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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 30 ก.ย. 2024
- dumping your debut novel is painful, but at least I carry the experience of writing one shitty manuscript now, which I can hopefully upload to your head.
"I Dumped My Debut novel: 3 BIG Mistakes you need to Avoid" - will be my attempt at doing exactly that.
chapters-
0:30 - prologue
5:58 - ch - I
10:30 - ch - II
12:50 - ch - III
13:10 - epilogue
Love how u keep experimenting and improving
Bruh, Your vocabulary is soo good .Can yoe give me some tips for increasing vocabulary pal.i would appreciate it.
Just flip the dictionary?
Really though ? .
Or... read books with complicated words
-> this one works better
Wow Brilliant Video ✨ The way you explain the things in its own pace without rushing feels so good to hear and understand. And the way you keep the audience engaged is also really awesome.
glad you liked it man
I think inner monolouge is about how the character feels and process information which ultimately make them create their own decision, it is not mean to be perfect like 3RD POV. Since our character are mostly flaw even if they are God, if we glismpe in their mind, we just project our own consciousness into them and therefore their opinion doesn't reflect the story.
Let just say Character A believe the group of camper is a bandit, they burned the village base on the information Character A received from one little girl, but it turns out the group of camper was actually a good people, they tried to rescue the remaining survivors of the burning village, it was actually the little girl who was the culprit.
Now, if we write this from 1st POV. It is fine since characters think and have their own idea of the world and correct it as the story go along. But if we write it from 3RD POV saying that the little girl is innocent when in reality she isn't, then the writer become unreliable narrator.
I get that, but the nice thing here with 3rd person is I get to call the shots... You get me...
@@Monsstor_ Yes, it is so simple to just write in 3RD POV.