The Writing Process: Study Hall Composition #1: ASU + Crash Course

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  • @altanzulsy
    @altanzulsy 4 ปีที่แล้ว +191

    1. Invention: Research, talking, connections
    2. Planning: Answer the big questions
    3. Drafting: Experiment, see what works
    4. Revising: Get feedback, make improvements
    5. Editing: Format, structure, style and grammar
    Thank you ASU and CC. Keep going :)) DFTBA

    • @amnaalmansouri1621
      @amnaalmansouri1621 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      I would argue that a more organized order would be:
      1. Invention: Research, talking, connections
      2. Planning: Answering the big questions
      3. Drafting: Experiment, see what works
      4. Editing: Format, structure, style, and grammar
      5. Revising: Get feedback, make improvements
      Revising should have been the last part of the order because the final work isn't complete before editing, so it makes more sense to revise after the final work is done.

    • @priyanshi6507
      @priyanshi6507 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@amnaalmansouri1621 Thanks!

  • @alaxbrown1584
    @alaxbrown1584 4 ปีที่แล้ว +134

    I am really enjoying her enthusiasm, hand gestures and body language!

    • @impishfou6953
      @impishfou6953 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      yeah, it really helpful

    • @thomaswu3820
      @thomaswu3820 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Ikr, she motivates me to learn more about public speaking

  • @sarabeththemixedanimalvet
    @sarabeththemixedanimalvet 4 ปีที่แล้ว +55

    It’s such a good reminder that we all have to work hard at writing. Especially with us all online now, I think it can be so easy to imagine no one else is struggling because we only see everyone else’s final product while we’re feeling the frustration at our own steps.

  • @furreos4811
    @furreos4811 4 ปีที่แล้ว +20

    Those are the exact words I needed to hear. Job well done, CrashCourse and ASU! Cheers to Yumna for delivering them so incredibly well!

  • @biancaalexandralala3265
    @biancaalexandralala3265 4 ปีที่แล้ว +45

    I'm genuinely excited to take this course! She's so nice and I love the way she explains things, it's really clear and concise:) Keep up the good work, I love all the work and effort you put in

    • @peterbahi0227
      @peterbahi0227 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Right?! I want to cry because of how nice she is lol. Wish she was my teacher, boss, BFF LOL

  • @salvadoralvarez7084
    @salvadoralvarez7084 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    My Motherr talket about ASU becasue she is in a new course in her Universiti UdG, and when I explore I found this great material for learn! tank You

  • @janedalek
    @janedalek 4 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    Such a wonderful presenter, really engaging! Thank you, Arizona and Complexly! And, of course, thank you, Yumna!

  • @paddybarry2607
    @paddybarry2607 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    The lone genius model is hauntingly accurate... great video!

  • @alyssadamayo2162
    @alyssadamayo2162 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I personally get overwhelmed whenever I have to face a writing task from emails to speech writing. I am so glad to find these videos!

  • @fenrirumbra3772
    @fenrirumbra3772 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thank you. I'm studying to become a teacher and I wanted to take a creative writing class this summer but alas, the rona forced my hand into a class I can use in my degree. But thanks to you I get to improve my writing anyway!

  • @FlosBlog
    @FlosBlog 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I am so glad that I stumbled upon your videos!
    (And by stumble upon I mean watching all the other crash course videos)

  • @himanshishende2149
    @himanshishende2149 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Yumna did a great job there. Thank You for boosting my motivation.

  • @katyhouska5296
    @katyhouska5296 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    So helpful as I face my first thesis! Thank you Yumna Sammie, ASU, and Crash Course!

  • @shreyagupta130
    @shreyagupta130 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    A big thanks for making this series.
    There r barely any series for English language so that was really nice of u

  • @my15
    @my15 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I like to write even it is really hard to collect my scattered ideas. What I do is I outline my ideas and try to structure it in a seamless connection/flow.
    Anyway, this course in writing process would really help me in writing. Patiently waiting for the next video. 😊

  • @queenofweaves916
    @queenofweaves916 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Your videos are saving my life this semester! Thank you 🙏🏿 🥰

  • @sobyntahondi
    @sobyntahondi 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you! May you please do a video on literature essays. I am having a difficult time with it. Thank you!

