Pretty sure they still would be cooked either way. The MD body is just tougher than the worker body and also J can just regenerate even if they landed the 1st blow.
Im Happy i Wait for V vs J fight After Ep7 i make the special Not Official Pictures how This fight looks like- And im Happy to see this fight! And I never never never NEED N vs J , MORE need J vs V but Little Help from Lizzy , Thad and Khan… but Only V vs J is cool!!! And THE V KICK IS IN MY FAN ARTS!!! I ALWYAS NEED TO SEE V USE SUPER V-V-V KICK!
@@megabaox1164 well sure it would be a tough fight, but it was obvious the gun would have been a crutch in that fight and that a 3 V 1 would have alleviated the total one sidedness of the fight. Besides, who says the three would of had to fight fair? they already rammed into J using the bus lol.
One thing to add though, in the "Spaceship Pilot! :D" scene, N actually uses the keys J drops in ep 7 and takes J's ship, you can see that J was holding a letter made by N that said "IOU a spaceship :(" so it might be cool if J either helps N or stays neutral, she shows N where her spaceship us, and thats how he saves Uzi
N and V could force J to give them the key BEFORE she is left to stay neutral. -And J could still report to cyn that she has no choice, 1) Cyn could forgive her and let her fight for her in the battle OR 2) Cyn kills J on the spot (if you want to go down a darker path)
I can just imagine N snapping at J as he has flashbacks of all the bullying she did to him as he attacks her. Him thinking about how he feels like he's been manipulated by those around him and the one person who treated him otherwise was believed to be gone while he pummels J, while outright expressing how badly he's wanted to do this to her. J would beg him to end her before saying it won't change anything, snaps N back to reality as he asks what she's talking about. Her explanation both frustrates and makes N understand more about what's happening. This is something I would love to see animated.
14:50 wow thank you for saying this. For being an eldritch being, Cyn/the Solver is pretty vain, exactly like other forces. Humanity tried. But failed. Nori and Yeva tried somewhat. But can only do so much. This only fueled this need for the silver and how it acts. Uzi’s existence provided a whole 'oh shit' moment for solver/cyn to get her hands dirty.
@@LiminaLuxNO PROBLEM outside of Liam and glitch being hella pressed for time…yeah Cyn hasn’t had to deal with resistance, especially from her own murder pets. She’s a (usually) calm and calculating threat. But when stuff like the patch and Uzi were piling up? She had to get in there. ALSO NO PROBLEM. You also have a really nice voice.
Ooooo I LOVE your take on a rewrite of the finale! J definitely had sooo much more potential, and it’s sad she kinda just fell in a ditch and was never seen again. Seeing N snapping and fighting J would have been awesome. He IS a murder drone after all, and I was disappointed that we didn’t get to see more of his murderous side. Seeing him unleash raw emotion after thinking he lost everything would add another layer to his character. You can still keep that “innocent” aspect of N intact, but even the happiest characters need to hit their breaking point. The horror/comedy blend was awesome, but I do wish we had more long-lasting tense moments that weren’t transitioned immediately into more comedy relief. I’d say it was relatively balanced for only 8 episodes, yet the horror side of my brain is itching for more. Great video btw, this is one of the most entertaining ones I’ve watched in quite a while lol. Beautiful art and editing, you’ve got yourself a new sub! :3
I need my boi N to go FERAL, it is criminal that we only saw his murderous side in the pilot TvT For 8 episodes yeah, they did a pretty good job with the horror/comedy blend. I'll admit looking back most of my frustrations were just with ep 5 and the finale but oh well :,D Thanks so much!! Glad you enjoyed it, am very flattered >:3
I agree with all of it. And I think when N talks to J he would say something like: "Let`s avenge Tessa together". After it J just leaves and comes back with the Tessa`s sword in critical moment(when V and N regenerating and Uzi`s core is about to be destroyed by Cyn, for example) in final fight. Then J and Cyn do 1v1 while the N, V, Uzi are recovering. And then at some point in the fight Cyn strikes back and destroys J. nice drawings, btw
J: "It tricked you! And if I promised you anything... It tricked me too." that line needed to be elaborated on cause that line could have SO many deep implications. Yet, it was said and then brushed off!? Nah man that's BS.
14:50 Definitely agreed. Cyn/Solver killing them all instantly would had feel so damn out of character, as we saw her always playing with all of her oponents. especially in the Episode 7, we saw the Solver play with both Nori & N; Solver slowly pushing N's blade on Uzi's neck and taunting Nori with eating her. Hell, Even when she started to posses Uzi; she could had just ripped N's core while he was shocked and off guard but instead decided to just stab him and impale him into a pillar and just yap about him losing his purpose and saying how his backups will forgive her. Actually, I definitely would say that Cyn insperation was definitely IT, I'll explain, Both Cyn & IT plays with their victims utilising Psychological warfare tactics to have absolute control over their prey (Cyn with the puppy image and using Tessa's skin as a suit. IT using Fear and traumas) and you know that both are basically INVINCIBLE (wink wink) creatures compared to our protagonist and the only way to beat them was to exploit their weakness and use teamwork. And their end was pretty similar to.
Bro I been needing a video like this😭😭😭 Like the N trauma thing, I think we also needed to see how he handled being alone without Uzi aswell. Or about his mind overflowing with thoughts of Uzi's sacrifice, V's sacrifice and Tessa not even being Tessa. I would say more but i am VERY lazy to type right now.
Oh my gosh yes! I was thinking the same thing too. It just would made more sense if it was N fighting J instead of V. Sure V could step in at some point to allow N to go deal with Cyn at some point but I feel it should’ve been N to fight J first. Considering he was almost killed by here in episode 1 and was also outright bullied and beaten multiple times by her. It would of been so satisfying for them to come a full circle with N finally growing the backbone to fight back again J, letting out his emotions during the fight about everything she’s done including betraying everyone by working with Cyn.
I thought about the draw joke like half a second before it came up lmao. I was lucky since I got into MD like a month after ep8 came out and my friend recommended I watch the playlist with intermission in it which made the story so much better and smoother for me. Nice art btw 10/10 goober silly energy.
Perfect idea!! But i personally think there shouldve been an extra episode/short where N realizes his trauma and needs help to cope but doesnt wanna bother anyone so he tries to isolate himself but ends up having a breakdown and ultimately ends up learning how to cope with everything with the help of people around him.
Sometimes i wanted uzi to die and N to fight Cyn and J in a beserk never ending state until both of them are down, but, it never happened, N has so much potential, but he really never got to use it due to him not being the absolute main character..
Yeah for N losing V, Uzi and realising Tessa has been long dead should have been his breaking point. Even early sneak peeks for ep 7 and 8 hinted at a mental breakdown. Also how did he know Uzi was in space instead of being likely consumed by the core
18:41 I'm trying to rewrite the story to make a Murder Drones turn-based RPG, covering a short prologue to when the Disassembly Drones arrive and throughout the whole series and I agree so much. The way everyone handles death like a one-off gag is so frustrating when you want higher emotional stakes; Uzi turned into a vampire thing that killed her own classmates, why should I care if V killed two of them as a funny gag without consequences? Uzi didn't seem to care he killed people of his kind as well. I know that's a Murder Drones brand but I realized it's not easy to put your own spin on a solidified property and not show your own biases. Still, fantastic rewrite, thank you for ranting about your thoughts on the MD finale and show in general, and I wish you luck in your future projects.
Another thing I'd like to mention is the total waste of the railgun in the final episode. It was used literally once in the final battle and it basically MISSED. Frankly, literally nothing would have changed if it wasn't there. The Cyn attacking J by accident thing still would have worked in the fog. Uzi could have thrown the pickaxe at J and solver call it back instead of throwing the gun, etc. It was shown J having robot PTSD over that gun every time she saw it but that went NO WHERE. hell, it would have been nice for her to hesitate because of her fear of the gun at least! but no, it was basically *"just there"* in the final battle.
I love this, It was such a amazing and magical experience watching this video. I love watching murder drones theories, but this is hands down the best murder drones yapping video I've ever seen. Your art is amazing and I hope you make much more beautiful videos ❤
As someone who currently has story boards FOR A J REDEMPTION ARC WHERE SHE IS LEFT INDECISIVE AND ESCAPES I really liked how you went about rewriting the pilot and I think this could really help me figure out some stuff with my storyboards! :]
14:14 - 14:45 14:50 - 16:10 16:15 - 16:55 17:00 - 17:20 17:24 - 17:46 By brother in christ you all took all the words out of my mouth. These five horrible MD takes have Been infesting my mind for days, I am now finally free.
one thing i wish would have happened is tessa's fate being acknowledged more. like your friend who saved you from dying and gave you a home just got made into a skinsuit and you don't even have much of a reaction?? like that's just so weird to me. i wish that J's character had more depth too - i think that's something your rewrite did really well with the "do it, you know there's no escape even in death" part. like it was a very good episode but as a FINALE there was so much more that could have been expanded upon to make it more satisfying.
