peephole was delayed and staccato, there needed to be an explanation of how she killed the girl, and the ending made no sense. The whole story needed more buildup and if she was crazy from guilt that needed more build up and explanation as well. Everything just happened way too fast and left you too confused to even be remotely creepy.
The camera angles at the beginning were great. I kept expecting something to pop out as the woman shifted. And it was disorienting because she kept twisting and moving. The apartment was creepy, too. No windows that I could see and it's tight and bare with no where to hide. The white hall creeper me out the most since there was no "life" in it (colors, shapes, furniture). The only time there's a release from that tension is when she goes into the other rooms where there is at least some color (grey). Good job!
There's nothing nice about it. I mean if you were in a place like this the owner of a TV channel not a lot of coffee but this is a channel owner who wants to laugh at us in movies that are ruined by your mother
To me horror is that all these young 20-somethings in horror movies live in nicer apartments than I do. Plus hers had a friendly ghost that said hello to her and went in the kitchen to try and whip up a cup of tea. The girl was super-unfriendly and then went cray-cray and smothered herself, which I'm not even sure is possible. I think a survival reflex kicks in.
Rule 1:If there is any ghost/girl outside the door,so if u r scared then call police for help or call ur parents or any nearby ppl.Or if u r not scred thn open the door,without being hyper or panic Rule 2:If u r scared n at the moment u dont know wht to do then instead of hiding,leave the place or building. Suggetion:If i would be at ur place then instead of hiding,i would call up my friends at my home.Or i would go to neighbor's house.....If she would be a gurl not any boy or aunty. Relaity:There is no ghost in this world but if it is then whts the aim to scare us??They can become our guardian spirit. And if any1 is. agree with me then plz reply otherwise took ur comment below👧
Wow...lots of negative comments below....I studied film at Northwestern University...I found your short film quite scary. I made my own back story, pieced together from the minimal dialogue..love the shot of the woman's feet and legs kicking as she suffocates and struggles. LOVE the doll falling from the headboard in her bed...Good job!!
There's no mistakes at all you are the best director in making thrilling horror movies...!!! Horror movies should be a best entertainer in creating a shock for a while which you did it in more precise manner, I love you so much dear entire team's hard work, awaiting for your next movie on big screen's wish you all the success for your hard work....!!!
It’s actually a shame that she has to deal with this after moving into a fancy apartment like that.. I would have went to the leasing office and ended my lease agreement early. 😂😂😂
This was well made and the actress is pretty good. I don't why but it just wasn't that scary but I can't pin point why. Maybe it's the music or the pacing? I think it's the pacing. Please keep making more of these you have some real talent !! I really enjoyed this ,I just didn't get scared really but all of this takes a lot of talent to put together and the idea is great. The one thing that did kinda creep me out was the door closing at the end. Anyways I just wanted to let you know I really enjoyed this and I really hope to see more from you!! Great job
Nami Nuitsuki I believe the premise is that she has multiple personality disorder, now known as Dissociative Identity Disorder. I think in this film she was contending with one of her Identities. In the end, she smothered herself to the point of passing out because we can't actually smother ourselves to death. Hope that helps!
Veemsen Lama, don't beat yourself up ,that was great. Just follow your passion ,I wish I could make a horror film but I don't own a camera all I can do is write . From one horror fan to another peace!
+Veemsen Lama I did enjoy it. It did scare me I have to admit. I say well done for this short film. well done for making it scary. I mean I'm not easy to scare. and you managed to scare me so well done. I congratulate you on this. and I congratulate you on your successes. so congratulations
Sorry to bubble your burst, but that would be more of a plot hole. She wrote in her diary that she had just moved in "today". I don't know about you, but if my landlady told me that I was already long overdue on the first day I moved in, I'd shove the lease up her a** :)
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Veemsen Lama The title of the film doesn't make sense because the problem goes way back into her past as she writes in her diary. The cinematography is a little too shaky which somewhat disrupts the attention of the viewer. It could be more sorted if the camera was kept still when it had to. The storyline is good, excluding the title, but the concept is cliched. I also loved the fact that the ghost doesn't really have any unwanted gory make-up on. :)
I must say , this was a very pleasing short film, because the plot wasn't given away at first. When the girl heard a knock on the front door and looked through the peep hole, she was startled. It had me pondering in curiosity as to why. This made me more interested in the conclusion of the film. The suspense of the actresses combined with the growing music, were both intriguing. However, when it was the girl's time to die, she was suffocated by a pillow. This to me was a bit PG as to what I was expecting (a gruesome and horrifying death). All in all, I enjoyed this film and the artistic ability to direct, produce, and edit this fascinating project. Job well done.
