This is a good example of how you can tell an audience what's going to happen, but use that to build tension. I liked the motif of the spider web :"Step into my parlour, said the spider to the fly...". :)
As others have already commented: the "monsters" feeling out of its apartment immediately after entering it was a tip off; the wigs and especially the dentures in the glass told me that the tables have turned. What a compliment to "30 Days of Night" type of story, well, sort of. Still, outstanding! Great job all of the way around!
Very masterfully done. Excellent. Great build up of suspense, fantastic use of the darkness and light flashes to reveal the monster just enough to get a sense of how horrific it is. Sharing to my page for Halloween spooks.
SPOILERS Excellent photography in the house. Really added to the shocking ending. I loved the expressions of the intruder, his surprise and disorientation. This actually added a little comedy to the film. I thought that the dainty music was an excellent choice. Glad not to see another girl victimized. No wonder they don't like horror movies.
Mr. Pervo should have really thought this through before breaking in!! I loved this short! It is going on my best of 100 in 5th place I think!! Very well done!
As soon as she flipped the main breaker, I was on the edge of my seat thinking, "Kill him, kill him, make him suffer!" Not scary really, more exciting and refreshing from all the over done cliches.
@@matsyever2979 Dude earlier than that... 1:14 if that guy's girl wasn't with him he would've gotten taken home for an easy 2 for 1 for the body count.
I love films like this; which force the viewer to ask themselves, "Which one is REALLY the monster?". One slight change in an environment, can easily turn the "Predator" into the Prey.
Awesome! Even though t's an old premise using a vampire, it was done so well it seemed original. The way she/it attacked in a blur at the end was incredibly scary and so, so well done. BRAVO!
TO ROBIN WHITTEN and the Crew, especially the DP : The content, and compostion are absolutely fabulous. Sound FX and sound editing are perfect. Acting, A++++. Premise : A ++++. Unusual scenario. Entertainment factor : 9/10. I certainly hope to see more output from you people. Dr. H. E. Sawyer, Jr., Writer. Filmmaker. Grove, OK
Very original and different than conventional horrors, usually always is intruder the one who terrorize but this time he was a victim! Really unexpected and original!
Amazing!!!! At first it had us guessing which is the monster until she switched the power off. I thought that the masked guy was a woman until I saw the beard but I think the mask looked feminine, was that deliberate?
Love films where creeps get theirs. I knew something was up with her when she saw the guy looking at her legs, then gave him the slow leg cross and smile, reeked of predator. This is a great short, "Billy" played a good role, loved the bug eyed look of fear on his face. Just desserts horror movies are my fav.
Really creepy and intense. Interesting plot, and the acting was good. The monster that appeared at the end was pretty scary. Great twist. Keep up the great work.
Really excellent. I really like it when tables are turned on intruders & creeps. Great reworking of what could have been a cliché - but wasn't. Good soundtrack too.
This was like watching a full featured, big budget film.. I mean... Very intense...i was hooked throughout... Nice subway scene.. it was the set up for a lot of twists.
The smirk she gave when she came into her home and realized someone was there was unnerving. Loved this!
Her: * turns off all lights *
Him: *shit, this is not according to my plan*
This is one of the first short horrors I fell in love with years ago and I always come back to see it.
Thank-you! That really means a lot to hear you say that.
Hi, im going to watch this now .
Just because a twist is predictable doesnt mean its not good, this was well executed.
Don't you just love when dinners delivered?
Sandra Ellis 😌
The oke on the train should thank his girlfriend that she arrived on time.
are you a relative of Sharon Gerhardt??? or Earnest Gerhardt?
I love it when the hunter becomes the hunted, it's always good
This is a good example of how you can tell an audience what's going to happen, but use that to build tension. I liked the motif of the spider web :"Step into my parlour, said the spider to the fly...". :)
Literally what Hitchcock meant when he used the word "suspense".
Finally, a short that actually showed the monster! Awesome!