My favorite part of this is actually your final comments near the end about overall opinions on this as an Indie show and the current industry as well as your passions
For the n vs j fight it would be cool to see J get the option to redeem herself from N but have her actions/looks seem indecisive. Before she makes a decision Thad brings out a railgun shot (since he was too far away to notice what they were talking about) and J gets damaged enough for Cyn to take over OR Cyn just takes over midway and says with J's body "You just keep surprising me" or something along those lines since it ties back to ep 7 in the mineshaft scene where cyn tells N the reason why she keeps their personalities. With the indecisive decision, it leaves more thought to the viewer. Then you can have J(cyn) fight N, disregarding J's body. Can be something like self mutilation for shiz and giggles, damaging herself to land a hit, or even a kamikaze near N to end the fight, it'll just add more tragedy to her character I think. The idea of showing V is alive through the hallway scene is great. W viewpoints also recommend: Rustage cyn rap called "assimilate"
Gosh i love this video, you did a great job at rewriting the ep, now i wish the episode had been like this. You are really good at writing stuff fr! Also, the art you drew was AMAZING Cant believe this video hasn't gotten more attention
Help i enjoyed this whole thing so much, i was literally laughing 😭 i relate to you so much tbh, in many ways, from the opinion on the last episode, to the last part about creativity stuff... whatever. Also..... Bite me! >:,3
I've always liked J's character cause of how differently she acted compared to the other. I really wish we got way more screen time of J cause she gets this position of being a villain but she's just undeveloped as a character it just doesn't work. I would have also liked to know more about her and Tessa's relationship back in the manor and her relationship with Cyn after the whole skinning Tessa thing. Also would have maybe loved to know more about her and the team when they first got to Copper-9. Its sad that she always felt like a throw away character despite having potential! (I'm making a whole a whole J Redemption Arc story board plus a whole rewrite of the story where J actually is part and makes sense in the series.)
I want j to keep her personality bc that’s one of the reasons why she’s my fav character, and that she’s still on the evil side or betrays someone idk, smth like that I would love to see, just more screen time for j 😭
I would actually love it if N fought J. It would create a a trend were N has to fight all his "Friends " at least once, and J is the only one he didn't fight. However, as it stand, there are 3 problems that prevent J from listening to anything that N has to say. 1. J hates N. (she also doesn't care about V either) 2. N still doesn't remembers a lot about his past out side what we see from his memory flashbacks. (J won't take him seriously because N doesn't know the full extent of Cyn's power while J does) 3. J needs motivation that overcomes her motivation to side with Cyn. (J doesn't want to Die or suffer more then necessary.) If you want J to take N seriously, He needs to know enough about his past to fully understand what Cyn is capable of, or else he will just be seen as someone who's not brave, but ignorant of how powerful Cyn is. For the motivation, it would probably have to be getting revenge against Cyn for killing Tessa. Tessa seems to be the only one that J actually cared about, and N bring up Uzi abilities are powerful enough to beat Cyn should be enough to convince her to at least not get in their way. The solution to the three problems requires N to get back enough of his memories back. If that part isn't added to the rewrite then only J can achieve the goal of convincing J to do anything. J, like V, still has all her memories.
More J development/screen time, longer bite me sound track, Tessa comeback somehow, longer forever song, we also needed more Uzi. Is this or is this not the best add ons (great drawing by the way)
I've been thinking of a brief rewrite of sorts myself, and one thing I feel like they really should have done was give N and V a moment to themselves to just.. talk. Outside of a brief scene in episode 4 the two haven't, from what we've seen, gotten a single chance by themselves to just talk to each other - especially when you consider they've gotten their full memories back in episode 5, given the history they had now no longer blocked, you'd think that would've been something they would have brought up to each other at some point. Especially after V's sacrifice and then her hallway scene in the finale, there's still so much going on between them that they themselves haven't even had a chance to talk about yet. Would've liked one, at least one scene of them being able to talk to each other without Uzi or anyone else there, just to get where exactly they stand now given they (N in particular) now have their memories back, and with V's entire "confession" in the hallway where she apologizes and admits she only did and hid everything from him to avoid him getting hurt. I feel like there really should have been a scene where the two just bring this up, but we never got it.
For real! N and V had so much potential and have a great dynamic. I didn't bring it up much in this video since they would honestly need their own episode, and squeezing a scene of them into the finale would've felt rushed/wouldn't give enough justice to that imo
my version of the rewriting: V gets saved by a solver drone (patched) who thought v was a worker drone and she/he fights v but realizes she isn't going to bring harm so he/she works with v to try to get to the surface... it cuts to doll's core inside of Cyn's body with Cyn getting hurt in the inside because of doll hurting Cyn While Cyn tries to find N who's hiding... Khan is arguing with J before Lizzy saved J's life by telling Khan that they need to save v and J says "you know V" and then it cuts back to N hiding and he peeks and sees Cyn going back down the hole and he goes up the hole to the surface and sees V and the solver drone and N hugs v tightly and v hugs him back and it cuts to Uzi and nori in space having a daughter and mother moment and Uzi and nori are suddenly knocked down into the atmosphere of copper 9 by Cyn's tentacles and it cuts back to N, V, and solver drone (which you can call him/her whatever you want maybe like silver as it's the word solver but the o is replaced with an i) anyways solver drone, V, and N all go up to the surface and Khan, Lizzy, Thad, and J are now a team and they see V, and N, also suddenly Nori land onto Khan's head and Khan looks confused and says something like "who are you" and he hears nori's voice and says "Nori?" and Nori and Khan have an emotional moment and were about to hug before Cyn goes to the surface and the planet starts splitting apart and J sees Cyn but sees her as both Cyn and Tessa before Uzi or N says "OH NO THAT'S CYN" and J says "What? That's clearly Tessa" and N starts explaining to J that that's Cyn wearing Tessa's corpse and J has a mental breakdown and then there's an epic fight and it's Uzi, N, V, Nori, and J all fighting Cyn and Cyn is starting to get hurt before suddenly there's a hole in her stomach and she sees doll's core and now it's doll, Uzi, N, V, J, and Nori all fighting (btw solver drone who you could call silver was scared by v so that's why he isn't included in the fight) and Cyn teleports to Uzi and was about to kill her but N sacrifices himself and gets his core ripped out and it was going to be eaten by Cyn but J kicks Cyn's ass and damages Cyn a lot and saved N and N's core goes back to his body and then doll leaves the fight and she fixes the patch that the once possessed Uzi destroyed in episode 7 and doll comes back and throws the patch at Cyn's visor and Cyn goes back to normal and fixes the planet and J because she was so mad kills Cyn and then we get the credits scene and in the post credit scene we see many new characters which some of them are the antagonists of season 2 (if you want me to write that) anyways the characters are serial designation a, serial designation b, serial designation c, serial designation d, Serial designation e, serial designation f, serial designation g, serial designation h, serial designation i, serial designation k, serial designation l, serial designation m, serial designation o, serial designation p, serial designation Q, serial designation r, serial designation s, serial designation t, serial designation u, serial designation w, serial designation x, serial designation y, and serial designation z all regenerating and coming back from the dead which they were the dead murder drones in episode 6 cabin fever labs
Well it's about the season 2 antagonists, but that's because the show is called "murder drones" not "a worker drone kills a murder drone and teams up with a murder drone which tried to kill her then she had a crush on him and went to prom to try to save everyone there and then go camping with her classmates to kill almost all of them then learn the murder drones's past and become their administrator and go to cabin fever labs with Tessa and see the dead murder drone's clone and then they get caught by a cannibal and escape and went to the caves and a Russian worker drone dies and Tessa is revealed to be the main antagonist and then the main protagonist sacrifices herself and wakes up in space seeing a destroyed copper 9 blah blah blah you know the rest" and so season 1 should've been about killing the murder drones and then season 2 is about absolute solver and Cyn
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Y'know? It could've happen a scene where N sacrifices himself. THIS is what I most wanted. Think well! Dude's the thing tht Cyn/Solver is most obsessed besides Uzi. And honestly from my perspective. N is NOT the cutie pookie that everyone thinks of him. He's a soldier. He stands tall for the ones he holds dear.