I love this horror short. Now I think I get the storyline but correct me if I am wrong. A lady named Ellen killed a girl by accident and her ghost came back to haunt Ellen. The only way the ghost will leave Ellen alone is by her killing Ellen by covering her face with a pillow until she stops breathing which makes it 50 50. This ghost seems to see eye for an eye.
Really liked this; I really liked the way the story unfolded. I knew as soon as she saw the girl at the door that she recognized her, so that whole aspect really worked for me, and the journal filled in more. I thought it flowed beautifully. It was creepy, and rather sad as well. Really well done in my opinion.
actually very good cinematography and acting however the ghost thing came in way too quick and sudden, need to build up to it more, and see less of it.. plus the voicing for it was too corny imo and nothing really new, another ghost girl
Well done, it was worthy watching it. However, there are several aspects and issues about apartment 41 which could have been done differently. For example, first, the camera perspective changes too often and the camera is like shaking a little bit. This makes the scene a little bit unclear and hard to follow. Second, creating tension and making the viewers excited is what makes horror movies and scenes so special and why people like to watch them. Although it had those moments when something was building up, it was still not exciting enough to make you afraid or feel like "I can't wait what will happen next". The beginning was a bit too long, but it was quite ok. There, the camera perspective was ok as well until it switched too often. The viewers want to see most of the apartment to get an impression of the surrounding. Only the moment when someone was on her door and she saw the mysterious figure was way too fast and took away the tension. Before this happened, she didn't notice anything really suspicious. There weren't signs of someone already being there. Besides the silent atmosphere of the apartment, nothing would have made anyone afraid or giving them the feeling that "something is wrong here". Coming to the note she wrote down about the apartment, this was way too late. It was simply in a wrong order. That she showed of infront of the door could also happen after she writes down the letter. Elsewhere, this "hello Ellen" and the water turning on by itself should have been put more in the beginning before she sees more of her. Instead of a note, I don't see anything wrong if she simply talked in her mind so that we would hear it. So, the sequence should have been different, creating more tension and taking less away. In a moment when the horror is revealed, e.g. when the mysterious, scary woman shows up and one sees her, the scene will usually get more chaotic and scary. The protagonist usually cannot calm down after this event and is in permanent fear. It won't be like: "Hey I saw something creepy outside the door and now, everything is calm. Let me write down how beautiful this apartment is." No, she would rather be frightened and ask herself what was going on. At least such a reaction would be more believable. In this story, the protagonist obviously had more background information than the viewer. The story should have let us known that pretty much at the beginning or middle before the paranormal activities take place. There are several ways one can create tension and make everything more mysterious and unsettling. For this, making usage of lights (e.g. flickering), ringing bells (what was done here), phone rings, especially mirrors, water, things suddenly falling on the ground by their own, glass breaking, blood appearing in certain places etc etc.. The possibilities are almost endless. Things have to be out of order and the protagonist has to ask their own what is going on here. Cases like 'she looks right through the door's peephole and sees her' are way too predictable. The end was also quite ok. People are saying that the antagonist should not speak with her. Well, usually the horror figures don't talk much and are simply creepy. However, this is really up to you. Here, it wasn't actually a bad idea since we got to understand more about the background story. The very end of it with the door was also OK and quite conventional, although it was a little bit confusing. But we can overlook this part. I am fine with the end. Besides all of the criticism, the apartment had a dark beautiful atmosphere. The protagonist acted very well. It had a background story. Paranormal activities were going on. Even the creepy girl as a horror figure was well chosen. That she appeared and then suddenly disappeared and her voice was also quite good. Creepy women and girls are always a great idea for horror movies. Usually, if someone saw such a figure, one wouldn't open up the door though. But those are the controversial parts and people have a different opinion on them. People are different and act differently. Nonetheless, it was worth watching it, even if it could be better by working on those parts I mentioned. There is still enough space for speculations and interpretations which is definitely not bad. After all, it was three years ago. So, at least one can make an exception of this and see it as quite entertaining.