There is a lot of short Filme showing the monster
Brilliant! Neat tables turned story with atmospheric camera work, solid acting and great effects! So glad I watched this!
As others have already commented: the "monsters" feeling out of its apartment immediately after entering it was a tip off; the wigs and especially the dentures in the glass told me that the tables have turned. What a compliment to "30 Days of Night" type of story, well, sort of. Still, outstanding! Great job all of the way around!
Ohhh, this was delightful. Been waiting to see something with this kind of twist show up. Very well done.
Very masterfully done. Excellent. Great build up of suspense, fantastic use of the darkness and light flashes to reveal the monster just enough to get a sense of how horrific it is. Sharing to my page for Halloween spooks.
Brilliant, thanks Joshua!
That was terrific! Loved the originality!
Great atmosphere, GREAT plot twist!
Thanks bunches for sharing!
This was DOPE! The CAT and Mouse game in reverse!
Love the plot twist, very impressive 🔥
SPOILERS Excellent photography in the house. Really added to the shocking ending. I loved the expressions of the intruder, his surprise and disorientation. This actually added a little comedy to the film. I thought that the dainty music was an excellent choice. Glad not to see another girl victimized. No wonder they don't like horror movies.
Just desserts! Love it when the creeps get theirs.
Lol he messed with the wrong chick.
Now that's what I call ''Home Security'' ! ; )
clever, good acting, brilliant that it was him been played, loved it. Also found myself wanting to see more stories on her!
The intruder got what he deserved.He was so excited about harming the female he thought inhabited the home. I appreciated this twist.
Wow!! Just wow. Best short I've seen in a while. Great atmosphere, nice photis and 👍🏾 acting. 👌🏿🤩
Mr. Pervo should have really thought this through before breaking in!! I loved this short! It is going on my best of 100 in 5th place I think!! Very well done!
As soon as she flipped the main breaker, I was on the edge of my seat thinking, "Kill him, kill him, make him suffer!" Not scary really, more exciting and refreshing from all the over done cliches.
Oh yeah. Sweet video. Awesome monster makeup.
Plus, I love it when the wolf becomes the sheep.
Just Glorious! Woohoo!
Amazing! I rate this SHF 4.5 out of 5! Such an unexpected twist! Amazing job!
Predator becoming prey. Excellent!
nice! I knew she was the bad guy as soon as she turned off the lights.
Even earlier... When at 4.30 she shows that subtle wicked smile
@@matsyever2979 Dude earlier than that... 1:14 if that guy's girl wasn't with him he would've gotten taken home for an easy 2 for 1 for the body count.
They were both 'the bad guy.'
One of the better shorts I've seen....well done!
I love films like this; which force the viewer to ask themselves, "Which one is REALLY the monster?". One slight change in an environment, can easily turn the "Predator" into the Prey.
Raymond Weston really glad you liked it and thanks for commenting!
Awesome! Even though t's an old premise using a vampire, it was done so well it seemed original. The way she/it attacked in a blur at the end was incredibly scary and so, so well done. BRAVO!
I love it when the predator becomes the prey. Loved it.
The hunter became the hunted. Fantastic! Another good one. Am I the only one binge watching Screamfest and it led here? LOL!
This was great! One of the best short films I've seen on youtube. Great Plot twist!
Thanks very much Edward, glad you enjoyed it.
Never seen a better loss of power!!! 5mins in and its ON! Great film. Thanks!
One of the best horrors I have seen in a while. Well done to you and your team!
MotionBoatFilms Thanks very much man! Really happy you liked it.
Holy shyt!!! Now THAT was scary and unique. Loved it! 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽
TO ROBIN WHITTEN and the Crew, especially the DP : The content, and compostion are absolutely fabulous. Sound FX and sound editing are perfect. Acting, A++++. Premise : A ++++. Unusual scenario. Entertainment factor : 9/10. I certainly hope to see more output from you people.