If I had to be honest murder drones not getting a second season is a good thing because Glitch wants to help Indie creators make their own indie show but if murder drones does continue I think it would be cool to add 7 more episodes with episode 9 being the first one and the main antagonist doesn't get killed just like Cyn (technically she's alive Idk) but gets a redemption arc instead
Honestly, the thing that made me think that this finale wasn’t that good was how J ended, she “died” but I guess it should’ve been different. I’m trying to do the same thing as you did, but only focusing on what happened with J, like, the whole battle would’ve happened, and after some days/months they decided to search for J (I wrote it as an AU for Oilrose but let’s make it more real, unfortunately) and they find her totally damaged and broken, but still alive, and they “rescue” her and try to know why J sided with the Absolute Solver. Anyways, since I don’t want to write a whole book and it’s still in development, let’s just say that they rescue J and they get a more developed end (in my opinion)
Cyn's death was anti-climactic asf. Uzi really just predicted Cyn coming from behind and automatically had her hand in her heart. Wouldn't it be the other way around? Like Uzi's arm gone? Meh you gotta kill an op character somehow.
It's not really that she predicted per say. She already got used to how Cyn fights and knows she teleports/uses illusions so she noticed that and probably thought "ok, definitely not in front of me, she's probably behind me" it was pretty smart of her to turn and just plunge into the air with her hand like that so I'm personally satisfied Plus Uzi and Cyn both looked genuinely surprised when it worked so it was pretty cool imo
The evening after the finale premiere, I was talking with some friends, and one of them said "The best written Murder Drones episode is Intermission" 💀💀💀
I may not agree with everything, but I’ve really enjoyed watching this and honestly wish this got more attention! Spectacular job :D Also the art omg it’s everything I want my drawings to be 😭 Keep it up!! And take a gander at your subscriber count if you want ;)
The only problem is, Have N get a proper N vs J fight, “BuT ThAt wOulD bE oUT oF cHaRaCtER.” i know but he has the most trauma out of the both of them and V and J are leaving him in the dark and not expressing his trauma. Keep rewriting this it would make so much sense
This is random but cabin fever shows how much stronger N is than V, he just holds back because N is a great guy, he literally easily threw Uzi through The clouds on the planet to
Hello! I have an offer for you if you're interested: Me and the TH-camr, Yagsterr, have been working on a Murder Drones project where we re-write Episode 5! So far we have pretty much almost all of the Voice Actors we need but the main problem we're facing is animators! Now, the characters don't have to be moving all the time, mainly the frame changing every 3-6 seconds (depends on the scene) and I was hoping you would be willing to animate some of it! Let me know if you're down, thanks!
@@LiminaLux Cool! The best way to get in contact would probably be through Discord but if you don't have or don't plan on making a Discord account we can figure out another way.
10:01 if I could make one it would be J still leaves but considers Ns words and then at least try to help but backs down because she doesn’t know what to do
8:11 I feel like it would be reasonable for her to join him since even though she said it’s better on the winning team you could clearly tell she didn’t want to be alone so she might’ve actually fought with N
I think J would refuse the offer at first but then come around to help fight cyn (idk maybe when there all down she comes behind cyn and like knocks her down or smth) I think that this is more realistic than like you said her coming around and IMMEDIATELY doing a 180 to join N, Uzi & V
I also would like answered what happened to Uzi's mom, we know she's alive, but who attacked her, I think I know the answer (no its not N. Not exactly at least, it's Cyn possessing N, a lot has pointed me in that direction) I wish i could know if I'm actually right or not, but that doesn't matter anymore, me and a friend is making a second season where we hope to not just tie up lose ends address things nobody thought of but also make a new story new villain, but same characters its on TikTok We've handled things like, the Cyn or solver debate (and gave Cyn a proper ending, freeing her from the solver, as the Cyn we see isn't Cyn, it's the solver, but though Cyn is dead, she's finally at peace in a way, and so is N, getting to hug her after years and years, he hugs his real sister) we also tackled what it was like for Uzi in ep 4, nobody really thinks about it, but what was it truly like? Like was it knocked out wake up it's done, was she trapped in her mind unable to do anything but watch, or was she was completely there just having zero control over her body whatsoever (we used the third) and we did it in a instresting way, putting N in Uzi's mind to go through her memories to stop Cyn from tampering with her, as it's trying to turn Uzi into exactly what it did to the real Cyn. There's other things that was shown and stuff but that's just the ones i wanted to point out, N hasn't snapped but we are thinking on how to get him to his absolute lowest (we've already killed Khan in front of Uzi & N, with N failing to save him, we are just gonna add shit to stress and upset N) but we do have a lot planned, if you have Tiktok go check it out. Its on my friend's channel @logan.samuel5 worth to check out, I should probably stop rambling now just this reminded me of the duo project
sounds cool!! For who attacked Uzi's mom I personally don't think it matters. I highly doubt it's N tho bec when he meets Nori she says "you look familiar, you got wings?" I interpret this as Nori realizing "oh hey ur a murder drone", not "oh hey ur the one who killed me". Plus since we saw that she drew V in the past, I think N just reminded Nori of V. Wouldn't be surprised if V killed Nori tbh lol Have fun with the project! I'll be sure to check it out at some point >:D
Do you want me to rewrite murder drones season 2. Btw it'll take a darker turn and N will be the main protagonist and it continues off of the original episode 8 and not my rewriting kinda
@LiminaLux You know what, I was just thinking to myself about near the end of this video of yours, as I'm writing the first script for a show based on MD and as I'm procrastinating doing school, what would the show that you want or wanted to make look like?
I really like your writing, the finale should've been done better. I was kinda to harsh on J but writing this, giving her redeemed make me like feel bad for her. The relationship with uzi and nori was rushed but with slowler pase, it would work pretty good. I know someone might disagree with me but I didn't like N and uzi being canon couple. It should've been with V rather than Uzi. Another issue is N didn't even apologize to V during the hallway scene. N should've have apologies to her for protecting him, come on! It would've be better to have him hugging V for once. Give me this scene and it will be good but no! I know there's a lot of issues and it's not perfect, but it still great episode. Remember these are my terms of writing so don't hate me please. Thank you❤
You know what should've happened? They should've not have tried to juggle 2 shows at once so we could get at least 1 more episode to pace things out a little better
It was really hard to understand the series for me, there is a lot of important info that it's hard for me to see for some reason. I don't get why, for some people, it's implicit. For example, what you said about J and her backstory, I wasn't sure how to feel about J because I didn't get the character really well. Did she really wanted to keep V and N alive? I have never seen an actual interaction or connection between them. In fact, she treated them awful, the only person she seemed to care about was Tessa and Cyn killed her. Why does she follow her orders?. Or V development, i wasn't able to understand what was the deal with her until episode 8. I am not saying those are plot holes. I just can't see those details. If i had to chose a reason, i would say it is because the hints the series gives us are a little too small to understand, and some dialogue it seems confusing.
Trust me I get you on that. I had to watch this show 3 times and watch people pick apart certain episodes/characters to really get everything out of the show. I get that J looks like she doesn't care about N and V, but she definitely cares about V to some extent, cause if she didn't there was no point in her offering V to join her and Cyn you know? I already explained why she continued to follow orders, and other people have talked a lot about V so I'd highly recommend checking those out cause she's a pretty cool character The show def needed more episodes and time but I'd recommend giving it a rewatch or see some other people talk about it :3
WIth the hot takes, it's also important to remember that the drones are AI. They aren't bound by the limits of learning speeds like humans are, I wouldn't be surprised if that's how Uzi learned to use and control the solver so quickly; She just calculates and learns extraordinarily quickly (same with how she fights, she learned just by watching anime , lmao). It's, in my opinion, a clever loophole with the characters that allowed the writers to skirt around some time jumps and provide a decently valid excuse for the sudden changes.
here's my thoughts and what i should say: N should be the one who should (Fake)sacrificed himself in the episode 6 Dead End, instead of V, and came back to rescue V and Uzi, just to fight against J all by himself how mad he is after seeing & Realize J is Team up with Cyn. (Why can't just Glitch production make N snapped about this already? It would make the shows much better instead of being agony and good person). Now lets not forget Doll, Doll shouldn't have been dead in the first place, Doll should have been alive by escaping from Cyn, and she ends up meet Nori knowing she been alive the whole times and meet her and help Nori and V to stop Cyn controlling Uzi. It would be cool if she join the fight together with Uzi And V, N, against Cyn and J.
Also couldn’t agree more when it comes to the nature of N and Uzi’s arc. They’re a bit basic but I still like them. Ever since meta runner season 3 glitch has limited themselves to eight episodes unfortunately.