The first thing I thought when watching this was that it has really nice camera work. The script wasn’t very well put together but it did amuse me. All in all a good attempt, keep at it!
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😂😂🤣 Agreed.
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Agreed
Exactly... I do the same wen i feel that something scary is about to happen in the movie
The most interactive ghost I've ever seen.😂😂
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Rule No.1: If u r so disturbed seeing a girl through the peep hole, u better not open the door.
Rule No. 2: If u hear a cliche demon voice while u r narrating, run out of there like anything.
Rule No. 3: If u r running from a ghost, get out of the apartment/building or city perhaps, dont hide in ur room.
Rule No. 4: If the ghost is giving u some subliminal queer messages, dont listen.
Jokes apart, its a good short film
haha correct
Rule No 5: Characters in horror movies don't know they're characters in a horror movie, so their "stupid" choices is excused. Sorry, just had to ;)
Rule number 6: Dead ppl, please, please. please stop trying to wear makeup. It's not working for you. It's just making you look foolish.
Debby Scott rule no.1 : prayer... only Him can save you in any situation
I love how she gasps in fear of the girl standing out the door and still opens it lmao
Yess
Opening your door lets the spirits in.
thats called overacting
Ikr that’s so STUPID
And let’s the ghost right on in 😂
She got balls....lol....she stood right in front of the ghost and said, "Get outta my house" SAVAGE
She obviously recognizes the ghost, which might make a difference. If you have history with a ghost, sort it out before you move into a new place. Just saying... :)
If you have GOD in your life you can Face demons.because our GOD IS A GREAT and POWEFUL GOD
She does have balls, 2 in number, medium sized.
I mean the ghost is not paying the rent now is it
Now I've got AC/DC in my head...."She's Got Balls"🤘🏻
the film is so dark . I mean its really dark I cannot see the ghost .
vamsidhar Alluri hhahahaha
Juz increase ua brightness 🤪
Bwahaha 😂
No one cam see ghost that is why we call it ghost haha
Superb Bro!
I laughed when she first looked through the peephole and gasped in fear. What's so scary about a girl stood outside? She doesn't know somethings up yet! Lol
+WHITE DEER For what I understood, she was in some sort of accident that got the girl killed and had been having visions of her which is why she moved to the new apartment. So I'm assuming she recognized the girl standing at her door and the gasped because she had thought she would be free from such visions by moving away and starting a new life but the visions continued because they were in her head. Some sort of PTSD allucinations, judging by the end when she is killing herself with the pillow.
Oooooooh
Yea..that was uncalled for
I was laughing at the fact that she got scared when she saw the girl through the peephole and then proceeded in opening the door lol
OhitsKirstyn I know yeah scream laugh roll on the ground
Looks like there was no ghost at all. The girl had just a depression. She moved to new apartment to start over,but she had feel of guilty and suicide
Oh...there was a ghost alright! Whether there was meant to be one or not, if that's how she died, there was a ghost, or SOMEONE/THING there cuz a person cannot suffocate themselves that way. Completely impossible. You would pass out b4 dying, letting go of the pillow, allowing you to then breath. Just FYI, ya know?
@@MissTique247 Good point, Kathy. The producers couldn't find an invisible ghost to play the part. They couldn't afford CGI so they just had her push the pillow against her face and they were hoping we wouldn't notice her arms doing it. LOL j/k no really, that's a good point.
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Lol....u can't even imagine how unimaginable pshycopathy can be!!!! She's a pshycho fighting with herself n she lost the battle at the end.....A mentally sick person regretting immensely for smthng feels the presence of some extraordinary being n something happening unusual....🤣🤣🤣🤣
There is definetly a ghost because she said that she took it's life and it was an accident and really want to move on...
Opening the door to an unknown entity always means that you’re inviting them in or welcoming their presence.
Some context on how/why the ghost ended up a ghost would have been nice.
can we talk about how perfect her handwriting is?