Dr. H. E. Sawyer, Jr., Writer. Filmmaker.
Grove, OK
Finally the bad guy gets what he deserves! 👍
Very original and different than conventional horrors, usually always is intruder the one who terrorize but this time he was a victim! Really unexpected and original!
Oh I loved this! Love how she got em first! Awesome job guys!!
Big thumbs up. I saw the twist coming but I still loved it. Definitely worth a watch.
Perves be hors d'oeuvres ;-)
Well, That was intense!!! Loved it! Well done!🤗🤗
I love how when she flicked the lights, it made for a switch in perspective as well; you went from fearing for her to fearing her.
SUCH AN AMAZING PLOT TWIST!!!😱😱😱
Yes! The irony was priceless.
Amazing!!!! At first it had us guessing which is the monster until she switched the power off. I thought that the masked guy was a woman until I saw the beard but I think the mask looked feminine, was that deliberate?
I'm hiding in the comments again!... Anyone who wants to join me can. I'll bring chips & dip... 😋
Rachael Ward I've got brownies!
I'll bring drinks!!
I'll bring the weed..
I'll bring the beer
I’ll get lollipops and chips
An excellent horror short! Good use of suspense/shock.
This is my house if an intruder ever dares....
Wonderful in every way! I LOVE the twist! Truly unexpected and edge-of-my-seat scary!
Great!! LOVE the twist. Excellent.
This is GOOD! Great job telling a horror story. 👍👍👍
Nicely done ! Love the plot twists !
Wow! Such an excelent film should have more views! Congrats! ^^
Thank-you! Please share it with anyone who might like it.
I loved this! I always love short horror movies!
one of the best ones I've seen😱😱👍👍👍
That's a great production!
Love films where creeps get theirs. I knew something was up with her when she saw the guy looking at her legs, then gave him the slow leg cross and smile, reeked of predator. This is a great short, "Billy" played a good role, loved the bug eyed look of fear on his face. Just desserts horror movies are my fav.
Wow! Extremely well done. Great film
Quite fond of this film. It is done really well.
Simply Brilliant!
Love the twist. Well done!
Now that's a great short horror movie.
Really creepy and intense. Interesting plot, and the acting was good. The monster that appeared at the end was pretty scary. Great twist. Keep up the great work.
Thanks Mislav, glad you enjoyed it!
That mask made me think of "Les Yieux Sans Visage". I've always enjoyed movies featuring female monsters. Thanks for this.
Dude, this is amazing. Really creepy and well shot! Loved every second of it. :D
Thanks man!
Awesome. Thank you! O_o
The twist is great =) Thank you!
Well crafted. Highly original!
Terrific ... great twist!
The moment you realize you broke into the wrong house!!! When the lights go out.....
I really enjoyed this short Film... 👍👍
Bravo! More! More! More!
He wanted to eat her at dinner, but she ate him at lunch ... LOL
..and,oh, I forgot to say: Excellent! Bravissimo!!!
Excellent twist!
Well that's what makes for a good story!
Excellent!!!!
Loved it!
Awesome! Loved it thank you :D
Thank-you!
That was interesting. Cool.
wow brilliant I loved it
Really excellent. I really like it when tables are turned on intruders & creeps. Great reworking of what could have been a cliché - but wasn't. Good soundtrack too.
AWAAA..MAN , now that’s different!🎃🎃
Awesome as hell !!!!!!!!
I wish it was longer
*Fangtastic!* 😈
Creepy as hell! Subbed!
Thanks, glad you liked it.
Bravoooo!!!! buenísimo cortometraje. Gracias.
He's the victim in the end scary love it thanks for great story😀
I LIKE IT! Nice!
This was like watching a full featured, big budget film.. I mean... Very intense...i was hooked throughout... Nice subway scene.. it was the set up for a lot of twists.
Another good one. Where have you folks been?
Great job !!
This is horror movie
Excellent
Brilliant!
Yessss, well done!