I absolutely love Murder Drones, and like the most powerful characters (not literally powerful, but those with a strong character). the only two characters I disliked were Lizzy (I just dont like characters with her archetype unless they are the MC) and N, and the ONLY reason I dislike N is because he is dumb, not stupid. N is incredibly nice, and fits the theme quite well, and he learns and knows a lot of things that he needs to for specifically what he wants done or needs done... BUT HE CANT LOOK INTO THE FUTURE WHATSO EVER. N lives solely in the present, which leads to him making questionable choices that do help in the end sometimes like Beau or siding with Uzi in the pilot, or even trying to talk back to J when he could have given J a quite good arguement for why he thought they might be wrong WITH THINGS THEY BOTH KNEW. N isnt a bad character in my opinion, I just dislike him (though intermission makes me neutral to him, and I count it. sadly, intermission does nothign to make me like Lizzy). as for the Oil thing and the overheating, I have a theory you might be interested in. the Overheating is not lethal nor related to Cyn, but the Absolute Solver (or the pwoer they use or wahtever). You see, Doll, N, V, and J all drink Oil (N in the pilot at least, V intermittently through the show, and J its mostly implied), but we dont see Cyn drink any and we dont see Cyn drink any (but she does eat Doll... idk if that counts tho). basically, my theory is that using the Solver has a reaction upon the world, and a lesser reaction upon the host, the heating of their body. for N, V and J, that is ONLY healing their body, and thus its never really a concern for them as N basically never heals after he stops injesting Oil and V continues to do so, btoh never suffering negative side effects. Doll definitely drank oil until the Promening ended, and then was either forced to use th Solver less or to feast on uzi's leftovers after 98.7. Uzi is the only Drone (that we know of) who actively resisted drinking oil as long a possible, and only when she lost control did she gain new powers in camp 98.7. That wasnt Uzi being possessed by Cyn or the Absolute Solver (she was during the murders, but I will explain), that was the Absolute Solver "mutating" or "adapting" to preserve the host. Uzi had almost no oil in her system, only the little bit she sucked off her fingers, and she fought the urge to eat one of Dolls kills. The Solver was like "Aight, you are dangerously high in temperature, lets give you even more weapons and tools to get oil" and made her into the biomechanical horror we see. even still, she fought, so it decided "thats enough of that, lets get a quick snack and get a hunting", waiting for Rebecca and Darren while she sucked the stuff in her pack dry. Uzi also doesnt have a problem after that point with the temperature, and Khan mentions that Uzi has "interests in cannibalism and nightcore", which, as much as I like the theory of Khan possessing Darren to watch over Uzi, Lizzy 100% tattled on Uzi and Uzi ate Dolls kills because what else are those bodies going to be doing? Khan also has the greatest influence in the colony, so he could hide the fact shes a cannibal fairly easily, if he even wanted or needed to, but remember that literally no one knows who Uzi is except some members of the WDF who are ALL DEAD NOW. I like your rewrite though. I am a firm beleiver that art shouldnt be "fixed", so I like that you make the distinction between fixing the ending and just making an alternative you felt was better. I am making a fanfiction by switching Cyn and N in the series and what would logically change if the two switched making a deal with the Absolute System. hopefully soon Ill be able to put the series out, but idk. No OCs from me, no breaking of the original story (the only things that change are the things that couldnt or wouldnt happen without the characters who made those, IE N befriending just about everyone), and absolutely nothing that would go against what is established as a limit for a character. episodes 1 and 2 are very similar, though there are important changes because of reasons I wont get into that make Cyn replace V in the story and J replace N for his narrative role, and I discovered I dont hate Lizzy, I just hate Lizzy in the original show because I didnt write her myself, and have loved writing the brat. also, Cyn being there has SIGNIFICANT CHANGES TO THE PLOT FROM THE PROMENING ONWARDS because of a really funny reason: Cyn spites V constantly, including mercy killing V's targets. I can talk somewhat about it, as well as link it (when I start posting both the readable and listenable versions), but I will not spoil anything outside of the Pilot and Heartbeat because of their similarities to the original show, though I will talk about the things that are different without explainations if those explainations are spoilers... so be aware.
10:01 N: I know you were mean to me and tryed to kill me but… you’ve been through so much… please let me help you! J: I don’t need your help! I just… need time…. N: please let me know everything I want to help you! J:…. Tessa she- its my fault…. I couldn’t save her….. in the end I became a tool for the people I love but I got tossed aside…. N: I never knew….. why didn’t you come sooner?…. J: I didn’t want to make you feel scared seeing you all so happy…. I can’t take that away….
I hear you but n gets a lot of screen time and in my opinion I don’t really like j to much but just my opinion you have to remember it’s not a small animation so they have to use shapes to make the characters and they have to take breaks and the voices actors could get sick so they will need breaks so yeah that’s my opinion
I think: Uzi and N should be bestfriend:they love scene are not really what i prefer the most and i want uzi x tchad and N x V. Cyn:she just a host so i feel like she could have been safe if the cruxifix USB not has been destroyed. J:i think she arleady say everythink. Doll:what if she come in ep 4 with the other at antagonist,make a race with V to kill her and foght with uzy,to become a lil bit friend with V and become a protagonist in ep 6 and die in a epic battle vs cyn. Cyn again:the "callback"thing is so useless like in ep 7 she take the entire control of her body and now she can't even make her eye yellow five second. Tchad,lizzy and khan:imagine seing them survive the end time before uzi and N start really have a use to fight cyn.and the teacher can join them cuz why not. Khan and nori:how do glitch ignore to make a scene when we see khan apologie to nori(no hate).that mean deleting the "kinda hot"joke for something more interresing that we all want to see. That weird baby:he sould have join n,uzi and v.WHY DID HE DIE😭😭😭😭 Cyn:maybe a line like"hunt is open" could hit hard. And that it,anyway murder drone is a very good show.(ways better than tadc that become a "familly is the best thing" or "never forget to love eachother"haa serie(still love it anyway just dissonpointed))
Am i the only one who doesnt care for V? Shes not interesting or charismatic all the she has is a "tragic past"(i hade no idea she had a tragic past until i got in the fandom) J on the other hand, has iconic lines, is funny and her relationship with Tessa could be interesting, i dont know i feel that it would be better if V was killed in the first episode and that way they could actually focus on J's redemption
OR…hear me out…we don’t just kill off a character that has potential and maybe think outside the box? Intermission showed us how much potential V has. She can relate to Uzi from the perspective of a newly changed murder drone, she’s more cynical than N but she still has a heart and she knows about Cyn. I feel like the only reason why she’s like this to you is because she didn’t have a lot of time to change and be charismatic . There’s a lot to do with V and saying “maybe she should have just been killed off early on” is very extreme and a bit fucked.
You know what should of happened? A PROPER Khan, Lizzy, and Thad VS J battle. It was so hyped up at the end of ep 7 and it just didn't happen.
just like ep 5
Pretty sure they still would be cooked either way. The MD body is just tougher than the worker body and also J can just regenerate even if they landed the 1st blow.
agreed
Im Happy i Wait for V vs J fight After Ep7 i make the special Not Official Pictures how This fight looks like- And im Happy to see this fight! And I never never never NEED N vs J , MORE need J vs V but Little Help from Lizzy , Thad and Khan… but Only V vs J is cool!!! And THE V KICK IS IN MY FAN ARTS!!! I ALWYAS NEED TO SEE V USE SUPER V-V-V KICK!
@@megabaox1164 well sure it would be a tough fight, but it was obvious the gun would have been a crutch in that fight and that a 3 V 1 would have alleviated the total one sidedness of the fight. Besides, who says the three would of had to fight fair? they already rammed into J using the bus lol.
One thing to add though, in the "Spaceship Pilot! :D" scene, N actually uses the keys J drops in ep 7 and takes J's ship, you can see that J was holding a letter made by N that said "IOU a spaceship :(" so it might be cool if J either helps N or stays neutral, she shows N where her spaceship us, and thats how he saves Uzi
N and V could force J to give them the key BEFORE she is left to stay neutral. -And J could still report to cyn that she has no choice, 1) Cyn could forgive her and let her fight for her in the battle OR 2) Cyn kills J on the spot (if you want to go down a darker path)
Beautiful rewrite. Wonderful work, you really helped elevate the source material!
Thank you!! Ur videos are part of what helped me to make this so I’m really happy u like it man >:D
AGREED THIS IS AMAZINGGG
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I can just imagine N snapping at J as he has flashbacks of all the bullying she did to him as he attacks her. Him thinking about how he feels like he's been manipulated by those around him and the one person who treated him otherwise was believed to be gone while he pummels J, while outright expressing how badly he's wanted to do this to her. J would beg him to end her before saying it won't change anything, snaps N back to reality as he asks what she's talking about. Her explanation both frustrates and makes N understand more about what's happening. This is something I would love to see animated.
He wanted to fight her at episode , one but he never did , maybe he it would be cool to see him actually get his wish in episode 8
14:50 wow thank you for saying this.