+sokissablex we could, or maybe we could just get straight onto the matter of fixtures and fittings
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sokissablex lol yep better than mine
Nobody really cared about that part
No...
LoL
I like this stuff it doesn’t scare me but amuses me
I swear to god when i start living by myself I'm getting a dog before I move in
Haha ikr me too!!
+Jenessa Sifuentes there is another short horror about a girl & her dog. gimme a holla if you want the url
+Cloudo Berando tell me more!
+Paulina Campos She won't . i guess she is shy or trapped by dog that she talked of.
+Shoaib Haider yep me also ..hahahaa
I love these short films. sometimes they're scarier then a full length movie.
Thank you
excuse me but have u watched it till the end?
@@RagonEy I did to be honnest they arent verry creppy like the shorts ones
To be fair, they don't have as much time to work with, so they don't have to fill in extra time. More time to make boring mistakes.
She just ends up killing herself because of all the guilt she felt. She wasn't really being haunted by a ghost. She made it up herself
Films don't have to be realistic really, is a film/movie people can do whatever they want with their story...
The ghost put glue on the pillow and stuck it to the woman's face. The woman wasn't suffocating herself - she was trying to pull the pillow off.
Not at all. Nobody can kill themselves by holding or interrupting their breath. This is psychic scientific medical research. As you say the content is good.
@@mohamedsenharshan3016 I said the same exact thing. A scientific impossibility. She would pass out before she died, effectively releasing the pressure on the pillow, therein freeing herself. Cant be done.
Actually is a conjuration of the ghost with a force, as you can see she' struggling to remove the pillow, but her hands are glued forcing the pillow down on her face as if her own arms developed some life of its own. And whats even stranger, you can see if she had a seizure before the door closes on its own. Thats is how I can see with my interpretation.
Ellan (or how ever you spell it):
*peeps through hole*
*screams*
*opens door*
"Hello?"
(5 minutes later)
Ellan: *has a conversation with a demon/ghost*
Thumbs up if you thought the doll falling on her head at 4:15 was the scariest part of the film.
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"Get out of my house. What are you doing here?"
Me: "Girl, are you trying to get rid of a ghost or a clingy ex."
"I'm not crazy, I'm not crazy!"
I would hope that I'm fucking crazy and that ghost thing is not real!
True
exactly what i was thinking lol
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Not bad ,it was straight to the point , keep making more like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Its a new generation of "ghost" who don't believe in scaring at all, rather wants a 'clear communication' with humans!!!!
But excellent try. Liked it
Thank you Mandeep
I liked it cuz it was different :p
Fantastic
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One problem she’d pass out before she’d die and then she wouldn’t be smothering herself anymore. So no death.
when she said hello? do you think that's she's gonna say yas I'm in the kitchen make you a sandwich?
Nice voice for the accidental killer
When there's a girl at the door I scream too, I get anxiety around them
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lol xdd
Them girl scouts scare me. I just feel so guilty telling them I don't want to buy their damned expensive cookies :[
Ben Martin and when she sees sher she opens the door or what? i would lock the door and scream AHHHHHHHHHH
Ben, only scream at the ones carrying a pillow
ive seen this before , its very sad , not scary , im guessing a car wreck , guilt . the actress is very good , its a lovely film first rate , well done
Very sincere attempt. There are three things that I think you should know. One is specifically about the horror genre.
1. Expositions are an art. You need to give the audience a back story without making it feel like filling the blanks. The diary was a good option because the exposition would have been an narrative, however, the first minute or so of this footage was wasted showing the laundry being done and coffee being made. In a short movie that is wasted precious space.
2. You should be very careful about making the antagonist in a horror movie speak. Giving them a voice means humanizing them and "breaking a wall". Some movies like Jaws didnt show the shark properly until the end. Blair Witch Project showed nothing, leaving everything to the audience's imagination. Just remember, the scariest monster lives in your head. What scares me wont scare you? So be careful about giving your monster a face and a voice. That is why some people felt a little scared but most people didnt feel frightened of a sweet looking girl in a pretty dress.
