MONSTER - An OC Animatic
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 28 ก.ย. 2024
- Basic Story: Luka Umbra is a shadow dragon, he's been oppressed all his life and is set on getting revenge against humans. He is so obsessed with vengeance that he becomes blind to his own best friend, Vayen, who falls in love with a human girl. Out of jealous rage, Luka loses his mind with hurt and paranoia. However, he can see the monster that he's becoming, and he likes it.
So, this is my first OC animatic! At least, it's the first one I'm happy with! It's mostly just for fun, I wanted to get an idea out for these characters, so I apologize if things are a little jittery... I'm hoping you like the idea! I have to work on Luka's story itself, but I wanted to have some fun with this! (I did all the boards in like... two weeks so this is by no means professional haha!)
The music, as said in the credits, is Monster by Willyecho. I do NOT own the rights to it, and nor am I claiming them, I just wanted to do this for fun and show you guys!
![HELLFIRE [ OC Animatic ]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/2U26dOHE08k/mqdefault.jpg)
![HELLFIRE [ OC Animatic ]](/img/tr.png)
Oh no he's hot
.....shit
@@omg....5240 (...) here we go again
Sorry, my interior memer said that I HAVE to do it
When your homie gets a girlfriend and you realize you're forever alone
I was the 1k like
Same bro
😹😹😹😹😹😹😹😹😹😹😹👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️
More like when your homie steals the girl you like and then expects you to be chill about it so after failing at getting payback enough times you lose it and take things too far.
Tbh I don't feel like a monster I shouldn't of had to apologise to her considering she went accusing me of stuff on his account then tried banning me from his account and he wants me to believe she's a nice girl.
I mean, he probably felt pretty betrayed that his best friend was with a human, those who have oppressed him his whole life, so I feel bad. At the same time though, this boy looks really good evil
That is called entitlement to another person life, is not good...
The movement and style are amazing! But my favorite part is definitely the expressions, I love that you still show things like shock, hurt, and sadness, even it’s just a frame, to really flesh out the “monster” character. It’s like he feels both a thrill from being a monster but also hates himself for it.
It's so detailed it's beautiful
Came off very "look what you made me do"
In the beginning part, the: "I can be rude, be in a mood, I can be rotten,
I can be cruel, might act a fool, but never forgotten" part, I absolutely LOVED his expressions, cos you get that while he seems to revel in his revenge and his beastly actions, he also seems regretful or distraught about it. How there's so much story conveyed in almost everything.
The transition eye part? Delicious.
The part where he looks like water or a sea wave and attacks humans makes me think of the stories people must make about him and how many he must have attacked.
The way he moves and acts more beastly in a fight, how towards the end when the song goes "Huwa!" And he turns his head and his face looks so inhuman is so cool omg,,.
The expressions and body language, your artstyle, just HHH ITSSO GOOD.
Honestly this video is so amazing. I've probably rewatched it like seven times now, with more times to come.
(Also Mr monster looks really hot..👀)
Is it bad or gross I kinda wanna hug him and never let go?
I mean, seriously, get real people, though it's not the best way out, logically being mistreated from a young age would teach you that's how to treat people you hate. So, when he was able to show them how he felt, what he had become, he did what they did to him.
Murder, hurt, never caring for emotions, feelings, life, anything...
No-one had been there to teach him not to untill it was to late.
And when his only friend fell in love with a human, he stopped caring at all. To only have one friend in the wild cruel world is heartbreaking, but for them to then choose those who broke and hurt you your whole life, you would be driven over the edge to insanity...
The monster character (let's call him Olvidada), is, in short, a very tragic character to me, and I only wish he could have had a better life.
p.s. Olvidada is Spanish for 'forgotten'.
@@thebigbrotherwolf8617 that's really nice!! The "Monster" character is named Luka Umbra by the way.
@@kysim ooh, good name! It sounds kinda feral
@@thebigbrotherwolf8617 yeah!!
I thought he kinda looked like a shadow in that scene. It looked really neat to me. Also, yeah, loved that scene in the end, revealing a more animalistic face.
Edit: Now that I think about it, it's probably the blood of his victims.
Find me over here frantically searching for more while screeching "WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!?!"
I need more too
lol same XD
Luka fuckin dies lol
Hey this is awesome story-boarding! I could easily tell what was going on, and you have a beautiful art style! I'm looking forward to whatever you put out next!
This is so excellent. You can feel his breathing rage. You uncover an empathy, and a desire for his success. No matter how terrible, succession for him may be. I adore your style and plotting! I cannot wait for future content featuring these characters! Best of wishes :)
The frame at 3.29, is just 'mwuah' I don't know why I like it so much but the pure insanity and villain characteristics shown in one facial expression. Also the idea with this dragon humanoid race thingy is super cool! On one hand this character can look very human, and on the other he can look definitely the opposite.