For being an eldritch being, Cyn/the Solver is pretty vain, exactly like other forces.
Humanity tried. But failed. Nori and Yeva tried somewhat. But can only do so much. This only fueled this need for the silver and how it acts.
Uzi’s existence provided a whole 'oh shit' moment for solver/cyn to get her hands dirty.
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SEE YOU GET IT thank you for understanding my fav character TvT
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@@LiminaLuxNO PROBLEM outside of Liam and glitch being hella pressed for time…yeah Cyn hasn’t had to deal with resistance, especially from her own murder pets. She’s a (usually) calm and calculating threat. But when stuff like the patch and Uzi were piling up? She had to get in there.
ALSO NO PROBLEM. You also have a really nice voice.
@ aww thanks!! ^w^
Ooooo I LOVE your take on a rewrite of the finale! J definitely had sooo much more potential, and it’s sad she kinda just fell in a ditch and was never seen again. Seeing N snapping and fighting J would have been awesome. He IS a murder drone after all, and I was disappointed that we didn’t get to see more of his murderous side. Seeing him unleash raw emotion after thinking he lost everything would add another layer to his character. You can still keep that “innocent” aspect of N intact, but even the happiest characters need to hit their breaking point.
The horror/comedy blend was awesome, but I do wish we had more long-lasting tense moments that weren’t transitioned immediately into more comedy relief. I’d say it was relatively balanced for only 8 episodes, yet the horror side of my brain is itching for more.
Great video btw, this is one of the most entertaining ones I’ve watched in quite a while lol. Beautiful art and editing, you’ve got yourself a new sub! :3
I need my boi N to go FERAL, it is criminal that we only saw his murderous side in the pilot TvT
For 8 episodes yeah, they did a pretty good job with the horror/comedy blend. I'll admit looking back most of my frustrations were just with ep 5 and the finale but oh well :,D
Thanks so much!! Glad you enjoyed it, am very flattered >:3
J can be seen in the credits repairing the spaceship/landing pod
I agree with all of it. And I think when N talks to J he would say something like: "Let`s avenge Tessa together". After it J just leaves and comes back with the Tessa`s sword in critical moment(when V and N regenerating and Uzi`s core is about to be destroyed by Cyn, for example) in final fight. Then J and Cyn do 1v1 while the N, V, Uzi are recovering. And then at some point in the fight Cyn strikes back and destroys J.
nice drawings, btw
Ooo that's a really cool idea :0 I love it so much
And thanks!! :D
And maybe, in a dose of irony, Cyn kills J by injecting a virus into her like J did with N in the pilot.
@@iluvspongebob1234 Uzi can save her, just like she did with N
YES YES YES. PEOPLE SERIOUSLY NEED TO CONSIDER WHAT THEY'RE SAYING WHEN CRITISIZING HOW FAST UZI CONTROLLED HER SOLVER😭
no need to scream man
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J: "It tricked you! And if I promised you anything... It tricked me too."
that line needed to be elaborated on cause that line could have SO many deep implications. Yet, it was said and then brushed off!? Nah man that's BS.
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" A teenage girl from hot topic that listens to night core " I'm dying
14:50 Definitely agreed.
Cyn/Solver killing them all instantly would had feel so damn out of character, as we saw her always playing with all of her oponents. especially in the Episode 7, we saw the Solver play with both Nori & N; Solver slowly pushing N's blade on Uzi's neck and taunting Nori with eating her. Hell, Even when she started to posses Uzi; she could had just ripped N's core while he was shocked and off guard but instead decided to just stab him and impale him into a pillar and just yap about him losing his purpose and saying how his backups will forgive her.
Actually, I definitely would say that Cyn insperation was definitely IT, I'll explain, Both Cyn & IT plays with their victims utilising Psychological warfare tactics to have absolute control over their prey (Cyn with the puppy image and using Tessa's skin as a suit. IT using Fear and traumas) and you know that both are basically INVINCIBLE (wink wink) creatures compared to our protagonist and the only way to beat them was to exploit their weakness and use teamwork. And their end was pretty similar to.
Bro I been needing a video like this😭😭😭
Like the N trauma thing, I think we also needed to see how he handled being alone without Uzi aswell. Or about his mind overflowing with thoughts of Uzi's sacrifice, V's sacrifice and Tessa not even being Tessa. I would say more but i am VERY lazy to type right now.
Oh my gosh yes! I was thinking the same thing too. It just would made more sense if it was N fighting J instead of V. Sure V could step in at some point to allow N to go deal with Cyn at some point but I feel it should’ve been N to fight J first. Considering he was almost killed by here in episode 1 and was also outright bullied and beaten multiple times by her. It would of been so satisfying for them to come a full circle with N finally growing the backbone to fight back again J, letting out his emotions during the fight about everything she’s done including betraying everyone by working with Cyn.
I thought about the draw joke like half a second before it came up lmao. I was lucky since I got into MD like a month after ep8 came out and my friend recommended I watch the playlist with intermission in it which made the story so much better and smoother for me. Nice art btw 10/10 goober silly energy.
Niiiice, you're living the dream lolol. Also thanks!! :D
Perfect idea!! But i personally think there shouldve been an extra episode/short where N realizes his trauma and needs help to cope but doesnt wanna bother anyone so he tries to isolate himself but ends up having a breakdown and ultimately ends up learning how to cope with everything with the help of people around him.
Sometimes i wanted uzi to die and N to fight Cyn and J in a beserk never ending state until both of them are down, but, it never happened, N has so much potential, but he really never got to use it due to him not being the absolute main character..
Yeah for N losing V, Uzi and realising Tessa has been long dead should have been his breaking point. Even early sneak peeks for ep 7 and 8 hinted at a mental breakdown. Also how did he know Uzi was in space instead of being likely consumed by the core
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I'm trying to rewrite the story to make a Murder Drones turn-based RPG, covering a short prologue to when the Disassembly Drones arrive and throughout the whole series and I agree so much. The way everyone handles death like a one-off gag is so frustrating when you want higher emotional stakes; Uzi turned into a vampire thing that killed her own classmates, why should I care if V killed two of them as a funny gag without consequences? Uzi didn't seem to care he killed people of his kind as well. I know that's a Murder Drones brand but I realized it's not easy to put your own spin on a solidified property and not show your own biases.
Still, fantastic rewrite, thank you for ranting about your thoughts on the MD finale and show in general, and I wish you luck in your future projects.
Another thing I'd like to mention is the total waste of the railgun in the final episode. It was used literally once in the final battle and it basically MISSED. Frankly, literally nothing would have changed if it wasn't there. The Cyn attacking J by accident thing still would have worked in the fog. Uzi could have thrown the pickaxe at J and solver call it back instead of throwing the gun, etc. It was shown J having robot PTSD over that gun every time she saw it but that went NO WHERE. hell, it would have been nice for her to hesitate because of her fear of the gun at least! but no, it was basically *"just there"* in the final battle.
I love this, It was such a amazing and magical experience watching this video. I love watching murder drones theories, but this is hands down the best murder drones yapping video I've ever seen. Your art is amazing and I hope you make much more beautiful videos ❤
Aww thank you!!
As someone who currently has story boards FOR A J REDEMPTION ARC WHERE SHE IS LEFT INDECISIVE AND ESCAPES I really liked how you went about rewriting the pilot and I think this could really help me figure out some stuff with my storyboards! :]
thank you!! good luck with your storyboards >:D
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By brother in christ you all took all the words out of my mouth. These five horrible MD takes have Been infesting my mind for days, I am now finally free.
18:28 GET OUT OF MY HEAD!!!
I'm so happy you agree, I was so tired of hearing these TvT
one thing i wish would have happened is tessa's fate being acknowledged more. like your friend who saved you from dying and gave you a home just got made into a skinsuit and you don't even have much of a reaction?? like that's just so weird to me. i wish that J's character had more depth too - i think that's something your rewrite did really well with the "do it, you know there's no escape even in death" part. like it was a very good episode but as a FINALE there was so much more that could have been expanded upon to make it more satisfying.
My favorite part of this is actually your final comments near the end about overall opinions on this as an Indie show and the current industry as well as your passions
For the n vs j fight it would be cool to see J get the option to redeem herself from N but have her actions/looks seem indecisive. Before she makes a decision Thad brings out a railgun shot (since he was too far away to notice what they were talking about) and J gets damaged enough for Cyn to take over OR Cyn just takes over midway and says with J's body "You just keep surprising me" or something along those lines since it ties back to ep 7 in the mineshaft scene where cyn tells N the reason why she keeps their personalities. With the indecisive decision, it leaves more thought to the viewer. Then you can have J(cyn) fight N, disregarding J's body. Can be something like self mutilation for shiz and giggles, damaging herself to land a hit, or even a kamikaze near N to end the fight, it'll just add more tragedy to her character I think.