3. One page of script should translate to one minute of screen time. There are some exceptions but that is usually the standard. If you have a six minute movie, the script must be six pages long. If its not, you have to ask yourself if the writing was economical and spread enough.
Great thank you for the feedback.
Diane Winchester Some gold here. Nice points.
Btw, in Blair Witch, there was no witch. The two guys wanted to kill the girl, so they took her to that house to do it.
YES!!!!! thank you for that!
I'm not sure if you've seen it, but there's an amazing British advertisement about road safety where some guy is going about his daily life, and keeps seeing this dead boys body everywhere. The message is so clear, immensely powerful and ridiculously freaky and it only runs for 30 seconds. Nothing is said.
I feel your ghost spoke too much, like at one point they had a full on convo. She may as well have sat her down and made her a cup of tea. Xp I agree with the OP's advise on that part. Nice work though man.
The actress is really beautiful. Could easily see her in a big budget film.
This is the funniest short horror film I've ever seen.
I agree, thus short film was pretty funny.
I don’t know whether to agree or not
Lol yeah😂. I was expecting more considering the likes and views on it
@@chakisamomin5650 me too! I'm quite disappointed 🙁
Watch the Short Horror Film „ The Toothbrush“ - funny as hell :)
I'm really starting to be a fan of short horror films instead of long horror films.
just a thought....perhaps it wasn't a ghost at all but maybe this girl suffers from split personality disorder and the "ghost" is the other her, so by getting professional help ( she said shes not crazy), she "killed" her and that's why she is actually suffocating herself at the end.....
my thought is she did something terrible to this girl, idk, bullied her and caused her to commit suicide, killed her in a drunk driving accident, something like that and the guilt haunts the main character to point that she goes crazy and kills herself idk im rambling XD
like the babadook
But then who slammed the door shut at the end?
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
it was just aded by the creator to end the movie to make it more horrorful and end it proffesionaly
It wouldn't be a short horror film without laundry involved, somehow.
1. I don't think there is a paranormal entity that can open a door.
2. No one in their right mind would casually sit and speak with a ghost like that.
3. Great story, poorly executed.
Saysha Grifo what if she wasn't in her right mind, though?
Interesting video The future of the horror industry. Potential.
Her: "get out of my house!!!"
Me: girl... She will kill ya.
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crazy! loved the camera work. pretty original take on the revenge storyline
White dressed ghost girls are outdated bro
U SURVIVED!!!! But i mustache u a question: Why are you watching this??? xD
İ was tired of watching porn in my very secret bunker under Germany.So i decided to watch some youtube
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+Yasmin Abu Eva...how can this be... You died because of your cyro chamber malfunction 45 years ago
i was rebirthed when myspace was relaunched. A raincloud literally pooped me out and this is how i came to be
This was Brilliant!!! I want to be in the next one!!! I love stuff like this!!!!
This is great! I love how she spoke her mind and told the girl to get out!
Apartment 41 this short horror film really scared the shit out of me !!! Awesome 👍 😁 one of my favorites !!!
this deserves an award ... :)
4:54 “Take your pants off” 😂
Change the name. ..this is not a haunted house/ apartment story its about a haunted girl. Call it Guilt trip or Unforgivable or something to do with a person haunted by someone they've accidentally killed , this has nothing to do with the apartment where it happens... its all about the back story. Was good though, once I knew what was happening.
A tray or a Japanese you cat or a Korean you are all work no nick there is no difference each your open his legs and say brother brother well you know what country you sound like a rat don t scream but you are complaining. Huh
Wow, that was creepy. Girl played her part well 👍
Ok, this wasn't the worst, but far, far from anything good. Too fast into the ghost, her reaction to seeing the woman outside her peephole was delayed and staccato, there needed to be an explanation of how she killed the girl, and the ending made no sense. The whole story needed more buildup and if she was crazy from guilt that needed more build up and explanation as well. Everything just happened way too fast and left you too confused to even be remotely creepy.
+leslie delp Thank you
Interesting... Dynamic cutting.......
#elbadrun
These "there was no ghost" horror stories are all the rage lately
I agree.