  • @knottyqueen8004
    @knottyqueen8004 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This is awesome!!!!!!!! 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

  • @johne.coughlan6824
    @johne.coughlan6824 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    How timely I'll need this for resumes cover letters thank you notes and anything else for job searching, just how not to be a lone writer in a cabin/ apartment when there is physical distancing, and you live alone? Thank you. Already touching on my writing nerves.

  • @AndrewCavaletto
    @AndrewCavaletto 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    What a great video! I can't wait to watch the whole series!

  • @bibiumulbanin4587
    @bibiumulbanin4587 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Such a beautiful course! Thankyou so much for it!

  • @armorsmith43
    @armorsmith43 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    When I asked for help with the writing process, I got told ‘stop making excuses’ or ‘just write the damn essay’. My god I wish this video had cone out 10-15 years ago.
    I think a lot of the myths like the “lone genius” model are people trying to make sense of the mental torture they’ve put themselves through trying to do something thats unacceptable to ask for help with.

  • @bifurioussiren
    @bifurioussiren 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    amazing work! thank you

  • @lonestar98
    @lonestar98 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This is awesome and just what I need to take my ideas to the next level in communication.

  • @pancakemaster2482
    @pancakemaster2482 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    That bookshelf in the back is awesome what brand is it

  • @priyanshi6507
    @priyanshi6507 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Awesome class, ma'am! You are a fantastic communicator.

  • @donnamehalchick-opal4055
    @donnamehalchick-opal4055 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Are the videos in the Study Hall Composition series open source or creative commons licensed? Can I post them to a website?

  • @JenniferJiang2013
    @JenniferJiang2013 4 ปีที่แล้ว +19

    DFTBA!

  • @calebgrassi7494
    @calebgrassi7494 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Man I love this series a++

  • @AAKFKEK315
    @AAKFKEK315 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Thank you for this great content

  • @emtionaldamage112
    @emtionaldamage112 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    A lively person

  • @fabiocossa2420
    @fabiocossa2420 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great job, very clear explanation, thanks a lot.

  • @Music-qz3qz
    @Music-qz3qz 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    ♥Arizona State University

  • @BreadBoys
    @BreadBoys 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I don't go to ASU. I don't go to college. I don't write. Why am I here.

  • @MothersArt
    @MothersArt 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I always find difficulty in writing .I think I got solutions now

  • @NMLeepsa
    @NMLeepsa 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Well organised and great content. Awesome Speaker. How the animations, texts, background sounds and animated videos created for making videos? I wish there is a crash course how to make interesting videos.

  • @Frattello576
    @Frattello576 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Great 👍

  • @st_cuthbert544
    @st_cuthbert544 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    A bit too focussed on the lens but thats just nitpicking, really well done.

  • @КаринаСафутдинова
    @КаринаСафутдинова 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you very much for this video!

  • @mangoglounge7977
    @mangoglounge7977 ปีที่แล้ว

    Fantastic video! Also, did Michael Phelps go to ASU? 😀

  • @devonte4782
    @devonte4782 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I’ve always wrote in this format but my teachers never used invention and planning they would keep it simple

  • @reecegray7016
    @reecegray7016 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    I feel like she saying don't smash out your essay over a three night power seshing of raw pain

    • @FlosBlog
      @FlosBlog 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I am hearing the words, but I lack the faith

  • @BrianHutzellMusic
    @BrianHutzellMusic 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Different people have different writing preferences. What works best for you? Standard computer keyboard, tablet, voice recognition, typewriter, or pen/pencil & paper? Any favorite spots to write? Alone in a quiet room, library, busy café, or outside?

  • @buggie3213
    @buggie3213 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    This script is really well written

    • @arizonastateuniversity
      @arizonastateuniversity  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks for the positive feedback! If you haven't already, be sure to subscribe to our channel for more videos: th-cam.com/users/asu.

  • @yvonnekavithe6247
    @yvonnekavithe6247 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I want to win this national essay in Aug but have poor writing skillsss

  • @ahmedosama564
    @ahmedosama564 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    swell . go on
    👍👍

  • @ericlindsey3069
    @ericlindsey3069 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Just because you talk fast and act excited doesn't mean your talk is interesting.
    In a post youtube, post TEDtalk world almost all presenters feel like they have to act excited and talk fast or they won't get clicks.
    Just give a good, interesting talk at a normal pace and it will be good. 75% speed of this talk is perfect. 100% speed like this...whoa, slow down. Emphasize. Not rush.