The idea of showing V is alive through the hallway scene is great.
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also recommend: Rustage cyn rap called "assimilate"
Ooo I love that >:D and thanks!
Gosh i love this video, you did a great job at rewriting the ep, now i wish the episode had been like this. You are really good at writing stuff fr! Also, the art you drew was AMAZING
Cant believe this video hasn't gotten more attention
Help i enjoyed this whole thing so much, i was literally laughing 😭 i relate to you so much tbh, in many ways, from the opinion on the last episode, to the last part about creativity stuff... whatever. Also..... Bite me! >:,3
I've always liked J's character cause of how differently she acted compared to the other.
I really wish we got way more screen time of J cause she gets this position of being a villain but she's just undeveloped as a character it just doesn't work. I would have also liked to know more about her and Tessa's relationship back in the manor and her relationship with Cyn after the whole skinning Tessa thing. Also would have maybe loved to know more about her and the team when they first got to Copper-9.
Its sad that she always felt like a throw away character despite having potential!
(I'm making a whole a whole J Redemption Arc story board plus a whole rewrite of the story where J actually is part and makes sense in the series.)
I want j to keep her personality bc that’s one of the reasons why she’s my fav character, and that she’s still on the evil side or betrays someone idk, smth like that I would love to see, just more screen time for j 😭
I'll make it a reality, i got you
(that is once i learn blender and beg for life for like that 1 guy who has sick ass custom murder drones models)
20:56 i honestly don't think I'll ever get bored of it, I've watched it over 140 times now lol
I would actually love it if N fought J. It would create a a trend were N has to fight all his "Friends " at least once, and J is the only one he didn't fight. However, as it stand, there are 3 problems that prevent J from listening to anything that N has to say.
1. J hates N. (she also doesn't care about V either)
2. N still doesn't remembers a lot about his past out side what we see from his memory flashbacks. (J won't take him seriously because N doesn't know the full extent of Cyn's power while J does)
3. J needs motivation that overcomes her motivation to side with Cyn. (J doesn't want to Die or suffer more then necessary.)
If you want J to take N seriously, He needs to know enough about his past to fully understand what Cyn is capable of, or else he will just be seen as someone who's not brave, but ignorant of how powerful Cyn is.
For the motivation, it would probably have to be getting revenge against Cyn for killing Tessa. Tessa seems to be the only one that J actually cared about, and N bring up Uzi abilities are powerful enough to beat Cyn should be enough to convince her to at least not get in their way.
The solution to the three problems requires N to get back enough of his memories back. If that part isn't added to the rewrite then only J can achieve the goal of convincing J to do anything. J, like V, still has all her memories.
More J development/screen time, longer bite me sound track, Tessa comeback somehow, longer forever song, we also needed more Uzi. Is this or is this not the best add ons (great drawing by the way)
Oh yeah, Foreverr was waaay too short
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this was a very epic video, good job ^^
@@pixelatedluisyt YIPEE *gives u a star sticker on ur forehead* :3
@@LiminaLux YAY I LIKE STARS
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Someone must animate those ideas, The community will love it
I do not know how I have more subs than you, underrated as hell, keep up the good work
I've been thinking of a brief rewrite of sorts myself, and one thing I feel like they really should have done was give N and V a moment to themselves to just.. talk.
Outside of a brief scene in episode 4 the two haven't, from what we've seen, gotten a single chance by themselves to just talk to each other - especially when you consider they've gotten their full memories back in episode 5, given the history they had now no longer blocked, you'd think that would've been something they would have brought up to each other at some point.
Especially after V's sacrifice and then her hallway scene in the finale, there's still so much going on between them that they themselves haven't even had a chance to talk about yet. Would've liked one, at least one scene of them being able to talk to each other without Uzi or anyone else there, just to get where exactly they stand now given they (N in particular) now have their memories back, and with V's entire "confession" in the hallway where she apologizes and admits she only did and hid everything from him to avoid him getting hurt. I feel like there really should have been a scene where the two just bring this up, but we never got it.
For real! N and V had so much potential and have a great dynamic. I didn't bring it up much in this video since they would honestly need their own episode, and squeezing a scene of them into the finale would've felt rushed/wouldn't give enough justice to that imo
my version of the rewriting: V gets saved by a solver drone (patched) who thought v was a worker drone and she/he fights v but realizes she isn't going to bring harm so he/she works with v to try to get to the surface... it cuts to doll's core inside of Cyn's body with Cyn getting hurt in the inside because of doll hurting Cyn While Cyn tries to find N who's hiding... Khan is arguing with J before Lizzy saved J's life by telling Khan that they need to save v and J says "you know V" and then it cuts back to N hiding and he peeks and sees Cyn going back down the hole and he goes up the hole to the surface and sees V and the solver drone and N hugs v tightly and v hugs him back and it cuts to Uzi and nori in space having a daughter and mother moment and Uzi and nori are suddenly knocked down into the atmosphere of copper 9 by Cyn's tentacles and it cuts back to N, V, and solver drone (which you can call him/her whatever you want maybe like silver as it's the word solver but the o is replaced with an i) anyways solver drone, V, and N all go up to the surface and Khan, Lizzy, Thad, and J are now a team and they see V, and N, also suddenly Nori land onto Khan's head and Khan looks confused and says something like "who are you" and he hears nori's voice and says "Nori?" and Nori and Khan have an emotional moment and were about to hug before Cyn goes to the surface and the planet starts splitting apart and J sees Cyn but sees her as both Cyn and Tessa before Uzi or N says "OH NO THAT'S CYN" and J says "What? That's clearly Tessa" and N starts explaining to J that that's Cyn wearing Tessa's corpse and J has a mental breakdown and then there's an epic fight and it's Uzi, N, V, Nori, and J all fighting Cyn and Cyn is starting to get hurt before suddenly there's a hole in her stomach and she sees doll's core and now it's doll, Uzi, N, V, J, and Nori all fighting (btw solver drone who you could call silver was scared by v so that's why he isn't included in the fight) and Cyn teleports to Uzi and was about to kill her but N sacrifices himself and gets his core ripped out and it was going to be eaten by Cyn but J kicks Cyn's ass and damages Cyn a lot and saved N and N's core goes back to his body and then doll leaves the fight and she fixes the patch that the once possessed Uzi destroyed in episode 7 and doll comes back and throws the patch at Cyn's visor and Cyn goes back to normal and fixes the planet and J because she was so mad kills Cyn and then we get the credits scene and in the post credit scene we see many new characters which some of them are the antagonists of season 2 (if you want me to write that) anyways the characters are serial designation a, serial designation b, serial designation c, serial designation d, Serial designation e, serial designation f, serial designation g, serial designation h, serial designation i, serial designation k, serial designation l, serial designation m, serial designation o, serial designation p, serial designation Q, serial designation r, serial designation s, serial designation t, serial designation u, serial designation w, serial designation x, serial designation y, and serial designation z all regenerating and coming back from the dead which they were the dead murder drones in episode 6 cabin fever labs
I do like the idea of the dead murder drones coming back to life like zombies hehe
Well it's about the season 2 antagonists, but that's because the show is called "murder drones" not "a worker drone kills a murder drone and teams up with a murder drone which tried to kill her then she had a crush on him and went to prom to try to save everyone there and then go camping with her classmates to kill almost all of them then learn the murder drones's past and become their administrator and go to cabin fever labs with Tessa and see the dead murder drone's clone and then they get caught by a cannibal and escape and went to the caves and a Russian worker drone dies and Tessa is revealed to be the main antagonist and then the main protagonist sacrifices herself and wakes up in space seeing a destroyed copper 9 blah blah blah you know the rest" and so season 1 should've been about killing the murder drones and then season 2 is about absolute solver and Cyn
True ending achieved
I just realized how good it would be if they did it like that
Here is an idea: when trying to go back up to the fight J is stopped by Nori, Khan, Thad and Lizzy and they start fightingn.
Man that Khan, Lizzy, and Thad VS J fight was so hyped up only to not even happen. That's something I would have liked to see.
i was HOPING N would fight J in the last ep but im happy with what we got tho
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Hey you know what you should make a video all about Tetris!
Y'know? It could've happen a scene where N sacrifices himself. THIS is what I most wanted. Think well! Dude's the thing tht Cyn/Solver is most obsessed besides Uzi. And honestly from my perspective. N is NOT the cutie pookie that everyone thinks of him. He's a soldier. He stands tall for the ones he holds dear.