When you see a ghost in your house
Run away from the goddamned house ❌
Ask the ghost to leave your house ✅
Not gonna lie....when the entity told her to get on the bed, I thought things were gonna head in another direction.😐
Can we talk about how good both of them are good in acting ?🤔😈
Very happy to see someone doing good horror!! Please keep more coming!!!
+arethnea Thank you
My own. The list
Its funny how she has a conversation with the ghost!
The camera angles at the beginning were great. I kept expecting something to pop out as the woman shifted. And it was disorienting because she kept twisting and moving. The apartment was creepy, too. No windows that I could see and it's tight and bare with no where to hide. The white hall creeper me out the most since there was no "life" in it (colors, shapes, furniture). The only time there's a release from that tension is when she goes into the other rooms where there is at least some color (grey). Good job!
Thank you
There's nothing nice about it. I mean if you were in a place like this the owner of a TV channel not a lot of coffee but this is a channel owner who wants to laugh at us in movies that are ruined by your mother
ME- VOLUME FULL AND FULL SCREEN
ALSO ME- CALLS THOSE COFFIN DANCE PEOPLE
Okay, so everyone’s talking about the plot line. Don’t get me wrong, it was great, but no one’s talking about the actresses. They were both amazing!
The ghost with back turned. Creepy. When it walked stage left, it started to look human.
I love watching horror flicks like this... it’s fun being scared 😱 that rush of adrenaline... whew!!!
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"I am sorry I unalived you what more do you want?!" lmao
Nice atmosphere. Very effective horror in a short.
Thank you Stephen
To me horror is that all these young 20-somethings in horror movies live in nicer apartments than I do. Plus hers had a friendly ghost that said hello to her and went in the kitchen to try and whip up a cup of tea. The girl was super-unfriendly and then went cray-cray and smothered herself, which I'm not even sure is possible. I think a survival reflex kicks in.
😂😂😂
If you are scared here is some ice cream and a teddy bear🍦🐻
If you are laughing here is a chill pill 💊
If your pretty chill rn then stay gucci👌🏻
She said: "Let me move on "
And the 'ghost'/girlfriend said: "No."
LMAO
Rule 1:If there is any ghost/girl outside the door,so if u r scared then call police for help or call ur parents or any nearby ppl.Or if u r not scred thn open the door,without being hyper or panic
Rule 2:If u r scared n at the moment u dont know wht to do then instead of hiding,leave the place or building.
Suggetion:If i would be at ur place then instead of hiding,i would call up my friends at my home.Or i would go to neighbor's house.....If she would be a gurl not any boy or aunty.
Relaity:There is no ghost in this world but if it is then whts the aim to scare us??They can become our guardian spirit. And if any1 is. agree with me then plz reply otherwise took ur comment below👧
Thank you for all the rules lol.
Yah yah
Lucy Whitesmen I like your name
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Really?
"Get out of my house" as if it works😂
I loved that sound affect at 3:30 or so. It reminded me of Skull Kid's laugh from Majora's Mask.
+Tyler Mabry Thank you
very interesting concept.... I loved it... omg
Wow...lots of negative comments below....I studied film at Northwestern University...I found your short film quite scary. I made my own back story, pieced together from the minimal dialogue..love the shot of the woman's feet and legs kicking as she suffocates and struggles. LOVE the doll falling from the headboard in her bed...Good job!!
If u find it suffocating then don't made the film..
Cz i am watching at 2:40 am and it's not horror at all.
Awesome!
I liked this, and the actress is gorgeous.
Go perve somewhere else!
There's no mistakes at all you are the best director in making thrilling horror movies...!!! Horror movies should be a best entertainer in creating a shock for a while which you did it in more precise manner, I love you so much dear entire team's hard work, awaiting for your next movie on big screen's wish you all the success for your hard work....!!!