Omg YES! Finally a “villain” with a good backstory! Usually movies and tv shows and other animatics are just like:
This person is villain, he hates main character. Why? Idk he just does ok!? Now main character wants villain dead, but that doesn’t mean main character’s evil cause he’s main character. Now no one knows much about villain other than he’s obviously evil just cause he looks like he is, and has a villain-y name.
See where I’m coming from? Anyway this is really good and I’ve been watching it on replay for maybe 30 minutes now! Keep up the amazing work!
Give one a crown the other a mask and its dream and techno. This is epic i love it. I just got this in my recommended its amazing.
1:59 sir that is an illegal amount of badass hotness.
I know nothing but my gaydar is going off
Mine too-
Same
Is it okay to say I cried?
Edit: Your expressions create emotions that I cannot put into words, they change and mingle and show different thought processes that go with their body language, and honestly, this was a beautiful piece of work. Instead of fear, surprise, sadness, longing, and anger, you create terror, shock, misery, desire, and fury. Even the /smallest/ detail- Vayen has fangs too, but he only showed them when he was scared or shocked, where Luka shows them through hunger and being sadistic. It would make my day to see more. This is the first video I have ever seen of yours - I'm struck. Keep going.
Why dose no one talk about how successful of a artist you are going to be if you keep making animations I think you should make a camp camp animation
Okay, but that ink scene was magnificent. Goodness gracious. I love the story you've created here!
I am happy that you put the story of it in the description, I love making my own theories or stories and seeing others when it comes to these kinds of things but I love knowing the creator's story for the characters as well.
I was rooting for the monster
I’d like to know who wasn’t. *pulls out crowbar*
@@RiasatAmin what?
I absolutely refuse to believe you have 487 subscribers, this absolute gold dude! I love your style and you animate really good, not to mention the story is hella good to jump onto! Good job, bro ^^
Why do I get Dorian vs. Chaol vibes from Throne of Glass. :000000 THIS IS AWESOME YOU ARE INCREDIBLY TALENTED!!
Omg this is so good. When the doors opened I literally got chills like, hello?? I know nothing about you and I love you
ok, i might be the only one that thought of this but if any of you have red red queen and the rest of the series this reminds me of it 😍
I'm intrigued to see what other animatics you make the characters seem quite interesting
This is SO GOOD, you are so talented and very creative!! I am in love with this, omg.
Gosh, since this came out I've revisited every few months and I just want more of these characters omg
This is absolutely amazing ! Great job
Oh my goodness! This is amazing!! Your art style is
I can't be the only one rewatching this again and again lol. This is amazinggg
the transition at 1:58 gave me *goosebumps* good job
This is waaay to underrated! what an amazing animatic, I couldn't take my eyes off my screen!
This video is too underrated! You are awesome, I love it!
Вау!!!!!! Я влюбилась в этот ролик! Хочется увидеть полную и законченую анимацию. Персонажи прекрасны. Идея прекрасна. Рисовка прекрасна. Сижу, пищу от счастья. Буду пересматривать снова и снова. Спасибо за это видео
holy SMOKES this is absolutely GORGEOUS and i am in love!!!!! hugely inspiring!!
Dude this is so amazing!!!!!!!! I'm *SO* glad this popped up on my recommended your art style is INCREDIBLE!!
I really love this. I've rewatched it multiple times and I just can't get over how good it is. You did an amazing job on this, really. 💖💖💖💕
The way you draw the expressions is just amazing, the time and effort put into each pictures shows just how much you really care about your OC's caracter development. 😌
Wonderful anamatic 😁👏👍
I feel like the "gentlefaced" blonde guy would be more incensed at seeing his girlfriend being almost fatally throttled even if it was by his former friend.
This was absolutely incredible! I am so in love with this animatic, the storytelling is phenomenal and I feel so many things ahhh!! Wonderful job bravo bravo bravo!!
this just pooped up in my recommended and IM SO GLAD ITS AMAZING
This is what happens when you've got PTSD and are a plutonic yandere for your best friend
Man this is so cool I need to know the full story!
x2
i love the waves turning into him and turning into other stuff I dont know how express this but that was a really really dope idea, I love it
This was beautifully done... The main villain was my favorite kind. The kind who smiles when they're pissed. Just a little unhinged. Probably has a dark sense of humor... lowkey, I'd simp for Luka
This is incredible!
If this were a movie it would be really interesting to see how the characters develop. I would be so down to see the movie
I have absolutely no frikin idea what is going on but I LOVE IT AND I LOVE THE MONSTER GUY CALL ME INSANE BUT HE IS BADASS AWSOME
THIS is your first video on TH-cam?? Daaaamn your future looks promising!
bruh hearer sounded like ‘peeear’ wtf if it weren’t for the captions i wouldn’t have know
but that aside this is hella cool!! so epic- so glad i stumbled across it now
It was incredibly cool! Seriously, the movements are fabulous. The faces are very expressive, the emotions are just top notch. Luka is great. I just fell in love with his villainous face.
Thank you!
Me: *sees this and clicks expecting one of the other songs called monster*
Also me: welp... Im adding another monster song to my list.