If I had to be honest murder drones not getting a second season is a good thing because Glitch wants to help Indie creators make their own indie show but if murder drones does continue I think it would be cool to add 7 more episodes with episode 9 being the first one and the main antagonist doesn't get killed just like Cyn (technically she's alive Idk) but gets a redemption arc instead
Honestly, the thing that made me think that this finale wasn’t that good was how J ended, she “died” but I guess it should’ve been different. I’m trying to do the same thing as you did, but only focusing on what happened with J, like, the whole battle would’ve happened, and after some days/months they decided to search for J (I wrote it as an AU for Oilrose but let’s make it more real, unfortunately) and they find her totally damaged and broken, but still alive, and they “rescue” her and try to know why J sided with the Absolute Solver. Anyways, since I don’t want to write a whole book and it’s still in development, let’s just say that they rescue J and they get a more developed end (in my opinion)
Cool vid, new subscriber. I really like your drawings ngl
*sniff sniff* less than 200 subs? good videos? I SMELL A UNDERRATED TH-camR
You know what i have an issue with? Cyns introduction. I might rewrite that.
the thing is they could’ve made a lil more n x v.
they had so much more potential vro
they had a really good opportunity in episode 5 😭
just followed you, because you are awesome
Cyn's death was anti-climactic asf.
Uzi really just predicted Cyn coming from behind and automatically had her hand in her heart.
Wouldn't it be the other way around? Like Uzi's arm gone? Meh you gotta kill an op character somehow.
It's not really that she predicted per say. She already got used to how Cyn fights and knows she teleports/uses illusions so she noticed that and probably thought "ok, definitely not in front of me, she's probably behind me" it was pretty smart of her to turn and just plunge into the air with her hand like that so I'm personally satisfied
Plus Uzi and Cyn both looked genuinely surprised when it worked so it was pretty cool imo
me by the thumbnail alone: THANK YOU (i thought i was the only one)
The evening after the finale premiere, I was talking with some friends, and one of them said "The best written Murder Drones episode is Intermission" 💀💀💀
the thumbnail is so true, it shouldve been N fighting J
he snap
I may not agree with everything, but I’ve really enjoyed watching this and honestly wish this got more attention! Spectacular job :D Also the art omg it’s everything I want my drawings to be 😭 Keep it up!! And take a gander at your subscriber count if you want ;)
Thank you!! I'm curious on what you disagreed on but I'm glad you still enjoyed the video :D
7:21 absolute cinema
The only problem is, Have N get a proper N vs J fight, “BuT ThAt wOulD bE oUT oF cHaRaCtER.” i know but he has the most trauma out of the both of them and V and J are leaving him in the dark and not expressing his trauma. Keep rewriting this it would make so much sense
This is random but cabin fever shows how much stronger N is than V, he just holds back because N is a great guy, he literally easily threw Uzi through The clouds on the planet to
Hello! I have an offer for you if you're interested:
Me and the TH-camr, Yagsterr, have been working on a Murder Drones project where we re-write Episode 5! So far we have pretty much almost all of the Voice Actors we need but the main problem we're facing is animators! Now, the characters don't have to be moving all the time, mainly the frame changing every 3-6 seconds (depends on the scene) and I was hoping you would be willing to animate some of it! Let me know if you're down, thanks!
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Sounds really cool! I’d love to join :D
@@LiminaLux Cool! The best way to get in contact would probably be through Discord but if you don't have or don't plan on making a Discord account we can figure out another way.
If you join the cheese I will by very happy
10:01 if I could make one it would be J still leaves but considers Ns words and then at least try to help but backs down because she doesn’t know what to do
RIP the teacher Xd!
But I think personally they should’ve kept the fact that the disassembly’s needing oil before they over heat and die ;-;!
i couldnt agree more with the thumbnail
8:11 I feel like it would be reasonable for her to join him since even though she said it’s better on the winning team you could clearly tell she didn’t want to be alone so she might’ve actually fought with N
I think J would refuse the offer at first but then come around to help fight cyn (idk maybe when there all down she comes behind cyn and like knocks her down or smth) I think that this is more realistic than like you said her coming around and IMMEDIATELY doing a 180 to join N, Uzi & V
with your art skills i bet you could be a great 3d modeller!
thanks! hoping to tackle 3d soon hehe
@ you will do amazing
I also would like answered what happened to Uzi's mom, we know she's alive, but who attacked her, I think I know the answer (no its not N. Not exactly at least, it's Cyn possessing N, a lot has pointed me in that direction) I wish i could know if I'm actually right or not, but that doesn't matter anymore, me and a friend is making a second season where we hope to not just tie up lose ends address things nobody thought of but also make a new story new villain, but same characters its on TikTok
We've handled things like, the Cyn or solver debate (and gave Cyn a proper ending, freeing her from the solver, as the Cyn we see isn't Cyn, it's the solver, but though Cyn is dead, she's finally at peace in a way, and so is N, getting to hug her after years and years, he hugs his real sister) we also tackled what it was like for Uzi in ep 4, nobody really thinks about it, but what was it truly like? Like was it knocked out wake up it's done, was she trapped in her mind unable to do anything but watch, or was she was completely there just having zero control over her body whatsoever (we used the third) and we did it in a instresting way, putting N in Uzi's mind to go through her memories to stop Cyn from tampering with her, as it's trying to turn Uzi into exactly what it did to the real Cyn. There's other things that was shown and stuff but that's just the ones i wanted to point out, N hasn't snapped but we are thinking on how to get him to his absolute lowest (we've already killed Khan in front of Uzi & N, with N failing to save him, we are just gonna add shit to stress and upset N) but we do have a lot planned, if you have Tiktok go check it out. Its on my friend's channel @logan.samuel5 worth to check out, I should probably stop rambling now just this reminded me of the duo project
sounds cool!! For who attacked Uzi's mom I personally don't think it matters.
I highly doubt it's N tho bec when he meets Nori she says "you look familiar, you got wings?"
I interpret this as Nori realizing "oh hey ur a murder drone", not "oh hey ur the one who killed me". Plus since we saw that she drew V in the past, I think N just reminded Nori of V. Wouldn't be surprised if V killed Nori tbh lol
Have fun with the project! I'll be sure to check it out at some point >:D
Do you want me to rewrite murder drones season 2. Btw it'll take a darker turn and N will be the main protagonist and it continues off of the original episode 8 and not my rewriting kinda
@LiminaLux
You know what, I was just thinking to myself about near the end of this video of yours, as I'm writing the first script for a show based on MD and as I'm procrastinating doing school, what would the show that you want or wanted to make look like?
I really like your writing, the finale should've been done better. I was kinda to harsh on J but writing this, giving her redeemed make me like feel bad for her. The relationship with uzi and nori was rushed but with slowler pase, it would work pretty good. I know someone might disagree with me but I didn't like N and uzi being canon couple. It should've been with V rather than Uzi. Another issue is N didn't even apologize to V during the hallway scene. N should've have apologies to her for protecting him, come on! It would've be better to have him hugging V for once. Give me this scene and it will be good but no! I know there's a lot of issues and it's not perfect, but it still great episode. Remember these are my terms of writing so don't hate me please. Thank you❤
Really wish we could've gotten more N and V moments fr TvT
@@LiminaLux me too... TvT
we need a fan storyboard of this omg?
I love how you draw Cyn
You know what should've happened? They should've not have tried to juggle 2 shows at once so we could get at least 1 more episode to pace things out a little better
For me the show was good but J keeps on getting the lower end of the stick and getting a low amount of screentime, she has much potential.
So good.
Me just gonna watch ep.8 now :3
I really wish we got that angsty rebellion murderer drone of n
It was really hard to understand the series for me, there is a lot of important info that it's hard for me to see for some reason. I don't get why, for some people, it's implicit. For example, what you said about J and her backstory, I wasn't sure how to feel about J because I didn't get the character really well. Did she really wanted to keep V and N alive? I have never seen an actual interaction or connection between them. In fact, she treated them awful, the only person she seemed to care about was Tessa and Cyn killed her. Why does she follow her orders?. Or V development, i wasn't able to understand what was the deal with her until episode 8.
I am not saying those are plot holes. I just can't see those details. If i had to chose a reason, i would say it is because the hints the series gives us are a little too small to understand, and some dialogue it seems confusing.
Trust me I get you on that. I had to watch this show 3 times and watch people pick apart certain episodes/characters to really get everything out of the show.
I get that J looks like she doesn't care about N and V, but she definitely cares about V to some extent, cause if she didn't there was no point in her offering V to join her and Cyn you know?
I already explained why she continued to follow orders, and other people have talked a lot about V so I'd highly recommend checking those out cause she's a pretty cool character
The show def needed more episodes and time but I'd recommend giving it a rewatch or see some other people talk about it :3
@LiminaLux This is my fifth rewatch, and it still feels the same. It definitely needed at least 3 more episodes to expand the story.