When you see through the hole and you find a mysterious girl why would you open the door ?scream and go away from the appartment
It’s actually a shame that she has to deal with this after moving into a fancy apartment like that.. I would have went to the leasing office and ended my lease agreement early. 😂😂😂
Liked the 👻..... She is interactive.........😂
Viva el terror!!! 😉😉😈😈😈👻👻💝💝
May your prayers go to the innocent doll at 4:15 who's life was taken by a frightened women
😂😂😂😂
Apartment 41 in any building won’t be renting by me!! All I know I would’ve been running faster that Usain Bolt!! 😄😄
Like who actually talks to ghosts like this , i mean damn 😂😂
This was well made and the actress is pretty good. I don't why but it just wasn't that scary but I can't pin point why. Maybe it's the music or the pacing? I think it's the pacing. Please keep making more of these you have some real talent !! I really enjoyed this ,I just didn't get scared really but all of this takes a lot of talent to put together and the idea is great. The one thing that did kinda creep me out was the door closing at the end. Anyways I just wanted to let you know I really enjoyed this and I really hope to see more from you!! Great job
Thank you for the positive comment Chelsea.
I can't see a ghost and go towards it, Rip to me in short, I would jump through the window
I just laughed so hard!!
Thanx Boo. I needed that!! 😆😚
I wish I could watch even a single horror movie without reduce the volume
Wait, what's the back story? I'm sorry, I didn't really understand it even after watching four times. So sorry, but can someone explain?
Nami Nuitsuki I believe the premise is that she has multiple personality disorder, now known as Dissociative Identity Disorder. I think in this film she was contending with one of her Identities. In the end, she smothered herself to the point of passing out because we can't actually smother ourselves to death. Hope that helps!
Thanks! It makes much more sense now when I watch it over again. Thanks a ton for that help. 😋
Nami Nuitsuki Well good! Have a great day sunshine!
+Tyler Mabry Really that's what it was about...how did I miss that?
+Nami Nuitsuki I actually have Multiple Personality, but "she" is actually quite friendly towards me
When she says "Get out of me house" it makes me think: ARE YOU TRYING TO REASON WITH A FLIPPING GHOST?!
Veemsen Lama, don't beat yourself up ,that was great. Just follow your passion ,I wish I could make a horror
film but I don't own a camera all I can do is write . From one horror fan to another peace!
Thank you for the enouragement
i’m already scared and it’s been 2 seconds. literally
it was actually pretty good
+samantha addison Thanks
+Veemsen Lama I did enjoy it. It did scare me I have to admit. I say well done for this short film. well done for making it scary. I mean I'm not easy to scare. and you managed to scare me so well done. I congratulate you on this. and I congratulate you on your successes. so congratulations
+samantha addison Glad you enjoyed that.
+Veemsen Lama I did enjoy it a lot
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Plot Twist: **It was just the Land Lady trying to get the long overdue rent**
Sorry to bubble your burst, but that would be more of a plot hole. She wrote in her diary that she had just moved in "today". I don't know about you, but if my landlady told me that I was already long overdue on the first day I moved in, I'd shove the lease up her a** :)
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Veemsen Lama very nice
Veemsen Lama good job!!
Veemsen Lama The title of the film doesn't make sense because the problem goes way back into her past as she writes in her diary. The cinematography is a little too shaky which somewhat disrupts the attention of the viewer. It could be more sorted if the camera was kept still when it had to. The storyline is good, excluding the title, but the concept is cliched. I also loved the fact that the ghost doesn't really have any unwanted gory make-up on. :)
Sonia David yes very much true fact .This story must have two parts ,one about her past and another one is this one.
Veemsen Lama good movie, but i guess u should be hire a good actors or actress.
Making was too awesome. & colour was another level. 🖤
I must say , this was a very pleasing short film, because the plot wasn't given away at first. When the girl heard a knock on the front door and looked through the peep hole, she was startled. It had me pondering in curiosity as to why. This made me more interested in the conclusion of the film. The suspense of the actresses combined with the growing music, were both intriguing. However, when it was the girl's time to die, she was suffocated by a pillow. This to me was a bit PG as to what I was expecting (a gruesome and horrifying death). All in all, I enjoyed this film and the artistic ability to direct, produce, and edit this fascinating project. Job well done.
cool. even the ghost so talkative 🤣
Sadistic and entertaining well done 👍
I love this horror short. Now I think I get the storyline but correct me if I am wrong. A lady named Ellen killed a girl by accident and her ghost came back to haunt Ellen. The only way the ghost will leave Ellen alone is by her killing Ellen by covering her face with a pillow until she stops breathing which makes it 50 50. This ghost seems to see eye for an eye.