  • @Over-Boy42
    @Over-Boy42 ปีที่แล้ว

    I feel like presenting should be the 6 step of that writing process. Sometimes, if it's presented poorly, all the other steps become moot.

    • @arizonastateuniversity
      @arizonastateuniversity  10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      We appreciate the feedback! We're always looking for ways to make our videos more valuable and we'll take this into consideration moving forward.

    • @Over-Boy42
      @Over-Boy42 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @arizonastateuniversity That means a lot. I do want you to know that I very much appreciate the free educational content you guys put out! Your guys presentation is on point.

  • @markchadwick77
    @markchadwick77 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    "...and literally throw in the towel." Writing 101: there are no towels involved in writing.

  • @MathewRodriguez-g2l
    @MathewRodriguez-g2l ปีที่แล้ว

    I like when the girl talks about Micheal Phelps in this video

  • @riskacendana8085
    @riskacendana8085 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Indonesia Subtitle please, you can use subtitle translator in google and add it.
    If done, please reply my this comment

  • @Micheleleigh0329
    @Micheleleigh0329 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    crash course does this to

  • @icegelofficial
    @icegelofficial 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    ❤❤❤

  • @quinlanb7193
    @quinlanb7193 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    did michael phelps sponsor this video or something

  • @lehsu
    @lehsu 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    If you need to connect with tutors or become a tutor, this site is founded by ASU students: streamwork.live/

  • @marcopolo2395
    @marcopolo2395 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    she is cute

  • @frederickstager4513
    @frederickstager4513 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    hand gestures is a huge distraction. what a bore

  • @seanwebb605
    @seanwebb605 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Inspires dread? Do you even know what words mean?

    • @atlow2543
      @atlow2543 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Do you? When you hear inspire, all *you* hear is the first definition. "create (a feeling, especially a positive one) in a person.
      " However, with a bit more research one will find that it has more than one definition, including "animate someone with (such a feeling)." and "give rise to". Meaning that it can in fact 'inspire dread' if it 'gives rise to dread' or 'animates someone with the feeling of dread'. Just in case you're still struggling however, I can fully paint the picture for you. Dread means "great fear or apprehension". Therefore if 'writing can inspire dread' is stated-- it can functionally mean "Writing can give rise to an internal feeling of great fear or apprehension". Now wouldn't you agree that this may be what she meant by her statement? Don't let your preconceived biases affect your ability to think critically and understand people, or you'll end up a pretentious loser.
      Edit: Also, if you think these video's aren't scripted you're sorely mistaken. Its written by an entire team, not just the one presenting the material. The same can be said for any crash course video. The fact that ASU is involved only adds to that fact.

    • @seanwebb605
      @seanwebb605 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@atlow2543 Oh sure. Let's just disregard the meaning of words and the rules of language entirely. Why not just use Smurf for everything? Then we can be sure to be clear as mud. This is the sign of a lazy writer and a lazy mind.

    • @atlow2543
      @atlow2543 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @@seanwebb605 Are you sincerely that daft? Do you genuinely believe that each word is limited to a singular meaning in the English language? The definitions that I provided you with are legitimate official meanings of the words, not something that I merely fabricated on my own. Check the dictionary, you ignorant child.

    • @atlow2543
      @atlow2543 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@seanwebb605 www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/inspire?src=search-dict-box Check meaning 1-c or 3-a. As for dread, www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/dread check definition 2.
      If you aren't convinced after this, I can only assume that are either trolling or stupid. Neither case warrants a response, so this will be my final reply to you.

    • @qwertyuoip1234
      @qwertyuoip1234 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Words can have multiple meanings.

  • @user-fv7bu5sy9o
    @user-fv7bu5sy9o 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Yumna Samie ?! Where are u from cutie girl ? I think that ur Muslim ur name and ur face telling me that

    • @alexrecalde3420
      @alexrecalde3420 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Is this idiot serious??? Shut up loser, this girl is teaching people how to write...she doesnt care about dusty losers like you and your stupid comments.

  • @na_mal_chamo_d_ya
    @na_mal_chamo_d_ya 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is complete bullshit. Do you know the trouble we fell into because of this girl, if you make videos like this, make sure the teachers don't see it 🥲🥲🥲🥲
    Thank you girl 🐛