WIth the hot takes, it's also important to remember that the drones are AI. They aren't bound by the limits of learning speeds like humans are, I wouldn't be surprised if that's how Uzi learned to use and control the solver so quickly; She just calculates and learns extraordinarily quickly (same with how she fights, she learned just by watching anime , lmao). It's, in my opinion, a clever loophole with the characters that allowed the writers to skirt around some time jumps and provide a decently valid excuse for the sudden changes.
here's my thoughts and what i should say: N should be the one who should (Fake)sacrificed himself in the episode 6 Dead End, instead of V, and came back to rescue V and Uzi, just to fight against J all by himself how mad he is after seeing & Realize J is Team up with Cyn. (Why can't just Glitch production make N snapped about this already? It would make the shows much better instead of being agony and good person).
Now lets not forget Doll, Doll shouldn't have been dead in the first place, Doll should have been alive by escaping from Cyn, and she ends up meet Nori knowing she been alive the whole times and meet her and help Nori and V to stop Cyn controlling Uzi.
It would be cool if she join the fight together with Uzi And V, N, against Cyn and J.
why is V even in the ep 8? that's a giant plot armour dang
Tbh, the thumbnail says all. N *should’ve* gotten back at J for what she said to him.
Also couldn’t agree more when it comes to the nature of N and Uzi’s arc. They’re a bit basic but I still like them.
Ever since meta runner season 3 glitch has limited themselves to eight episodes unfortunately.
They should have just given khan a normal gun, like a god damn smith and wesson pistol.
you should read the N raged comic by Sir Yelluzal
I hope you make your show one-day
I absolutely love Murder Drones, and like the most powerful characters (not literally powerful, but those with a strong character). the only two characters I disliked were Lizzy (I just dont like characters with her archetype unless they are the MC) and N, and the ONLY reason I dislike N is because he is dumb, not stupid. N is incredibly nice, and fits the theme quite well, and he learns and knows a lot of things that he needs to for specifically what he wants done or needs done... BUT HE CANT LOOK INTO THE FUTURE WHATSO EVER. N lives solely in the present, which leads to him making questionable choices that do help in the end sometimes like Beau or siding with Uzi in the pilot, or even trying to talk back to J when he could have given J a quite good arguement for why he thought they might be wrong WITH THINGS THEY BOTH KNEW.
N isnt a bad character in my opinion, I just dislike him (though intermission makes me neutral to him, and I count it. sadly, intermission does nothign to make me like Lizzy).
as for the Oil thing and the overheating, I have a theory you might be interested in. the Overheating is not lethal nor related to Cyn, but the Absolute Solver (or the pwoer they use or wahtever). You see, Doll, N, V, and J all drink Oil (N in the pilot at least, V intermittently through the show, and J its mostly implied), but we dont see Cyn drink any and we dont see Cyn drink any (but she does eat Doll... idk if that counts tho). basically, my theory is that using the Solver has a reaction upon the world, and a lesser reaction upon the host, the heating of their body. for N, V and J, that is ONLY healing their body, and thus its never really a concern for them as N basically never heals after he stops injesting Oil and V continues to do so, btoh never suffering negative side effects. Doll definitely drank oil until the Promening ended, and then was either forced to use th Solver less or to feast on uzi's leftovers after 98.7.
Uzi is the only Drone (that we know of) who actively resisted drinking oil as long a possible, and only when she lost control did she gain new powers in camp 98.7. That wasnt Uzi being possessed by Cyn or the Absolute Solver (she was during the murders, but I will explain), that was the Absolute Solver "mutating" or "adapting" to preserve the host. Uzi had almost no oil in her system, only the little bit she sucked off her fingers, and she fought the urge to eat one of Dolls kills. The Solver was like "Aight, you are dangerously high in temperature, lets give you even more weapons and tools to get oil" and made her into the biomechanical horror we see. even still, she fought, so it decided "thats enough of that, lets get a quick snack and get a hunting", waiting for Rebecca and Darren while she sucked the stuff in her pack dry.
Uzi also doesnt have a problem after that point with the temperature, and Khan mentions that Uzi has "interests in cannibalism and nightcore", which, as much as I like the theory of Khan possessing Darren to watch over Uzi, Lizzy 100% tattled on Uzi and Uzi ate Dolls kills because what else are those bodies going to be doing? Khan also has the greatest influence in the colony, so he could hide the fact shes a cannibal fairly easily, if he even wanted or needed to, but remember that literally no one knows who Uzi is except some members of the WDF who are ALL DEAD NOW.
I like your rewrite though. I am a firm beleiver that art shouldnt be "fixed", so I like that you make the distinction between fixing the ending and just making an alternative you felt was better. I am making a fanfiction by switching Cyn and N in the series and what would logically change if the two switched making a deal with the Absolute System. hopefully soon Ill be able to put the series out, but idk. No OCs from me, no breaking of the original story (the only things that change are the things that couldnt or wouldnt happen without the characters who made those, IE N befriending just about everyone), and absolutely nothing that would go against what is established as a limit for a character. episodes 1 and 2 are very similar, though there are important changes because of reasons I wont get into that make Cyn replace V in the story and J replace N for his narrative role, and I discovered I dont hate Lizzy, I just hate Lizzy in the original show because I didnt write her myself, and have loved writing the brat. also, Cyn being there has SIGNIFICANT CHANGES TO THE PLOT FROM THE PROMENING ONWARDS because of a really funny reason: Cyn spites V constantly, including mercy killing V's targets.
I can talk somewhat about it, as well as link it (when I start posting both the readable and listenable versions), but I will not spoil anything outside of the Pilot and Heartbeat because of their similarities to the original show, though I will talk about the things that are different without explainations if those explainations are spoilers... so be aware.
I agree 👍
woah
10:01 N: I know you were mean to me and tryed to kill me but… you’ve been through so much… please let me help you! J: I don’t need your help! I just… need time…. N: please let me know everything I want to help you! J:…. Tessa she- its my fault…. I couldn’t save her….. in the end I became a tool for the people I love but I got tossed aside…. N: I never knew….. why didn’t you come sooner?…. J: I didn’t want to make you feel scared seeing you all so happy…. I can’t take that away….
slay
since when was that not tessa im confused im pretty sure that was still tessa not cyn
I hear you but n gets a lot of screen time and in my opinion I don’t really like j to much but just my opinion you have to remember it’s not a small animation so they have to use shapes to make the characters and they have to take breaks and the voices actors could get sick so they will need breaks so yeah that’s my opinion
23:29 the bite me lol
I love her
SOMEONE! ANIMATE THIS RE-WRITE NOW!!!
I LOVE N x V!!🖤💛
I WANT CYN BACKKK :c
I think:
Uzi and N should be bestfriend:they love scene are not really what i prefer the most and i want uzi x tchad and N x V.
Cyn:she just a host so i feel like she could have been safe if the cruxifix USB not has been destroyed.
J:i think she arleady say everythink.
Doll:what if she come in ep 4 with the other at antagonist,make a race with V to kill her and foght with uzy,to become a lil bit friend with V and become a protagonist in ep 6 and die in a epic battle vs cyn.
Cyn again:the "callback"thing is so useless like in ep 7 she take the entire control of her body and now she can't even make her eye yellow five second.
Tchad,lizzy and khan:imagine seing them survive the end time before uzi and N start really have a use to fight cyn.and the teacher can join them cuz why not.
Khan and nori:how do glitch ignore to make a scene when we see khan apologie to nori(no hate).that mean deleting the "kinda hot"joke for something more interresing that we all want to see.
That weird baby:he sould have join n,uzi and v.WHY DID HE DIE😭😭😭😭
Cyn:maybe a line like"hunt is open" could hit hard.
And that it,anyway murder drone is a very good show.(ways better than tadc that become a "familly is the best thing" or "never forget to love eachother"haa serie(still love it anyway just dissonpointed))
Am i the only one who doesnt care for V? Shes not interesting or charismatic all the she has is a "tragic past"(i hade no idea she had a tragic past until i got in the fandom) J on the other hand, has iconic lines, is funny and her relationship with Tessa could be interesting, i dont know i feel that it would be better if V was killed in the first episode and that way they could actually focus on J's redemption
OR…hear me out…we don’t just kill off a character that has potential and maybe think outside the box?
Intermission showed us how much potential V has. She can relate to Uzi from the perspective of a newly changed murder drone, she’s more cynical than N but she still has a heart and she knows about Cyn.
I feel like the only reason why she’s like this to you is because she didn’t have a lot of time to change and be charismatic .
There’s a lot to do with V and saying “maybe she should have just been killed off early on” is very extreme and a bit fucked.