No Ellen was psychotic and tried to kill herself. However, it’s impossible to smother yourself with a pillow, so…
Yes your right
Really liked this; I really liked the way the story unfolded. I knew as soon as she saw the girl at the door that she recognized her, so that whole aspect really worked for me, and the journal filled in more. I thought it flowed beautifully. It was creepy, and rather sad as well. Really well done in my opinion.
too scary man!😱😱👻very good job keep it on!!😀😀
actually very good cinematography and acting however the ghost thing came in way too quick and sudden, need to build up to it more, and see less of it.. plus the voicing for it was too corny imo and nothing really new, another ghost girl
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Very excellent job. Hard to believe this was so good and so short a time. Well done
Well done, it was worthy watching it. However, there are several aspects and issues about apartment 41 which could have been done differently.
For example, first, the camera perspective changes too often and the camera is like shaking a little bit. This makes the scene a little bit unclear and hard to follow.
Second, creating tension and making the viewers excited is what makes horror movies and scenes so special and why people like to watch them. Although it had those moments when something was building up, it was still not exciting enough to make you afraid or feel like "I can't wait what will happen next".
The beginning was a bit too long, but it was quite ok. There, the camera perspective was ok as well until it switched too often.
The viewers want to see most of the apartment to get an impression of the surrounding.
Only the moment when someone was on her door and she saw the mysterious figure was way too fast and took away the tension. Before this happened, she didn't notice anything really suspicious. There weren't signs of someone already being there. Besides the silent atmosphere of the apartment, nothing would have made anyone afraid or giving them the feeling that "something is wrong here".
Coming to the note she wrote down about the apartment, this was way too late. It was simply in a wrong order. That she showed of infront of the door could also happen after she writes down the letter. Elsewhere, this "hello Ellen" and the water turning on by itself should have been put more in the beginning before she sees more of her. Instead of a note, I don't see anything wrong if she simply talked in her mind so that we would hear it.
So, the sequence should have been different, creating more tension and taking less away.
In a moment when the horror is revealed, e.g. when the mysterious, scary woman shows up and one sees her, the scene will usually get more chaotic and scary. The protagonist usually cannot calm down after this event and is in permanent fear. It won't be like: "Hey I saw something creepy outside the door and now, everything is calm. Let me write down how beautiful this apartment is."
No, she would rather be frightened and ask herself what was going on. At least such a reaction would be more believable.
In this story, the protagonist obviously had more background information than the viewer. The story should have let us known that pretty much at the beginning or middle before the paranormal activities take place.
There are several ways one can create tension and make everything more mysterious and unsettling. For this, making usage of lights (e.g. flickering), ringing bells (what was done here), phone rings, especially mirrors, water, things suddenly falling on the ground by their own, glass breaking, blood appearing in certain places etc etc..
The possibilities are almost endless. Things have to be out of order and the protagonist has to ask their own what is going on here.
Cases like 'she looks right through the door's peephole and sees her' are way too predictable.
The end was also quite ok. People are saying that the antagonist should not speak with her. Well, usually the horror figures don't talk much and are simply creepy. However, this is really up to you. Here, it wasn't actually a bad idea since we got to understand more about the background story.
The very end of it with the door was also OK and quite conventional, although it was a little bit confusing. But we can overlook this part. I am fine with the end.
Besides all of the criticism, the apartment had a dark beautiful atmosphere. The protagonist acted very well. It had a background story. Paranormal activities were going on. Even the creepy girl as a horror figure was well chosen. That she appeared and then suddenly disappeared and her voice was also quite good. Creepy women and girls are always a great idea for horror movies.
Usually, if someone saw such a figure, one wouldn't open up the door though. But those are the controversial parts and people have a different opinion on them. People are different and act differently.
Nonetheless, it was worth watching it, even if it could be better by working on those parts I mentioned. There is still enough space for speculations and interpretations which is definitely not bad.
After all, it was three years ago. So, at least one can make an exception of this and see it as quite entertaining.
Stop judging, go make yours
Amazing analysis
The first thing I thought when watching this was that it has really nice camera work. The script wasn’t very well put together but it did amuse me. All in all a good attempt, keep at it!
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