For clarification on the other songs
▪ Their the ones by Skillet, Meg & Dia, Eminem(ft. Rihanna), Imagine Dragons, Ruelle, Beth Crowley & Starset
And all of them are to amazing in each their own right
@@rorycaleb2661 yep! they each have a different feel to them and that's why i love them all :3
Well, I was expecting the one from the Broadway musical of Frozen xd
@@almosthuman2398 there's a song called monster from a boardway musical?
@@dull_demon4717 and let me tell you, for a Disney Broadway song IT'S FREAKING METAL!
Sorry this is long I just really love this. This animatic is amazing, I’ve already listened to it more then a hundred times. The feelings and expectations are really realistic especially in the fact that the emotions are quick because that’s what they are on real people flash’s but the ones you do draw out are the right ones. This is hands down the best one I’ve ever seen. I would love to see a character profile for these character and read there story but in all honesty I would be fine with just listening to this for the rest of my life.
This animatic is AWESOME! The expressions are drawn amazingly, the music goes great with it - you did an amazing job! And I hope to see more!
Edit: oh!! Thank you!!
the beginning big throne of glass vibes -- amazing and very well done!
Literally crying my eyes out for this dude.
This is epic! I'm love your style so much, can't wait to see where this goes!
I know nothing about this characters, but I love them already! I love how captivating the story/plot is.
This was so amazing!!! I need more story!! I'm hooked on these characters now and I need MOOORE
Glad this was recommended to me again after not having watch it for a year or so. Nice animatic!
This video is the definition of the quote: not every villain is evil just broken
Probably
The video is awesome btw🤩
Not gonna lie, this is probably one of my favorite animatics I've watched in a while.
Like the old saying goes, the child shunned by the village will burn it to feel its warmth.
i just cant help but come back to this video over and over
Dude, I am absolutely IN LOVE the the blood silhouettes of Luka like 😍😍😍
i love it ^-^ 😍the art work is so good and the expressions are realy amazing
Please let there be a part 2!! I Love this!
I discovered it a couple of hours ago and I put it on a loop! I love it! I want more!!
okay but I've just come across this video n just read the desc, but was I the only one who wanted Luka to kill the human girl? 💅🏼 btw I loved his wittle dragon hands. so adorable.
I love hat you did with the eyes.
Wow this is epic the music and the animation and finally very good villain
really good for a first upload cant wait to see more
I love it! The expressions are amanzing! So good!
I only wanted to bring to your attention that this one men rescue team punch a demonlike thing 2 times in animation and won
I’m so mad I just found this, you definitely got a new subscriber 💕💕💕
I’m literally simping for Luka- (you are so talented!!💗)
0 dislikes. As it should be. This is amazing!!❤❤❤
The story is soooo cool!! I love this soooo much 🖤
What- what was the last frame? Did he die?
Yes yes he did die
Oh my godddd this was amazing!!! I can’t stop watching it eeeek
if this was a comic I would not be able to stop reading it, the story explained in the discription seems realy interesting just like the characters. the song also fits really well. you did a great, no, awsome job and I hope to see more !! : )
i remember when this animatic solo inspired me to make a medival fantasy au for my scfi book and i ended up making it hundreds of pages long
good times
Absolutely beautiful! I may be new to your channel, but I'm already so in love with your characters and their backstory!!! Keep it up!
I love it! Great work ❤
the start kinda reminded me of a book I read; Throne of Glass - animatic is super cool btw c:
This would be an awesome as a dream animatic
-Génial !! J'adore la musique et tes dessins =D continue comme ça ^^, je me suis même inspiré de quelques détails pour un de mes romans si ça ne te dérange pas trop ^^' merci ;)
Yo dude your art is beautiful and this song is a very good song. I've never heard it before but the intensity of your art with this song... Man o wanna see this story animated. What happened to ol' buddy? Seems like he was human at one point but definitely was something else by the time of his death. Who's little red? I imagine her with red hair. And the guy she chose? The love triangle! What happened??
Gosh I loved this little animatic.
DRAWINGS ARE GORGEOUS IUDHCKJDHKJDSH
Those fangs that showed up near the end were beautifully drawn!!
This gave me so many emotions
*I am both thrilled and heartbroken after watching this.* ;-;
Waw, j'ai adoré le style du dessin. L'histoire est même très prenante et bien mise en valeur et en scène ! Bravo !
Oh I love this
Please don't tell me Luka died
I feel this song would go great with a jinx amv
Love this art style and the flow of the animation btw!!!
My God this artstyle is gorgeous! And wonderful choice of song as well!!!
Wow, I loved this animatic
Aw, playing with my heartstrings with this one, aren't you?
Ooo super cool! Amazing work can’t wait to see more (I should make my own a animatic with my win story and ocs, ehh)
NO IM SO MAD THERE ISNT MORE!!! ITS SO AMAZINGGGGGGG!!!!!!❤❤
Omg i like it, it's reminds me at Maven, a characeter of Red Queen(it is a book)